hi friends!!. Iam shiza and iam back after long time. Sorry for disappearing in between as my phone got repair. This is my other new FF so kindly support me and the story was written by my friend. I will continue my other FFS from next Wednesday..☺️.
CHARACTER SKETCH:
1. Suhasini Goenka (Dadi):
Mother of Manish and Akhilesh. Mother in law of suwarna and Surekha. Grandmother of kartik ,Keerthi, pakhi ,luv and Kush.
2. Manish and suwarna Goenka:
parents of kartik and Keerthi. Manish is son of Suhasini dadi.
3. Akhilesh and surekha Goenka:
Akhilesh is son of Suhasini Dadi. Parents of pakhi , luv and Kush.
4. Kartik goenka:
son of Manish and suwarna. A famous and successful actor.
5. Keerthi Goenka:
Daughter of Manish and suwarna. Younger sister of kartik..
6. Pakhi Goenka:
Daughter of Akhilesh and Surekha. Elder sister of twin brothers luv and Kush.
7. Luv and Kush Goenka:
son of Akhilesh and Surekha. Younger brother of Pakhi..
8. Young kartik Goenka:
younger kartik. Will be shown in some flashback scenes of childhood..
9. Akshara and Naitik Singhania:
parents of Naira and naksh. Naitik is son of Kaveri Singhania..
10. Naksh Singhania:
son of Akshara and Naitik. Elder brother of naira..
11. Naira Singhania:
Daughter of Akshara and Naitik Singhania. Younger sister of naksh. A Model in London..
12. Young naira Singhania:
child naira. Will be shown in flashback of naira’s childhood..
13.inspector Agastya Raichand:
son of Jhanvi and Tej Raichand. Inspector in udaipur.. his father is dead. Elder brother of Mishti. Close friend of naksh Singhania..
14. Mishti Raichand:
Daughter of Jhanvi and Tej. Younger sister of Agastya. Short in height..
15. Jhanvi Raichand:
mother of Agastya and Mishti. Widow of Tej..
16. Suman and krish :
college friends. Suman has crush on actor kartik Goenka. Krish has crush on Suman.
Episode 1:
A funeral is going on in a house and everyone of the family members are crying around it..
Dadi cries:what wrong did i do? Why did god snatched my husband from me?..
Suwarna and Surekha comes and holds her..
Suwarna:maaji.. please sit for a while. You are keeping on standing for long so please sit..
Dadi:how can i suwarna when my husband is lying as dead in front of my eyes? You are just bahu so you don’t understand what am i going through…
Suwarna gets sad while a little boy named kartik looks the situation and gets angry..
Kartik in mind:my family is crying because of you only naira. I hate you so much..you killed my grandpa and made me and my family shattered.
Suddenly naira’s family comes there shocking goenka’s and everyone accuses naira’s family..
Dadi: don’t enter our house mr and mrs.singhanias..
Akshara naitik and naira were shocked and naira was crying..
Akshara: dadiji..we are close with your family for years then why are you telling like this?
Dadi: don’t act innocent Akshara. I think your daughter would have told what happened right?
Akshara:yeah..she told. But what’s her mistake? She dint do purposely..she rided her cycle in front of premji’s car because she lost balance as someone hit her with stone. Then what is her mistake?
Goenka’s gets shocked except dadi…
Kartik in mind:that..that means i misunderstood naira.
FB IS SHOWN:
Young kartik and naira were close friends and they were riding cycle and..
Kartik:it’s very nice to ride cycle na?
Naira:yes..mendak.
Kartik:you.. can’t you stop calling me as mendak?
Naira: no..more than kartik i love to call you as mendak. Even if you become like our fathers i will call you only as mendak because you are always like bak..bak..bak..
Naira laughs while kartik stares her and he too laughs..
Kartik:you..wait and watch i will also keep a Nick name for you so that i will also call you like that for whole life.
Naira:kep..keep..i don’t care. Now come lets go for cycle race as usual..
Kartik:ok..
Kartik and naira was riding cycle race and naira was going fast than kartik..
and suddenly kartik saw something and shouted..
Kartik:oii..naira see there is a car coming in front. So slow down and come aside..
Naira hears him and gets scared and she slows down..
A group of boys were passing by and they saw naira riding cycle and they got some idiot idea..
Reyan:hey kareem..it’s fun to make others fall..why don’t we make that girl fall from her cycle?
Kareem:you are right. Let us throw stones at her so that she will fall down..
They throwed stones on naira and one of the stone hitted naira’s leg and naira lost her balance and she was riding cycle in unbalanced way in the middle of the road and a car which was coming in front tries to turn and suddenly it hits a big tree and gets accident…
Naira gets shocked and she jumps from cycle and kartik reaches there and he too gets shocked and he scolds naira..
Kartik:i already told you to come aside then why dint you listen me? See.. because of you someone met with accident.
Naira:no.. actually..
Kartik:now don’t justify your act. First come lets check that person and inform nearby persons..
Kartik and naira goes to the car and opens it and kartik gets shocked seeing his grandfather in pool of blood..
Kartik:dada…
He tries to wake him up but to his shock his dada falls dead on kartik’s lap…
Kartik shouts:dadaaaaaa!!!!
Naira gets scared while kartik shouts naira very badly..
Kartik:you dint listen to me and killed my dadaa..if you listened to me then my dada would have not died..you killed my dada. You are very bad..i don’t want to see you..
Naira: please..listen..
Kartik:i don’t want to talk to you..you are very bad. I will inform my family too..
Kartik cries and runs away and naira gets shattered.
FB ENDS..
Kartik in mind:that means someone have hit her..ohh noo.
Suwarna: ohh..godd..
Dadai: suwarna.. don’t fall for their lie. This stupid girl naira would have lied to escape from blame but this is the truth. This girl naira killed my husband.. kartik won’t lie. He already told her to come aside but she dint listen..this is the truth.
Naitik cries..
Naitik:dadiji.. please..stop blaming my innocent child. She is just a child then why will she kill?
Dadi:then what’s proof that someone hit her?
Akshara: what’s this dadiji? How can we get those stranger boys to prove you? don’t you have trust on us?
Dadi:kartik himself saw the truth then why should i believe you all?
Kartik gets worried..
Kartik in mind:it’s my fault. I should have let naira spoke…i dint allow her to tell what really happened. Now how will i convince my dadi?
Kartik:dadi..
Dadi:kartik.. please be silent. You may fall into their lie due to your friendship..but i won’t believe because always first talk is the truth. So don’t let them brainwash you with fake lie..
Naitik:manishji.. atleast you believe us right?
Manish turns his face away..
Manish:iam sorry. It’s your daughter’s fault only.. though someone hit her but she was the one who called my son for cycle racing and i saw that.so iam really upset with her…
Naitik:fine..thank you for your all blames. Hereafter we won’t come here and we won’t send naira too here as you all blame this little girl.
Dadi:that’s great decision. We also don’t want your daughter or your family members here anymore.
Akshara and suwarna gets worried and looks each other while kartik and naira too gets shocked and they stare each other..
Akshara:naitikji..
Suwarna:maaji..
Dadi and naitik: please..this is the final decision. No one will go against me in this matter.
They both feel helpless and naitik takes naira away and naira cries and sees kartik angrily and goes while kartik feels her anger and he runs to his room and cries..
Kartik:what did i do? Because of my silly mistake..the friendship broke and that both families too shattered. From now i cant even meet naira and naira is also angry on me..
Suddenly suwarna comes there and hugs kartik..
Suwarna: don’t cry beta.
Kartik:maa.. everything is over. I dint allow naira to tell what happened and i blamed her wrongly and now because of that mistake everything is over. I really want naira..she is my buddy. And even she is angry on me..
Suwarna caresses his face and..
Suwarna: don’t worry beta.. God is there to make everything fine. One day you and naira will patch up and krishnaji will also reunite singhania’s and goenka’s one day.
Kartik’s sister Keerthi and his cousin pakhi comes there and consoles crying kartik..
12 years later..
Kartik has become a successful and famous actor while naira have gone for foreign for her higher studies and modelling..
After shooting kartik starts coming out from the area while his fans starts to click his picture and one of his fan named Suman..
Suman:i wish kartik sir sees my love for him and he too starts loving me..
Krish:just dream which you can get. He is a big actor but you are just a student so stop dreaming him..
Suman:you are jealous..that’s why you can’t digest this fact. I know kartik sir is a big actor but he is also human like us so it’s possible..
Krish gets angry..
Krish:fine..do whatever you want. I won’t disturb you anymore..
Krish goes away angrily while Suman smirks..
Suman in mind:krishnaji have to give some sense to krish.!.
Suddenly she sees kartik passing by near her and she runs behind him..
Suman in mind:i should collect an autograph from him anymore..
Suddenly she falls down and kartik goes away and krish comes there and laughs at her..
Krish:even god doesn’t want your jodi with kartik it seems..
Suman glares krish angrily and she throws stones on him..
Suman: shut up and go away without irritating me. I will surely make him my boyfriend..wait and watch. And that day i will take revenge on you..
Krish:ohh..i see. Fine..lets see. Bye..see you.
He laughs and goes while Suman gets up and she too goes angrily..
Suman in mind:i will follow kartik sir everywhere and will meet him one day and make him fall in love with me..then i will see this krish.
Suman goes away while kartik reaches his home and he takes blessings from dadi and suwarna..
Suwarna:i hope your day went well..
Kartik:yeah..it was nice.
Dadi:let this movie also gets successful like every movie of yours.
Kartik hugs dadi and..
Kartik:it will surely get dadi as iam the lead..
Everyone smiles and Keerthi comes and hugs him..
Keerthi:i know my bhai is always superstar..
Kartik:yes.. like how my sister is supermoon..
Keerthi smiles and..
Keerthi: bhai..i am going for an interview today so please pray that i should get selected.
Kartik:sure..iam confident that you will get selected because of your skills and talents.
Keerthi smiles..
Keerthi:i hope so..
Then kartik goes to his room and he takes a note and writes something..
IN LONDON:
A girl named Gayatri aka Gayu is watching the sceneries of the beautiful cold city..
And suddenly a guy named Rohan comes behind her without her knowledge and he goes near her ears and shouts..
Rohan:baaahhhhhhhh!!!!
Gayu gets scared and she shakes and suddenly she slips but Rohan helds her and both meets with an eyelock and they laugh..
Gayu:so it was you? I really got scared..
Rohan:you always get scared because you are a scary meow..
Gayu moves away from Rohan and..
Gayu:hey mr.monkey..please shut up ok? Iam not like as you think still…now i have became very strong without any fear.
Rohan:ohh… then thank god..god made me free from one of the duty.
Gayu stares Rohan..
Gayu:stupid..what do you mean?
Rohan:i mean..i shall not roam behind you for 24 hrs to protect you as you became strong.
Gayu starts beating Rohan..
Gayu:you rascal..so you was considering me as a burden instead of your GF?
Rohan:hey..stop it. I dint mean that..i just told simply.
They both chase and play for sometime and later they get tired and..
Rohan:bhagwanji..i really can’t run anymore. Iam totally tired..
Gayu:even me too..
Rohan:then we will pass the time by taking selfies till naira comes.
Gayu:ok..
They both take selfies there..
Suddenly they notice naira coming in a stylish tycoon wearing gasses and they smile..
Gayu:our supermodel naira came..
Rohan:yeah..we shall do her photoshoot today.
Gayu:hmm..you are right. She can make your magazine famous if you publish her as a model.
Rohan: right.
Suddenly a guy comes near naira shocking naira and she removes her glass in half way and..
Naira:yeah..tell me.
Man:mam..you are a great model of London. I always come to the show when you pose as a model as i started to love you. I want to propose to you mam…i love you mam. Will you accept me as your life partner?
Naira gets shocked and angry and..
Naira:i don’t know why the people like you always trouble me. Iam a model..you told that you strted to love me as a model but that’s not love. It’s just an attraction as a fan..but you guys don’t understand that. Love is something which blossoms from heart not by just seeing. So please understand it…
Man:mam…
Naira:i don’t want to talk anymore. I think i made you understand nicely..so better leave.
Man leaves sadly while naira comes to gayu and Rohan..
Naira:hi guys..what’s up?
Gayu:naira..i want to ask you one thing. You have rejected 150 th person now and when will you accept someone?
Naira:gayu..like how you fell for rohan, i should also fall for someone then only i can accept.
Rohan: don’t you have any slight feelings also for anyone?
Naira remembers kartik and gets sad..
Naira in mind:i only miss kartik. I always feel incomplete without him..is this called love?even if it is love..i am angry on him as he dint listen to me that day.
Naira:no..guys please leave this topic.
Rohan:ok..ok.. don’t get angry. We thought to take photoshoot of yours and gayu..are you ready?
Naira gets excited hearing this..
Naira:photoshoot.. wow. Iam ready..
Gayu gets confused..
Gayu:why did you include my name also suddenly?
Rohan:to create your photoshoot also for our personal.
Gayu smiles..
Gayu:fine..
First naira gives pose wearing glasses and Rohan captures it..
Rohan:perfect!
Naira:now i will hold flowers and you take that also..
Rohan:hmm..
Naira holds flowers and gives a pose and Rohan takes the picture of it..
Rohan:it’s really mesmerizing..my magazine is going to get famous for sure.
Naira smiles and gives more poses and Rohan captures everything and..
Rohan: finally i got a model for my magazine. It is going to get famous for sure..
Naira:yeah..
Rohan: ok..I’ll click some gayu’s pictures too now..
Naira:ok..
Gayu gives poses and Rohan clicks her pictures..
Rohan:wow..my GF is really a beauty queen..
Gayu:yes..iam always a beauty queen only.
Naira:guys..why don’t we dance now?
Rohan:dance? Why suddenly?
Naira: actually..i feel like dancing now as i can’t dance with you two for some month..
Gayu:what?why?
Naira:iam..iam going to India tomorrow.
Rohan and gayu gets shocked..
Gayu:why dint you inform us before?
Naira:iam sorry..my parents booked my ticket as a suprise so i myself came to know it only today..that’s why.
Rohan: ohh..then we will party nicely today.
Gayu:yeah..
Rohan:you both dance together and i will make a video and upload it in you tube and will get subscriptions..
Naira:ok..it’s nice idea.
Gayu and naira dance while Rohan takes video of them…
Azgar Aur Baaz Ki
Sagar Jhanjhaar Ki
Jalti Angaar Se
Saahil Majdhaar Ki
Baagi Jallad Ki
Dosti..(Dosti)
Kis Aor Chali Yeh Aandhi
Aaye Kaisi Kraanti
Sangram Yaa Sangam Ki Lehre Aayegi
Ta Ra Dum Ta Ra Dum
Ta Ra Dum Dum..
Chattan Aur Toofan Ki Dosti
Gaaz Aur Garzan Ki Dosti
Poorab Aur Pakshim Milte Huye
Hairat Yeh Dosti
Ta Ra Dum Ta Ra Dum
Ta Ra Dum Dum..
Ek Raaz Chhup Gaya Andar
Mauji Aur Gehra Samandar
Badhta Hai Harpal Tumhare Bich Yeh Faasla
Jung Yaa Sang Ka Ho Bal
Chhaye Hai Kaun Se Baadal
Chalti Hai Pal Pal Zehreeli Aisi Hawa
Raah Alag Nahin Par Hai Yeh Darr
Lakshya Alag Inke
Toota Jo Darpan Chhootha Bandhan
Kaun Bache Kis Se
Kis Aor Chali Yeh Aandhi
Aaye Kaisi Kraanti
Sangram Yaa Sangam Ki Lehre Aayegi
Ta Ra Dum Ta Ra Dum
Ta Ra Dum Dum..
Chattan Aur Toofan Ki Dosti
Gaaz Aur Garzan Ki Dosti
Poorab Aur Pakshim Milte Huye
Hairat Yeh Dosti
Ta Ra Dum Ta Ra Dum
Ta Ra Dum Dum..
Chattan Aur Toofan Ki Dosti
Gaaz Aur Garzan Ki Dosti
Poorab Aur Pakshim Milte Huye
Hairat Yeh Dosti..
Gayu:wow..we had much fun today.
Naira:yeah..i really enjoyed it. I will miss you both in india..
Rohan: don’t worry..we will come to India if you catch boyfriend there to party with you..orelse we will wait for your return if you don’t find your love.
Naira again remebers kartik..
Naira in mind:why am i always remembering kartik when we talk about love? Why do i miss him so much though iam angry?
Gayu:hey..what are you thinking?
Naira:no.. nothing. Ok..bye..let’s meet tomorrow at airport.
Rohan and gayu:ok..bye..lets take selfie before we go..
Naira and gayu:ok..
They take selfie..
Then they part ways..
PRECAP: kartik hits naira in airport.. pakhi fears for something.
4 Comments
loved it,
can u pls upload the next part of twin trouble……?
Thank you so much 😊. Yeah..i will upload it on Wednesday
Surprised to see who you have chosen as the younger kartik.kaira childhood scene was cute.shocked about the accident n kartik’s grandfather dying.sad that kartik n dasi blamed naira.but glad that kartik realized his mistake n felt guilty.those boys should be punished.suman should listen to krish n stop going after kartik.otherwise she will be disappointed. Rohan gaya moment was romantic.their conversation was hilarious. Gaya naira dance was nice.naira is missing kartik.hope her anger for him will go.perfect pics.
Amazing characters, but grand father’s death was shocking, Suman Krish scene was good, thanks for adding Suman. Ek duje ke vaaste was one of my favourite serial