Can we get our lost love back? Part 5
It started raining.
Avni:It was our meeting place Neil.
Neil also came there.
Neil:We used to meet here Avni.Those beautiful memories are coming into my mind.Anyways,I will meet you soon and tell you the truth Avni.I hope you will understand me and forgive me.I hope we will reunite.
They walked in rain without knowing each other’s presence.Suddenly they bumped into each other.They looked at each other only to get shocked.
Neil and Avni became emotional.
Neil:Avni!
Avni:Neil!You…
Neil:Please Avni..please listen to what I have to say first.Then you can punish me.But please don’t marry Omkara.
Avni:Neil…
Neil:It’s true that I hurt you a lot by not coming to marry you.But I never cheated you.I swear…
Avni:No need of saying anything Neil.I know everything.I know that you never cheated me,but did a big sacrifice for your father.But I have not angry with you.As a son,you did right.DD told me everything.
Neil was stunned.
Neil:But as a lover,I wronged you.I am sorry Avni.Please forgive me.
Avni:I have already forgiven you Neil.
Neil smiled tearfully.
Neil:Thank you so much Avni.
Avni:I know that you can never marry me as you promised your dad.But I am not angry with you.
Neil:No Avni.The situation has changed now.Dad himself asked me to call you back to my life and stop your wedding.
Avni could’nt believe her ears:What?
Neil:Yes Avni.Please don’t marry Omkara Avni.Please give one more chance to our relationship.I beg of you.
Avni:Don’t be upset Neil.I have not moved on with Omkara.Our engagement was only a compromise.
Avni told everything to Neil.
Neil was relieved.Both were in tears.
Neil:I am so happy Avni.
Avni cupped his face in her hands:Me too Neil.But please don’t leave me and go this time.
Neil pecked her forehead and touched her forehead with his:No Avni.I will not leave you again.I promise.
Avni:Neil,I want to ask you something.You know Omkara through Gauri.Right?
Neil:Yes.
Avni:DD told me that you took the responsibility of your friend who is in coma.Who is that friend ?
Neil:Gauri.
Avni became very happy.
Avni:My doubt was right.Gauri is alive and is with you.But why did Tej uncle lie to Neil that Gauri lied?
Neil:Both Omkara and Gauri were admitted in the hospital.Both were in coma too.Gauri’s father passed away in that shock.Omkara recovered from coma.But doctors had no hope about Gauri.Tej Oberoi did not want Omkara to spend the rest of his life with a coma patient.So Tej Oberoi requested me to hide the fact that Gauri is alive. I was guilty seeing Omkara cry.But when he begged me,I had to keep my mouth shut.I decided to look after Gauri who was my dearest friend since childhood.
Avni:I am proud of you Neil for looking after Gauri.I will tell it to Omkara.He will be very happy.He had lost all hopes.
Neil became dull.
Neil:But…the doctor says that Gauri’s condition is very critical and she has very limited time.
Avni was shocked.
Neil:If we tell Omkara that Gauri is alive,he will have hopes again.But if something happens to Gauri,he will be broken again.He is used to living without Gauri.Should we tell the truth to Omkara and put him in despair again?
Avni:We have to tell Omkara.It should’nt be hidden from Omkara.He has the right to be with Gauri during her last days.If we hide the truth from Omkara,he will be always sad for not being with Gauri during her last phase like now.
Neil:Ok Avni.You are right.
Neil and Avni went to meet Omkara in his house.
He was surprised to see them together.
Omkara:I am so happy to see you both together.
They smiled.
Avni:Omkara,we need to tell you something very important.Gauri is alive.
Omkara could’nt believe it:What?
Avni:Yes Omkara.
Omkara became very happy.
Omkara:Where is my Gauri?
Avni and Neil told him everything.Omkara burst into tears.He rushed towards his parents Tej and Jhanvi.
Omkara:Even though you both did’nt know Gauri personally,I had told you on the phone about us.Right?Then why did you do this to me?
Tej:What are you saying Omkara?
Omkara:You both knew that Gauri was alive.Right?Then why did you lie to me?
Tej-Jhanvi became upset.
Tej:Because she was like a living dead body Omkara.
Omkara:But still she is alive.You could have told me the truth.I would have looked after my Gauri.Poor Gauri is living without me.I am going back to my Gauri.
Jhanvi:Gauri’s condition is critical Omkara.Anything can happen to her.But even if she remains alive,she won’t even recognize you.
Omkara:I know.But I have faith in my love now.My Gauri will feel my presence.
They all became emotional.
Omkara went near Gauri who was unconscious.He saw her after a long time.Her eyes became teary.His tear drops fell on her body.
Omkara held her hand and said:All are saying that you will leave me and go.Prove them wrong and come back to me Gauri.We took saath phere taking the vow to be with each other.Then why did you do this Gauri?You can’t go like that.Your Omkara is back to you Gauri.Please open your eyes.Can’t you feel my presence?
Omkara cried seeing no response from Gauri.
The doctor:Please be practical.This is not a movie for the heroine to get up from the coma all of a sudden.The patient’s condition is very critical.
Omkara:But in real life too there can be miracles.Gauri as alive itself is a miracle.My Gauri will get up from the coma for me.
Omkara was crying.
Neil and Avni went to the temple and prayed.
Avni:God,like you united me with Neil,please unite Omkara with Gauri blessing her with a long life.
Neil:Please save my best friend Gauri.Now she has a reason to live as her Omkara is with her.
One year passed by….
Jhanvi:Omkara,still you are waiting for Gauri?
Omkara:Yes.Everyone said that Gauri’s condition is so critical that she will lose her life soon.But now one year as passed.Still she is alive.So one day she will wake up from coma.Doctor has given me hopes now.Gauri’s condition has improved a lot.
Jhanvi:Hope your belief will come true.
Suddenly Tej came there.
Tej:His belief turned out to be true.The doctor had called me now.Gauri is out of coma now.
Omkara and Jhanvi were really surprised and happy.
Omkara:See..i told you that my Gauri will wake up.
Tej:True love will win.You and Gauri proved it.
Jhanvi:Your love saved Gauri.
Omkara smiled.
Omkara rushed to the hospital.
Gauri was sleeping.He sat besides her caressing her cheek.
Omkara:Gauri!
Slowly Gauri opened her eyes.
Omkara became very happy.
Gauri:Omkara!
Omkara:Yes Gauri…you are safe now.I am with you.Don’t worry.
They shared an emotional eye lock.
Neil and Avni also reached there.
Neil:Gauri…
Gauri smiled:Neil!
Neil:Are you alright?When you all are with me,I will be alright.The nurse told me about my papa.I miss him.
She cried in Omkara’s arms.He felt sad.Neil-Avni also became upset.
Omkara:Now we all are with you.Don’t strain by crying too much.
He wiped her tears.
Gauri looked at Avni:Avni?
Avni:You recognized me?
Neil smiled:Gauri can recognize you very well Avni.
Gauri:Yes.With Neil,if a girl is there,it will be only Avni.
Neil-Avni smiled.
Neil:We got married.
Gauri:I feel very happy for you both.But I am sad that I could’nt attend your wedding.
Neil:We will show you the video of our wedding.
Gauri smiled.
They played the wedding video.
The doctor got irritated:What is this?Don’t you know that the patient needs rest.She should not strain.
Neil:Sorry Doctor for being so careless.When we friends met after a long time,we lost our control.
Doctor:Hmmm…
Gauri got discharged from the hospital.
Tej-Jhanvi welcomed Gauri to Oberoi Mansion with a proper grah pravesh ritual.
Omkara cupped her face and said:Like you said,our life will not always move according to our wish.But once our life will become like how we want it to me.After our separation our life did not love according to our wish.But now it became happy like we wished for.
Gauri smiled:Yes Omkara.
They shared a romantic eye lock.
Gauri started feeling drowsy and closed her eyes.Omkara carried her in his arms and placed her on the bed.
Then he covered her with the duvet.
After a month Gauri became alright completely.In the mean time Gauri became friends with Ali and Agni too.
Gauri saw the room being decorated.She was surprised.
Gauri:Omkara..this…
Omkara pulled her closer romantically and said:We got married.But our first night is still remaining.
Gauri blushed.
They romanced forgetting everything else.
Neil and Avni walked carelessly and stamped their foot on the wet mat.They both fell down.
Neil:Oh no…
Neil tried to get up.Avni looked at him deeply.
Slowly she pressed her lips on his cheek.
He looked at her surprisingly.
Neil:My bold Avni is back.
She blushed.They embraced each other romantically.
Ali gave red roses to Agni and said:My life surrounded around my friend Avni.I did’nt have any face when I was thinking of love.But now when i hear the word ‘love’ only you come to my mind.I love you Agni.
Oday Oday Oday Oday Oday Oh
Oday Oday Oday Oday Oday Oh
Oday Oday Oday Oday Oday Oh
Un Kooda Kooda Oday Oday Oh
Kadhal Brother-u Ennaku
Nenjukulla Kirukku
Unnil Yedho Iruku
Sol Enmel Ishtamaa?
Therku Merku Kizhakku
Maari Pochu Ennaku
Kadhal Vandhu Kedakku
Love Solla Kastamaa?
Agni became very happy.
Agni:I love you too Ali.
Mr.kadhal Endru Ennai
Ooril Sonnaa Nambaadhey
Missed Call-ai Maathidaadhe
Oday Oday Oday Oday Oday Oh
Oday Oday Oday Oday Oday Oh
Oday Oday Oday Oday Oday Oh
Un Kooda Kooda Oday Oday Oh
Anjaa Nenjiya Naanum
Anjara Maasam Following
Kenjaa Kenjala Podaa
Nenjam Irangi Love Going
They embraced each other romantically.
Pakka Pakkiyudan Thaan
Paarvaigal Mattum Borrowing
Sokka Sodhanai Theerkka
Appappa Ippa Outgoing
Aithaanaa? Saithaaanaa ?
Nee Yaaru Sweetaa? Aana Kaataan?
Oday Oday Oday Oday Oday Oh
Oday Oday Oday Oday Oday Oh
Oday Oday Oday Oday Oday Oh
Oday Oday Oday Oday Oday Oh
Ali and Agni got married in register office as it was an inter-caste marriage.Avni,Neil,Omkara and Gauri were the main witnesses apart from their family members.
En Kanmaney.. En Ponmaney
Raasaave.. Raasaathi
Raasaathi..
Neengaa Niyabagam Vandhaa
Neurons Ulle Vilayaadum
Thoongaa Kannukul Vandha
Peenga Kannam Nizhalaadum
Ali embraced Agni from behind:Hello Mrs.Ali…
Agni blushed:Hello my dear husband.
Song-ah Ullukul Ketkum
Sangu-la Love-u Paalootum
Long-ah Natpugal Pogum
Lungs-la Loud-ah Moochaagum
Thittaadha Theekaadha
Thirunthaatha Jenmam Thaane Naamum
Kadhal Brother-u Ennaku
Nenjukulla Kirukku
Unnil Yedho Iruku
Sol Enmel Ishtamaa?
They went to their dream world imagining red hearts all over them.
Therku Merku Kizhakku
Maari Pochu Ennaku
Kadhal Vandhu Kedakku
Love Solla Kastamaa?
Mr.kadhal Endru Ennai
Ooril Sonnaa Nambaadhey
Missed Call-ai Maathidaadhe
Oday Oday Oday Oday Oday Oh
Oday Oday Oday Oday Oday Oh
Oday Oday Oday Oday Oday Oh
Un Kooda Kooda Oday Oday Oh(RajaRani)
Seeing their romance Neil-Avni and Omkara-Gauri smiled.
After some years…
Omkara-Gauri pampered their little baby girl Pari and enjoyed.
Suddenly Pari passed urine on Omkara’s shirt.
Omkara:Oh no..I don’t know why Pari always pees when I show her love.
Gauri:Maybe she thinks that that’s the way to express love to her father.
Omkara-Gauri laughed.
The end.
Thank u very much friends 4 supporting this FS.Plz write ur favourite scenes,favourite jodi,favourite character n y u liked that character the most.
6 Comments
FInally, the journey is over…kinda feel sad about it but I’m really happy with the ending..Avneil reuniting was so emotional. neil telling avni that his dad had agreed to their marriage was so good..avni and neil telling omkara the truth was awesome..finally om got to be with his gauri. om’s words to gauri when she was in coma was so emotional..The doc saying thats its not a movie was sad and funny at the same time…Gauri waking up from coma and the friends reunion was so cute!!! Gauri recognising Avni, neil showing their wedding video were all so cute. and the doc telling them to leave was so funny..avneil and rikara convo with their kids was so cute!! agni and ali confession and romance was really cute!! Loved the story..
Thank you very much.can you plz answer the questions given below the chapter?
Both avneil and rikara
Ali and agni is also good👍
But…………..
Avneil 😍 rikara😍
My favourite pair was Avneil although rikara has always been my fav couple..in this ff i think avneil’s love was more lovely while rikara as revu said, was more emotional. My favourite character in this ff was avni. I really liked her character and how she wanted to help om when she came to know about his past, my fav scene was the reunion of all four characters inside the hospital when gauri woke up.
Beautiful ending , I liked this episoded very much,the way Avneil reuniting was so much deeper and emotional. I loved Avni a lot when she said you didn’t cheated me Neil, you sacrificed love for your dad. That was one of the best dialogue of this episode. My favourite scene was Avneil telling Om about the truth of Gauri and Om asking about that to Tejvi then Tej telling Gauri is like a living dead body, but Omkara says he has belief in his love and he will take care off Gauri.This scene was the major highlight of the whole episode. My favourite pairin this ss was Avneil though I am a rikara fan I liked Avneil bit more as their love was so much passionate wherease Rikara was emotional. Agni and Vayu uniting was so cute and Avneil, Rikara seeing them romantic was beautiful. My favourite character was Omkara as he was a big pillar to Avni in friendship and he also understood her dad too. He show much belief to her and that’s why I liked him very much.Gauri getting recovery and Rikara romance was so much lovely, Both Avneil and Rikara with their kids were so much cute and lovely to read, especially thanks for adding Pari , I missed those days of IB and you bought back it for me. Lovely story.
Thank you very much for the detailed review.