Love over lies Part 8
Pratha felt like fainting.Rishab held her hand tight before she fainted.
Rishab was really worried for Pratha.
Rishab:Pratha…what happened?
Suddenly Urvashi,Dadi and Lalit started laughing.
Urvashi:It’s the effect of poison.The drink I gave her was poisonous.
Seema became upset.
Seema:Urvashi!
Dadi said sarcastically:Pratha…sorry beta.You will die in a few minutes.
Rishab and Pratha were shocked.
Suddenly what happened shocked all of them.
Mahek who reached there had a naagmani in her hand.
Pratha was feeling very weak.
The naagmani from Mahek’s hand flew towards Pratha and it entered her forehead.
During that time Pratha was folding her hands and thanking God:Jay Bholenath!Thank you Shivji!
Pratha became normal.Mahek smiled.
Rishab:Pratha,are you alright?
Pratha:Yes Rishabji,I am alright.After all the Naagmani is in me.
Rishab smiled.
All were confused.
Pratha:The naagmani which I gave you was fake.Because I am not a fool to give you the real naagmani.
All were shocked.
Dadi:What?The naagmani I have is fake?
Pratha:Yes Dadi.
Urvashi got very angry.
Urvashi:Why did you fool us Pratha?
Pratha:If you can fool us,why can’t I fool all of you?
They were stunned.
Flash back…
Seema went near Lalit.
Seema:Lalit,I beg of you to leave Pratha simply.I will make Rishab and Pratha understand.They won’t take revenge.Let them go far away and live peacefully.
Suddenly Lalit lost his temper and caught Seema by her neck.
Lalit:How many times should I tell you not to open your mouth and express your wishes?When I married a widow like you,I fulfilled your wish and accepted your twin boys as mine.That’s enough.I had told you not to expect anything more.
Seema:You accepted Rishab and Virat only because you wanted to show off the society that you can also have children.If you had loved them,you would not have trapped Virat in fake case and spoiled his life when he found out the dark secrets of this family.
Lalit slapped Seema.
Lalit:How dare you ridicule me?
Seema:I am sorry.But like you wished I hid the dark secrets of this family from the whole world.In return please don’t kill Pratha after she brings the naagmani.
Lalit:You hid the secrets not because of love and loyalty,but because you were scared of me.But I guess now you are not scared of me.You need to be given a doze of medicine so that you will never dare to talk tome like this.
Seema got scared:Noooooooooo
Suddenly Lalit pricked her arm with the glass piece.She moaned in pain.
Lalit walked out of the room.
Rishab came in.He was shocked to see Seema bleeding.
Rishab:Mom!
He took the first aid box and bandaged her wound.
Rishab:Mom,tell me how did this happen?
Seema replied painfully:Till now I hid everything from you.But now… I can’t do that anymore as it’s related to one’s life now.Whatever Virat said about this family was true beta.They are cruel people.Actually they are into black magic.Urvashi is actually an evil witch.Virat was trapped by Lalitji.
Rishab was shocked.
Rishab:Then why did you keep quiet mom?
Seema:Because Lalitji threatened that he will destroy you too like he destroyed Virat.I did’nt want to lose you too like I lost Virat.I can bear the pain he gives me.But I can’t see my kids in pain.
Rishab was shocked.
Rishab:That means dad only hurt you now?
Seema nodded tearfully.
Rishab:I would not have spared him if he was not a heart patient.
Seema:Lalitji and your dadi have no disease.They are pretending to be sick to get naagmani through naagmani.If they get naagmani from Pratha,they will kill her like dadi and dadaji killed her grand parents when they fought against their evil deeds.
Rishab was shocked to the core.
Seema:Rishab…these greedy evil people should not get naagmani.
Rishab tried hard to control his anger.
After Pratha got the naagmani,Rishab rushed towards her.Pratha was surprised to see him.
Pratha:Rishabji,you came here.I was planning to surprise you by my arrival.I got the naagmani.Now we will protect our family.
Rishab:No Pratha.You should not hand over the naagmani to my family.
Pratha was stunned.
Pratha:What are you saying Rishabji?But why?Are you in your senses?
Rishab told her the truth.
Pratha and Mahek were shocked.
Mahek’s eyes became wet.
Mahek:Oh no…Naagmani was going to reach the wrong hands.If the naagmani had reached the evil people I would not have been able to forgive myself.
Shivji has sent you to us Rishab.You stopped the naagmani from reaching the evil people.
Pratha:They played with us.Now we will play with them.
Rishab:Yes Pratha.
Flash back…
Pratha stared at Urvashi.
Pratha:You fake Guru Mata!I knew that you were planning to make me bring the naagmani,so that you can have it for yourself by snatching it from the cruel Gujral family.
Dadi,Lalit and Seema stared at Urvashi in disbelief.
Urvashi:Yes.I want Naagmani.Otherwise why should I help this family?
Lalit and Dadi got angry.
Dadi:Youuuuu!
Urvashi:Old woman,keep quiet.No need of roaring.You did not get the naagmani.So you are not going to be an eternal soul.You will die soon out of old age.
Dadi got angry:Hey Urvashi!
Pratha:Don’t scream dadi.Urvashi aunty is right.You are very old.Its time for you to die.But actually you don’t need to wait for a natural death.Before that itself,I will give you a brutal death.
Dadi was shocked.
Dadi:Pratha!Why are you killing me?
Mahek showed a picture of Shivanya.
Mahek:Do you remember her dadi?
Seema was shocked to see Shivanya’s photograph.
Seema:This is..this is…Pratha’s Nani Shivanya.She was brutally killed by……
Seema could not complete her sentence.
Mahek:You and your husband killed this lovely naagin and her husband when they tried to save people from your evil clutches.You and your husband considered those people as scapegoats and killed them brutally to satisfy your evil witches.
Pratha:Unfortunately your husband had a natural death.But you are alive only to die in my hands dadi.I am their grand daughter and I will take revenge on you for killing them.My Naniji and Nanaji will get peace of mind if I do that.
Dadi got scared:Don’t do that Pratha.
She begged Rishab.
Dadi:Rishab,why are you silent?Your wife is going to kill your dadi.
Rishab:After doing all kinds of evil deeds you can’t escape Dadi.you did not save my mother and brother from my so called dad.Then why should I save you?
Dadi cried:Lalit…atleast you save me.
Lalit:What can an ordinary human being like me do to save you from a powerful Naagin who has the naagmani inside her?
Dadi was crying.She tried to run away.But Pratha caught her and
hit her badly.Pratha threw her down and bit her.Dadi closed her eyes.
Pratha looked at Lalit angrily.
Lalit:Rishab beta,please tell her not to kill me.
Rishab:Ok.I will tell her not to kill you.
Lalit was relieved while Pratha,Mahek and Seema were shocked.
Rishab:ButI have a demand.
Lalit:I will do anything beta.
Rishab:You should reveal to the world that Virat was innocent and you only trapped him in the drug case.
Pratha and Seema smiled.
Lalit became dull.
Rishab:If you don’t do that,I will not tell Pratha to leave you.
Lalit:I will do that.
Lalit confessed his crimes while Rishab recorded it and uploaded it in the social networking sites.He sent them to the police stations too.
Lalit:Now tell Pratha not to kill me.
Rishab:You hurt my mom inch by inch and she suffered silently.You really abused my brother also.You don’t deserve any mercy Mr.Lalit Gujral.
Lalit was shocked.
Rishab smirked:You fooled me all these years.So I also fooled you.
Lalit was shivering.
He got scared to see Pratha’s scary Naagin look.
Pratha bit him many times till he died.
Then they realized that Urvashi was not seen there.They looked around and saw Urvashi doing black magic in the presence of lit lamps.
Urvashi:I am more powerful than you think Pratha.You cannot touch me.
Pratha:You are an evil.Gods blessing is with me.Always good wins over evil.So I am more powerful and your black magic will not help you today.
Urvashi:Let’s see who is more powerful.God or devil?
Pratha:Always God.
They started fighting with each other and after a long fight Urvashi fell down weak.
Pratha:I told you that evil can never win.Only God’s people can win.You tried to kill me with poison.Now I will transfer my poison to your body and kill you.
Pratha injected poison in her body through her bites and killed her.
Rishab looked at Seema and said:We won!
Seema smiled emotionally and hugged Rishab-Pratha.
Rishab brought Virat home.
Seema became emotional seeing Virat.She kissed his forehead.
Seema:Sorry Virat…I could’nt do anything when injustice was done to you.I am a bad mother.
Virat:Mom!
Virat hugged her and cried.Thapki,Pratha and Rishab smiled seeing it.
Pratha went near Thapki and chanted some mantras.A ray of light flowed from Pratha’s forehead(From the naagmani inside her forehead)to Thapki’s face.
Thapki:Di,what’s happening?I can’t understand anything.
Suddenly Thapki and Virat realized that Thapki did not stammer.
Virat:Thapki,you can speak normally now.
Thapki became very happy.
Thapki:Yes Virat…I can..
Thapki hugged Pratha and said:Thank you di.
Pratha smiled.
Thapki told Virat happily:Now I can talk to you with a flow without any breaks in between.
Virat whispered to Thapki:Then say the 3 magical words again Thapki.
Thapki blushed.
Slowly Virat held her hand.They looked at each other romantically.
Rishab,Pratha and Seema smiled seeing it.
Seema made a fake cough breaking their eye lock.
Seema:You both want to settle down like your siblings?
Virat-Thapki became shy.
Virat:Mom,what are you saying?
Seema:Seeing how you both were looking at each other,I understood what you both want.
Virat-Thapki blushed.
Seema:I am happy that my son found 2 lovely sisters as their life partners.
They smiled happily.
Virat’s innocence got proved and he started living as Virat himself by shedding the identity of Rishab.
Rishab-Pratha in their room…
Rishab was not able to face Pratha.
Pratha:What is this Rishabji?Our problems are over.But still you areย not happy.
Rishab:The guilt is killing me Pratha.I don’t deserve you.
Pratha was stunned.
Pratha:Why are you talking like this Rishabji?
Rishab:Pratha…I actually lied to you that I loved you so that I can use you to protect my family.I married you only for that.
Pratha became upset.
Pratha:So you don’t love me at all?
Rishab cupped her face in his hands and said:No Pratha.Now I love you a lot.After marriage,I realized how important you were to me.I realized that I love you and I can’t live without you.
Tujhko bana doon main apna khuda
Aur sajde tere kar sakun
Maangu duaa saath hone ki tere
Kaandhe pe sar rakh sakun
Pratha:I know that Rishabji.Otherwise you would not have tried to save me from your step dad and dadi by not letting me give them the naagmani.
Rishab looked at her emotionally.
Rishab:I am sorry for cheating you before.
Pratha:Now I am not hurt by that bitter truth Rishabji.Because that bitter truth has become a lie now as you love me a lot now.
Rishab pulled her closer and Pratha encircled her arms around his neck.
Rishab:I love you Pratha.
Pratha:I love you too Rishabji.
Dhaaga ik bandhu tujhko mannat bana loon
Kagaz pe dil ke teri surat bana loon
Chhute kabhi na woh aadat bana loon
Aa shiddat bana loon tujhe
They had an emotional eye lock.
Qismat bana loon meri chahat bana loon
Dil se main maangu ibadat bana loon
Chhute kabhi na woh aadat bana loon
Aa shiddat bana loon tujhe
Rishab embraced her from behind romantically.
Qismat bana loon meri chahat bana loon
Dil se main maangu ibadat bana loon
Chhute kabhi na woh aadat bana loon
Aa shiddat bana loon tujhe
They forgot themselves and drowned in each other passionately.
Kyun yeh hadein hain
Yeh kyun sarhadein hain
Itne hai kyun faasle
Manzil teri meri jab ek hai to
Kyun hain alag raaste
Ishq ki aisi kahawat bana loon
Pani pe likh doon likhawat bana loon
Goonje sada woh aahat bana loon
Aa shiddat bana loon tujhe
Dil ki main tujhko sajawat bana loon
Kuch bhi na bolun muskurahat bana loon
Barse khuda ki woh barkat bana loon
Aa shiddat bana loon tujhe
Qismat bana loon meri chahat bana loon
Dil se main maangu ibadat bana loon
Chhute kabhi na woh aadat bana loon
Aa shiddat bana loon tujhe
Yeh khara samundar mera gawah hai
Ishq hai mera ya mera gunah hai
Tujhko saza aur adalat bana loon
Aa shiddat bana loon tujhe(Shiddat).
The End
Thank u very much friends 4 supporting this SS.Since it’s the last part,plz do give a detailed comment.Plz write ur favourite scenes,favourite jodi,favourite character n y u liked that character the most.
12 Comments
Flash backโฆ
Pratha stared at Urvashi.
This is Present,not flash back.Sorry.
Wowww.. amazing ๐. The story was really superbb..Seema revealing the truth to Rishab was good. Rishab revealing his mistakes was also nice. Pratha and mahek fooling Gujral family was nice and Rishab fooling his so called dad was nice๐ถ๐.pratha killing those fraud people was good. Seema understanding virat and thapki love was nice.thapki becoming Normal was good. Pratha and Rishab romance was so sizzling..๐. Pratha’s fight and dialogues to urvashi was superbbb.. amazing ๐
My fav scene- when pratha revealing that she was fooling them..
Fav jodi-virat and thapki (though they were shown little but they were cute)
Fav character- Seema (she is the best character)
Thank you very much.why did you like Seema the most?
I really liked the end of this episode, I am not able to give a detailed comment as my husband has been not cured completely, he is discharged yesterday only. My favourite scene is Mehak’s arrival, favourite pair is Rishabh and Pratha and favourite character is Virat as he accepted Thapki despite of her stammering problem and also made Rishabh to understand the value of Pratha in his life. I will read your rest of articles later
Thank you very much.
Loved the story! the ending was sooo good! My favoourite scene was when Prath revealed that she was fooling them…i was so relieved to know that. My favourite pair….thats a hard one cause i loved the couples equally. My fav character was Virat as he was brave enough to stand against his family when he got to know their truth and he loved thapki despite knowing that she was a naagin and her stammering problem. Im really glad seema finally took the stand for her son and daughter in law, it was great! Glad to see that rishab asked for pratha’s forgiveness and they are happy now. virat-thapki was so cute!!!
Thank you so much.
As comment section on strange mental asylum part 4 was over I am commenting here only. Reyansh and Swethlana scene was interesting, glad that Reyansh stood with honesty only. Moloy painting was really striking and the attack of dogs reminded me of the movie well. Jeev plucking flowers for Nithya was nice, as Reyansh doubted I also feeling same his obsession won’t cross limits . Nithya blushes and running was cute, last scene is suspenseful.
Thank you very much for commenting here.
We are together – part 4 was nice one, Swati and Munna scenes were really the best one. Initially When Munna rejected Swati’s love Swati felt very much pain and that was written so touching . Later Swati parents arrived to Abhigya with the proposal was so beautiful. Munna confessing he loves Swati from childhood was so emotional. Loved their love scene ,all couples dance and songs were so beautiful, you added Jab koyi baat bigad jaaye which is one of my favourite evergreen song . Pics were so cute and lovely. As my husband health is still weak and he is pursuing medicines and check ups I am not able to visit TU frequently. Whenever time gets okay for me will read your articles.
Thank you very much.you read part5 of we are together when you are free.Your husband will be alright soon.Don’t worry.
It’s very nice ss but y u finished this story suddenly ๐ฅบ?
Anyways all the best for your future ๐ i love prarish โค๏ธ because I love them .. and also I love Seema ma character because she was a good person only in this storyโ๏ธ
And thank you for your efforts because you entertained us very well I support you ๐ All the best ๐โค๏ธโค๏ธbye ๐๐