Hey Frens.. I am back with another episode, usually I upload by Friday morning.. but today was simply so chaotic.. uff no time to breathe.. lol
Hope you enjoy the episode.. and the upcoming twists and turns..
Don’t kill me for the last line 😊
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Riya walked inside and came to Ahaan smiling, thinking her plan was successful, since yesterday neither Rohan nor Mr.Singh was picking her call, but she was sure her plan had executed well, since Karthik came to take her early morning. She was surprised how he knew where she was but who cared, till Ahaan wanted her.
“Thanks, Karthik” Ahaan said looking at Riya” For catching her before she could leave Delhi”
“Oh Bhai, you know how my charm works. I just told her that you hated Ishqi and wanted her back, and she ran like a girl after her favourite candy” Karthik winks and Ahaan rolls his eyes
“What do you mean catching Riya” she asks surprised.
Ahaan smiles cunningly “I couldn’t leave Isqhi’s side last night, so I asked Karthik to search for you and get you here. He had to travel all the way from Mumbai, just to catch you before you left Delhi. So, you teamed up with Rohan to separate Ishqi from me”
“What are you taking Ahaan, why would I do that. We are friends and I wouldn’t betray you” she said faking her crocodile tears
“I want the truth now Riya, else I will hand over you to the police” he says slowly but with a warning.
Riya gets scared “It was all Rohan, I didn’t do anything” But Ahaan sees her with a deadly glare “I have already talked to Mr. Singh and Rohan both, and now I want to hear everything from you” he slowly signals Karthik
“I called Rohan to team up with me to separate Ishqi and you, but that idiot loves Ishqi so much, he didn’t want any harm to come to her. He just wanted to marry her and was jealous that you came in between. But I wanted to destroy Ishqi completely, so I told Rohan to gift that saree to her. I also told Mr. Singh that Ishqi will go to any lengths for her business, I already knew his nature, but he never took advantage till the girl consents for it. So, I told him that… that… “
Ahaan’s hands were clenched into tight fists, how could a woman do this to another “Told him what…” he roared
Even Karthik shook and Riya trembled, they had never seen Ahaan this angry
“I . I … told him that Ishqi would sleep with him if he gave her the contract to extend her business. That was the reason for his behaviour” She went quiet
Ahaan took a deep breath and tried to control himself but he couldn’t… he banged his hand to the wall.
“If you weren’t a woman, you would be on the ground in blood” he said stressing the word woman “in my family we are thought not to raise hands on women”
“Karthik call them in and give them the recorded statement” Ahaan said to Karthik.
Karthik called the police in, they were listening to the confession of Riya. Karthik had messaged them just after he had come to Ahaan’s home.
“Take this woman inspector, and Karthik will submit the proof which we recorded” Ahaan says and comes to Riya
“I wish you could understand that love can’t be forced. Being a woman how could you do this to another woman. I feel ashamed that I even know you. Now get lost and don’t ever come Infront of me again, I will kill you” he says and turns away from her.
The police take Riya out and Ahaan gets a call. He answers the call and his anger amplifies. He comes running outside and asks the police to free Riya.
“Mr. Ahaan if there is any pressure tell us, we will take care” they say but Ahaan just nods as a no.
Riya comes to Ahaan, “Did you think it was so easy to put me behind bars” she laughs and walks away.
“You know my weakness Riya but do you know why she is my weakness… it only because I love her a lot” Ahaan make sure she hears it.
Even with her back to him, he could make out her anger…
“Bhai, why did you let her go” Ahaan was silent “Bhai” Kartik shakes his hand
Ahaan tells him the reason” You really love Isqhi bhai” he smiles “Don’t worry we will find a solution to it.” Now come let’s go, I want to meet bhabhs”
“What’s that weird name, call her Bhabhi” Ahaan scolds
“Ah.. already Bhabhi haa…” he teases him, but Ahaan mind was completely caught as to how to handle Riya
Both come to Ishqi come, Ahaan will be parking and Karthik walks to the door and rings the bell and keeps tapping on the door, with his feet playing with the ground.
“Are you going to break the door” the voice says
“Haiyee.. ye to ishqi ki awaz nahi hai” saying he looks up and gets mesmerised.
The gal before him was an absolute beauty, with blue jeans, pink off shoulder ruffle top, dangles reaching her shoulder, and long hair flying freely, and most beautiful were her round brown eyes.
“Aankhon mein teri…Ajab si, ajab si, adaayein hain Hai…” his heart starts singing
“Are you going to come inside or keep staring” Ishqi teases him
He comes and hugs Ishqi tightly “I misssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeddddddddd yooooooooooooooooouuuuuuuuuuuuuu”
“kaisa Chipku boyfriend hai” the girl murmurs
“Are he is not… “Ishqi was clarifying but Karthik stops her seeing Ahaan coming
“Chipku hua toh kya, handsome hoon” Kathik shrugs
“He is not her boyfriend” Ahaan clarifies rudely
“Ab ye saddu kaun hai” the girl murmurs again
Ahaan stares at her angrily, and she glares back too
“ye saddu mere bhai hain..and you shouldn’t me murmuring so loud” karthik says and laughs
“I murmured loudly so that you could hear” she says boldly
Ishqi is just enjoying yhe conversation. She suddenly remembers
“I missed to introduce you guys. This is my friend Shefali. We met during few business meetings and hit off from there” she goes a little quiet “only today I came to know that she is… she is Mr. Singh’s daughter”
“WHAT!!!!!” Karthik and Ahaan exclaim together.
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- Riya was left free… why??
- Do you think Shefali and Karthik will make a good pair, after all she is Mr.Singh’s daughter.
31 Comments
Of course Riya is a vamp, all of sudden it can’t end, she is more cunning than she is.
Karthik once said he wanted to be a housemaker, I always thought that his love life will be like ki n ka movie. 2021 ki modern thought: men can be homemaker too, this go with 1921 vs 2021 theme too. However story goes it will be good to see AVM n KM love track. I hope sefali character is different from ishqi, it will better if we get to see different shades of character.
Glad that AVM is using his brain smartly unlike the real version of the show, but KM dono version mein kamal hai😄
Your choice of songs are so intense n just great, I can feel the bits reading it.
hey Sam,
always good to see ur comment. I have something like that in mind, as Shefali will b based in Delhi, and she has her business there.. whereas Karthik will have to work in mumbai.. it might so happen that karthik choses to stay with her and help her with her business.. or something else. Not formed in my mind yet. Thanks for the suggestion though.. i m gonna consider it
Shefali is totally different from Isqhi, she doesn’t believe in love at all, mainly bcoz of her father , which will b in next episode.. and karthik totally believes in love and marriage.. how he changes her perspective of men and makes her fall for him.. will be their story.
i seriously cant have dumb characters… i just hate it,. they need to be realistic
Thanks.. the song just rang in my head when i was writing the first scene of Shefali…
Awesome episode…..loved ahaan and Karthik s plan of making rhea confessing all the crimes…but why did he free her…no idea at all…nice to see a pair for Karthik, Karthik seeing ishqi and hugging her was nice…. waiting for your next chapter eagerly…….song selection was also nice.
Hey Aldy,
thanks.. it will reveal in next epi why he freed her.. it will push Isqhi one more step closer to Ahaan
Karthik ki love interest ke liye kiso cast kiya hai, like param is played by Aahaan. Who is playing shefali role, I really want to know. Have u given a thought…
Sana Amin sheKh will be best for the role, even I think if we know who is playing the character it will be more interesting to read and visualise it. The episode was nice, especially last part.
I agree …let’s see who is casted as shefali
Sam, Anushii,MJ
i really havent thought about it.. suggestions pls
This was so perfect, awesome, fantastic…..(out of words😂) I enjoyed a lot and kartik ke entry ne toh char chand laga diya , it doesn’t matter if shefali is mr. Singh’s its just that she should be kind hearted I hope she doesn’thaveany evil intentions, you just made my day….loads of love 💕
Hey MJ
its ur comment which made my day.. thank u so much.. loads of love to u too dear
No evil intentions i promise 🙂
IPZN i think is watched by many mainly to see Karthik.. he is fab
I think it was ishqi, who called him to free up rhea. Idk how she knew but just think rhea told her and she felt sad…Ns tho…Loved this ff A LOT!!!! Usually, am busy the whole week but take aside a few mins to read this masterpiece. Sorry for the late reply, but had important work. I was dying to read this so came back now and read it thrice. I think shefali is a modern gal so she will be good fur karthik…She will also be a way to show ppl that kids r not always like parents and she might be better than her daddy. you made my day too. Will send my ff on current ishqaan marraige track…Myra Malhotra
hey Myra,
thank u so much.. ur comments always make my day brighter.
It wasn’t Isqhi who freed Riya,.. i will reveal in next epi.. it will bring Isqhi closer and clear all her doubts about Ahaan..
Aree why ur saying sorry.. u can read anytime and comment. Thrice 🙂
Shefali is a modern gal who doesn’t believe in love and men, coz of her dad. Yes she will b an example for that.. Sure waiting for ur FF
Like her charecter…Thank u…awww, I’m so happy you feel brighter with my comments…It’s a pleasure for me…Lots of hugs…This girl shefali sounds cool ekdum dhamakedaar. Love her entry…
Thanks Myra.. yeah she has to b different then Karthik.. she is totally cool from outside..
Loads of love and hugs to u too Myra
Hey guys.. i really didnt think about who shefali should be. But thanks for the asking about it. I would have surely forgotten..
So pls suggest who Shefali should be.. who shld play her character
Let me describe Shefali.
She is bold, beautiful, runs her own business just like ISqhi. She wont compromise anything for anyone. Doesn’t believe in love and thinks men are not good enough. Basically she is very much broken from within, and always holds walls around her.
So thats her.. pour in ur suggestions
Wat abt that gal tejasvi from khatron ke khiladi…Dunno her surname but she fits perfect according to me
How about TANIYA SHARMA, she will totally go with the character and the best part she is quite young like Rajat and both of them are new talent in tellywood.
ya taniya is good too
hey Taniya shld suit him
or Pranali rathod..She played saudamini in barister babu
Taniya is a good choice I think.
Thanks NIsha.. i too think Taniya will suit him
Sana amin or Taniya
Thanks anushi.. i think taniya will suit him
Wonder how Ishky will introduce Ahaan to his mother
So sry Archiya for posting it here but this is half of my cming ff… It’s on the current track of ishqaan ki shaadi. Wud love to get ur comments and feedback fur the other half….
Ishqi sees Savitri in her bed and goes to talk to her. “Aunty?”
Savitri stumbles and nods. “Mujhe mere bete se milao na.”
“Aur tumhare beta kaun hai?” Ishqi asks
“Ahaan Veer Malhotra.”
Ishqi gasps “WHAT”
Savitri nods.
Ishqi tells her all about herself and that she will be savirti’s bahu.
“Humme kuch to karna hoga,” she continues.
Meanwhile, ahaan comes to see dadi. He hears the name rhea come from the next room.
Out of curiousity he goes and sees rhea fighting with a man.
“Rhea, mein iss bacchhe ko accept nahi karta,” the man says.
“Ankit! Ye humara hai,” Rhea says.
Ahaan gasps.
Rhea is married?
He takes his phone and records everything.
He calls Ishqi and meets everyone in the resort….
“Mujhe kuch important bat karni hai,” he says.
He shows the video.
Sarla starts insulting Rhea.
Ishqi looks on and thinks she shud capture dadi too…..
So, this is my 1 st try…Pls tell me how it is…Know its not as good as archiya’s 😅so slightly worried if y’all will like it…pls suggest ideas of ways in which dadi the evil will be exposed..Thanks
Myra is this first chapter?? if yes its going very fast. U revealed whole of Riya ‘story in one episode only. Go a little slow. That’s my opinion… build some mystery around Ankit..
But if these are already a part of your next chapters… ignore my opinion
One request, please do not post your story here.. u can always put a synopsis and ask for people feedback directly with “Sumbit Article” on TU. Summarize your story in a para or two, and upload it. you will surely get comments
And you just want my feedback, you can always message me on TU
ohk thanks. i’ll login into my account and post it.thx for telling….Waiting for part 10…
I’ll try to frame a story. Sab ki bass ki baat nahin hai..I was stunned at how wonderfully your story was framed and now am even in more awe of y’all. Well, wapas try karti hun warna writing ka kida chhod deti hun….Archiya, there is literally magic in ur hands. My mom read it and loved it tooo….
Thank u so much for ur kind words.. they mean a lot