hello readers..this is my first one shot based on avniel. This is story is taken from tamil movie kaaka kaaka but not exactly..i changed some parts. Thank you Jasmine Rahul for giving me idea to write this story..
Inspector Niel khanna catches few criminals..
Niel: you guys can’t escape now..how dare you kill the whole chaturvedi family? See now you all will be imprisoned for your whole life.
One of the criminal shekhar: sir..you caught us but not our mastermind boss. Our mastermind boss is there to save us..and he won’t leave you too for arresting us.
Niel slaps shekhar..
Niel: i don’t fear even for tigers..i will soon catch your mastermind boss too.. wait and watch.
He send all those criminals into prison and locks them up..
Niel:DD..keep an eye on them always and make sure that no one visits these frauds..
Constable DD:sure sir..
The news reached the mastermind boss of those criminals and that person got angry like hell and banged the table..
Boss:how dare he..how dare that inspector arrest vidyut’s guys..he never knows about me..i will show what’s my power.
He smirks and plans something..
The days passed by..
One day a girl and her friend were going towards college..
Friend:hey Avni..today is our first day in college..iam really nervous..
Avni: don’t worry riya.. college life will be so fun and nice. You don’t need to get nervous..
Riya:maybe you are right..
As they were walking suddenly Avni hits Niel and she was about to fall but Niel holds her and they both meets with an eyelock..
Few seconds later Avni gets angry and pushes Niel away and shouts..
Avni: where are your eyes mister? Can’t you see and walk..
Niel:iam sorry for mistake. Actually i was concentrating on a guy in front of me..that’s why.
Niel in mind:ohh godd.. that guy would have been escaped now. This girl is wasting my time..
Avni:first concentrate on yourself then you can concentrate on others..understood mister?
Niel:yeah..thanks for a valuable advaise. Iam leaving..
Suddenly Niel notices the guy and he runs towards him while Avni notices him and gets confused..
Avni: riya..he is strange. Why is he concentrating on others and now see..he is running like mad..
Riya:even i felt strange. If it was some other men’s then they would have argued as they would not accept their mistake easily like him..
Avni:mad guy..ok come lets go..
They both go while Niel catches the guy and slaps him..
Niel:how dare you steal a purse from that lady?
Guy: who are you to ask me? If you are jealous..then you too go and steal..
Niel holds his collar and..
Niel:you are such a spoilt man..come i will deal you in station..
The guy gets shocked..
Guy:are you police?
Niel:yes..iam ACP Niel khanna..
Guy gets shocked again and..
Guy:sir..iam sorry sir.. please don’t take me to station..i will never do this again..
Niel stares him and takes the purse from him and..
Niel: you change as per humans not from heart..am i right? When you thought me as normal man..you were using your behaviour and when you got to know that iam police..you are acting to be good to escape..am i right?
Guy:sir..
Niel:see..iam advaising you one thing..you can be happy only with your money and not with other’s money. So even if you steal..that will not last long..so better change yourself and try to earn yourself. If you don’t change..then you will realise whatever i told one day..and one more thing if you earn yourself then your family will feel proud of you but If you do this dirty jobs..then it will be a shame on you and your family on this society..so remember this.
Niel goes leaving him while the guy gets suprised and thinks..
Guy in mind:sir..sir is so soft and nice. I never saw any police like him..every police either beat us and get money or they ask money and leave us but he made me understand the truth. Yes..i should make my family and myself proud..i will earn myself. Iam really grateful to this sir..
He goes..
After 2 days the guy have opened a tea stall near avni’s college and when Avni sees him she gets shocked and angry on him..
Avni:hey riya..see that guy have opened tea stall. He is the one who stole jewelleries from neighbour aunty and stole things from many people…i guess this tea stall he opened using those stolen things.
Riya:then come..we won’t leave him..
Riya and Avni pulls the guy and they start beating him..
Avni:how dare you..how dare you steal things from people? I know you would have surely opened this shop by selling those things only..
Guy:mam..please stop..it’s paining.. actually..
Avni:shut up..you deserve more pain as you did such work..
She beats more while the guy screams..
Guy:listen to me..mam…
Suddenly Niel comes there and stops Avni and riya from beating that guy while the guy gets relieved seeing Niel..
Niel:are you girls or goons? Why are you beating this innocent guy like this?
Avni:shut up mister. If he is innocent according to you..then i guess you are too thief like him and that’s why you are supporting him.
Guy:mam..yes i accept that i stole but now..
Avni:see..now you accepted you stole. Wait..I’ll get you jailed.
She takes her phone to dial police but Niel grabs her phone shocking Avni..
Avni:how dare you? Why do you want to irritate me always mister? Yesterday too you hit me and today you are grabbing my phone..do you want to save you thief friend? Then I’ll get you also jailed..and..
Niel shuts her mouth with his hands and both meets with an intense eyelock..
Sometime later Avni comes into senses and pushes Niel’s hands away angrily..
Avni:how dare you shut my mouth?
Niel: because you are talking too much like radio. Just stop a second and listen to him..then you will understand why iam trying to saving him.
Avni feels embarassed and stares the guy..
Niel: now tell the truth mister to this non stop radio station..
Avni makes a face seeing niel..
Guy:mam..i stole things from Many people. But this man made me understand the truth and so i changed myself into good human being and returned all the stolen tings to respective owners..even this shop i opened by selling my mother’s jewelleries only. If you don’t believe me..you can ask those people’s..
Avni and riya gets embarassed hearing it and they stare Niel while Niel smiles..
Niel: Don’t stare me like criminals..just ask sorry to that guy and go..
Avni and riya:sorry mister..
They leave while Niel Pats the guy and goes..
Some days later Niel catches a guy and beats him..
Niel: how dare you kill many innocent people?
Man:yes..i killed them because they gone against me. I was selling drugs but they got to know about me and was threatening me so i killed them..
Niel:wow..you told your other crime too. Now see.. what I’ll do..
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7 Comments
Thanks a lot for this os.hope Neil will catch vidyuth. Never expected avneil meeting to start with fight.eye lock was nice.without arguing with avni,Neil thanking her for her advise and running away to catch the thief was interesting. Surprised to see Ali as a thief.loved Neil telling him that we can be happy only with our earned money and if we steal the family won’t be proud but ashamed of us .glad that the thief decided to work and earn to make his family proud.again avni Riya misunderstood. But glad that finally all misunderstandings about ali got cleared.
Shocking that Neil killed the drug dealer who killed many people and he is vidyuth’s brother.shocking that even after Neil saved avni she was angry with him after knowing that Neil is a police avni apologizing was nice.surprising that Neil asked her not to change her identity if she is like this.neil telling the guy that he is not catching him for fine,bcz that can’t save his life,so he should buy a helmet now and ride the bike was nice. Neil is a very different police officer.vidyuth is so cruel to try to kill Neil’s small nephew.avni saving him was nice.avni shiv scene was lovely.riya trying to make avni understand that she loves Neil was nice.
Thank you so much for brief comment..
Avneil becoming friends was nice.nice to see Neil shiv visiting avni daily.neela maa was a surprise. Why avni skips lunch?Neil forcefully making avni eat and throwing water scenes were funny.neil’s falling in dizziness dialogues were funny.avneil dream scene was romantic. Avneil dream dance was romantic. Avni proposing Neil was lovely.sad that Neil rejected it for her safety.vidyuth shooting Neil…avni getting shot while saving Neil was sad.avni telling Neil that whether she lives or not doesn’t make any difference as she has no one was painful.neil saying that she has him and will be always there for her and confessing love was emotional. Neil vidyuth encounter was interesting. Vidyuth getting shot by the senior officer was unexpected. Glad that now avni is out of danger.avni telling Neil that she will take any risk to save him as she loves him was emotional. Forehead scene was emotional and sweet.
Thank you so much for brief description of this OS..💖☺️
Neil proposing avni and avneil dance were romantic. Feeding scene was cute.glad that avneil got married.consummation was very romantic. Nice to see avneil moments with their daughter mishti.superb pics.wish you had added ennai Konjam song also.
Thank you so much. I tried to add scenes but couldn’t as i dint have time..sorry..