Tum Bin…Without you… Part 3
I had already added Aastha and Omkara’s soul’s scene.But for Revu,I added her favourite dialogue with a slight difference.So dedicating this chapter to Revu.
Shlok and Aastha were so busy with their work that even in late night they had to work.
Shlok:Aastha,you are tired.You have sandwich.
He opened the tiffin box and gave her the sandwich.
Aastha:No Shlok.I don’t want to eat anything.
Shlok:You will become weak.So keep quiet and have it.
Aastha took the sandwich and started eating it.
Koyi fariyaad tere dil mein dabi ho jaise
Koyi fariyaad tere dil mein dabi ho jaise
Tune aankhon se koyi baat kahi ho jaise
Jaagte jaagte ek umr kati ho jaise
Jaagte jaagte ek umr kati ho jaise
Jaan baaki baaki hai magar saas ruki ho jaise
Aastha felt sleepy while Shlok continued working.
But Aastha managed to open her eyes after some time.She saw Shlok working.
Aastha:Shlok,you are working without any rest.You also eat.
Shlok:I have no time Aastha.Too much of work to do.
Aastha:I am superior to you in this office.So I am telling you.Eat first.Then you work.
She gave him the sandwich and he also started eating it.
Aastha thought:He made me eat.But without caring about himself he is struggling hard for our company.Shlok is so selfless.
Jaanta hoon aapko sahare ki zarurat nahin
Main sirf saath dene aaya hoon
On the way back from a meeting they stopped the car seeing a tea shop.They bought tea and bread from the street tea shop.They sipped tea together smiling at each other.
Har mulaakat pe mehsoos yehi hota hai
Har mulaakat pe mehsoos yehi hota hai
Mujhse kuch teri nazar pooch rahi ho jaise
While walking in the office,Aastha’s foot got twisted and she had pain.
Aastha:Ahh..
She was finding it difficult to walk.
Shlok noticed it.
Shlok:Aastha,are you ok?
Aastha:Ya.
Shlok:From your face itself I understood that you have pain.You can’t even walk properly and you are saying that you are alright?
Aastha was silent.
Suddenly Shlok lifted her up in his arms and walked.
Raah chalte huve aksar yeh ghumaan hota hai
Raah chalte huve aksar yeh ghumaan hota hai
Woh nazar chupke mujhe dekh rahi ho jaise
Woh nazar chupke mujhe dekh rahi ho jaise
Aastha was stunned.
Aastha:Shlok,what are you doing?
Shlok placed her on the chair and twisted her foot.
Aastha:Ahhh..What is this?
Shlok:Now check whether you have sprain or not.
She moved her leg and smiled.
Aastha:My leg is completely fine now.
Shlok smiled:I knew it.
Aastha:Thank you Shlok.When you twisted my foot,I thought you ….
Shlok:You thought I hurt you purposefully?How could you even think like that about me?I can never even imagine to hurt you.
Aastha became emotional.
Ek lamhe mein simat aaya hai sadiyon ka safar
Ek lamhe mein simat aaya hai sadiyon ka safar
Zindagi tej bahut tej chali ho jaise
Zindagi tej bahut tej chali ho jaise
Shlok:Dadi said that Tej uncle’s birthday is coming up.We should plan a surprise party for him.
Aastha:But Tej uncle..
Shlok:He needs happiness and freshness in his life to be cured.By creating such happy situations we can bring him back to life.
Aastha:I think you are right Shlok.
He smiled.
Accidentally Shlok’s hand hit the table and got hurt.Aastha held his palm and started blowing air on that part.He did not look at her face as he was feeling awkward.
Is tarah pehron tujhe sochta rehta hoon main
Is tarah pehron tujhe sochta rahta hoon main
Meri har saas tere naam likhi ho jaise
Meri har saas tere naam likhi ho jaise
She put ointment there.
Shlok:Thanks.
Koyi fariyaad tere dil mein dabi ho jaise
Tune aankhon se koyi baat kahi ho jaise
He walked away.He looked at his palm and smiled.
Aastha thought:Shlok’s wound is giving pain to me also.Is this love?
Jaagte jaagte ek umr kati ho jaise
Jaan baaki baaki hai magar saas ruki ho jaise(Tum bin).
Suddenly she heard a voice:This is love Aastha.
She turned back.She was shocked to see Omkara.
Aastha:Omkara!
Omkara:I came to clear your doubt Aastha.What you feel for Shlok is love.That’s why even a small wound of his is giving you pain.
Aastha’s eyes became teary.
Omkara:Why are you crying Aastha?Are you guilty of loving Shlok?
Aastha:I am sorry Omkara.
Omkara:No need to be sorry Aastha.You did not do anything wrong by loving a nice person like Shlok.I can’t return to you.So if your life is beautiful again,it’s only because of Shlok.Why don’t you make your life more beautiful by moving on with Shlok?Trust me,that’s what makes me happy.Because I don’t like your tears.
He wiped her tears.
Omkara:The only person who can make you smile is Shlok.Keep loving him Aastha and make yourself happy always.Because of your stupid guilty feeling,don’t lose the beauty of life.A beautiful life is standing in front of you, extending its arms towards you.Accept it by holding it’s arms.Because that lovely life which is awaiting you is Shlok.
Aastha looked at Omkara emotionally. Suddenly Omkara disappeared.
Shlok’s face came into her mind.
Aastha was attaching balloons to the walls standing on a stool for Tej’s surprise birthday party.The stool got moved and Aastha was about to fall down.But surprisingly she fell in Shlok’s arms.Aastha was lost in Shlok’s eyes.
Jab se tum aaye nazar mein
Khoya khoya rehta hai dil
Dhadkanon se aaj yeh kya
Chupke chupke kehta hai dil
Pyaar humko hone laga
Khona tha dil, khone laga
Shlok made Aastha stand down.
Shlok:Are you ok Aastha?
Aastha:Yes Shlok.Thank you.
Suddenly they realized that they were holding each others hands.
They took their hands off each other shyly.
Pyaar humko hone laga
Khona tha dil, khone laga
Log jo kehne lage hain
Un baaton mein uljha hai dil
Tej was surprised to see a birthday celebration arranged for him.
The cake was fed to him by Kalyani,Kavya,Aastha and finally Shlok.Tej saw Omkara in place of Shlok and became emotional.Then he saw Shlok’s smiling face.Tej smiled.
Everyone smiled seeing it.
Kalyani:After a long time Tej smiled.It’s because of you Shlok.Thanks for making my son smile.
Shlok smiled.
Shlok:Very soon Tej uncle will hear and start talking like before.You wait and watch.
Everyone smiled.
Shlok was driving.Aastha was in the car.She remembered Kalyani telling her about considering Shlok to get married to.Aastha looked at Shlok.
Slowly she smiled.
Kya haqiqat hai apni
Kya tumhe batayenge
O, kya haqiqat hai apni
Kya tumhe batayenge
Kaun hain hum aakhir yeh
Kab talak chupayenge
While having lunch,Aastha coughed.Immediately Shlok filled the glass with the water.He kept the glass close to her lips and made her drink water.While drinking water,their eyes were fixed onto each others eyes.
Aastha’s eyes were blindfolded and she was searching for Kavya as a part of game.Kavya hid behind the wall.Shlok came that way.Aastha held him.
Aastha:I caught you.
She pecked his cheek.
Tum chupao laakh humse
Phir bhi sab kuch humne jaana
Har zubaan pe aayega kal
Hum dono ka yeh afsana
Shlok was stunned.
Aastha unveiled her eyes.She was stunned to see Shlok.
She took her hands off Shlok shyly.
Shlok smiled.
Pyaar humko hone laga
Khona tha dil, khone laga
Aastha said blushing:Sorry.
Shlok looked down and said:It’s ok.
Pyaar humko hone laga
Khona tha dil, khone laga
Aastha and Shlok were having ice stick.Suddenly his ice stick fell down.
.
Aastha:Oh no…what will you do now?
Shlok held her hand
and licked her ice stick looking at her romantically.She blushed.
Jab se tum aaye nazar mein
Khoya khoya rehta hai dil
Dhadkanon se aaj yeh kya
Chupke chupke kehta hai dil
Pyaar humko hone laga
Khona tha dil, khone laga
Pyaar humko hone laga
Khona tha dil, khone laga(Tum bin).
Suddenly Aastha realized that it was just her dream.She became shy.
Aastha prepared the presentation.Shlok came.
Shlok:Are you ready Aastha?
Aastha:Yes Shlok.I hope Mittal industries Owner Kabir Mittal likes my presentation and we get the project.
Shlok held her hand and said:
Aastha,be confident.I am sure that Mr.Kabir Mittal will be impressed by your performance.
She smiled.
Kabir Mittal came.Seeing Aastha,his eyes got stuck upto her.
Aastha:Hi..I am Aastha.
Kabir:Hi Aastha,I am…
Aastha and Kabir said together:Kabir Mittal.
They both smiled.
He extended his hand for a hand shake.They had a handshake.
Aastha did the presentation.Kabir was lost in her through out the presentation.
Kabir:Fantastic!Excellent!I am so happy to work with you.
Aastha got excited:It means…
Kabir:Yes,the deal is done.
Aastha and Shlok became very happy.
Shlok:Thank you very much.We will do our best and do wonders.
Kabir:I know that.
Kabir looked at Aastha and said:The wonder is already done.
Without knowing what he meant Aastha and Shlok smiled.
Kabir:We are going to work together.In that happiness why don’t we have a party?
Shlok:Sure.
Aastha too smiled.
Shlok and Aastha went for the party.Kabir was lost in Aastha’s beauty.
Kabir:You are looking gorgeous.I have never seen a beautiful woman like you.
Aastha smiled:Thank you.
Shlok’s face became dull.
He thought:Why do I feel bad when Kabir looks at Aastha like this?
Aastha was talking to someone at the party.Kabir was staring at her.Shlok noticed it.Seeing Shlok,Kabir went near her.
Kabir:Mr.Shlok Agnihotri…are you married?
Shlok:No.
Kabir:Are you and Aastha in a relationship?Don’t take me wrong.Since I saw both of you together I asked this.
Shlok:No.We are just friends.
Kabir was relieved.
Kabir smiled.
Music was played.Kabir went near Aastha.
Kabir:May I dance with you?
Aastha was hesitant.
Shlok:Aastha…go dance with Kabir.
Aastha gave a pale smile and nodded her head.Kabir became very happy.
She extended her hand towards him.
He held her hand and started dancing with her.
(Hey hey hey hey hey…
Suru ru ru ru ru…
(kuchh roop usaka mehaka kuchh main bhi behaka behaka
Masti mein dil ye gaane laga suru ru ru ru ru…) – (x2)
Usape meri nazar woh mujhase bekhabar hai – (x2)
Mujhe pyar usape aane laga hay
Kuch roop usaka mehaka kuch main bhi behaka behaka
Masti mein dil ye gane laga suru ru
(Thanks to my dearest friend Reena for this edit)
Pehele na thi itani bekarar zindagi
Na jaane kyun aisa lagta hai kabhi kabhi
Tanhai raat mein woh mere baat mein
Uska ehasas mere dil mein jaagne laga
Shlok became dull.He imagined dancing with Aastha.
Pucho na haal hai kya jhoomen dil aaj mera
Kahi mera hosh kho na jaye
Kuchh roop uska mehka kuchh main bhi behaka behaka
Masti mein dil ye gaane laga suru ru ru ru…
Usaki nazar kuchh to kam aisa kar gayi
Na jaane kab mere dil mein woh utar gayi
Aab tak anjaan thaa main jana hai aaj ye
Dil ki araman use paane ko machal gaye
Dil ne use jaan liya
Maine pehchan liya koi use aaj ye bataye
Kuch roop uska mehaka kuch main bhi behaka behaka
Masti mein dil ye gane laga suru ru
Usape meri najar o mujhase bekhabar hai – (x2)
Mujhe pyar usape aane laga hay
kuch roop usaka mehaka kuch main bhi behaka behaka
Masti mein dil ye gane laga suru ru
kuch roop usaka mehaka kuch main bhi behaka behaka
Masti mein dil ye gane laga suru ru
Suru ru ru ru…(Tum bin).
At home…
Shlok was thinking of Kabir Aastha dance.He was getting disturbed.
Varad sat near him.
Varad:You only asked Aastha to dance with Kabir.Then why are you upset?
Shlok was silent.
Varad:Shlok,atleast now you tell me what’s in your heart.
Shlok replied emotionally:I think I am in love with Aastha.
Varad:Finally you admitted it.I knew that even before you understood your feelings for Aastha.Then why did’nt you dance with her instead of dancing with her? Why don’t you confess your love to her?
Shlok:How can I Varad?Before confessing my love to Aastha,I have to surely tell her that I am responsible for Omkara’s death.Then it’s sure that she will hate me.I won’t be able to bear her hatred for me.So it’s better to bury my feelings for her.Kabir is better for Aastha and we are better off as friends.Otherwise she will end up hating me.
Varad became upset.
6 Comments
Wow … it was nice . Specially I was excited for kabir’s entry . Please post doon
Thanks a lot
Omkara’s scene as a soul was really emotional. Aastha realising her love for Shlok and her imagination was really cute. Shlok’s idea for tej’s birthday party was also really nice. Kabir liking Aastha and shlok getting jealous and finally realising his feelings was awesome. Waiting for next epi!!
Thank you very much.
Thanks for adding my favourite scene here . I loved Shlok and Aastha bonding very much,the way both of them caring each other was good. Specially ice stick part was so cute to read. Om coming as soul and convince her to accept Shlok was so emotional,he tells only Shlok can bring smile at Aastha’s face was so emotional. Kabir’s entry was superb. The way he asked Shlok whether he loves her and Shlok replying no to it was so painful. Shlok and Varad conversation was so touching. Shlok feels he should tell truth about Om was so good. Overall nice episode
Thank you so much.