hello guys this is my very first fan fiction i hope u guys like it ….
my ff starts after sanskar saw swara n laksh togather laughing
sanskar is standing on window shield he looks at swara and laksh laughing …..tears roll down his eyes …..he moves back and goes to car without taking laksh signature …
while driving he thinks of his love confession to swara then he thinks of swara words ki tumne mujhe dokha diya hai sanskar hum sirf dost hain na phir ye pyaar kahan se……he then remember swalak moments and get sad and emotional he the reaches maheswari mansion and stops his car and get down from it and moves towards his room there annapurna stops him
annapurna : sanskar beta idhar aana thodi kaam me maada kara do
sanskar : ji maa aaya
he goes down and start keeping his pen and things on dinning table suddenly a girl hugs him from behind ….she is uttara [sanskar younger sister]
uttara : bhaiya aap kaise hai
sanskaar : me theek hoon …aur tera exams kiase gaye
uttara : bhaiya exam toh bahut acche gaye hai bas result aane ki deri hai par bhaiya yeh kya aap ko toh bilkul bhi khushi nahi hui mujha dekh ke
sanskaar : e-aisa bilkul nahi hai uttara me bahut khush hoon tujhe dekh kar
uttara : dekhiye laksh bhi aa gaye
sanskaar looks at the door and see laksh swara n ragini coming swara smiles at sanskar and sanskaar look at her ……laksh hugs sanskar …
sanskar in his mind says lagta hai swara laksh ki zindgi me laut jaayegi tabhi toh lucky aur swara itne kush hai
he gets sad and moves out of there …swara feels awkward as sanskar didn’t even smile at her and ignore her and went ahead .
then sujata and annapurna comes with panditji and dp , ram , adarsh, parineeta n uttara
they ask sanskaar to stop and come back ,sanskar goes back and swara luks at him
dp : aaj dhanteras aur hum chhate hai hamare bacche iss tyoohar ko kushi kushi banae isliye aur ab is ghar me do nayee bahu aaye hai toh panditji unhe kuch niyyam batayege humme khushi hogi agar swara aur ragini in niyamm ka palan kare
panditji : jaise ki aap sabhi ko pata hai ki dhanteras ke din maa lakshmi jee ke puja hati aur iss ghar me do nayi bahu aayi hai toh puja bhi unhe hi karni hogi ghar me jo rangoli banegi usse bhi in dono ko hi banana pade gaya
dp : shaam ko humne ek party rakhi hai humme khushi hogi agar raglak aur swasan isme shaam mil ho
sanskaar : par bade papa kyu
dp : vo hum shaam ko batayege annapurnaji hum aap shekahrji aur paravatiji ko phone kar dijiye aur aab sab log kaam kareye shamm ko party bhi hai
everyone is surprise and thinks of the reason behind party …..
ram: bhaisa aap toh bole ki party nahi sirf pooja hogi
dp : hum jante hai ki humne bola tha ki sirf haavan karege magar humne kuch socha aur aapna faisla badal diya
scene shifts
swara and ragini are filling diya with oil
sujata {tautingly to swara} : aae chori iss diya ko ghee se bahar na naki janwaro ke tel se aur rangoli me koi pyaari si design banana naki machali aur bakri
swara : ji mom
she gets up and start going
sujata : ae chori kahan ja rahi hai
swara : mom voh rangoli ke rang meine car me chod diye hai unhe lene
she the see sanskaar going
swara : sanskaar tum kaha jaa rahe ho ???
sanskaar : kahi nahi office jaa raha ho
sujata: par chore aaj toh dhanteras hai na
sanskar : haan mom kuch jaroori kaam yaad aagya
he ignore s swara and move ahead
swara resume her work and all are working suddenly they all hear a loud sound
swara shouts sanskaar
they run toward the door and everybody see sanskaar ‘ s car ablaze and sanskar injured badly
swara runs to him
swara : sanskar tum theek toh ho
sanskar : swara mujhe kuch nahi hua hai
swara [angrily] : kuch nahi hua se kya matlab itna khoon beh raha hai aur tum kahe rahe ho ki kuch nahi hua , (she hold his hand while he look at her surprisingly)
sanskar : (removing his hand) swara me theek hoon chalo ab aap sab andar jaa sakte hai me office jate samay doctor se patti kaar waal loonga.
dp : sanskar tum kahi nahi ja rahe chup chap ander ja ke aapne kamare me aaram karo hum abhi doctor bulata hai..
sanskaae (unwillingly): theek hai bade papa
he tries to move his leg but he is about to fall but swara holds him and they share eyelock
swra takes him to his room
in sanskar”s room
swara bandages sanskar wounds he has a wound at his forehead she cleans that wound while he look at her lovingly
swara : aaise kyu dekh rahe ho????
sanskar : tumne mujhe office jaane se kyu roka???\
swara (unknowingly keep her hand on his chest ) : sanskar bachpaana maata karo tumhe is halat me office jaane ke kya jaroorat hai itna bhi kya important kaam hai
sanskar : par swara mujhe thodi si chot aaayi hai
swara aplies medicine at his forehand .. and they very close swara look at sanskar and they again share eyelock
sanskaar : swara aapna haath hatao mujhe breathing me problem ho rahi hai
then swra realizes that she has kept her hand on his chest she tries to remove but her bangle got attach to his shirt button
swara tries hard
sanskar: rahene do swara scissor le lo
swara : sanskar scissor neeche rakhi hai
the swara move close very close to sanskar and cuts the thread with her teeth sanskar stare at her ..
suddenly door opens and uttara come and says bhaiya doctor ji aa gaye hai
swasan are highly uncomfortable
uttara notice this and says oops hume lagta hai hum galat time par aa gaye hai and she smiles naughtingly
recap :- a boy enters and gaddodias and maheswari are in the party
22 Comments
Kg can you please do it in English…
nice….brilliant last part was super
nice excellent ….brilliant last part was super and whole episode was luking real
hi dude nice i liked it
johanna ya sure from my episode 2 i will write everything in english
Superb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Awsm I like it
Brilliant yar
plz do this English
Superb….l wonder that why the writers of swaragini can’t think Like this.
Nyc
Plz write in english.
It is nice yaar,keep writing..
Thanks ol of u for comments I will soon write epi2 in english
superb. plz continue it
WOW MAN NICE I LIKE IT HOPE KI SERIAL ME BHI KUCH AISA HI HO SWASAN MOMENT ARE AWESOME
COOL MAN ESPECIALLY THAT BUTTON PART IS AWESOME
NICE PLZ CONTINUE
AWESUMMMMMMMMMMM YAAR
NICE YAAR SWASAN ROCKSSS
HI KG NICE WRITING