Saksham felt Gopika as entirely different .
Saksham : Gopika !!!
Gopika was still looking the penned lines of Arya only
Saksham took the book from her .
Gopika : Give that book to me
Saksham : Thank god , finally you speaked up. Where you lost yourself ?
Gopika : I was just in an imaginary world where I am flying like a free bird, there are no constrains, no fear and it was quite new to me. What I feel is
Meanwhile Saksham’s phone rings
Saksham : I will listen about your poetic world of imagination later as this is an important call. Keep your book with you.
Saksham started talking in phone. Meanwhile Gopika started walking through the verandah thinking about the imaginary world only. She didn’t noticed what was happening around her
A guy who was teasing girls throw banana peels on her way. Gopika placed her feet on them and she was about to feel down .But suddenly Saksham hold her and saved her from felling down.
They both share an eyelock
[Dhoop Ho Chhaaya Ho
Din Ho Ke Raat Rahein
Tere Mera Saath Rahein
Tere Mera Saath Rahein..!! plays ]
Saksham : Gopika are you okay ?
Gopika nodded her head with a smile
Saksham’s eyes went on him. He walked towards them in anger.
He was stalking Gopika.
Saksham : Why you did it ?
Gopika was tensed with this deed. She rushed near them.
Gopika : Saksham please chalo yahan se
Saksham : No Gopika , I won’t leave these type of guys. He was throwing peels and he was stalking you.
Guy : Oye Hero is becoming an angry young man. Let’s pour more fire on it.
He grabbed Gopika’s hand forcefully.
Gopika : Leave me ,I said leave.
Saksham punched that guy’s cheek badly
Gopika : Saksham stop it. Please….
Saksham’s anger was on verge , Gopika was finding hard to control him. Meanwhile Principal comes there.
Principal ; Stop it , This is a college not a wrestling match. You three come to my cabin.
Gopika : Saksham I was trying to stop you, why you beated him ?
Saksham : And what was he doing ? Was that right ?
They all entered the cabin.
Saksham :Sir the mistake was done by him.
Principal : So what ? If he is teasing girls, throwing peels you should have complained it to me .
Saksham : Sir he forcefully grabbed a girl’s hand . I can’t tolerate if some one do this misbehaviour to a girl . That’s why I punched him.
Principal : Whatever it is I have to take action. Saksham and Harry you both are suspended for a week.
Gopika : Sir please ,Saksham actually saved me . Please don’t do this to him .
Principal : You all leave my cabin right now
Gopika : Sir please listen to me
Saksham : I am ready for it. Gopika you don’t need to say anything . Let’s go
Gopika : But Saksham
Saksham : Bola naa
Gopika nodded her head. They both walked from there .
At Canteen
Saksham : Bring two juices for us
Gopika : I don’t want it .
Saksham : Why ?
Gopika : Saksham , you should have controlled yourself .
Saksham : Really !! I can’t believe this. I was fighting for you and you are blaming me
Gopika :Saksham calm down. You punched him , I agree that he was wrong. But beating him continuously was not right. I mean see now you also got suspension.
Saksham : You know what at that time what I find was you only. You was in a difficult situation and I didn’t bothered about anything . So I just punched him as he grabbed your hand with his dirty hands . And by the way why I should say all these to you ? You was living at that imaginary world naa so you won’t be able to see what was happening with you.
Gopika : Saksham what you want to say ?
Saksham : Apart from this poetry book there is a world of reality , Gopika. Better try to find it . Bye….
Saksham walks away
Gopika calls from behind …..Saksham , Saksham
But he didn’t listened her .
Gopika thought : Why Saksham is saying like this ?
On the other hand Arjun and Maya goes to a hotel .
Maya : Why we came here Arjun Sir ?
Arjun : Again Sir !!
Maya : Oops!! I mean Arjun .
Arjun ; Why people comes in hotel ? To eat something only
Maya : But now
Arjun : I know Maya you have skipped your dinner many a times and working as bearer at the restaurant. I have seen your hard work. So I thought why can’t I just offer a one time food and start a new bonding with you ?
Maya : Arjun , I am skipping it daily so will you daily bring me here ?
Arjun : May be I can’t.But I will try to give you the best food.
Maya : You are so honest. I mean you just say from heart .
Arjun : And you too, Maya. Please have your seat.
Maya : Okay
Arjun gives the menu card to her .
Arjun :Order whatever you wish
Maya : Think well. Because if you won’t be able to pay that much . Because my order is big,
Arjun : Anything for you , If they will tell me Chakki pees lo I will happily do that .
Maya smiled
Arjun : Please keep this smile always , it suits you well.
Maya orders onion parathas . Meanwhile Arjun was looking her only. When order was finished Maya too looked Arjun. Arjun took his phone and tried to capture her pic. Maya shyly smiled
At that time Maya’s eyes went on the corner table . Maya gets irritated as her step dad was sitting there. Arjun notices it.
Arjun : Maya , what happened ?
Maya : Nothing
Maya’s dad came near them , He give a crooked smile towards Maya.
Dad : I will inform your Mom that her daughter is no more a kid . She is desperately waiting to have some one in her life.
Maya : What you want to say ?
Dad : I will make arrangements for everything. When you will arrive home on summer vaccation your wish will be fullfiled .
Maya ; What ?
Dad : Get ready for the marriage with Bejoy ,my little princess .
Arjun ; Excuse me who are you ?And what are you saying ?
Dad : I am talking to my daughter and who are you to come in between us ?
Arjun : Daughter !!
Maya : Just leave dad . You can’t buy me for your selfish motives , I know why you wants Bejoy. Because you doesn’t wants to share property . So that if I marries that Bejoy he will stay at your home only like a loyal dog.Let me challenge you it will never happen.
Dad : Will see you there .
He walks away. Maya breaks the glass in frustration. Her palm gets wounded .
Arjun : Maya !! Maya !!
Arjun : Calm down Maya.
Arjun takes his handkerchief
Maya : I don’t need it .
Arjun : Your hand is bleeding .
Maya : I need to go from here……
Arjun : Fine . Let’s go…… I never expected that when we started our bonding it will turn like these ….
Maya’s eyes went teary
Arjun raised his hand to wipe it
Maya : Don’t do it . This is the pain given by him and I want to bear it because I want to return this pain to him badly.
Arjun: Maya!! Calm down. I don’t know what issues you both have . But this way you can’t give pain to yourself. Please.
Arjun went to reception area and bought first aid box.
Arjun : Please Maya don’t hurt yourself
Arjun started caressing her wounded palm , Maya looked Arjun emotionally.
Arjun : Maya , I can’t see tears in your eyes. Please
Maya turned her face from him
Maya : There are some pains which can never be healed . I can handle myself.
Maya wiped her tears and turned towards Arjun.
Arjun : I will drop you
Maya : Arjun, I am sorry for ….
Arjun :For what ?
Maya : Woh…
Arjun : You are courageous and I respect those who have courage . I won’t ask you about what all things happened in your life. I know it’s difficult for you to share. But one thing I am always ready to listen. So when you feel you can tell me and if you don’t want then also I will be your friend. Trust me .
Maya : Thanks , you understand me so well Arjun. I am happy with this new bonding.
Arjun : So from today onwards we will be best buddies . Deal !!
Maya held Arjun’s hand and smiled
Maya : Deal!!! My best buddy
They both hold their hands together and looked each other’s eyes
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DC67xKcmKfg
[O karam khudaya hai
Tujhe mujhse milaya hai
Tujhpe marke hi toh
Mujhe jeena aaya hai.
O tere sang yaara…
Khush rang bahara
Tu raat deewani
Main zard sitaara plays]
SCENE SHIFTS TO HOSTEL ROOM
Maya recalled her moments with Arjun and unknowingly a smile came at her face. She went inside the room and to her surprise Gopika was not there.
Maya : Why Gopika is not here ? Oh Shit!! I didn’t tell her that I was going with Arjun. May be she might have felt bad. She might be sitting at the garden area only.
Maya went to garden and find Gopika sitting beneath a tree.
Maya : Gopika!!
Gopika hugged Maya and started crying.
Maya : What happened ?
Gopika : Saksham is not talking with me .
Maya : What ? Tell me what happened exactly
Gopika explained everything.
Gopika : He went in anger from canteen. I walked behind him but he went at his hostel. So I wasn’t able to talk with him. Maya I tried his phone too but he is not picking my calls. Maya he was right but what I was trying to say is he should have controlled a little.
Maya : Gopika , if I was in that place I would have also done the same thing Saksham have did. Infact I would have slapped him for that thing.
Gopika : Maya !!
Maya : What yaar ? He saved you and it’s nothing just a suspension only. It happened with many guys .
Gopika : But it had never happened with our friend Saksham, Maya. That’s what bothering me .
Maya : Your point is also valid ,perhaps in anger he would have said like that.
Gopika :Maya tell me honestly did I live in imaginary world only ?? I am unaware about realities !!!
Maya ; See his intention was not to hurt you , Gopika. He said truth in anger .
Gopika :You both are my true friends and that’s why when you people say something it matters a lot .
Maya : Leave it. I will call Saksham , don’t worry.
Maya calls Saksham, Saksham picks the call.
Saksham : Maya don’t tell in favour of Gopika .
Maya : I am not in favour of any one. But the way you spoken has affected her .literally. She is crying a lot. Lo baat kar lo ….
Saksham : What ? Gopika is crying
Maya gives phone to Gopika
Gopika : Hello
Saksham : Gopika I am sorry
Gopika : What’s my mistake ? Why you didn’t talked with me ? You are my friend naa ? Whatever anger you have you should have talked with me . This way how can some one stay away from a friend !!
Saksham : I understand. Gopika we will meet and talk. I will be in the basket ball court within 10 minutes.Please be there.
Gopika : Okay
Saksham cuts the call
Maya : What ?
Gopika : Saksham wants to meet me at basket ball court.
Maya : Nice. Things should be sort out directly. Go and speak with him.
Gopika : And you , you should also come
Maya : You know naa it’s evening . And at evenings and nights I have part time work. So I can’t .
Gopika : Yeah
Maya : One minute
Maya takes the glasses and wipes it with her shawl. She wiped Gopika’s tears too. She put glasses on Gopika’s eyes. Gopika smiled
Maya : Now my friend looks cute!!
16 Comments
Saksham saving gopika from falling was romantic. Saksham fighting with the guy who troubled gopika was nice.but it’s sad that the principal suspended him.maybe because gopika was worried about Saksham that she felt that he should have controlled his anger.saksham asked her to see the reality.i wonder what will be the reality which gopika faces on future.shocking that maya’s stepdad wants her to marry someone for his selfish reasons.arjun caressing her wounded palms n saying that he can’t bear her pain was emotional. Arya becoming best friends was cute.Saksham apologizing to gopika n going to meet her was nice.waiting for that.perfect pics.
Thanks a lot ☺️
Have you watched the Tamil movie Enna Solla pogirai ? If yes then can you please write a story based on that one. You can select any pairs do you want.
I have not watched it.but if you give me the plot,i will write it in September or October.bcz I am on vacation.
The movie is about a love triangle between RJ Ashwin, Teju and Avanthika. Ashwin gets engaged with Teju. Their engagement is fixed by their families only. Teju doesn’t believes in love, marriage and relationships. Though Ashwin doesn’t have any love interest he decided to change the thought process of Teju regarding love. So he tells her a fake story
that he loved a girl deeply once and also tells they both were so romantic and now both are separated . Hearing it Teju asks what’s the reason for breakup. Ashwin finds hard to give an answer. Teju tells that she wants to meet Ashwin’s Ex love. So that she could meet her and convince her . Ashwin then brings aTV serial actress Avanthika as his old lover and offers her money. She agreed to it . Then Ashwin and Avanthika started loving as Teju said though you both are not lovers presently I want to see how romantic you both were. They started doing it but at a point Avanthika tells that she has really started loving him.Ashwin also feels love for her. But he hides his feelings.In the mean time Teju also tells seeing you both so romantic I have started believing in love . So I accept you as my Fiancee whole heartedly. Now Ashwin is in dilemma as he doesn’t want to hurt both girls. In movie Ashwin unites with his fiancee Teju as Avantika sacrifice her love . She gives an explanation that I can love onscreen only. She tells Ashwin you deserves Teju and goes away. Ashwin asks do you love me and she tells may be but that was not real. Actually it was a lie. She walks away. In this way movie ended.
There is a scene in movie when Teju asks Avantika if you loved truly then why you break up with Ashwin, she tells I can say thousand dialogues and act on serials regarding love. But it is not true love. Ashwin is just a new RJ and when we were in love I was so romantic too , but being practical I realised that Money is above all. Ashwin haven’t that much money, so I went for a break up .As now Ashwin said his fiancee don’t believes in love and for making her to realize value of love Ashwin and I again started loving each other before you. We recreated certain romantic moments of ours again to you so that you should understand love is beautiful. But I didn’t loved Ashwin really he offered money for doing this. And now my job is over and let me again breaking my heart with Ashwin. Teju smiles and hugs Ashwin saying thank you that you break up else I would have never get Ashwin . Seeing you both so romantic and lovable I realised love is beautiful. So I don’t want to lose my love, Ashwin is right person for me. Ashwin pretended a smile and looks Avantika. Avanthika tells them all the best and Ashwin looked her eyes emotionally. That scene was so touching, please add that one .
I will write in September or October.
You can give me suggestions for the 2 heroines n the hero.which actors do you want?please suggest a few trio combo.
Kunal Jaisingh-Ahneri Vajani – Tejaswi Prakash. Kunal as Ashwin, Ahneri as Teju and Tejaswi as Avanthika . There are certain romantic moments between Ashwin and Avantika , that’s why Tejaswi and Kunal will be good as Ashwin and Avantika roles. That will be the best.
Harshad Chopra- Pranali Rathod -Karishma Sawanth from YRKKH . You can decide who will suit Teju and who wil suit for Avantika.
Shaheer Sheikh-Rhea Sharma-Kaveri Priyam of YEH RISHTEY HEIN PYAAR KE . They will also be nice .
Thanks for the suggestions.i will write for kunal teja aneri.
You want ashwin teju to unite? or you want ashwin n teju to know that avantika really loved ashwin?you want teju to know ashwin too loves avantika?
I want Teju should know the truth that Avantika really loved Ashwin. Uniting with whom is upto your wish. But in movie Ashwin didn’t properly confessed his feelings to Avantika even after Avantika tells him she had feelings for him. It would be better if you add a scene where both of them telling their feelings. Last scene of movie when Ashwin asks Avantika do you love me ? Enna solla pogirai ( What you wants to say) she tells I never loved you. That day when I said I am in love with you at that rainy night was a lie . You deserves Teju and she walks away. It was a kind of tragic climax. Moreover they didn’t show why Teju was not believing in love earlier ? Only a voice over was shown that she lives with her dad ,her mom left her and dad when she was a kid. Why mom went away ? Did it was a divorce or any other reason or is she alive or not ? They didn’t explored it much. So would like to know Teju’s perspective too .
I know that I had requested you for rikara shivika dhadkan.but can you plz write on arshi( minnaram )n jabir(malayalam movie godfather)bcz arshi minnaram ff got discontinued n there were 2 jabir ffs on godfather.but both got discontinued. Now you are busy.Not now,after you complete all your ffs.
Okay I will write them by December.
Thanks a lot.
I will include it.
I saw the story of this movie in visuals.in the climax,the leads united.it was a happy ending.
Yeah the story was inspired from Mudhal nee movie.