HEY FRIENDS THIS IS THE EPI 2…I HOPE U LIKE MY THIS FF TOO…PLEASE COMMENT AND TELL IF THERE ARE ANY SHORT COMINGS…..ONE MORE THING AS I M A MUSLIM SO DNT KNOW IF HINDUS GET MARRIED TO THEIR CZNS.MY AUNT HAS SOME HINDU FRIENDS WHO ARE A COUPLE AND ARE CZNS….SO PLZ TELL ME AS I HAVE TO DO STH ABT THIS MAYA…..
Swara reaches maheshwari house
SWARA:aunti??
AP:u must be swara
SWARA:yes aunti
swara takes her blessings ans says namste.annapurna is impressed and says I m glad that u r just like as I assumed.a good well mannered girl.she gives a look to anamika who is unfazed.anamika thinks this ap is hurting my ego.i hate these taunts.
dp comes and blesses swara.
dp:if u feel any problem must tell us.
he keeps his hand on swara’s head and gets emotional.swara is confused.
sujata comes and greets swara nd takes her to room.
ap:r u ok?
dp:swara has reminded me of payal>her eyes are just like her
ap:plz dnt talk abt it.
ap leaves.
ragini:oh ma I m so excited tomoro is my frst day at college.
sumi:plz dnt be mischievious in college.
ragini:ma college without the mishieves of ragini gododia will be boring.
dadi;hey mar ghatu sham ji.how will the poor children bear you.everyone should pay salute to us for keeping a naughty daughter.
ragini:dadi ma??
dida:hey parvati.why r u teasing my daughter.she is our baby still
ragini smiles
dida:ragu.if u will need any ideas for naughtiness take my help.we both will enjoy.
ragini laughs and oth have a hi five and dadi amd sumi are amused to see their childish acts…
swara looks at her lockedt and opens it.it has swara’s childhood pic on one side and her name written on the other side.she remembers tulsi telling her that when she was found she was wearing this lockest and swa the name with pic so they thought her to be swara.
swara:if this locket had not been with me I wouldn’t have got my name even…a tear escapes her eye.
Ap enters:swara today is a small p;arty at our house.maya is dp’s sis.her daughter has completed frst prt of hr graduation so she has arranged a party today.u get ready by evening.swara complies.
swara gets ready wearing a blue shirt with wite long skirt and read sweater.hair open and had made a puff.she looks beautiful when she is simple.
she comes down and all compliment her beauty while maya is irritated.ap introduces swara to maya who is wearing a balck strapeless dress and had made a bun.
the party goes on and ap leaves for some work as well as sujata.maya whispers sth to waiter and he goes and requests swara to hold the tray as he has to attend a call.swara agrees and he leaves.few friends of maya treat her as waiter and swara is embarrassed.
swara:maya wts going on
maya:oh plz dnt ven take my name from ur cheap tongue
swara:wts wrng wuth you maya ji?i thnk u forgot but I m ap’s guest.we have met jus an hour ago.(swara is talking politely)
maya:o plz dnt do this bechara act.i hate it.maya meets only people of her standard not low stoop like you.u have no identity no reason to live.u just dnt belong here then why r y stnding in front of me??
maya addresses everyone:look at this girl.trying to be so innocent.but we know how orphans are.ill mannered cheap characterless.her parents were so upset with her that they left her on road to die but she is so adamant.i think now you should get lost from my party if u have a little shame left in you.u have already spoiled my mood as maya doesn’t even bother to glance at middle class people so leave.
swara is deeply hurt and cries bitterly.ap who was kistening all this comes forward and maya is tensed to see her.sujata reprimands maya.both try to console swara but she runs out of the house.they call out to her but she goes out.they get tensed while maya is irritated.
swara is running but stops seeing a car coming into the house.she tries to step aside but is not able to.as the car stops she falls aside and hurts her head. guys steps out of the car.he is SANSKAR.
sanskar goes to her:hey r uok
swara turns around and her hair flutter in the air revealing her beautiful face.sanskar is mesmerized to see her.
sanskar to himself:i might be seeing a dream.wow.she is so innocent and afraid too right now.it seems an angel has landed from the sky.how can a person be so beautiful??
RAABTA plays in bg…..
he keeps looking at her and extends his hand.swar smoothly holds it and he gets her up and asks if she is ok??swara doesn’t reply and falls unconscious in his arms due to injury on head.he keeps looking at her.he removes hair from her face and picks her up any goes inside……
Next epi:swara meets laksh.swaragini enter college……
45 Comments
Nice start
thnx
nice dear! we hindus also can marry with our cousins but nowadays its very rare.. A small doubt this is swasan or swalak? Bcz i love swasan..
thnx…its swasan of crse
Nice,u should continue the track.
thnk u
Superb yaar
thnx
It’s too good… ✌✌??
thnx
awsome …
maya is cheap who insulted swara by calling her characterless…
n swasan first meet was awsome…
update nxt part fast
thnx a lot…yep her role in my ff is like that
in some cast cosins marry….
if it is mami daughter or son
Niceeeee
thnx
what about ragini????pls focus on her also
yeah soon I will
Swasan is cute together… Pls don’t make swara fall 4 sanskar soon…make sanskar as lovable & cute boy who love her and nok-jok ,and finally swara fall 4 him…
yeah thnx…I wont
superb epi..u r going very good dear..ya its true in most of Hindu’s like bramhin, vaishnav, marwadi etc cousins marriage are not allowed..but u have already planned yr story so u can carry on with that…angle my two humble request to u
1) plz dont make any love triangle among swasanraglak plz yar..
2) dont make swara as poor helpless girl I mean “Bichari” in ur ff..
I love ur writing skill very much..carry on dear..I am sure this ff is also going to be as superb as ur last one..
thnx a lot I have thought exactly the same as per ur wish
This maya ko ek tappad jaroor hein
aage ja k parhe ga
Wow!interesting…
waiting 4 next part…swasan cute..
thnk u:)
Angel..ua story line s ausm..2 b frank I ws waitin 4 ua 2nd episode..itz truly amazin…Keep goin..
thnk u dear
Sam MA dear chance less Sam MA thought super dear plz make as swasan
just didn’t get ur point
plz updates next fast
sans can marry Maya she can marry
nice
wants swasan
yeah it it swasan
Nice story
thnx
Nice…… I like swasan…
thnx me2
Angel..Dat was another ausome episode..Can’t wait 4 ua next update..Swasan 1st meeting sequence was mindblowing..Loved it..Keep going dear.. <3
thnk u so much
at last, you posted… i was waiting for it… loved it… please make it swasan and raglak… make swara fall for sanskar after his hard efforts… 😉 and please don’t use the short term as much as possible… it gives me a hard time to read… well going… all the best…
thnx ok dear
Can anyone tell me how to write ff here?
go to contzct us and post it will get published after sometime
Nice episode angel….nd cousins marriage is done in vaishnav’s also nd aldo in brahmins
thnx