Hey guys.. am back with the second episode, earlier than my anticipated time.. as many of you were asking to to update the second part .. so here it is
This part is dedicated to my dearest Liji, she became my friend here on TU when I was following Ishqbaaz and commenting on it. Almost 5 years back. We are still in contact and discuss every episode of Ishq par Zor nahin. In one such discussion, she had said that she wished that after the leap, it was ahaan who was searching and desperate for Ishqi.. so this episode is based on that…
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Karthik came to the balcony of his home and saw his brother at the same place as every night. Which was at the swimming pool. He was staring in the water, as if seeing Ishqi and himself there. It has been six months since they last saw her. Initially Ahaan hated her because she broke the marriage. But when she proved that it was Mayank’s bad character that made her break her wedding and waked out of their life, Ahaan had been missing her. Though he hardly ever said anything, Karthik knew his brother missed her.
Three months ago, he broke up with Riya, the reason is unknown to any of us. They were going to get engaged soon, but no one knew what happened three months back that made Ahaan break up with Riya.
Karthik came down to his brother.
“Bhai.. kya horiya hai “he said… his famous infamous joke. Ahaan gave him a look which said shut up
“How long are you going to be like this bhai, you know you miss Ishqi, why don’t you search for her”?
“you don’t think I have done that Karthik”
Karthik gave a big smile “it means you searched for her, but didn’t find her”
Ahaan gave a sad smile. They both stood there just looking at the still water, inside it was all havoc though.
“Bhai.. why did you break up with Riya”
Ahaan looked at Karthik, he was serious.
“are you going to ask me all the questions today only”?
“ok, ok I won’t.. would you like to taste this new coffee Bhai. It’s a new brand but awesome”
“No Karthik… I am going to sleep, Good night”
“As if you are going to sleep bhai, you haven’t slept properly in the last 6 months… “Karthik murmurs to himself
That night, unable to sleep, Ahaan walks into the kitchen. He sees a coffee bottle on the table and thinks about what Karthik told him. He makes it and takes a sip of it. It reminds him of something, but he couldn’t remember what. The coffee had a taste of his favorite hazelnuts.
He remembers his conversation with Ishqi when they had missed their train and she had pretended to be pregnant to get a lift…
“What coffee is this” he had literally spit put the coffee he had in one of the restaurants
“Its nice, what’s wrong with it” ishqi drank hers happily
“Its not… coffee should be something like… having my favorite hazelnuts in it”
Isqhi started laughing “If everyone starts putting their favorite dry fruits in coffee… toh bus hoagaya”
He gave an angry look and had sipped the remaining coffee…
A smile graced his lips… how he missed her. She had pretended to be pregnant and named their child nandram. If he ever got a chance to be with her again, he would make sure that comes true, he thought.
“I need to buy more of this coffee he thinks” he sighs and leaves.
This time once he hits the bed, he sleeps… a calmness inside him, as if he found what he was looking for.
The next morning, he will be having breakfast… when Sonu comes to meet the family.
As soon as Ahaan sees her he walks away to his room.
The whole family will be tensed, seeing this behavior of Ahaan.. it had been three months since Ahaan had spoken to Sonu.. nobody knew what happened then… the same day Ahaan had broken off with Riya as well as stopped speaking to Sonu.
Sonu felt very bad because her brother behaved like this with her, her brother was her whole life. Raj tries to console her, but she can’t accept this. What had she done wrong she wondered? She didn’t have enough guts to go and question her brother.
But today she thought she would ask him. She came to his room
“What have I done wrong Bhai, that you have stopped talking to me. Please talk to me” She cries
He looks at her and gets angrier… but angrier on himself. Is this how he bought up his sister, if yes then he had failed miserably. He thought and walked out of his room to leave for the office.
When in office, he couldn’t remove the face of the crying sonu from his eyes. He held his head and put it on the table. How had everything gone so wrong… he trusted his sister so much, so she didn’t keep that trust, he had started hating himself now…
“Sir, there is an invitation from the business association for their 60th anniversary. You have been missing their every party from the last six months… but I think you should attend this one” his secretary told him
His secretary was right, it’s been a long time since he attended these… It will be a good change for him too, as he will have to travel to Delhi for it. And he can stay there for some days then. He asked his secretary to make the necessary arrangements.
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So guys, why do you think Riya and Ahaan broke up?
Why did ahaan stop talking to Sonu..
Will Ishqaan meet in the next episode.. stay tuned..
Let me know if you have any such wishes as to what you want next.. I will spin it into a story
Please leave your comments..
28 Comments
Your stories are amazing.Can’t wait for the next part!!I am too excited! Tbh,Your storyline is much more amazing than the actual serial’s storyline.
Thank u so much lily ❤️ keep reading
loved every second of it……………
This is amazing Archiya… very nicely written.. loved it. And waiting for the next issue.. please please have it for the weekend.. 😢😧😦🤪😳😰
Thanks KC 😀
Abigail.. done I will post it by Friday 💕
Interesting story line. Each and every part is amazing. Eagerly waiting for the next part 🙂
Thanks SB 😁
Great success 😂👍🏻
Ha ha.. thanks Ahana
Ya maybe they should atleast see each other glance and ahaan meybe get desperate after seeing ishqi’s glance. Maybe he just get to know that ishqi is the perfect choice for him and his family🙄
Hi Dia.. they will actually meet in the next part.. and ahaan already knows that ishqi is the perfect choice for him n his family.. tahts the reason he is searching for her
Perfect casting..each actor enacting his part beautifully..love Sarlu too!!This is the only serial I watch..so refreshing after all those Ekta’s over the top serials..keep moving the story at a good pace..
Hi Shyla.. no doubt it’s one of the best serials
The way you related ishqi’s coffee flavor with that of ahaan’s memory , it was awesome. Waiting for ishqan’s faceoff🤭😂😂
Ha ha.. yeah it’s a way to show that even ishqi misses him a lot.. an that’s why she has that flavour in her coffee brand
Eagerly waiting for the next part.my favourite show.i am very excited
Will update by Friday
Ha ha.. yeah it’s a way to show that even ishqi misses him a lot.. an that’s why she has that flavour in her coffee brand
Best part of ishqbaaz was there was not much dragging drama, misunderstanding used to clear up n culprit get caught,lead only separated once n after that they trusted each other always. this is why I love ishqbaaz more than anything. IPZN is too gul project so we can see IB touch but after leap it was lost too. But ur story is much worth n interesting or I say correct n appreciating. I really loved it. Great job Archiya, it’s exactly how even I thought stroy would go. If I would had understood u, AVM will meet ishqi in that party who made that nut coffee, may be she became entrepreneur have beverage business n ahaan will try to make her back in his life, by doing something strange or crazy ishqi types…. ☺☺☺
hi Sam..
I loved Ishqbaaz.. bcoz it has a greta bonding in between bros, and anika was strong throughout, at no point of time she gave in to shivay.. and their moments were all very different, they had the same amount of attitude, at no point of time, was anika shown bebaas and lachaar.. thats what i didnt like abt IPZN. It has a great concept initially but they ruined it. And what i dont like abt GUL projects.. the male lead is always like God.. high on top, and even if he makes any mistakes there is no proper redemption…
coming to my story.. AVN will meet ishqi in the party,, but she is already engaged to be married to Rohan.. lets see what happens from there
I’m going to be hated by everyone for saying this, but after reading so many mentions from fans of Ishqbaaz I took a look and watched a couple episodes, and I have to say, I just didn’t like it. Truly Sorry. I found the brothers soo annoying, the lead girl was overacting, and so many other things that just made me fast forward…. I watched episodes almost to the end of the series and yikes, I just didn’t like it at all.. SORRY…
Don’t hate me please. Just my view and likes…
hey … everyone has their own opinions abt each serial.. u have urs.. there is nothing to hate u about it..
may b one reason u didnt like it was u watched IPZN before IB… but IB has a much stronger female lead.. one of the many reasons i loved IB..
m just hoping IPZN has a proper redmeption from ahaan side.. ishqi shouldn’t forgive him easily
This happens in all GK shows.. the male lead is glorified, and even if he does mistakes its fine
I don’t think anyone will hate u, ISHQBAAZ fans n lovers have big heart. Everyone have their own point of view n Wright to express it. It doesn’t matter what someone say, what matters is what we think, if we think it’s right we should go for it… It’s ur life ur choice…IB is emotions not just a series of episode about love…
I totally agree with u Archiya, male leads were always given a extra liberty, be it Asad Ahmed khan, Arnav singh raizada or our favorite SSO, but in ISHQBAAZ though initially sso was like all but after 1st daksh incident he never left anika alone, trusted her n never accused her for any mistake, in the illegitimate son issue he never did wrong with annika unlike aahan. All o bros did initially wrong with their partners but they payed for it, Anirivya never gave their self respect unlike ishqi, they always fought with tashan, female leads were potrait strong, independent or I say khidhkitoodh dabang. Anika slaped shiva when he questioned her character, bhavya did same with rudra n even gauri didn’t forgive om until he understood her. Importance of nver ending trust, family, love, brotherhood everything was well Potraited in IB. it’s the only serial where I like willans equally like lead, be it sowmya, tia, swetlana or veer everyone were awsome. I can go on n on if I talk about IB, it’s just I still can’t get over it…
Hey Sam..
same to same emotions i share about IB.. yes shivay only thght wrongly once abt anika.. leaving the initial episodes.. he was always with her after that.. and yes abot the other pairs too.. the gals were equally important n never helpless.. the best part of IB
and ur very rite.. IB is emotions, it still makes my heart double beat 🙂
and yeah villians were as strong as the leads.. infact i loved all of them.. i agree IB talks will nevr get over.. IB was much more than a serial for sure
Nice update…loved ahaan and Karthik’s convo.. waiting for next..please in the next chapter ahaan and ishqi meets.
hey Aldy,
thanks.. yep they r meeting in the next chapter