hi friends..iam kifu here ππ. This story is based on incomplete love which will be emotional and heartbroken..i hope you like it π . So kindly support.. and the pair will be jasmin Bhasin and mohsin Khan.
A guy named aman is seen standing with his wife nisha in a cliff end and he recalls his marriage..
FB Starts:
Aman and nisha are married and they are brought to the room and..
Aman: finally we got married..
Nisha hugs aman and..
Nisha:yes..i was waiting for this day for many months..
Aman jokes:for our marriage or for this first night??
Nisha looks him with one eyebrow raised and..
Nisha:aman.. your mind is always bad.
Aman pulls her closer and smiles..
Aman: what’s bad in this? A husband and wife will have first night right?that’s why i told..
Nisha smiles and pushes him away and jumps on the bed and..
Nisha:you know what?iam going to sleep nicely today..
Aman gets shocked..
Aman:what madness is this? today is our special night..so i wont let you sleep..
Nisha: really? Then we will challenge ourselves..if you win then i wont sleep whole night. And if i win then you should obey me..
Aman:wow..it’s nice. Iam ready for this..tell me what challenge?
Nisha:it’s an easy one..you have done this already.
Aman: what’s it?
Nisha:when you first falen in love with me..you were just staring me continuously without blinking right?
Aman:yes.. because you was looking like nightingale..even now i can do that because now you are more beautiful than nightingale.
Nisha:then you should keep staring my eyes and i will also do that..and whoever blinks first then they are out okay?
Aman smiles..
Aman:wow..it’s very simple challenge. Even iam ready to stare you for 24 hours..so iam sure that iam going to win.
Nisha pinches his face and..
Nisha: don’t be overconfident..then you will lose.ok..come lets start the game.
Aman:ok..
Aman and nisha turn towards each other and they stare each other’s eyes without blinking holding their hands..
Later nisha slowly comes close to him and she blows in aman’s eyes and aman closes his eyes due to the blow and nisha laughs..
Nisha:haha..you are out.
Aman:hey…this is cheating..i wont accept this.
Nisha :i told to stare but i dint tell you not to distract..so this is not cheating.
Aman: waah..my wife is very smart.
Nisha:yes..iam smart. Now you should obey me..
Aman holds his ears..
Aman:yes..iam ready to serve my wife. Tell me what to do?
Nisha smiles and holds his hands and takes him out and shows the camp fire and a small cot near that while aman gets suprised seeing that..
Aman suprisingly: what’s this?did you arrange this for us?
Nisha shyly:yes..i did this for our first night. Come lets celebrate our first night with dance..
Aman smiles and..
Aman:your mind is more bad than me..
Nisha: shut up..first come and dance with me.
Aman:wait..i will turn on the music first..
He switches the music and starts dancing with nisha romantically…
Nazar na
Lag jaaye tere mere iss pyar ko
Mannaton ka tu dhaga koyi bandh le
Sabar na
Is dil ko ek pal bhi na karaar hai
Bin tere na jiyenge yeh jaan le
Jitna marte hai tumpe
Kya tum bhi utna marte ho na
Chalo ab sach batado
Pyar humse karte ho na
Juda hone ke khayalon se
Tum bhi darte ho na
Chalo ab sach batado
Pyaar humse karte ho na
Juda hone ke khayalon se
Tum bhi darte ho na
Tujhse se jude hai mere
Dil ke saare raaste
Tujhko banaya rab ne
Bas mere vaaste
Aankhon se dil mein tere
Utar jaungi main
Tujhko deewana apna
Kar jaungi main
Mere baare tum bhi
Kya khudh se baatien karti ho na
Chalo ab sach batado
Pyar humse karte ho na
Juda hone ke khayalon se
Tum bhi darte ho na
Chalo ab sach batado
Pyaar humse karte ho na
Juda hone ke khayalon se
Tum bhi darte ho na
Ho ho ho ho..
Haan haan haan..
Thoda marte ho na
Pyar karte ho na
Thoda darte ho na
Pyar karte ho na
They finish the dance and nisha gets shy and was about to go but Aman holds her and pulls her and makes her sit on his lap and..
Aman: when you can do such romantic suprise then i can suprise you with more romance…am i right?
Nisha gets shy and turns her face while aman smiles and kisses her cheeks making her blush..
Nisha shyly:aman…
Aman:what?i just kissed you..
He gets romantic while nisha shyly gets up and runs while aman catches her pulls towards him…
Aman: you can’t run from me..
Nisha smiles and kisses his forehead..
and she runs shyly again but suddenly she slips and aman helds her…
Aman:see.. even god doesn’t want us to move away. Now iam full energetic to dance with you as you gave me a kiss..
Nisha: now you become too romantic..
Aman:yes..iam because iam your husband.
Aman lifts nisha while nisha closes her due to shyness..
Aman: now let’s go to bed..
Aman carries her to bed and makes her sit near him..
Aman:this day is very special for me..
Nisha:even for me…
Aman slowly makes nisha lie down and he kisses her forehead..
They consummate their marriage..
FB ENDS..
nisha:our marriage was beautiful..
Aman:our life was filled with love and happiness…
Nisha: our honeymoon was amazing..
They both recall their honeymoon..
FB STARTS:
Aman and nisha goes to Jaipur for their honeymoon..
Nisha:this place is awesome aman..
Aman looks nisha romantically and..
Aman:wherever you come the place will look amazing..
Nisha:waah..what a dialogue.
Aman:oii..this is truth. I feel every place beautiful only because of you..even the village will be amazing for me if you are there near me.
Nisha smiles..
Nisha: even i feel like that only. More than enjoying this place i like to spend time with you in this different atmosphere..
Aman:then we will spend our time nicely..
Both smiles looking each other..
They go to their hotel and they get ready and they go to different shops..
Aman:i feel like buying this whole shop for you.
Nisha laughs..
Nisha:i don’t feel happy..even if you buy a single thing for me i will be so proud about my lovely husband.
Aman thinks something and..
Aman:ok..you buy things and i will talk to my employee and come.
Nisha:ok..
Aman goes from there while nisha sees many things in shop and is confused what to buy..
Nisha in mind:where is this aman?iam confused about selecting which design to buy…
Half an hour passes and nisha gets irritated..
Nisha in mind:for talking to an employee..he is taking this much time. Did he come for honeymoon or employeemoon?
Suddenly a beautiful chain comes in front of her eyes from aman and..
Aman:i came for honeymoon that’s why i went away to buy suprisingly for you..how is it?
Nisha looks aman suprisingly..
Nisha:first of all how did you read my mind?
Aman: because iam your lovely husband..so i can understand whatever you feel.
Nisha gets happy and..
Nisha:this necklace is so beautiful..
Aman:then i will make you wear it..
Aman makes her wear while nisha feels happy..
Nisha:you are the best husband.
Aman:yes..i should receive a noble prize for it.
Nisha makes a face and hits his hand funnily..
Nisha: don’t praise yourself too much..
Aman:fine..now we will go to a place..
Nisha:where?
Aman:that’s secret…
Nisha: wow..iam really excited. Come lets go fast..
Nisha holds aman’s hand they walk towards some place looking each other smiling…
Suddenly nisha’s leg gets sprained and she falls down..
Nisha:ouchhhh..
Aman:hey..are you fine? What happened suddenly?
Nisha:my leg sprained..
Aman:ohh noo.. wait I’ll book some taxi.
Nisha: is the destination far?
Aman:no..
Nisha:then don’t book taxi.. do something other than that.
Aman:how?there is no option other than that… then what will i do?
Nisha pulls aman’s hand and Aman sits near her and nisha pinches his face cutely..
Nisha:you are a great fool mr.handsome..
Aman: what?why?
Nisha:i thought you will lift me and go but you was behaving like an old age couple and that’s why i suggested you with idea but you didn’t understand my indirect speech so now i told you Directly to lift me..
Aman gets suprised..
Aman:wow.. nowadays you are becoming romantic.
Nisha: because you are becoming unromantic husband..
Aman: what?me… not a chance. See how romantic iam..
Aman lifts nisha twirls her around and kisses her cheeks and they both smile seeing each other..
Aman:now.. will you accept that iam romantic.
Nisha shyly:yes..
Aman brings her to a place where the food is arranged for them in a beautiful garden and he makes her sit on the chair and…
Aman:this is the suprise..how is it?
Nisha looks around and gets happy..
Nisha:wow..it’s so amazing aman. I really dint expect this suprise..you are really great.
Aman:yes..i will always be great for you. Now i will feed you with my hands..
Nisha:ok..
Aman shows her favourite foods serve in table and nisha gets more happy..
Nisha:wow..yummy.. thank you so much aman for this lovely suprise. I love you so much..
Aman smiles and..
Aman:i love you too..
Aman starts feeding nisha and both looks each other intensively..
Nisha:aman..
Aman: yes..dear wifey.
Nisha gets emotional and..
Nisha: we will live for 100 years and will enjoy our life like this..
Aman:why just 100 years..we will live for 200 years and i will suprise you 2000 times a day..
Nisha smiles and holds his hand tightly..
Nisha:thank you so much for coming into my life.
Aman:even i should thank you for coming into my life. You made !y life beautiful..
Both smiles seeing each other.. and later they go for safari ride in Jeep and they take selfies..
Then they visit some old fort and they take photos..
thus they enjoy their honeymoon very nicely…
FB ENDS..
Nisha: those days were really lovely..i thought we will enjoy our life like this for many years..
Aman:i was proud about my life..i thanked God each and every moment for giving you in my life..
Nisha:but this is all just for some days..
Aman cries..
Aman cryingly: why did you leave me alone?you know right..i can’t live alone then why did you leave me?
Aman cries more while nisha joins her forehead with his and..
Nisha:it’s our fate aman..god wants me so he took away my life.
Aman:then why did you stop me from coming to you..we will live together atleast in heaven..
Nisha:no..you should live the life here. If you don’t then who will take care of our amisha?
Both recalls their child..
FB IS SHOWN:
One day nisha was cooking and aman came there from office..
Aman:wow..my wife is cooking something special it seems..
Nisha:yes..i thought to make different food today.. that’s why.
Aman:iam excited to feed you now..
Nisha frowns..
Nisha:we got married before 6 months but still you are feeding me like a newly married couple..
Aman pulls nisha closer and..
Aman:for me..we are always a newly married couples only.
Nisha smiles and..
Nisha:then go and freshen up and come..we will have food now.
Aman: okay..
Aman goes and freshes up and he comes and sits near nisha in table and aman starts to feed nisha..
Aman:i think you will feel food more tastier as you are eating in my hands.
Nisha feels something and she closes her mouth suddenly shocking aman..
Aman:what happened?
Nisha:vo..vo..vomit..
She goes and takes vomit shocking aman..
Aman:ohh noo..did you eat more junk foods ?
Nisha:no..i don’t know why but from morning i feel vomiting and the smell of food is also affecting me.
Aman gets shocked..
Aman:shall we go to doctor?
Nisha:yeah..even i have fainted in morning.
Aman:then we will go to doctor now without any delay..
Aman takes nisha to a doctor and tells everything..
Doctor:are you both newly married?
Nisha:yes.. doctor
Doctor smiles..
Doctor: that’s why you couldn’t identify it..
Aman gets confused..
Aman:what do you mean doctor?
Doctor:wait..I’ll confirm it and inform you guys.
Doctor takes nisha for test and he smiles after taking the test..
Doctor:yes..iam right.
Nisha:what doctor?am i having any disease?
Doctor:no..no..you both are going to become parents soon.Mr.aman..your wife is pregnant.
Both gets suprised and..
Aman happily: really?
Doctor:yes..mr.aman.
Aman takes nisha to house and he lifts her in happiness and swirls her..
Aman:woww..we are going to become parents nisha..
Nisha feels dizzy and screams..
Nisha: please let me down aman..i feel dizzy. You should be careful from now as iam pregnant.
Aman drops her down and..
Aman:iam very excited nisha..iam going to become a father. Wow.. it’s really a different feeling.
Nisha:even iam feeling happy..iam going to become a mother.
Aman holds her hand and takes her..
Nisha:where are you taking aman?
Aman:to our lonely place..
Aman brings nisha to their garden and makes her sit and hugs her from behind and..
Aman:we will discuss about our baby name..
Nisha makes a face..
Nisha:aman..you became mad. You are behaving as if iam going to deliver the baby tomorrow..
Aman: what’s wrong in this? Anyways only 8 months left right..so we will plan nowatself.
Nisha:but we don’t know what baby is this? It may be boy or a girl..so how will you choose a name?
Aman:we will select names for both boy and a girl. Whatever we get..we will name it with our selected name.
Nisha:i want a baby boy so i will select a name for boy..
Aman: what?but i want a mini nisha so i will choose for girl..i know you will deliver mini nisha only.
Nisha smiles and pinches his face..
Nisha: don’t have too much hopes mr.handsome..
Aman:iam having hope because my hopes are always true.
Nisha:Lets see whether your hope becomes true or not.
Aman:yeah..lets see. If i get girl then i will name her amisha..
Nisha:what? You decided soon..
Aman:i don’t want to search names as i want our name combination to be for our child so i kept aman+ nisha = amisha..it’s fantastic right?
Nisha smiles..
Nisha:yes..it’s nice. Then i will keep his name as nishman because nisha+aman= nishman.
Aman smiles..
Aman:it’s also nice..
They both smiles and they lean each other..
FB ENDS..
Nisha: those pregnancy time was really nice..i hoped to see my grandchildren’s playing in my lap..but i dint get that chance. But you have the chance so don’t lose hope..you already promised me about it.
Aman: that..that..
Aman recalls his promise..
FB IS SHOWN:
8 months passed..
Nisha was climbing down the stairs with her bulgy stomach..
Nisha in mind:iam feeling so tired to walk..
Suddenly she feels pain in her stomach and shouts holding her stomach..
Nisha screams: amann..aman..aman..
Hearing her scream aman comes there..
Aman:nisha..what happened?
Nisha: please take me to hospital soon..i think..i got labour pain.
Aman gets shocked and holds nisha..
Aman: please calm down..i will call taxi now.
Aman calls the taxi immediately and he takes her to hospital and admits her..
Aman in mind:krishnaji..please help my wife deliver the baby without any difficulty.
Later doctor comes out from the ward..
Doctor:you are mr.aman right?
Aman:yes.. doctor.
Doctor smiles and..
Doctor: congratulations..you delivered a baby girl..
Aman gets happy hearing it..
Aman:shall i go and see them doctor?
Doctor:yeah.. but two by one..
Aman goes inside the ward and sees mother and daughter playing and smiles..
Aman in mind:hope this happiness stays forever..Thhu thu thu..let bad sight get rid of them.
Aman goes to nisha and..
Aman: congratulations my dear wifey..
Nisha smiles seeing him..
Nisha:i should congratulate you..as you delivered baby girl.
Aman:iam really so so excited..
Nisha gives the baby to aman..
Nisha: your daughter is very much keen to meet her father so play with her sometime.
Aman gets emotional seeing his baby in his hands..
Aman:my baby..my darlu.. finally you are born. From now you will be my princess..
Baby laughs and shakes her hands while aman feels so excited and kisses his baby..
Aman:you look so cute like your mother. You will always be mini nisha for me..
Nisha:aman..let us take a selfie together to make a memory of this moment.
Aman smiles and hugs nisha and his baby and he takes a family selfie..
After 1 month..
It’s naming ceremony..
Nisha gets ready in a beautiful dress while aman comes there and gets mesmerized..
Aman:woww..you look like a fairy queen. I feel i want to marry you again..
Nisha gets shy and..
Nisha:you became a father and still you are flirting with me..
Aman:even if i become a grandfather i will flirt with you because you are my wifey..
Nisha smiles while aman pulls her close to kiss her..
Suddenly the baby cries distracting their romance..
Aman:my princess is against our love..
Nisha laughs..
Nisha: because she is jealous of you.
Aman: what? No way..she is on my team..so she would been jealous of you.
Nisha:no..it’s you.
Aman:it’s you only.
Suddenly aman’s mother suwarna comes there and gets shocked..
Suwarna:hey both of you.. what happened? You are having a child but both of you are still behaving like a child..
Nisha and aman realizes their situation and..
Aman and nisha:sorry maa..
Suwarna smiles..
Suwarna:it’s okay..bring your kid down fast as the ceremony is going to start.
Aman:sure maa..
Later aman and nisha brings their kid and they sit on the stage near a pandit..
Pandit:mr.aman what name do you want to name your child?
Aman:it’s amisha Panditji..
Panditji:ok..
Panditji names the baby and he finishes the rituals and later he asks nisha’s grandma to apply tilak to both mother and daughter and so she does the same way as per panditji’s instructions..
he makes nisha feed the baby with sweets..
Panditji:now you can take blessings from elders..
Aman and nisha:sure Panditji..
Aman nisha with baby takes blessings from elders..and aman takes photos of nisha and amisha..
Aman:both mother and daughter look cute..
He takes more photos of them and then..
Nisha:now i will take photos of you both..
Then nisha takes photos of aman and amisha..
Then finally three of them takes photo together..
Somedays passes and..
Aman: nisha.. come lets go for shopping.
Nisha:what.. now?
Aman:yes now only..get amisha too ready for shopping.
Nisha:ok..
Nisha gets ready and she makes amisha too ready and comes down and she feels a strange feeling seeing krishna idol…
Nisha in mind:what happened to me?why do i feel weird?krishnaji.. whatever it is protect us from all evil eyes.
Aman comes there and touches her shoulder and nisha turns to him..
Aman:what happened?where are you lost?
Nisha: nothing..i just felt strange that’s why.
Aman jokes: you would have felt that because i dint romance you today..
Nisha:shut up..
Aman:fine.. come lets go.
They go for shopping mall and..
Nisha:aman..you and amisha go inside and i will come praying to lord in this temple.
Aman:ok..but why are you stressed today?
Nisha: don’t know that’s why i am going pray and come..
Aman:ok..go fast and come.
Nisha:sure..
Aman takes amisha and he goes towards shop while nisha crosses the road and suddenly a truck hits her…
Nisha shouts:aaaaahhhhhhh…
Aman gets shocked hearing nisha’s voice and turns and sees nisha lying in a pool of blood and shouts..
Aman shouts:nishaaaaaaaa…
Aman immediately runs to the car and keeps amisha there and he goes to nisha and takes her in his arms and cries..
Aman: nisha..nisha.. nothing will happen to you. Iam..iam there right so be strong. I will call ambulance immediately.
He was about to call ambulance but nisha stops him and looks him tearfully..
Nisha whispers in pain:no..aman. this is my last moment so spend with me instead of wasting time in calling ambulance..
Aman gets shocked..
Aman: don’t talk rubbish..you won’t die. I will save you somehow..
Nisha:it’s true aman..the feeling which i felt today is the sign of death sent by god. So.. please..
Aman:you can’t leave me and go..i wont allow you to die.if you dare talk again then i will also die..
Nisha gets tears and she feels more suffocated and..
Nisha: promise me that you will take care of our amisha..
Aman get shocked..
Aman:i wont.. because you are not going to die.
Nisha starts to wheeze and..
Nisha: see..i know this is my last phase (wheezes)…so.. please promise me fast.
Aman cries seeing her condition..
Aman:no.. please keep hope. You can’t leave me like this..our life is incomplete still.
Nisha wheezes heavily and..
Nisha:we will complete our life in next birth..but please promise soon..my life is going.
Nisha starts wheezing repeatedly and so aman promises her..
Aman cries:i promised you as your wish.. please don’t die and please fulfill my wish please..
Nisha dies in his arms shocking aman…Aman shouts seeing her dead..
Aman:nishaaaaaaa…
He joins her forehead with his and cries..
Aman:nishaaa…no..why did you do this with me? How can I live without you??
FB ENDS..
Aman:i promised thinking that you will fulfill my wish by being alive but you died…
Nisha: everything is god’s wish aman. Now you should move on and live your life happy instead of crying like this.
Aman cries more and..
Aman:how easily you are saying to move on? Can’t you see my love..i cant even able to sleep without you.
Nisha:marry someone so that your mind won’t be distracted like this. When you lose your job..will you sit like that without taking any other job again?this life is like a job..so just give your heart an other chance.
Aman gets shocked..
Aman:do you think love is a job?when we lose a job we will suffer with wealth only but losing a love is like losing a life…
Nisha caresses his head and..
Nisha:you are human and iam a soul..i always see you from sky. My soul can be peaceful only if you be happy. If yoju move on then i can be peaceful orelse my soul wont be peaceful. So atleast for my sake you move on please..
Aman cries..
Aman:ho..how can i give your place to someone? That too my heat only loves you and it can’t love anyone else other than you..
Nisha:love doesn’t mean to capture the place for themselves…it is giving happiness to our loved ones. I died earlier but you have your life still..i can be happy only if i see your smile again. If you give your heart a second chance then my soul can rest in peace orelse it can’t… and also you will also be happy forever.
Aman cries and joins his forehead with her and..
Aman:i will move on for your sake as i want you to be happy always..
Nisha smiles emotionally..
Nisha: now i can leave peacefully…
Aman cries more..
Aman,:no.. don’t leave again and make me shatter please..
Nisha:iam just a soul aman..i have to leave because it’s god’s will. But i promise you that i will meet you again if you marry someone.
Aman:you know what..iam the unluckiest person in world. For your sake i will move on..but there is a condition.
Nisha: what?
Aman:i can give someone your position as my wife and amisha’s mother but i can’t give them your love..the love belongs only to you and it always belongs to you only.
Nisha: don’t tell like that..you should not make your wife uncomfortable.. promise me that you will marry a person only if your heart falls for her..
Aman: no..how can i..
Nisha:if you don’t..then i will leave forever..
Aman:no… please..
Nisha: iam leaving then..
Nisha was about to leave but aman promises her..
Aman:iam promising for your sake..
Nisha emotionally smiles and kisses his forehead while aman closes his eyes to feel her love for one last time…
They move apart and aman holds nisha’s hands and..
Aman: i miss you nisha..
Nisha: even me too..
Nisha smiles and disppears from there while aman gets shocked and shouts..
Aman:nishaaaa…
6 years later:
Aman is seen sitting in mandap with a bride named naira and he smiles seeing her..
Naira:i know it’s difficult for you to marry me..but i promise you that i won’t ask for your love and i will always be amisha’s good mother and your friend.
Aman holds her hands and..
Aman: what happened to you suddenly? I already proposed you then why are you telling this dialogue? My love for nisha is true and my heart will always love her but i realised my mistake too..i cant bury myself with my past. So i haved moved on…i started loving you now.
Naira gets emotional..
Naira:am..aman..even i love you.
Aman smiles and..
Aman: today iam like this because of my nisha only. I should thank her for making me realise and she will also be happy seeing me.
Naira:yeah..
Naira and aman gets married and nisha’s soul sees this from far and smiles..
Nisha in mind: finally aman got his lost happiness..
Aman sees nisha and smiles and both does thumbs up..
Nisha’s soul leaves forever and aman takes photo with naira and amisha together..
THE END..
thiz is my first OS and please tell me how was it… and also to start a next OS please tell your fav.pair…
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Actually i have filled your form..π. And i shared with my friends too..yeah don’t tell sorry because you are using for good purpose only π. And please tell about this FF..
Yeah I have read it now..
Your pen [keyboard :))] has power !
Keep going π€…you are a very emotional writer who made me emotional.
Imagery is a skill which not everyone possess and on top of that imagery of emotions is something like cherry π on the top of the cake ππ°.
Aman saying that nisha looked beautiful like a nightingale so he stated at her was romantic. Staring game was funny.dance n consummation were romantic. Aman saying that the places look beautiful because of her n nisha saying that she enjoys spending time with him more was romantic. Feeding scene was romantic.
Happy that you liked every romantic and funny scenesπππ
Necklace scene was lovely.pregnancy revelation scene was sweet.they chose the best name for the child.he saying that they will be always newly married couple for him n he will flirt with her in oldage too as he is her husband was sweet.nisha’s death was painful.the last dialogues were emotional. Aman n nisha’s soul conversation was emotional. Surprised to see aman marrying naira.never expected naira. In the last scene aman showing thumbs up to nisha’s soul was sweet.nice ending.perfect pics.i really loved mohsin jasmin jodi in your os.
Happy that you liked the necklace sceneπ. Yeah..i was thinking what name to choose then i thought combination of their names would be nice..so happy that you liked that ππ. Happy that you liked aman flirting nisha..π. Happy that you liked the emotional scenes π. Happy that you liked aman showing thumbs up to nisha in last sceneπ. Thank you so much π. And thank you very much for writing a detailed comment on this OS..