Recap:sanskar proposed to swara while swara refused and slapped him.
Scene 1 (in present)
Sanskar:”I followed her to her college and proposed her in a way of college”
Laksh:”oh! Didn’t you find some romantic place? Well what did you replied to him Bhabhi?”
Swara:”i gently refused to him because i didn’t know him very well (with double meaning tone), but he was strong with his motives and he won me”
Laksh:”so easily?”
Ragini:”not so easily, i knew the story after it”
Swasan recall something from their point of view:
Sanskar is in his office and got every information about swara.
Sanskar:”everyone has weakness, you’ve also and sanskar very well know to play the weakness of people and your weakness is your family, now ill play with your weakness miss swara gadodia!” He calls his secretary:”send suree to my cabin” secretary nodes. Suree:”may i come in sir”
Sanskar:”yeah! Come inside” suree comes inside:”you called me sir”
Sanskar:”have a seat” He sits down. Sanskar:”I granted your loan for your marriage” Suree with happy mood:”thank you, thank you so much sir” Sanskar with serious tone:”you’re going to marry, so surely, woman of your house will shopping lots of dresses specially sarees?” Suree wth confusion:”yes sir” Sanskar:”im giving you adress of shop of sarees, just go there and orders them 500 sarees or more” Suree:”but sir…” Sanskar:”you dont need to return your loan and these sarees will be gift from me” Suree gets happy:”thanks alot sir! I’ll do what you say” Sanskar:”its very easy, you just need to go that shop and orders sarees and give them timeline of work only of month.. Okk??” Suree:”sure sir! Anything else sir?” Sanskar:”first go to Kiran(new secretary) and get an adress of that shop” Suree nodes and leaves while Sanskar smiles with all his evil mind.
Scene 2:
Sanskar is taking dinner when Shanaya arrived at home. Sanskar:”welcome madam! Your time is absolutely right!” She smiles proudly. She’s wearing green sleeveless sareee with open long curls. Shanaya:”because im miss perfect, Mr. Perfect and obviously im getting rid of you after some days,(turn to Lavanya) may you please leave Lavanya (Lavanya nodes and leaves) by the way, when will you marry?” Sanskar:”when that arrogant girl beg to me to marry her” Shanaya smiles naughtily and sits with him, she is sophisticated girl and her every style imitated to elite class. She serves food to sanskar and take out for her also. Shanaya:”finally! I’ll get rid of you, god knows how swara will handle you, but im really happy for you” Sanskar:”I bet, you’ll miss me” Shanaya:”it means, you’ll completely break relationship with me”
Sanskar looks her with complete seriousness:”ill never leave you Shanaya! You’ were with me when I was alone, never ever think that ill leave you, yeah ill never touch you after marriage but that doesn’t mean that ill break our friendship” Shanaya smiles and hugs him with emotions:”I don’t know how will she handle you? But ill always with you, because you save me from many problems, and yeah if you feel to come to me, you can” Sanskar:”you know very well, I always clear in my relationships, so if I marry her, ill never betray her” Shanaya depart from him and start her dinner:”I know, we both are same, you dont need to say anything to me, because you’re my mirror and I know how’s the reflection of mine” After dinner both go to bedroom and sanskar told her about his plan.
Scene 3: Sanskar got a call, that shekhar gadodia draw the money from bank to complete the order of suree and his man as usual robbed him. Sanskar:”good going!!…, now it’s act of suree”.. (in present) Ragini:”papa got a project of 500 sarees, we were so happy but when papa drew the money from bank, some robbers stealth all money and his client was warning him that he’ll complaint against him? If he didn’t complete the order because papa took advance from him, we were so worried, that papa took loan from bank and now maybe we’ll be bankrup soon because papa got a loan from bank and our home was kept by bank as mortgage… But one day” Swara recalls that moment when he saw, the same silver Mercedes which was owned by sanskar. She got worried about sanskar, whether he come to create problem for her.
Sanskar comes out from car:”I wanna talk to you” Swara:”but I’m not interested to do” Sanskar:”Is Ragini come from college? Is your father complete his order? I think you need my help soon, take my card” he handover a card to her, she unintentionally pick the car. Because she gets really worried. When she comes inside the home, sumi comes to her:”swara! Someone call us that they’ve kidnapped ragini! And they demanded money, I dont understand what to do? I cant tell shekhar, he’s not well because of money problem and now? We’ve to go to police station, until he’ll get know” swara recalls Sanskar words but doesn’t care about it. She goes to police station, but they didn’t take them serious, just doing formality.
Shekhar is at home because they’ve no work on shop. Shekhar:”sumi! Ragini isn’t come home” Dada Ji and dadi also worried and they dont want to inform shekhar about it because Dr told that not to stress him. They also know that if Ragini stay a night outside the home. Then it’ll be disgrace her. Swara:”papa! She’s in her friend’s home, but she’s just coming” Shekhar:”call her to come home because its too late” She call again and again to Ragini, she confirmed from her friends! But she’s not there also that’s mean that kidnapper was telling truth. Swara thinks tensely, he looks shekhar and decided something,her ego isn’t more than her family.
Scene 4: Swara goes to Sanskar’s home: Swara:Mr Sanskar Maheshwari!! I accept your proposal” Sanskar smirks and goes to her:”but now I’m not interested to marry with you” Swara gets shocked to listen him.:”but you told me” Sanskar:”yeah I know, I’m so good, if you force me, then ill must thinks about it” Swara cries and bent down to him:”please Sanskar! Release my sister and save my father’s business otherwise we’ll ruin! You’re right! Everyone has a cost, and now im here to sell myself for happiness of my family, give them happiness and ill do whatever you want” Sanskar feels so much calmness in his heart, he holds her and make her sit on couch.
Sanskar:”as you propose me, then now ill marry on my conditions, and I’ve only one condition” She ups her eyes and her tears filled eyes are turning him to his point, but he’s strong man, it isn’t easy to get him emotional. Sanskar:”you’ve to obey me, whatever I’ll say or do, you’ve to accept without any objection and restrictions” Swara nodes and wipes her tears.:”your sister was with my secretary, she’s safe, she came my office for job and I ordered her for one day demo, tough demo! I’m not so much bad to ruin girl respect, but I can become so bad to do so, so don’t deny your proposal, otherwise I can do everything” Swara gets tensed that she proposed him but ragini is saved, she thinks to deny her proposal, but recalls condition of her dad! She knows very well that he planned everything, if she deny then he’ll must do what he said. Swara nodes and leaves, she knows very well now she stuck in his trap, she can’t come out from it and she accept her defeat.
Scene 5:
Ragini:”jiju ordered me to give me a demo, I did, he’s really professional but at the end of day, he rejected me to said that he never make relationship with his staff, that time I wasn’t understand, but next day swara reveal that jiju proposed her and now she wanna marry him, papa met with jiju, he helped papa to carry setup his business and also sponsor my study papa found him perfect for swara… After it as usual they married and live happily forever after” All four smile, raglak with happiness, sanskar with proud and swara with sadness. Sanskar got a call and swara heard the name of Shanaya! She is curious about her because if sanskar has taken her name that’s means she was used to wake up him. Sanskar heard the call and turned to them. Sanskar:”swara! Tonight! We arranged a reception, this is just formality to get together of my business partners and clients, will you buy tonight’s dress or I asked to Shanaya to bring dress for you”
Swara doesn’t understand what to say! He hasn’t said anything to her, always ordered her. Laksh:”wow!!! Bhai!! Reception and witth your business clients, that’s mean many elite chicks will be there” Sanskar:”yeah lucky right! But swara first tell me im at call” sanskar is holding the phone still. Swara:”I’ll not go for shopping” sanskar nodes and talked to Shanaya. Sanskar leaves them:”have you arranged everything?” Shanaya:”Shanaya is here dear! You shouldn’t worry about anything!” Sanskar smiles:”I know I shouldn’t worry about anything, well go and get a dress for swara for tonight, you know my choice very well” Shanaya:”I know sweetheart! Dont worry!! I’ll send dress by my driver” they shared the ideas about function and disconnected the call. Ragini and laksh are talking to each others.
While swara is silent but her expression is witness of her discomfort with their talking. Sanskar silently comes and sits on his place. Laksh:”finally Bhai!! You’re going to arrange reception… Ohhh im so excited about tonight.(he turns to Ragini) ragini you’ll come naa?” Sanskar:”no lucky! You know very well, this type of party not suitable for her(he saw disappointment on Ragini ‘s face) hey dont worry ragini! your jiju arrange a good party for my whole family, you can invite your friends there too, but not this (turn to lucky) if you’ve any time, so come early and help Shanaya” Laksh:(to swara)”you know Bhabhi! Shanaya is right hand of Bhai! She’s so sophisticated and classy but she doesn’t lift to anyone, I always thought that Bhai will marry her, but he falls on you, so you’re here? ” Swara smiles hardly but still in confuse in his heart.
Precap:swara’s reception and she meets with Shanaya! And see new shade of sanskar
94 Comments
wowww!!! Saba your words are so clear and amazing!!! Dear I live your ff!! I was searching for it the whole day!! and when i found it now I was overwhelmed!!! I just live this grey shaded sanky! 🙂 please update the next part soon!! eagerly waiting for it!
Thanks jyoti to like this grey shaded sanky! And dear please check in night my ff or morning! You’ll find it! And thanks again dear!
asusal awesome dear…
How many shades he have.
Soorry to tell saba dnt like shanaya character.. sorry btwn othrs are good..
Oh god sanky charecter was too different yaar
A plan sanskar did was very clever… i love his loyalty when he said if i marry a her i will not betray her this is a very important quality for a husband.. you make me addicted to ur FF dear.. different shades of sanskar mean?
Hey lucky! Thanks dear and yeah you’ll know about his different shade! Because he treats every person in different style! So swara isn’t see him with Shanaya! She’ll find him totally change when he meets with Shanaya! That’s a reason
ok dear now i understand.. thank you so much for the clarification.. 🙂
Nice yaar
Sanskar character is really confusing
At a point he says that he cant play with the respect of a girl and on the other hand he is doing the same thing with his wife but still i am liking this story so much . This ff is really really good
Saba why dont you write your story on swaragini forum many more people can read your fiction because its really good .you should think about this once
Hey dear! Thanks alot dear for your concern! Yeah it’s confusing for all of you! Let me clear first, he doesn’t wanna degrade women in front of world! But he isn’t include himself in the world! And you’ll know about everything because he’s man of mystery! Wait until mystery will reveal
Yeah saba its good but portrating a man who forces himself on a woman to satisfy his inner happiness by making her helpless I know it wont happen in real life but its bit too imaginary
Hey rini! Thanks dear for your support! Sorry dear I’m not agree with you. There are many people scattered around us, who wanna ruled specially on their woman! Sorry if you feel im wrong, but I write what I assumed
yes saba i also agree that men always want to rule over the women but forcing and making them helpless that part only
Saba sanky swara pyaar karta hai ya nai i m getting confuse n shanaya uska roll kya hai tumhare ff me…????i mean i know ki she is abest frnd of sanky….but wo un dino ko unit karegi ya phir….???
N saba ur too gud….
I dont know if u remember me or not..????
But ur awesum…
N ff path hate to gud….
N ha saba plzzz add some swasan romantic scene…
Like swra caring fir sanky n vice versa
i m addicted to ur ffs….
I luv u saba…..
Keep writing..
N plzzz reply clear my dout….
Hey lee! How can I forget you dear? I usually read your comment on episodic analyse! Maybe you didn’t read my ff from start! Well im clearing your doubt!
Sanky swara se pyar karta hai mgr apne bitter past Ki waja se usko ache se treat nahi karta! And yeah one thing as I said he doesn’t love anyone more Than himself. And he also doesn’t realize his love for her, he married her just because he wants her and finds her perfect for her.
And shanaya ka character bohat important hai bhi aur nahi bhi! Woh un dono ko alag nahi karain gi dont worry! Uska character khul kar samne aaen ga jab sanky ka past khule ga! Just wait dear your confusion will clear soon
N ur ff path hate to luv is too gud*
Lovely awesome excellent superb fabulous wonderful etc etc. . . When sanskar said he won’t betray… it was mindblowing.. luved it ? dying whole day to read ur fiction dear. .
Thanks Tara! Every person has also qualities too even he’s bad! There’s many more qualities and goodness in sanskar’s character! First he always keeps loyal to his every relation! Thanks again dear!
Finally truth revealed great to know the flashback ..
Sanskar character shows loyalty today hopefully he will fall for swara without any wrong thinking n swara too
Hey hadi! You’re right dear sanskar’s main quality is his loyalty and fairness in every relationship ! Thanks dear for keep connecting to my ff
No need of thanks dear becoz ur ff has a magnetic power which force people to connect with it 🙂
Amazing episode… I guess sanskar betrayed by his first love… So he wanna get rid of her memory…he can completely focus on work for not to remember n her betrayal… For night time he need some one to… Bcoz physical contact pull out the stress as well as they stop to think about others ppl except those two..that’s y he is sleeping wit shanya… Or else sleep by sleeping pills…
Hey bhuvi! Thanks alot dear! Yeah you always get right spot, but there’s much more hidden in the characters of shanaya and Sanskar! They are much more than partner, you’ll get know dear! Thanks bhuvi! Stay blessed
Hi saba!! Today is ur reward day and my victory day of some sort… As sanskar said I won’t touch u shanaya after marriage & be loyal to my wife… I m touched.. But a little confusion he cant ruin ragini’s image but can ruthlessly defame her wife’s image… Huh!! Really.. But still for the beginning of pure relation he has taken his 1st step… happy for another thing that he actually cared for her family & a man of his words.. U must be surprised to read this, that how i can praise his character?? But u know as u r showing him bad, i have to look for positive points.. Other wise we both need to go to doc…And how many times I need to ask for ur fb Id??
Hey! See who’s there? Kashis finally! Woh kya kahte hai humare yahan qasam tor hi di tum ne last spot par aane Ki. Well dear! Welcome and thanks dear for commenting!
Hey dear can you clear please . What are you talking about Swara’s image? Is this question about first night or he’ll bring her to party but not ragini! May you please clear yar! Then ill try to clear your confusion.
And yeah every person has white part too dear! Because we’re human being! I like that you like his character! Actually when there’s darkness everywhere, you’ll easily find a small dot of light, but it’ll disappear in the light of sun! This is same as sanskar! He’s in black color, but his white part hidden from the world, only lucky and shanaya know about it
Well you’re right I also need to go to Dr now! Because my said”tum par swara ka bhoot charh gea hai” no mom! Not swara’s actually sanskar’s! Hahaha
Its the question of first night dear… Every other aspect I can understand.. But forcefully doing those things still not acceptable… What to do yaar? When everywhere there is darkness, u need to find a ray of sunlight. And all of the above its about sanskar!!! But look my comments are having impact on ur ff.. U r atleast writing some positive parts of him.. Earlier u made him monster, evil and what not??
Actually dear! It’s psychological way to create thrill and suspense in your story and get connected by your reader. He’s still monster and wild as well! But not in every aspect, maybe something wrong for us but this is not wrong for him because he owe her and think that its her wife!
Lets come on psychological impact of audience! Actually when we would want to connected by our audience, we’ve to create a character full dark or full white shade with mystery! And we slowly open his/her every layer infront of audience! Then what will happen? Audience! Sorry reader, first hate/love this character and slowly their emotions turn into opposite direction(hate to love, love to hate) reader travel along the writer and writer make them love or hate to that character! And at the end give them justification or big shock to remind this story! In my thought this is a secret to create memorable character or story!
I’m also applying this same secret on my this ff too! You can see firsly who commented that we hate this sanskar! Slowly they’re connected with him and finally they fall in love with him! Sorry dear but this is not your impact this is just psychological theory of mine! As a writer as well as a reader too! I hope you understand and dont mind that I deny your impact
Oh!! Such a big comment to deny my impact.. Felt proud yaar.. I also didn’t mind that dear.. As this psychological trait I am quite aware with.. I have just casually said so.. But it had made a impact on you so I felt honoured.. Ha! Ha! Kidding… In technical term, if u can’t convince them then confuse them & again convince them.. They will love to purchase that product.. The same way this logic follows…
Hahaha dear! Yeah it can be your impact dear because I don’t wanna loose my new friend who gonna face multi personality disorder because of my character!! Hahaha dear! Well you’re at right spot! But don’t you think That now im convincing every one? After confusion! Well dear thanks for support me And stay blessed
Ur story is so mysteries man
loved the update… loved sanskar when he said , ‘i will never touch you after marriage and i won’t betray her’ to shanaya and when he refused ragini to attend the party… he really cares for them… it must confuse swara… and ada is a perfect choice… *applause* for you… way to go saba… best of luck…
Thanks alot dear! For your support! Yeah I also like fair person! He doesn’t need to hide his badness! That’s make it different from others
saba it is awesome. ….am loving sanskar character day by day…am waiting eagerly the next part
I liked sanskaars words very much when he said if I marry her I will nt betray her wow so cute
The story is just awesome….,.luv it loads …………….waiting to see the new shade of sanskar ,………
Hey Sara! Thanks dear im also trying my best to make you fall in love his character! You love it means im successful!
Thanks jay! Yeah he’s really mysterious man!
Thanks devi thanks dear nive!
Yeah hayathi! He’s different because he’s not hypocrite! Humare yahan ek kahavat hai! Farzano main dewana! He’s just like it because he has different wits to people cant accept him easily.
Yeah Tania! He has many shades
Sorry Daniela if you don’t like her! But definitely you’ll like her in future
oh! saba loving your episodes…..cant wait for next episode plzz update it soon na……i am totally touched by sanskar words ….already he is in love with swara wow!
Hi saba just finished ur Ff, lil bcy wid my work, thatz y didn’t comment on both Ff..again u nailed it yaar.loved sanskar new shades, he is very much loyal to his relationship,whether is shanaya hoo or swara
Hey sethooty! Thanks dear! I was waiting for your comment because of your love and great encouragement in previous episode! Thanks alot dear everything and keep connected dear and yeah he’s loyal and truthful and these qualities are possessed by few people in this world!
hi saba as usual it is superb…
how many shades sanskar have…
he is very loyal also .. as he told shanaya he will never betray swara after marriage.. he is not at all so bad.. bt some times he become evil..
as present shanaya character as a frnd k but dont make her come between swasan …
Hey ahana! Thanks dear! And yeah he’s a man of mystery! You’ll know about him soon dear! Thanks and stay blessed
Thanks chinni! Thanks jenny! You both are great supporter of mine from my first episode! Yeah divya! Thanks dear, just wait his new shade but you’ll definitely love him dear! Thanks alot guys!
Is kavitha-sanskaar past included. In this ff ??
Saba just read ur ff.again super.at first ff i couldnt imagine varun as sankar.but not now.i mean now i love sanskar in this character also .now from some point of view his behaviour is justified for me.u r just super yaar.keep writing.i dont like to comment first it was veena di who compelled me to comment after reading her ff.now its u and kashis.u r a fabulous writer saba and eagerly waiting for ur nxt update
Hey….i m silent reader…
I daily read ur ff…
I daily wait fr ur ff…
I jst luv it…
I ws busy so i cant comment…Bt 2day i m free so thought to cmmnt 🙂
Dis ff is diff. frm other ff 🙂
plz update next part
Hey jenny! There’s no kavita in his past, yeah Manisha! I’ll upload next soon
Thanks alot praise! To break your silent! I hope you’ll keep connected with me!
Thanks dear appu! I’m lucky to have supporter like you!
All of you guys!! Thanks alot dear
That’s great …and even i don’t want any kavita in between angry bird sanskar’s and lovely bird swara’s love hate story
It’s. Me jenny itself: )