Your Author is back with another FF but a different One…
Note!!- All silent readers are requested to comment..as I am thinking to quit writing..π
And focus on my other talents too…so you have to tell me should I quit..???(not quiting but taking a break)
Majority will win..
Different from the story line…
A girl in mid-twenties sitting in the train enjoying the breeze…
Humming a song..
She get out of her thoughts due to a voice..
Another girl:- Riddhu only 30 minutes and we will be in mumbai..
Riddhima:- hmm…
Another girl:-What are you thinking ??
Riddhima:- Nothing pari just thinking how our lives turned this much and we are here in mumbai.. aren’t you missing Shimla??
Parita:-Why are you beating around the bush..you very well known..how much I love Shimla but that to you are asking me..
Don’t worry everything will be fine..trust me..you trust me na??
Riddhima:- hmmm….I know how you love Shimla but I am asking.. because of me you are here far from your Shimla…and how you come up with that stupid question come again..
I trust you more than myself..
Pari:- Then??
Riddhima:- Nothing..!!
Wait here with luggage..I am going to say hello to Mumbai..
She went at the door to feel the breeze..nature…it’s simplicity…but they will not last longer…when they will enter the City…
Train started…to move..it was not at high speed…as the station just passed..
She was feeling the nature.. it’s beauty..it’s simplicity..her hairs were syncing with the wind’s rhythm..
She was lost..in her thoughts..she was trying to catch her life.. trying to relate her life.. trying to relate her past with present..
When she saw a man running to catch the train..he was sweating.. tension was seen in his face..he was not looking less than a perfect man..though he was tensed but he was perfect..
She extended her hand to help him..
He at the very next movement increase his speed and hold her hand..
when their hand touches..
Time freezes..was their soul touched??
Are they meant to be united?
Is this only written in their destiny?
Are they meant to be together..
It’s sounds filmy isn’t it?
But what is meant to be together..by hook or crook they are held together..
Will see what their destiny is up too..
Wanna know what happens next??
Stay tuned…
To be countinued…..
That’s it…. it will be a short one 5-6 episodes
Do tell me about it..
Will be waiting for your comments…
I wrote this in a different way..and I changed my style of writing..do tell me how was it?..
Next part after 30+ let’s see you are able to complete or not..
Bye take care…
89 Comments
1st
Wooo nice episode post soon
No need to quite writing you can take some small small breaks but not long ones you are a great writer.
congrats dear…Thank you so much… π will post soon
2nd
congrats Radhika ji
3rd going to read.
parita ma’am’s studentsπ
So fabulous one. I can say one that is outstanding episode. It is the best yr. Don’t stop writing. We want daily update from uπ’π’π’plz aayu(ur puppy eyes)ππππit is very niceπ€©π€©ππ
Hey Radhika ji Thank you so much…..okay daily?π…how can I deny my own puppy face…will post soon
4th……….it’s fabulous…..
don’t quit please…..but break is ok………please post soon
Awesome…..β€β€β€
Thanks nitya…will post soon π
Thanks diya:)
Nice
Thank u π
Amazing ππ. Ofcourse not you should not quit and not take a break as you are wonderful writer!β€οΈ. Well you used parita mam’s nameπππ
Yes I forgot to tellπππmadam ji ki namπ€£π€£π€£π€£paritaaaqπππ€£π€£ππ
ofc kitni famous hu mainπππ
Haa madam aap bohut famous teacher hπ€ͺπ€ͺπ€ͺπ€ͺ
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Thank you so much Gauri..okay will not take a break..and yes I loved parita name..it’s unique too..so thought to use it..πππ
Awwwβ€β€ Thank you
Wow π³
Aayu is just awesome
Thank you so much sweety…
Hello aayu di I’m coming after reading.π€£ππ€£π
Loved it di. Amazing episodeβ₯οΈ. And please don’t quit reading ( puppy eyes )π₯Ίπ₯Ί
Hello Tanya…Thank you so much glad you like it…okay will not how can I deny puppy face..
Nice something different as am a silent reader I wrote becauz I liked the story it is something unique nice pst the next epi fast
Thank you so much I am happy you like it and commented too..I will post soon
Nice episode. Don’t quit writing okk
Thanks dear I will not..
Hi , I was a silent reader here..but was a little bit louder at wattpad…just thought to write a comment so that you don’t quitπ …….please don’t quit…π€π€
OK will not quit glad you wrote the comment or else I would have been quite…
Awesome
Thanks..
Fabulous pls don’t take break post asap π
Thank you..will not and will post soon π
loved it
Thanks… π
awesome
Thanx..
Hey !! Plz don’t quit I loved this os .. ok can I ask you something .. are you on wattpad ??? ..
Thank you so much..yes, I am on Wattpad with the same user name..will not quit
Don’t quit writing dear… it’s amazing and I hope it has a happy ending because I can’t use toilet paper to wipe my tears…so don’t quit writing now that I have said this I love your ff and os also…but your os makes me cry and even happy so keep writing….
Yes, this one will be a happy ending…Don’t worry I will not give you toilet paper to wipe your tears..Thank you so much..glad you are liking my work…will keep writing..
Mai hatoda leke ghar aajaungi agar writting chhodi to π sorryyyy π
Will be waiting for u dear par I am not quitting because of what will happen to my head…after you will come…and why sorry??
awesome , don’t quit short breaks are okay but don’t take long break. post soon
Thank you so much..will post soon
Hello!! Let me go read!πππ
hello..will be waiting..
Amazing π
Thank you.. π
Wow amazing ππππππ no needed quite writting dear
Thanks a lot…Will not
So nice updates πβ€οΈπ
Thanx…
Excellent Os β€οΈππβ€οΈπ
Thank u.. π
It’s really good and awesome ππβ£οΈ
Thanks .. π
Wow fabulous ππππ
Thanxx
Amazing episode.ππ€© please post soon π
Thank you so much..will post asap
Amazing OS….Pls don’t quit ππππ Pls don’t stop writing, we all love your writing and also not even take a break plssssss!!πβ€ Keep on writing and keep on posting such amazing work for us, apni teacher ke liye toh man jaπ Thank you for using my nameβ€ Pls post the next part soon
Thank you so much parita…will not quit as I am an obedient student of my teacher how can I disrespect your words..and welcome…I liked your name..will post soon.. π
Good girl!πβ€β€ Aww thank you
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Awesome
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