Chapter 5:Β
When Riddhima was crying her mom came there.
Mom:Beta don’t cry so much. For how many days you will cry like this? Huh? Don’t you want to start it again?
Riddhima gaves a questioning look.
Mom:Do you know why Kabir died? He died because he know there is someone leaving him who can love you, care for you. Yes he is Vansh. You are not understanding it but you are in love with him. Yes!! You are crying for him. I saw love in your eyes for Vansh. Can you keep your eyes on my eyes and say that you don’t love him? Can you say?
She held her head down.
Mom:Question yourself. Ask your heart whom you love. If you get the answer then don’t delay because no one knows when life will take a new turn.
Mom leaves.
Riddhima went upto the mirror. She puts her hand on her heart and closes her eyes. Then she starts to think about Vansh. After few moment she open her eyes and a tear rolls down from her cheeks.
Next Day,
Vansh was sitting beside a sea beach aimlessly. He was seeing the tides. It do not waits for anyone. It comes when it is the time and then goes with the things that comes in it’s way.
Someone puts a hand on his shoulder. He turned his face to see Ahana stading over there. He immediately hugs her. In all these chaos he was searching for some close person, so that he can hugs her and cry.
Ahana:Don’t cry Vansh. Everything will be fine now.
Vansh:No Ahana, nothing can be fine now. Kabir died because of me. Riddhima hates me now.
Ahana:I know everything. I just came to say good bye.
Vansh:What do you mean by it?
Ahana:I am going leaving this city. This is not my place. I am leaving now for Delhi.
Vansh pushed her.
Vansh:Go away. Who am I? Everyone leaves me. First Riddhima now you. Don’t I deserve happiness or peace? You are also leaving me when I need you the most.
Ahana:Listen to me. I am going but before that I am giving your love back to you.
Vansh saw Riddhima came down from her car. His happiness has no bound now. He was crying in happiness. He immediately runs to her.
Riddhima:I am sorry Vansh. I gave you so much pain. Forgive me. See I came back. I love you too Vansh.
Both of them hug each other.
Ahana wipes her tears and leaves from there smiling.
Vansh:Why you took so much time to understand?
Riddhima:I am idiot. I didn’t understand that I love you.
Vansh kissed her on her forehead.
Riddhima: Let’s go towards mom. We will take her blessings and
Vansh:We will get married.
Both of them leaves in Vansh’s car.
Vansh was driving and Riddhima was holding his hand. In the radio a lovely song was going on.
Ni ajj rehne de
Saari raat tere aanchal ke tale
Ni kho jaane de
Saari raat teri aankhon mein mujhe
Ik vaari teri mainu yaad jo aave
Ni saari saari raat na jaave
Akhiyon mein kabhi teri dekh loon hanju
Haaye meri vi akhan bhar jaave
Rakhna hai tujhe dil se laga ke
Saari zindagi bas apna bana ke
Ni hass lain de
Saari raat teri baaton pe mujhe
Ni ro lain de
Saare raaz dil ke kehne de tujhe
Tera hath ho bas mere hathon mein
Teri aankhein ho bas meri aankhon mein
Only you bas tujhe sochun
Mera din meri raat hai tu
Adhoora hoon, adhoora hoon
Tere sath hi poora hoon
Mera har sapna har baat mein tu
Mera har jazbaat hai tu
Ni ajj rehne de
Saari raat tere aanchal ke tale
Ni so jaane de
Saari raat teri baahon mein mujhe
Ni ajj rehne de
Saari raat tere aanchal ke tale
Ni kho jaane de
Saari raat, saari raat
Ni ajj rehne de
Saari raat..
Ni kho jaane de
Saari raat teri..
Ni ajj rehne de
Saari raat tere aanchal ke tale
Ni so jaane de
Saari raat teri baahon mein mujhe
But again destiny shows it’s worst part. A truck comes from the opposite side and hits their car.
Drops of blood fell on their hand which was held together tightly. They breath their last breath together. Their hands were together. They kept their promise that they will live together or die together.
After 5 years,
A girl comes with three white roses. She sits near three tombs. On the tombs it was written the names- Kabir, Vansh and Riddhima. She kept the roses on their tombs.
Ahana:Kabir loves Riddhima. I loves Vansh and Vansh and Riddhima loves each other. Our love remains incomplete. When a person is with us we don’t understand it’s importance but when he leaves us we got devastated. WeΒ never understood Who we are for them but we kept on asking “WHO AM I TO YOU?”….Β Β
The End.
I know it’s a very emotional ending. Ayesha see I killed both of them not only oneπ π . I am sorry for it. But comments were so lessπ€§π€§. Is this story was not good at the beginning also? I saw not only in my ff but in others ff also comments are less from few weeks. Please do comment. It’s my humble request to silent readers. We are getting demotivated. If we stop updating then what you people will read?π€§π€§ππ. We all love you so give us some love also. Ok now bye guys and yes I ready for your tomatoes chappals and egg for making you all cryπ³ππ …byeβ€
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Aayu ka bhoot Chad gya hain radhika mai ππ€£.
Aayu ek ko marati hain aur radhika do ko ππ€£πππ
I am not the only one who kill charactersπ ππ€§β¨
So why I am famous…πππ
Now aayu is famous because she kill any one of them and radhika famous who kill both of them ππ€£ππright aayu
π€£π€£π€£π€£……Aayu and Radhika serial killers…….. even Gauri killed once π€
Only u left pls Don’t kill anyone in your ff like aayu , gauri and radhika hahaha π
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Nice dear
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Nice but why sad ending
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Wow..you follow me!! You killed both of them… the biggest threat Ayesha was having..
Amazing..after a long time I am reading something like this..loved it..and the song!!!
What you write at the end was something different…Who am I to you!!
Amazing!!..and yes readers are not commenting which is surely demotivating us..I request all readers to comment…as it is really important for an Author!!
So pls comment…
Ya I am having threat but mujhe nhi laga tha radhika sach mai maar degi . ππ€£π
Thanks a lot aayuππβ€β€u r my guru jiiππππβ€β€ππβ€β€ππ
Emotional and nice episode dear
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Lovely ending β€π’
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Wonderful episode and ending β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈπ! Loved itβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈπ! Serial killer π₯Ίπ₯Ίπππ€§π€§π!
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Lovely ending πΈ
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Amazing π you killed them π₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ί …..it was emotional π₯Ί…
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Emotional ending ππ nice Episode
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We got another serial killer. πΆ amazing. What a twist. Amazing
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radhika rula diya yaar .you became ultra promax serial killer . one step ahead of aayu .loved it post soon
Yes one step ahead I am not a pro at killing…A big achievement in my lifeπ₯³π₯³
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Amazing yr……. Who am I to you? that’s indeed the reality of lifeπ’…….You even Killed them not one but three…….Post more SS
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Ye show me dikhaya jayega ya dikha chuka hai maine avi show Dkehna start kiya h 70 episode dekh chuki hoon mind blowing show h but ye story show me dikahye jayenge ya aap ne banaya hai
We write with our imagination..it’s not at all related to show nothing like this will happen in show…in show both are alive and they will be alive or else. We will die..π π
But Apako kya lgta h show ki happy ending hogi na vansh riddhima end tk sath rhe last episode tk.. We want happy ending vansh riddhima together
Ofcourse it will be.. otherwise the fd wont leave them!
Amazing…. Am out of words Radhika.. it ended!!! Really even I also don’t now what the hell is problem with them.. why do they don’t comment. It’s okay, sure everything will be fine… Post more ss
Thanks a lot aarushiβ€β€ππ
I hopeu understood sweetuπ
Amazing Radhika!! Yaar you made me so emotional…achi kasi chal rahi thi un dono ki love story πππ€§π€§
it was an awesome one…very emotional!!
Thanq and sorry for itππ
Nice and emotional ending
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Awesome di I loved it
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Wow ek taaraf hai Aayu jo kisi na kisi ek ko mardayti hai Vansh ya Riddhima mein sey tum toh major hai yaar dono ko mardiya amazing OS
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First time i have seen Ahana innocent π€£
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Amazing
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Fantastic episode Radhu β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ Kya tum aayu ki role me aagayiπ’ but it’s really amazing and emotional yaar.
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