“Click”. Sarab clicked a button on his watch and set the timer, 30 minutes. Today Sarab wanted to see how strong his love was, today he was going to test himself and see if the women he longed for so long, the women he loves more than himself, the women without whom his world is incomplete, without whom he’s incomplete, if he can find her in the next 30 minutes. Sarab knew that while all the hospitals doctors, nurses and receptionists were out there looking he couldn’t rely on anyone else, he would have to find his Meherji himself. Sarab ran outside the meeting room and pressed at the elevators button, seeing the elevator was still 2 floors above him, Sarab turned and made a run towards the staircase refusing to waste a single second. Skipping every other staircase step Sarab ran on his way down to the floor above the parking garage. Sarab didnt know if it was his high heartbeat, his stress or simply the running but suddenly his suit jacket felt very suffocating. Sarab had neglected himself for so long that his health started catching up to him, he felt winded after running for just a few minutes. His lack of healthy eating and sleep over the past month or so now showed their effects. “Not now Sarab” Sarab told himself as he removed his jacket and threw it aside, “now is not the time to feel tired or sick”. Continuing his run, Sarab opened the stair case door turned the corner and slammed open the dispatch room. This was the room where the hospitals and the ambulance service Sarab and Meher had started ran from. This is where the ambulance routes were given along with a precise monitoring system. Every patient or any emergency that needed an ambulance was called in here and the operators would dispatch an ambulance closest to their location. Sarab knew that typical hospital discharge tests did not take that long, if Fateh and Tejo were waiting outside his meeting room for around an hour and Meherji had been transferred to a clinic before they arrived then her tests must have been done and she should already be on her way back from the clinic, hence Sarab decided to focus on the ambulances. Rolling up his sleeves he walked over to the shocked operators, “I need your computer and your help NOW! he said loudly. The operators had never seen anyone storm in like that but they knew who Sarab was and the last thing they were going to do is argue with him. They moved aside and Sarab sat down, “I need a list of everyone who has been transferred from this hospital to one of our clinics this morning” he began slowly but seriously. The computer gathered a long list, 112 selected, Sarab glanced through and saw that it included transfers from early as 6 AM “Select transfers from the past three hours” he continued, the list got shorter, 26 selected. “Now select only the transfers who went for discharge tests”, the list grew shorter, 8 selected. “Now select only the females” the operator looked at Sarab confused, “I said select only the females” Sarab said again this time anger clearly building up in his eyes. The operator followed after a quick apology. The list got shorter, 3 selected. Sarab eyed the three remaining transfers on the computer and he quickly took over and clicked at the first, it was some female in her 60s, “no” Sarab thought, he quickly clicked on the second one and saw it was a young girl in her teens, “not this one either”, Sarab closed his eyes and quickly said a quick prayer to his god to help him and prayed for the last one on the computer to please be his Meherji. With shaking hands and a heartbeat that could beat Usain Bolt, Sarab clicked on the last transfer, it was a female in her late twenties. “Meherji” Sarab said quietly, it was barely a whisper but he said it so lovingly that it caused even the operators to look at Sarab, they didn’t know what was so special about the screen. They looked at the computer to see if it was anything different than what they normally see everyday but it was the same, the same plain white screen with small ant sized writing, there was a description of the patient and the procedure they were having and information about the pick up and drop off. They looked at each other and shrugged their shoulders equally confused at what was going on, unaware of what the owner had found on this screen. They continued to look at Sarab as he stared at the screen like it was made of gold or as if it had just told him the location of some precious treasure, they wondered if the man who stormed in with his death stare was the same man who now touched the computer screen and smiled from ear to ear. Sarab looked at the computer screen as if it had just leased him a new life, he touched Meher’s description and quickly got back to work. He saw that the ambulance had left the health clinic, and under the live route update saw that it was on the highway near the hospital, he also saw the red line highlighting the route, indicating that there was a traffic jam on the highway. Quickly jumping to his feet Sarab picked up the telephone near the computer and called his cellphone, picking up his cellphone he looked at the operator, this time he spoke a bit more softly “This is my wife that I have been looking for for several weeks, I am going to stay on the line while I go to her, you will keep me updated with every second of this ambulance’s movement, if it moves an inch, I want to know, if it stops, I want to know, if it turns, I want to know, hell if it moves a centimeter..” Sarab paused looking at the operators “you want to know” they finished together, the serious death stare was back in Sarab’s eyes and the last thing the operators wanted to do is argue with him, “good” Sarab finished as he turned on his heels and ran back up the staircase. The operators quickly got to work monitoring the ambulances movement, they tried calling the ambulance but due to maybe a high traffic network issue, the call did not go through.
Running up the stairs, Sarab glanced at his watch, he still had 23 minutes. He knew he had found his Meherji, but he would not stop till he saw her, his heart told him the computer was correct and that this had to be her, but Sarab would take no risks, he didnt want to slow down, he didnt want to stop his momentum. Even as Sahil came running beside him, Sarab didnt slow down, he cut everyone in front of him and ran outside the hospital. With Sahil following suite “Sir Meher ma’am was taken to..” “I know” Sarab cut him off, “her ambulance is on the highway in the traffic jam right now.” “Sir do you want me to get your car” asked Sahil slowly running out of breath? “No I don’t have time for that, to get to the highway in our car we’ll have to drive around and use the ramp, and how will we drive in the traffic” continued Sarab as he ran, almost tripping over a bottle on the road. “Careful sir” said Sahil, “I don’t have time to be careful Sahil, I need to get to the highway now” continued Sarab running out of breath himself. With sweat running down his forehead, his turban was also slightly wet, Sarab removed his suit vest and threw it in the air as he continued to run. His heart beat so fast he didnt think it could beat any faster, his lungs heaved so loudly Sarab didnt think they could hold any more air. Every breath Sarab took burned, he had saliva building up in his mouth which tasted like blood and every breath caused him to break into a cough. His feet ached and his calfs killed, the last and only other time Sarab ran like this was also for Meherji, when she was in the hospital and they needed a medicine from another hospital. History repeated itself and Sarab prayed that like last time he would see his Meherji again, safe and sound.
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@Dropofthought: Brilliant. Was just wondering if in the meantime we can carry on the conversation at the other one (Rana’s photo) and first use that one up fully and only than restart over here as that might be the most economic and efficient way?
@AJ.. yes.. thats a good option.. but comment section remains open for 2 weeks after the publishing.. number of comments dont matter.. so we can decide either way.. its not very different
Yes.. better we continue here now @AJ and @Radhika..
Sorry guys, I donβt know why it took so long this time to get this uploaded. Whatever you guys decide is fine with me.
The other one was dated 25th Aug, so valid to 7th Sept.
This one dated 30th Aug, so valid to 12th Sept.
If the number of comments don’t matter, than we may as well use this one to 12th. But if they do, than use up the other before moving here.
Once again, thank you so much @Dropofthought. The way Sarab runs after Meher above means that there is no need for him to go to the Gym at all, his Meherji keeps him very fit.
@Dropofthought… Absolutely brilliant!!
@AJ.. the first time comment section closed it was 2 weeks and there were approximately 164 comments.. and this time when it closed it was 2weeks with more than 300comments … so I said only duration matters
If anyone has any detailed info please share
I think week limit only results in closing of the page comments section
Hahahah keeps him fit by just letting him run π
He’s already fit Abhiπ
Nim sharing the montage of her own show and trp(online one coz it’s under top 5 not the offline one which is not even in top 15 anymore π)..after xyzhx yearsπ§..Am i living in this world onlyπ©..
One line trp is important . I don’t know . I think some of Avinim fans are watching cs in voot instead of tv. Sometimes . I don’t know .
So there’s an interview by Nim on lehren.com about privatization of social media.. Whatever she said in that is absolutely correct but one thing she said which could later on backfire her..when asked about the show post leap she said..”Now i am a young girl in the show full of energy so the vibe has fully changed..for her personally its much more fun and relatable!..Any views on this??
It clearly indicates her attitude for her own character Mehar which gave her immense love. Nimrith wanted to become a young girl. So makers ruined everything. Entire cast including Avinesh was removed . Very sad. She is very happy . But audience they still can’t get rid of the pain that makers gave by killing meharab and removing Avinesh .
By the way did the FB with avinesh sir are showed in the recent episode? Just curious π
Don’t know. Actually I can’t see him as fb. It is very heart breaking
No idea @Ayni.. I don’t catch up anymore..
Brilliant update. I just enjoyed it so much. It could never be more beautiful and lovely. The way Sarab made running efforts even after his health problem, it was so much amazing and lovely.
Yes Dropofthought is very creative not like cs makers
Dropofthought is a better written than rajesh chawla.Period!
Hey guys new here, just gave this a read its soo good where can i find more?
Hai welcome to our community .
Hello dear..welcome..Guys she is one of my friends Harsha..she is new here and we had a talk on instagram today only..she is a very sweet person..keep sharing ur reviews hereπ€
Hi guys, would love to discuss with you guys π
Sure @Mehrab’s fan
NIMRIT PROMOTING SEHRAJ ACHANAK SE AFTER 15 DAYS BREAK LOL. WHAT IS SHE
Dil ko daura pahuchta h unhe kabhi kabhi..fikr na kare..humare sath jurein rahe..naye kapde pehne h na..abhi wedding look baki h mere dost..@Radhika ..where u??
@pixelss… I am here.. a little busy today..
@ MEHRAB’S FAN welcome to the forum
Go to fanfiction..you will get them there!!
Hey guys, this was just a part of the written chapter, I assumed since the regulars have already read it no point it posting the whole chapter. However as there new readers maybe Iβll post the entire chapter next time, this has already been posted in the first initial posts so if you want to read you can read going back. Thanks guys!
I watched fb scean of meharab in ig. Actually I cried . After long time Avi as Sarab. His acting , smile is very cute. It is very short scean . But he did his best. I can’t control my tears. His acting is very genuine . Why makers did this ?? πππππI feel very sad. They invited him for such a small scean for their trp
As predicted, that fb scene had all to do with Seher’s current ongoing wedding. Sarab and Meher were seen to write/ plan all the ceremonies to take place when Seher grows up and gets married with all the children taking part in that planning. But was it all worth it for Avinesh to come and do a scene that lasts just a minute or two? And Nimrit planning her own future wedding as ‘Seher’ in the process to boot. Should make no difference at all to the TRP. The original wedding had a genuine Punjabi atmosphere feel to it. This current one look’s too artificial and fake to be a Punjabi wedding at all. There is one word for it – cheap. But than, the current actors are cheap too so there is nothing new.
Yes . Based on bts no charm. They try to cover untalented actors by using colour ful clothes and festival . Today I watched first wedding of meharab .It has very royal look.And very genuine . Do you think their trp will increase due to those functions ?
Might inc coz heavy promotion going on…
@pixelss better weddings are going on in other shows too probably π€£π€£
True @Radhika…
Yes.Nimrith starts her promotion again.
True @AJ..CHEAPEDE..is a perfect world for them
So trueπ―
Look @Radhika the outfit that tayiji ruined is savedππ you were upset because of it! Smile πhttps://www.instagram.com/p/CTPgHN-B588O-pPbtPAVVOTI2stx0H9DA4ExW00/?utm_medium=copy_link
@Ayni..Oh yes!! I thought the same when I saw the the pictures today.. well one thing is confirmed.. Though CS currently has bad actors in their cast, bad script, bad dialogues, bad direction, bad production house they have really good drycleanersπ€£π€£ I mean the suit is so clean.. no stain at all.. Good job by the drycleanersπππ
I feel like this leap and everything is not a decision of all creatives . It is a decision of some of them.This is my idea Don’t know exactly.Some of them didn’t share anything relates to the leap yet.I mean some of them know their show is already over
Ayni i cannot see..plz can u tell the profile name
Yes, so apparently jaladh and prabhat sir lookin for other work they wanna leave and half of the crew doesnt like the leap only rajeev is over obsessed cause he got the leap lol. the crew has to work cause again source of income.
Only prabhat sir dear.Till now he doesn’t promote the leap. He actually respected Avinesh and his hard work
Yaa.. nowadays i see only rajeev is being seen directing everything..he wanted to be the head.. that’s why he insisted on the leap
@ pixelss, heartbeat_avi is the profile name. It is a picture of avinesh in Lila suit.
Yeah @Radhika, their drycleaner is perfect, atleast they saved your favorite color but we can’t say the same about the PH, makers and new actors in our loved show. Bunches of foolish people. One month past and I am still full of anger.
@Ayni.. that anger will simmer down only when the show goes offair
The anger is still too fresh @Ayni! There was just too much wrongdoing to our beloved original cast, leaving such a bitter taste that it still lingers to date. There will only ever be peace among fans once the show plummets to its doom and ultimately is taken off air with the most embarrassingly low trp in history!
@Radhika @MD, today I was more angry and disappointed in the PH after someone mentioned that Avinesh Rekhi’s name has been removed from Wikipedia and I checked it and was true. The new cast are on it. Only in old plot you can read the old cast. This people has no shame. π’
OOOF THATS Sad well the covers still of mehrab and i m glad they get the og cast in main π
Hi
I am a silent reader, I have read all the chapters of your fanfiction @dropofthought, your work is amazing.Thankyou
I watched choti sardarni only for sarab, his hardwork during mehers absence was all forgotten by the makers, they not only betrayed him, other original cast actors and loyal fans, more importantly the story was mercilessly destroyed.
Welcome to you . Yes you are correct . Avinesh’s hardwork is neglected by makers. It is the sad truth. But I am very sure new ml can’t attract audience . He can’t replace Avinesh .
Thank you @Cs
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AGAINNNN
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Silent readers of this site, if you like to join with us you all can put a comment.We are the original cs fans who don’t support to leap.
That new guy instead of pleasing the female lead if he try to improve his look as a Punjabi and acting atleast he may do some justice to his role.
Yes.
Not at all welcome you people, Mehrab’s fan and Saamne, whosoever you are! Crazy brainless folks, no one needs you here.
When are you going to stop you foolish Dropofthought? There’s something called too much bad writing which is much much worse than too much Nirmit, which is actually great!
Dumb folks Radhika, MD, Agni, Cs, Pixelss when will you stop with all this silly stuff?
Enough of it.
Admins are so unfair and cruel. How dare they silence a polite and respectful woman such as me? We are in a democracy, everyone has write to express their opinions freely. How can my comments, which literally say the truth and have no disrespect towards anyone, be si
Deleted? That’s unfair!
And why are my comments always awaiting moderation and never getting published? Undemocratic and cruel, it is!
Saam24 you are not welcome. No place for a stupid idiot like you!
By the way, why aren’t anyone else’s comments awaiting moderation? Why only me? Pretty darn unfair and biased!
@Dropofthought dekho tum se milne kon aaya hainππ
Meghaji, your always unwelcome, but its nice to see you give us so much love here. Aap itna pyaar deti hain ke administrators aapki comments pad kar sapno Mein koh jate hain. Jab hosh mein aate hain phir comments approve karte Hain. Maybe that’s why it takes so long for ONLY YOUR comments to await moderation, aapke pyaar aur apne pan ko yaha sab jante hain.
For the last time, stop this crap. Next time you pull these stunts to grab attention, not a single person will reply to you.
@Abhi ππ
This new male lead and old female lead are just trying to please each other for their selfish reasons that’s all no professionalism.
May be for you mannerless meghaa desai
Please don’t worry about her. You can comment with us
Be polite and respectful towards others you will be welcomed by all good hearts.
One this is true, cheaters may steal the opportunity but they can never be successful. Hardworkers may struggle but they will be successful.
The female lead of cs don’t know what she has lost, infact she is the one with greater loss, Meher was supposed to be one of the strongest character on ITV , after her return from Kashmir the story was supposed to be like she takes care of sarab when he is not well and manage his political party , at the same time take care of her family, handle the revenge of kulwant and protect her family and everything that was at risk, that would have served justice for the title of the show choti sardarni.
@Saam24…ππ..what a reply to megha desai..BTW, welcome to the forum..
Thank you @pixelss , I enjoy reading your comments
My pleasure @Saam24
Yes. Now their show and title don’t have any relationship. It is just typical story.Otherthing is this new ml said that turban is a trouble . But Avinesh respected his turban , character and also sikh culture . Thats why people used to love cs. Same makers ruin everything due to one person.
That guy is not fit for sardar role.
Yes. But makers don’t care.
If at all the turban had voice and capability to speak it would have said please tie me around Avi sir’s head, this guy irritates me, he is big trouble for me, wat bad time I loved to be around Avi’s head please tie me around his head I hate is new guy he does not deserve me.
The Beauty of a sardar look is the turban. One who cannot understand it can never do justice to sardar’s role . I learnt this from sarab how much he respected and loved his turbans. Yes even the turbans sarab wore had somuch love for him that all the turbans he wore looked perfect on him.
The lady is crazy behind becoming young, seriously, every one gets old as age grows , enjoy every stage of life, it has its own beauty. A good actor will never see young or old in his character, wat matters is how well you perform any character offered to you.
Yes it is called professionalism . But sadly she doesn’t know it.
No doubt, if she wanted to play still younger role may be they would have agreed and given 6 years old kevina role. Some people would believe her as a 6 years old child due to some super power she looks like 27 years.
ππππ Exactly . But reality is mehar’s character is best with Sarab.
Ya, Meher is best with sarab that’s wat the story promised, but the one who made that promise dint understand it. The last two months episodes before leap were very painful, true fans will never forgive the one who was responsible for it
As a fan I could not tolerate the injustice done to original cast and Avinesh sir , so vented out my frustration, otherwise I really don’t want to hurt anybody .
Yes. Actually I am still in shock. I can’t believe Avinesh sir ‘s exit . I am very sad. Now more than a one month without cs
Do you know people still demand Avinesh sir to cs.If you are in ig you can read comments of fans under cs director’s post.
Ya I miss watching sarab, his charm,even a troubled mind would be relaxed by his performance onscreen, such an amazing character, his work will be remembered forever.
We already did that before..but it’s good that you did it.. Patience also has a limit..BTW,can u introduce urself
@pixelss I am not a active person on social medial, I would prefer not to reveal my name and place. I hope you don’t mind.
I think just a first name would have been done..but ok still ur wish!..