silent readers pls do comment….And sry for the super long episode yesterday guys
Scene1:adi comes home angrily
mr bhalla:what hapn aadi?
adi:nothng dada!
toshiji:u look angry?wht happn?
adi: went to meet ashok
toshiji:wht?
mr bhalla:y did u go meet that man?
adi:to warn him!ask him to stay away from our family!
mr bhalla:this is going to make him angry even more!
adi:let him get angry!When his plans fail he will go mad!
tooshiji:adi puttar…
adi:dadi!i am not a small boy anymore! I will face him!and ranveer is with me!
saying this adi leaves
mr bhalla:i don’t know where ths is gong to end toshiji!
toshiji:mata rani!Pls stay wth me!
scene2:ranveer is at the terrace thinking abt something.Ishita comes there
ishu:ranveer haven’t u slept yet?
ranvi:no mumma!Not sleep at all!
ishu:what shasnk said was true ranvi?
ranvi:no!He just joked mumma!
Ishu:then y r u like this?
Rannvi:like what?
ishu:happy
ranvi to himself:cos I met my bro and sis!
ranvi:nothing mumma!
ishu:r u sure?
ranvi:yes! promise that there is nothing like that!
ishta smiles and leaves.ranvi look up at the sky and talks to himself.
ranvi:mumma!The sky is our home…The stars are us…II will bring back our famly together soon!I promise u that!
shashank:talking to urself bro?
ranvi thinks for a while and says:i am thinking abt giving back the contract to adi bhaiya!
shashank:huh?
ranv:meaning not to bhaiya,but pappa!
shashank:to mausa?
ranvi:yes I will do it tmr!
shashank:ranveer!r u mad?u going to meet ur dad?
ranvi:to give a gd impression of me!This will help me to unite my parents…
shashank:gd idea but…
ranvi:no buts and vuts!I am going to start the father son game!
scene3:ashok breaks the things at home
sooraj:wht r u doing ashok!?
ashok:he challenged me!
sooraj:ash…
ashok:hat coward challenged me!
sooraj:ashok relax!
ashok:how can I b relaxed!?He was a coward last time sooraj!Iused to b his pillar!
srj looks at him
ashok:now he found a strong base!Adi is not the adi from the past!
srj:just like his mothers!
ashok slaps him agn
srj:y the hell did u do this!?
ashok:dont irritate me sooraj!get lost!
srj leaves angrily.Ashok breaks the wine bottle
ashok:i wont leave u Aditya bhalla!Not only u but ur whole famly!U guys are dead!
he screams like a mad man when sooraj looks at him worried
scene4:ranv cmes to meet ra,man
raman:y did u cme here
ranveer looks at him and raman waves his hand in front of him
raman:what?
ranvi:i came here to give u this contract
rmn looks at him
ranv:i know that u r angry with Aditya but dontt need this
rmn:but…
ranvi:its ok pa…its ok sir!Just take it
rmn takes the fl
rmn:ur so different from the other businessmen
ranvi:i don’t need this!i have more mportant work to do than this!
rmn smiles
ranvi:dont scold Aditya…he is realy a nice man
raman:wow!amazing!
ranvi:why?
rmn:i hads nvr scene a boy like u b4!What ur father’s name?
ranvi looks at him
rmn:whats his name?
ranvi with tears in his eyes:i don’t have a father..My mom nvr talked abt him
rmn:im sry!
ranvi:but its ok. am seeing him right now!
raman:what?
ranvi:can I consider u as a dad?
raman smiles:ur so different beta!
ranvi smiles and raman hugs him…Ranvi leaves and thinks to himself
ranvi:i don’t know if to scold u for betraying my mother or to cry in front of u as ur my father…But still I will unite u 2 soon!
precap:ashok comes into raman’s ward as a doctor in disguise.raman is sleeping and ashok says ‘raman bhalla!ur done!’He takes out a handkerchief and goes near raman.
15 Comments
Emotional father son scene…
Love ur ff much…
Nice one yaar… Raman ranvi scene
Very nice episode
its nice…
father son conversation was nice hope they unite soon..
precap seems dangerous
Thats so cool yaar
Very emotional…especially last part..Loved it…
very emotinal and nice
Nice
Nice update
please keep updating.I have been following your story from day 1. wish the actual writers of yeh hai mohabbatein are creative as you are.Good work and all the best!!!!
please keep updating.I have been following your story
Nyc episode. Waiting for next episode.
I am waiting for next episode.please update it fastly.
Very nice episode.plz write the next coming episode quickly.I am eagerly waiting for next episode
Hi have you updated your ff…. Eagerly waiting yar