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Don’t leave me!! #Riansh os part 3..The End..

1234AayuBy 227 Comments5 Mins Read

Well…I am very happy..Like seriously…

coz..2nd, part 35(highest) comments excluding mine and 280+ near to 300 comments..πŸ˜…Thanks to @Aarushi,@parita,@Attractiveuser, and of course me..πŸ˜‚(#Gaayu+parita)
let’s start with the update..
Rihu was not understanding anything….
When vansh asks Rishab..
Vansh:-Meri Riddhima ko Kuch nahi hoga na!!(crying..)
Rishab:-calm down she will be alright..
they rushed toward the ward where Riddhima was breathing with difficulty
Vansh:- Rishab what is happening..
Rihu:-Mamu mumma ko kya hua…vo thik toh hojayegi..(she was crying..)
Vansh took Rihu in his arms..and kissed her forehead..
Vansh:-Rihu you know na your mumma is very strong nothing will happen to her..
you know she is very stubborn..she is playing with us..
Rishab went inside..and Vansh and Rihu were cryingΒ silently seeing Riddhima’s condition..
when Angre come..(I am really sorry I forgot about him..)
Angre:-What happened is bhabhi alright?
vansh:-NO Angre she is not alright..he pointed towards the ward..
angre:-Bhai what happened to her and who is she..
Vansh:-I will tell you later/… She is Rihu my Daughter..where were you?
Angre:-Bhai voh Ishani called ME..(sorry Ishani for blaming you.πŸ˜‚.)
Vansh:-Angre take Rihu with you..
Rihu:-no papa I am not going anywhere..
Vansh:-Rihu you are a good girl na..go with him..he is your chachu…
Rihu:-okay but promise me mumma ko kuch nahi hoga..
Vansh:-promise..
she went with Angre..
Vansh was shattered..he was crying..

The world looks small
From the sky
The troubles fade away
When you fly
You were born to try
Never say good bye
Just sing away….

Haan…..

Ooh…..

There’s another way
Don’t you run away
I’ll take your pain away

People never say
They don’t want you to play
The song you gave away

God will show the way
It’s not a cliche
For another sunny day

There’s another way
Don’t you run away
I’ll take your pain away

(Solo voice: There’r another way, don’t you run away, Let me take your pain away, Pain away)

People never say
They don’t want you to play
The song you gave away

The wounds fade away
When the sun goes down
Your words stay with me
All along
We were born to dance
we never woke from the trance
Lets sing along…

The way you smile
Is like chamomile
Its been a while
Since I saw your style
Birthdays are for ever

Never , never say good bye
Never , never say good bye
Never , never say good bye

Vansh:-Riddhima dare you leave me..I have to ask forgiveness and you have to forgive me..

(He was crying…)

When Rishab came out..

Rishab:-She is out of danger but we can’t say anything..(he was also crying..)

When the nurse say:-Doctor mam is in conscious…
Vansh,Rishab with Angre and Rihu entered..
Vansh:-Riddhima!!
Riddhima:-Vanh(with a weak voice..)Ri..h..u..
Vansh took Rihu in his arms..
and said..
Vansh:-Riddhima See your daughter needs you..you have to be alright..
Riddhima:-V..a..n….s..h….T..a…k…e..c..a..r…e.O…f…Ri….h…u.,,,,,.I…LO….V…E…Y..O..U.A…ND…R..I..H…U..
and this was her last words..she died..
Vansh couldn’t seek forgiveness from his sweetheart he was broken…and her 6.5-year daughter..what can you expect from her..she was continuously taking her mother’s name..
Destiny is fated….
Maybe..IN Vansh fate it was written this..only..
He could not able to fulfill his Daughter’s first wish..
After few hours..
Vansh was doing all the rituals..to say goodbye to his sweetheart..
his heart was paining…
Rihu was crying inconsolably..
Vansh:-
Tum Na Hue Mere Toh Kya, Hmm Tum Na Hue Mere Toh Kya,

(If you can’t be mine, that’s all right. If you couldn’t be mine, that’s okay.)
Main Tumhara Main Tumhara Main Tumhara Raha,
(I am yours, yours. I have always been yours.)
Mere Chanda Main Tumhara Sitara Raha,
(Oh, my moon, I am your star.)

Rishta Raha Bas Rait Ka,
(Our relationship was like sand, and it kept slipping.)
Aye Samandar Main Tumhara Kinara Raha,
Main Tumhara Main Tumhara Tumhara Raha,
(Oh, ocean, I’m yours, I’m always yours.)
Tum Na Hue Mere Toh Kya,
(If you can’t be mine, it’s okay!)

Tu Hi Pehli Guzarish Hasrat Bhi Tu Akhiri,
(You are my first request and my last unfulfilled wish.)
Mahi Mere Maseeh Marzi Bata Kya Teri,
(Oh, my sweetheart, my God, tell me what your wish is.)

Main Tumhara Main Tumhara Main Tumhara Raha,
(Yours, Yours, Yours, I have always been yours.)
Mere Chanda Main Tumhara Sitara Raha,
(Oh, my moon, I have always been your star.)

Main Jaarhon Ke Mahine Ki Tarah, Aur Tum Ho Pashmine Ki Tarah,
(I’m like a month of winter, and you’re like Pashmina (raw, unspun wool of domesticated goats).)
Main Deewaron Ki Tarah Hoon, Tum Jaise Ho Dareecha,
(I am like the walls while you are like a window.)
Main Bageecha Jo Tumne Seencha,
(I am the garden that you water.)

Tum Na Hue Mere Toh Kya, Hmm Tum Na Hue Mere Toh Kya,
(If you can’t be mine, that’s all right. If you can’t be mine, that’s all right.)
Main Tumhara Main Tumhara Main Tumhara Raha,
(I am yours, yours. I have always been yours.)
Mere Chanda Main Tumhara Sitara Raha,
(Oh, my moon, I am your star.)

Rishta Raha Bas Rait Ka,
(Our relationship was like sand, and it kept slipping.)
Aye Samandar Main Tumhara Kinara Raha,
Main Tumhara Main Tumhara Tumhara Raha,
(Oh, ocean, I’m yours, I’m always yours.)
Tum Na Hue Mere Toh Kya
(If you couldn’t be mine, that’s okay.)

Vansh:-I will be always your..what happens if you leave me..I will always with you….

Love never dies
Love never falters
Once it has spoken
Love is yours
Love never fades
Love never alters
Hearts may get broken
Love endures
Hearts may get broken
Love endures

Life may be fleeting
Love lives on…

Vansh:-Not in this birth..but I will seek your forgiveness in the next birth…I will be waiting sweetheart…

THE END…..

That’s it many of you asked me not to kill Riddhima butΒ  I have to do this..SORRY..I was also crying while writing this last part…

Do comments…

Thankyou

bye take care..

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227 Comments

  3. Parita on

    Aa gayi mein!! Iss post me bhi 300 hojaye?
    Let me read it and then comment

  4. Tanvi_5117 on

    I loved it….πŸ’œ
    Mai tumhara is AR Rahman’s best creation for me πŸ’›

    • 1234Aayu on

      Thank you 😊
      Main tumhare is mine favourite too..It’s so snoothing.🎢

  5. AarushiSoni on

    I think u love to make me cry
    … But then also I love u and this os very much…. Amazing os ever… Mind blowing dear… Pls post more.. but next time a happy ending pls.. literally years r rolling down my eyes.. and that song made the situation realistic!! ❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️

    • 1234Aayu on

      Aarushi dear..I love to do that(kidding)..Same here..Thank you so much..I will write an OS soon with happy ending…stay tuned..*years*πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚..songs choice are always perfect from my side as I love to do that..😊

  6. Priyanshi_13 on

    Amazing 😍 and emotional ending 😭😭😭😭😭

  7. Pranjal on

    Plzz @1234aayu i want you to write one os on that when vansh declared ahana as wife then after few weeks he got to know that riddhima was innocent and he was also knowing that riddhima is pregnant so he was trying to find her he was knowing that. Riddhima is in the mumbai only (there is no leap) and then vansh remember where did the pregnancy reports came from so he decided to check the hospital cctv and he founded riddhima then he got to know that from mrs raisinghania she change. The name riddhima and then he found her address and was pleading her for forgiveness but she was refusing it then (rest to you ) but plzz right a os on it i told it in a short way buti know you can add emotions to it plzz accept this request from my side

    • 1234Aayu on

      Thank you..for believing me..I will try my best..I will write this with totally a different way..hope you will like it..It will be posted soon..stay tuned..

  8. Attractiveuser on

    Outstanding and mind-blowing aayuπŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ™‚β€οΈβ€οΈπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯Ίβ™₯️β™₯️. Maar hi dia Riddhima ko par koi niβ€οΈβ€οΈπŸ™‚πŸ˜‚. Loved it.love from attractive gauri πŸ™‚β™₯οΈπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚(aaj paise maangne ke mood mein nahi hunπŸ™‚πŸ˜‚)

    • Attractiveuser on

      Kya maangu kuch bhi deti hu nahi hai ye aayuπŸ™‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚.

    • AarushiSoni on

      Ask an os from her.. pakka degi vo🀣🀣🀣🀣

    • Parita on

      toh kuch aisa maanglo jo usko dena hi padheπŸ˜‰πŸ˜πŸ˜ Mujhe puch na mat kya kyunki mujhe bhi nahi pata haiπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    • Attractiveuser on

      Kya degi voπŸ™‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚. Mujhe bhi nahi pataπŸ™‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚.

    • Parita on

      Sirf voh hi bata sakti hai. @1234Aayu, aaja aur bata de kya de sakti haiπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ @aaurshiSoni ko bhi invite kar lena

    • AarushiSoni on

      🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣to kya kru . Sbko mar deti ho tum… Meri goti thodi hai naπŸ₯ΊπŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

    • 1234Aayu on

      Gauri ask something that I can give you..I will surely πŸ˜‚think what can I give you..and parita I am here but Aarushi will not come..she is sleeping..she will come tomorrow..

    • Annoyinguser on

      Paisa chodke sab milega. πŸ˜›. Kya kya h menu mein. I will order 😝

    • Attractiveuser on

      Blessings πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ thankyou grandma for your blessings πŸ™‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚.

    • 1234Aayu on

      Gauri don’t you remember Aarushi’s word blessings are not given by grandma only πŸ˜­πŸ˜‚

    • AarushiSoni on

      Youuuuu remembered 🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣

    • Attractiveuser on

      Oh sorryπŸ™‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ€£πŸ€£but I love teasing someone by calling grandma πŸ™‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ€£πŸ€£.

    • AarushiSoni on

      Bcoz she is herself a grandma na so likes calling everyones by this name!! 🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣

    • 1234Aayu on

      How can we forgot you..I accept you are new to our gang but we will not forget you πŸ˜‰

    • Attractiveuser on

      No parita nahi bhule tumkoπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚. Kl aarushi aakar yeh kahe usse pehle batadu I am missing aarushi πŸ™‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚. Mai nahi bhuli aarushi koπŸ™‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    • AarushiSoni on

      Good
      .well I was going to write that… πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

    • Parita on

      Mujhe toh aisa hi laga ta ke app to mujhe bhul hi gaaye the!πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ’• @Attractiveuser, @1234Aayu

    • RiansHLoveR on

      Ra yr me miss hogyiπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚. Mereko bhi debo. Pata h me bohut late huπŸ˜…πŸ˜…

    • AarushiSoni on

      Don’t worry mai bhi late hi hu… Kl so gyi thi na isliye!! Abhi ye sb vapas aaenge don’t worry for that! 🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣

    • AarushiSoni on

      Nhi we can’t forget u dear.. abhi nhi to kbhi nhiπŸ˜›πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£

    • RiansHLoveR on

      No dear we all remember everyoneπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚. Or ab to aarushi bhi agyi🀣🀣🀣

    • AarushiSoni on

      FF tumhara tumhe kaise bhul jaye… Log hme bhul jayenge pr tumhe nhi Aayu

    • 1234Aayu on

      well good that you remember me..but Aarushi must be sleeping or attending classes..

    • AarushiSoni on

      Oh hello miss . I don’t sleep till long.. I am attending history class!!!

    • Attractiveuser on

      Meri bhi chalrahi hai wese par mai yaha comment karri huπŸ™‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ€£

    • 1234Aayu on

      Aarushi I was saying this only you would be sleeping in history classπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    • AarushiSoni on

      Wow what an logic. If I would be sleeping that how I am commenting right now @AayuπŸ™„πŸ™„πŸ™„πŸ™„πŸ™„

    • AarushiSoni on

      Ha kyu nhi . Mujhe nhi mili ab tk.. pta nhi vacations kb aaege😭😭😭😭

    • 1234Aayu on

      🀣🀣🀣🀣@Aarushi..mine logics are mine none of yours

    • Attractiveuser on

      This is wrong @aayu mujhe bhi holidays chaiyeπŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ˜‚

    • AarushiSoni on

      Ab ye koi treat ya laise ho jo sbko chaiye.. jb milega tk Khush ho jana.. abhi Gauri tum meri category me ho… πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

    • Attractiveuser on

      @aayu aarudhiπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£nice nameπŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ˜‚

  13. Parita on

    Sach me tune maar diya bichari ko! What an emotional one!
    The songs and the scene blended so well, it touched my heart!πŸ’•πŸ’• Pls write more of these OS
    Btw, pls write more OS so we can reach to 500 comments one dayπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‰

  16. Akshiiii on

    mra rona dkh ke mri mo puchi ki qa hua. kch prblm h qa. m bimaar hu qa. mtlb mom covid scenario me pauch gyi.
    loved it. u r an amazing writer. how u described vansh feelings.

    • 1234Aayu on

      Thank you so much…it means a lot..and sorry that I make you cry..and auntyπŸ˜‚..
      Thank you once again ☺️

  17. Aisha08 on

    Amazing superb sry i m late i was quite busy n couldn’t be the part of ur discussion

    • AarushiSoni on

      But actually she only gave that wonderful idea on which we r discussing on almost evry ff((🀣🀣🀣

    • Annoyinguser on

      Rulaa diya. Different wali ending. Chalo sare paise maaf kar diye. 🀧 Par aur os hona nhi toh paise double. 21 din me double wali scheme ho jayegi. 🀣🀣

    • 1234Aayu on

      Thank you annoying user…will post more OS..yeah paise maaf…πŸ˜‚πŸ₯³

  18. Nameless on

    Why r u guys hell bent on killing riddhima?
    You are breaking my heart…
    You’ve broken my heart…
    You broke my heart…

    I hope the serial has a happy ending…

  19. Subu23 on

    Arre yaar phir bichari ridhima ko maar diya tumne kyu bhn kyu and that song from dil bechara movie one of my favourites yaar amazing loved it ❀btw paise abhi tak nhi mile mujhe😢

    • Subu23 on

      Vo toh pata hai par duniya imeed se hi bani hai isliye abhi tak hope hai ki haan kuch milega😢

    • RiansHLoveR on

      ImeedπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚autocorrection unpad h mtlb uneducatedπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    • AarushiSoni on

      Ya we know… Unpad h mera wala bhi.. kuch bhi type kr deta hai mtlb.. gdha hi aadmi hai ekdm, 🀣🀣🀣

    • 1234Aayu on

      Subu23 Thank you..glad you like it..paise pata nahi..but I will give you virtual treat..

    • AarushiSoni on

      Yes why not.. sbse easy ab tk ka.. virtual money was invented by Aisha di and virtual treat by Ms. Lucky Coupon 🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣

    • AarushiSoni on

      Bnaya hai na.. serial killer of characters in FF πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    • 1234Aayu on

      πŸ€£πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ€£πŸ€£mere bahut sare nick namesh..meri maths ki teacher hume VAAYU bulati thi..jab vo bula sakti h what can i expect from you all

    • AarushiSoni on

      Vayu kyu?? Hawa ki trh tum class se bunk Marti thi kya? πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

  20. Riansh1212 on

    I don’t know why but though I dont want anyone of riansh to die still every story related to themwhether they are together at the end or not, I find all the stories so beautiful!!! And these one shots are just perfect!! One shot is not just one story. Its more like a peg full of emotions and perfection in a single shot!!! This Os of yours are amazing dear!! I loved reading it❀️❀️❀️

    • AarushiSoni on

      That’s why I love one shots bcoz in one shot only story gets completed!!! Well, ur exams?? How r they going??

    • 1234Aayu on

      Thank you so much.. glad you like it..I was waiting for your comment..😊.I aslo like one short.. that’s why these days I am more interested in these..

    • Riansh1212 on

      Yeah Definitely!! My exams are going great Aarushi and they will end this week. And then I will update on SundayπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

  24. Jayashree on

    Wow amazing 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍. It’s really super ending and emotional to

    • AarushiSoni on

      Siddhi puppy eyes bna do she will not be angry from me🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣

    • 1234Aayu on

      What a logic Aarushi siddhi will make puppy eyes and I will be not angry with youπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    • AarushiSoni on

      Arre I thought u will understand. I meant that when I make puppy eyes u forgive me.. so I wrote that.. ye zalim duniya meri baat hi nhi smjhna chahti πŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯ΊπŸ₯Ί

    • 1234Aayu on

      I understand what you meant but I was just concentrating on your words..πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    • Attractiveuser on

      🀩🀩πŸ₯³πŸ₯³πŸ₯³4 mai pgl hogaiπŸ™‚πŸ₯³πŸ₯³πŸ˜‚

    • Attractiveuser on

      Hogaye 200🀩πŸ₯³πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ₯³πŸ€©πŸ€©β™₯️β™₯️❀️❀️

  30. Attractiveuser on

    Congratulations aayuπŸ™‚πŸ™‚πŸ₯³πŸ₯³πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ€‘πŸ€‘πŸ€‘πŸ€©πŸ€©πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ₯§πŸ₯§. 200+πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ₯³πŸ₯³