Hi guys this my first ff on tere sheher mein. Hope u will like it.
Amaya:a hot,charming,beautiful,western girl. Daughter of sneha. Sister of rachita(rachi)and jasmine(jas).
Mantu:a handsome hunk. He z an orphan. He has a brother chintu.
Rohan: a simple,cute boy. Best frnd of jas.
Tilak: a cute boy and a flirt. Classmate of kangna.
Kangana:a beautiful girl.sister of ram a. Classmate of tilak
Uma: the villain of d serial. Childhood frnd of mantu.
All other characters r same.
The villain will be uma who loves mantu as . Uma and mantu were bf from childhood.
Hope u like it. Plz comment guys. Bcoz ur comment z d most important 2 me. And sorry for d mistakes.
Plz plz plz comment my frnds. And tell shall I continue or not.
I will update d next part tomorrow.
9 Comments
Sahima…plzz dont show UMA in ur ff…thanxxx for starting.
Nice intro
nice……
Nikhar dear. A villain z needed in d show. If there will be no villain then how the life will be of obstacles. I hope u can understand. Thank u so much for the comments.
Hope I WIL get more manya scenes here Atleast …… Thank u for starting this ff …. Continue
One suggestion rachita is called rachu not rachi ….
And mantu’s bro is chiklu not chintu ..
Or If u have given these names by ur own thn its ok u need not change …. U Cary on …. It’s great attempt
Thank u deva for telling d correct names. Actually I was a little bit confused whether it z child or chintu. And thanks for the comments.
Ur welcome ….
Sahima….it is awesome …continue ur writings….Waiting for next episode..