Hello everyone this is shrutika , and this is my first os , so I am a bit nervous,please comment if you liked it, so let us start.
Scene with Aarav waking up late and seeing Simar wear earrings , ” Acche lag rahe hain ? ” { Are these earrings looking good ? [on me] } Simar asks raising her eyebrows .
” Haan ” acche to lag rahe hain par….. [ yeah , they’re looking good but….. ] . ” Nau baj rahe hain ” [ Its nine o clock ] said Simar as a reply to the unasked question .
” haan haan abhi just nahane ja raha hun ” [ was just going to have bath ] Aarav replies , knowing what she would tell him to do . Aditi sees it and gets confused wondering
” Bhai aur Bhabhi ne to proper conversation kiya hi nahi phir bhi aise behave kar rahe hain jaise koi TRIKAALDARSHI swami hain [ Brother and SIL { Sister – in – Law } did
not even have a proper conversation but are behaving as if they are omniscient and all – pervading ] she barges in and asks . ” Bhabhi , bhai ke bina puchhe hi aapne bola
ki nau baj rahe hain aur bhai time hi puchna chahte the aur phir aapke bina kahe bhai ne kaha ki wo nahane hi ja rahe the , mujhekuch samajh nahi aa raha hai
[ SIL without his verbally asking for time , you knew that he wanted to know it and told him and without even you verbally telling him to bath as fast as he can he
understood it and told you he was just about to bath , this complicated thing is too tough for me to understand , please explain it ] ” Jab aap kisi ko bohot hi
paas ho tab apni baat kehne ke liye bhaasha use nahi karni padti ” [ When you are very close to someone , language is’nt needed to talk ] ” Wow Bhabhi , so romantic by the
way main chalti hu [ Wow SIL , so romantic , anyways time for me to leave . Aditi goes . [ All this while Aarav was bathing ] Aarav comes out of the bathroom wearing his jeans
but shirtless , he says ” Simar…. ” Haan Aaravji ” [ yes Aaravji ] looks at him and turns away and closes her eyes . ” Aapne shirt kyun nahi pehni ? [ Why haven’t you worn
the shirt ? ] ” actually mujhe samajh nahi aa raha tha konsa pehnu [ Actually I was confused as to what I should wear ] ” tum choose karne me help karo na ‘
[ please help me in choosing it ] ” Accha thik hai dikhaiye apne shirts ” [ fine show your shirts to me ] Simar said still looking away , he dumps his shirts in a mess . She
says ” Ram Ram Aaravji aapne apne kapde fold karke nahi rakhe hain ? [ OMG Aaravji you haven’t folded your clothes ] Aarav looks back guiltily . ” Waise utni bhi badi baat
nahi hai ghar pe to mere bhi kapde thik se nahi rehte the ” [ By the way not such a big deal as back home my clothes were also messy ]she says as if to accompany him in his mistake .
She chooses a blue jacket and white shirt and gives it to him saying ” ye aap pe bohot suit karega , aapke blue jeans ke saath bhi nast jaaega aur aap ekdum ‘ handsome ‘ lagenge
, she says . [ This will go well with your blue jeans , it will suit you and you wil look very ‘ handsome in this ] She goes and gives it to him closing her eyes , he takes it and
she turns away to go with closed eyes . Aarav asks ” Sure aise chal logi ? ” [ Sure ? wil you be able to walk like this ? ] ” Haan ” [ Yes ] , [but how can one walk properly with
closed eyes ? ] she slipped and fell . But just in time Aarav holdd her and she opens her eyes .
They look into each other’s eyes knowing no one can know that they,
still far from the banks of Love are bridging the ocean of differences with ‘IT’
PS: Guys this is my first OS so I am super – duper scared . Also read ‘ A Sweet Goodnight ‘ an OS by my twin sister Kritika [ I am Shrutika ]
link : https://www.tellyupdates.com/a-sweet-good-night-by-kritika-sirav-os/
5 Comments
Fantastic dear loved it
Thanks tanya di , was motivated by you only so I wrote this my first step with your blessing got a good response , thank you di
Feels so nice to be commenting on my twin sister’s OS …. hehe
Krits [ Kritika ] din’t know you read IT hehheh
Wonderful OS 💙
Wese I don’t read anything else except RiAnsh but this was amazing 💙💜
Sorry for being late I didn’t open the comments yesterday.
Keep it up. Loved it 😊