Recap:sujata comes swasan house and swara thinks about Sanskar’s mystery.
Scene 1:
Next morning swara gets up the voice of knocking the door. She puts on the gown and opens the door. There’s sujata:”chori! You’re still sleeping, comes outside immediately! Today I’ve to do ritual, you’ve to cook desert to start kitchen” Swara:”mom! Sanskar is sleeping!” She looks at him who’s still sleeping. Sujata:”wake up him and comes outside, I’m waiting for you” Swara tensely nodes but recalls Sanskar last night words and doesn’t understand that how to handle this sandwich situation between mother and son. She hesitantly goes to him and slowly shakes his shoulder:”sanskar!! Wake up!” Sanskar:”what’s your problem Shanaya! Let me sleep” he changes the side and she’s curious to listen name of girl from his mouth. Suddenly sanskar sees her and wakes up slowly.:”why you wake up me? There’s time to go office” he looks the clock to check the time. Swara:”mom told me to do ritual to make desert” Sanskar stands up and looks her:”you’re my wife, not my mom! And as I told you, do whatever in my absence, but when im at home, always stay in front of my eyes” he goes to washroom, while she nodes:”oh god! Save me from this mother and son conflict” Sanskar comes out after take a bath and finds her in thought.:”what are you thinking?” He goes to dressing table to comb his hairs while swara is still in night dress. Swara:”nnnn… Nothing”
Sanskar smiles and says:”I know!, you can do ritual what mom was telling but after my leaveing from home” Swara smiles and takes courage:”please allow mom to stay here, please” Swara is also fearing in heart but she doesn’t want to ask sujata to leave the house. Sanskar puts on blazer and looks her with smile:”ok! She can stay here, till you obey me, this is reward of your hug” Swara smiles and goes for changing the dress. While Sanskar is thinking:”I know you must think that who’s Shanaya, she’s very special to me, because she was the source of our relationship and our first meeting” he reminisces something. Fb shows the view of 2 years ago where sanskar was at his office and someone knock the door. It was the voice of his secretary, Payal. Payal:”may I come in sir” Sanskar is working on laptop and itz his habit that while working he doesn’t concentrate on another things. He allows her to come in without taking his eyes off from screen and stopping his fingers. Payal comes inside and says:”sir! Today is my sister’s birthday party” her voice is flattered. Sanskar:”so? Do you want birthday gift for her” Payal with happiness:”yes off course sir! I mean sir if you come on her birthday party, it’ll be gift for her” Sanskar stops his work for a while:”you know very well im not used to make relationship with my staff! So please may you leave?” He said in cold tone. She’s about to leave with disappointment but Sanskar calls her:”one more thing, I’m your boss!
Don’t talk with me flattered tone and dont wear this seductive dresses and make a pose like this. I hate hypocritical person, so be professional if you wanna work here, now get out from here” She leaved and he started his work when his mobile got a message with special ring tone, he read message and fumed:”what the hell is this” He called on that particular number, someone attended the call:”what the hell is this Shanaya? Are you leaving for Jaypur?” Shanaya:”oh my darling? Why are you worried, this is matter of one night” Sanskar:”you know very well, I can’t walk without you and I’m not in mood to take a sleeping pills” Shanaya giggles and said:”there are lots of girls around there, specially you’re secretary who always trying to trap you, why dont you try of her?” Sanskar with proud smile:”you know very well I dont make relationship with my staff, this is against my profession, she already invited me for her sister’s birthday party, and I refused her and second ill never try for girls, girls try for Sanskar Maheshwari” his tone is witness of his proud and arrogance. Shanaya laughs with sophistication:”you’re right!
But I’ve ti leave, I don’t wanna leave this project, you know very well my career is my first and last love” Sanskar:”yeah I know! But what about me, Dr already warned me about sleeping pill that it can harm my health and you know I don’t wanna die so soon” Shanaya smirks:”don’t worry! Devil can’t die so soon” sanskar fully rejoice her taunt. :”you know I love your boldness, and you’re only in the world who can talk to me in this tone” Shanaya with bitter smile:”I had hard effort to reach this level” Sanskar in serious tone:”I know” Shanaya:”ok now I’ve to leave. You go to party of your secretary and choose a fresh piece for tonight” Sanskar:”yore such a *****(abuse), you’re talking about your own gender like this” Shanaya:”truth is bitter dear but this is truth, ok now I’ve to go ill catch you later” she disconnected the call. Shanaya was belong to middle class family and was doing job in his business partner’s company. She had lots of dreams and minimum sources to gain it. She’s also impatient to gain a luxurious life style and ready to do anything for it. So Sanskar fulfill her all desires and she fulfill his desires. This was matter of give and take, no place of emotions. But sometimes when he needs a good friend, Shanaya is always there, she is a girl with lots of desire but not bad from core.
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Scene 2: Swara wears green suit with red net dupata and make ponytail. She always made ponytail before marriage but there’s no restriction of ponytail, so she makes it. She comes downstairs and finds ap, lucky, sumi and ragini. She takes ap blessing and hugs Sumi and ragini. Sujata:”I called them to come here for your dessert making ritual” Swara:”thanks mom! Where is sanskar?” She looks here and there. Sujata:”he leaves for office, I told him to took breakfast but he was in hurry” Swara understands that he wasn’t in hurry, he just doesn’t want to take breakfast with Sujata. They take breakfast together with light conversation.
Scene 3:
Laksh told all favourite dishes of sanskar and now she’s making a complete meal of today and laksh and ragini are giving company to her while ap, sumi and sujata are helping her. After marriage she first time feels much relief and happiness. Laksh:”hey bhabhs! Tell me the love story of yours and Bhai” Ragini:”yeah swara! I also want to know, you never told me also” Swara is confused but said slowly:”actually we were meet in birthday party of my friend” She recalls the moment, when she was in birthday party of her friend: Her friend Siya is her best friend and her sister Payal is introducing her boss to everyone. Siya to her:”swara I want a song from you at my bd” Swara:”no dear! There’s crowd, I can’t” Siya:”I dont know anything, you’ve to sing” her friends force her then she agreed to sing. Swara:(she’s simple girl in this ff) aye humnava!! Mujhe apna bana lay Sukhi pari dil Ki is zameen ko bhiga dain Hun akaila Zara hath barha dain Sukhi pari dil Ki is zameen ko bhiga dain” Everyone mesmerized to listen her voice specially special one who’s create for her. Sanskar gets up from the seat and comes close to her to see the owner of this melodious voice. (kab se mai dar dar phir phir raha…. Musafir! dil ko panah dain Tu awargi ko meri, aj thahra dain) Sanskar feels that her words are the voice of his heart and requesting for this girl. After completing the songs all are clapping and starts dancing with their partners. Payal:”don’t you dance sir?” Sanskar:”off course! But as per my rules, I dont make relationship with my secretary, so do you want dance or your job?”
Payal got her “limit” from his words and steps back. He goes to swara with ful of proud and arrogant that she’ll feel herself lucky to dance wth him, but he wanted more than dance from her. Sanskar:”will you dance with me miss?” Swara is drinking soft drink lonely, because her all friends are dancing. :”no mr! I’m ok” she refused. Sanskar comes close her:”ok! If you dont wanna dance, then we can talk” he sits with her. Swara:”excuse me! Are you in yor senses? I’m not interested to talk with you, please leave from here” Sanskar feels extreme insult after her refusal:”I Think you dont know me” Swara stands up with rage:”I know you’re boss of payal di! So what? You’re not my boss and if you’ll be then I dont care, I do what I want, so may you leave otherwise ill talk to my friend about your misbehaving” Sanskar comes in full rage:”how dare you to talk to me?” He holds her arm:”you dont know me! If I’m talking to you with polite tone! That doesn’t mean you can talk to me like that, you dont know me” She jerks his hand, everyone is looking them:”you dont know me Mr! Will you leave? Otherwise ill talk to my friend to ask you leave” Payal comes to them immediately:”swara! He’s our guest , why you talking to him” But Sanskar raises his hand:”don’t need to say anything(turns to Swara) ill see you, dont think that I’ll leave you so easily” He leaves with rage.
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Swara:”we met at my friend’s birthday party, he asked me to dance but I gently refuse, maybe that time he liked me or feel something for me but he leaved from there but next day…” Ragini:”what happened next day?” Fb shows in sanskar’s point of view: He arrived at home with full rage and broke out the stuff of his room:”how dare she refused to me and talked to me like this? Who is she? Just a typical middle class girl, who think that she’s so precious, now ill tell her the price of her”
Precap:in present all family get together, in past, shanaya’s entry!
Hey guys! Tell me who play the character of Shanaya! She’s little evil but not have bad intention
97 Comments
Nice one.. may be kanchi kaul or krystal dsouza zan play shanaya’s role..
Its really awesome.. swasan moments are really nice and family time also nice.. oh so sweet swara is cooking sanky’s favorite foods 😉 i hope this sanaya will not become a problem between swasan
Really nice Saba continue and upload fast…waiting eagerly
Full of suspense.. Interesting.. Good..
Amazing episode..Omg i love sans attitude…i can’t wait for next episode… But yor exams are come near… You conc on studies… We ll wait… For shanaya role neha janpandit from humsafar ..anita (shagun from yhm ), aditi (new sanam) from qubool hai,…
nice..end this fb as soon as possible because.. we want more present swara sanskar sceans
Wow kb se wait kr rhi thi tumhare update ka
Its just awesome
Continue soon
So he had living togather relationship oly with shanaya …not with everybody Wen ever he see new n pretty gals….though its bad …but he is genuine to this illegal relatio…
thankuuuuuuuuuuuu dear
Awwww shanya entry god…. sanskar ka ek baat mujhe acha laga mere aankhon ke samne raho…. i like it
Saba you write so good please upload the next one fast and also I’m yours please love your ffs
Shanaya can be Ishani of MATH
ur ff is really nice Saba..
sorry if i hurt you.. it is just my own opinion..but honestly ff is just awsome
I was waiting for your ff so eagerly nice one…plz update next part soon
It’s superb….. @Saba
omg swasan past was horrible..
its not easy for them to love soon…
both has bitter past so it may take time…
had a feeling its just becz shanya a
swara suffering…
Bt cant see sanskar more evil… pls make him positive soon..
omg swasan past horrible
So interesting.too good yar.plz try to write more than one ff in a day plzzz
Just love your fiction all the best super like to your imagination
Pls try to updates more parts
Am waitng mah whole day t luk aftr ur ffs pls
Awesome
u r writing awsm ff I like it but plz don’t drag the show.
swasan scene was awsm end the fb soon
just love ur stories
Nice yaar
Ritika in matsh or aliya in kkb
Thank u… Its nice. lov the story day by day.. Pls keep continuing..this is my favrit story..
Loved it…
Hope shanaya will not create any scene between swasan.. want more swasan scene.
And now super excited for next part..
Thanks kritika for suggestion! And Shanaya character isn’t bad, she’s just a bold girl with desire of high life style,
Thanks lucky!
Thanks chinni!
Thanks akshu! I’ll try my best to upload next soon, but you’ve to wait dear!
Thanks harsimran! Is your name merger of two name?
Thanks ahana! Only sanskar has bitter past and this is not his past, this is just fb of their meetings before marriage
Thanks appu, thanks shanaya
Thanks varsha, niti! Thanks cherry, I wish I can eat that cherry you gave me in comment hahaha
Thanks trishika! Nice suggestion
Yes hayathi ! I also like this passiveness of sanskar!
Hey bhuvi! Can you explain me how do you think this relationship is genuine? I just wanna see that you got my point or not!
Thanks sparkle and seeba!
Thanks bhuvi for suggestion and thanks jenny! No! You welcome dear
Thanks angel and lucky thanks again! No Shanaya will not create the problem! Actually same as im yours! There are not only negative characters! Just all have grey shades
shanaya can be lavina tandon (ruqaiya from JA)
shanaya character is suitable for ( adaa khan from naagin show