It started with confusion Part 2
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Rishab got ready for the engagement.When he reached the venue,his eyes searched for Pratha.He saw Pratha in a red gown.He could not take his eyes off her.
Rishab thought:You have a magical power to pull me towards you.Otherwise how did you make an unromantic guy like me to be eager to marry you?
Seema:Let us start the ring ceremony.The to be bride should come and stand near the to be bride groom.
Rishab smiled thinking that Pratha would come and stand near him.
Mahek came and stood near him.Rishab was confused seeing her near him.
Rishab thought:Why is Mahek standing near me instead of Pratha?
Seema:You both exchange rings now.
Rishab was stunned.
Rishab:Why?
Seema:Have you gone crazy Rishab?You are the to be bride groom and and Mahek is going to be your fiancee.So you both should exchange rings.Right?
Rishab was shocked.
He thought:Mahek is my fiancee?
Suddenly he remembered Mahek wearing white top at the cafe.
He thought:That means Mahek was the girl chosen by mom and seeing Pratha also in the white top I mistook her for the girl who was chosen by mom.Oh my God!What will I do now?
Seema:Rishab and Mahek…exchange rings with each other .
Rishab who was broken completely tried hard not to show his pain outside.
He and Mahek exchanged rings with each other.
Mahek and Pratha’s Dadi Maina asked Pratha:Pratha,why are you looking sad even though it’s your sister’s engagement?You are supposed to be happy.But…
Rishab was watching them and hearing what the Dadi said.
He thought:Why Pratha is looking upset?I wish Pratha also has feelings for me like I have for her.
Pratha smiled.
Pratha:No Dadi.I am happy for my Mahek didi.
Pratha looked at Rishab and smiled painfully.
Pratha:Congratulations.
Rishab’s lips shivered:Thank you.
She walked away.
Mahek and Rishab were mentally disturbed.
Mahek:I have to tell the truth to Rishab.
Rishab:I have to talk to Mahek.Otherwise it will cause more damage.
They both messaged each other:I want to meet you.
Mahek and Rishab met each other.
Rishab:I want to tell you something.
Mahek:Even I want to tell you something.
Rishab:You say first.
Mahek:Actually..actually I love someone.ACP Vijay.
Rishab was shocked.
Rishab:Then why did you get engaged to me?
Mahek:Vijay is missing since last few months.Nobody knows where he is.All are saying that Vijay was cheating on me and he left the place to avoid me.But I did not believe it.I had faith that Vijay loved me truly and he will return.I asked some time.
Flash back….
Mahek’s father Shankar:Ok.I will give you 5 months of time.If Vijay does not come within 5 months,you will have to marry the person I chose.
Mahek:Thank you dad for giving me time.I am sure that Vijay will come within 5 months.
Shankar:But promise me that you will marry the boy of my choice if he does’nt return.
With hesitancy Mahek said:Yes..I will.
Shankar smiled.
Present…
Mahek was upset.
Mahek:But Vijay did not return.So I had to agree to get engaged to you.But I can’t accept you Rishab.I love only Vijay.
Rishab:So still you think that Vijay has not betrayed you.Then where is he now?Why is he not returning?Why is he not trying to contact you?
Mahek:I still trust him.I don’t know why he is not returning.All I know is I can only love Vijay and I belong only to Vijay.
Rishab:Don’t worry.We will find a reason to break this alliance and I will try to search for Vijay.
Mahek was relieved.
Mahek:Thank you Rishab.But what did you want to tell me?
Rishab:I also don’t love you.I agreed to get married thinking that the girl who was found for me was Pratha.
Mahek was shocked:What?
Rishab:Yes.
Mahek:Does Pratha love you?She did not tell me anything.
Rishab:I don’t think Pratha has feelings for me.I think she considers me only as her brother in law.
Mahek:Don’t conclude it so fast.We will observe Pratha first.What if she also likes you and is hiding her feelings because our marriage is fixed?
Rishab was stunned.
Rishab:Is it possible?
Mahek:I don’t know.Let’s see.
Rishab nodded.
Rishab-Mahek’s Sangeet function….
Music was played.
The couples started dancing.
Pratha could not tolerate Rishab-Mahek’s romantic dance.
Aaj phir tumpe pyar aaya hai
Aaj phir tumpe pyar aaya hai
Behad aur beshumar aaya hai (x2)
Toote toh toote teri baahon mein aise
Jaise shaakhon se patte be-haya
Bikhre tujhi se aur simte tujhi mein
Tu hi mera sab le gaya
Na fiqar, na sharam, na lihaaj, ek baar aaya
Phir zarre zarre mein deedar aaya hai
Phir zarre zarre mein deedar aaya hai
Suddenly she realized that it was her imagination and they were not dancing together.She was relieved.
Pratha thought:Why Rishab and Didi are not dancing with each other?
Suddenly she heard their conversation.
Mahek:Rishab…my legs are aching.So I can’t dance with you.
Rishab:It’s ok Mahek.You take rest.
Pratha was relieved.
She imagined dancing with Rishab.
Aaj phir tum pe pyar aaya hai
Aaj phir tum pe pyar aaya hai
Behad aur beshumaar aaya hai (x2)
Tu hi meri awaaragi
Tu hi duaa har shaam ki
Tu khamakha, tu laazmi
Tu hi razaa, tu hi kami
Aur tu hi wo, firaaq hai jisko
Suddenly she realized what she was doing.
She became guilty.
She thought:How can I think of having a romantic dance with my future jeeju?
Mahek:Pratha…Rishab has no dance partner.Will you please dance with him?
Pratha was shocked.
Pratha:What are you saying didi?He is your fiance.
Mahek:So what?It’s just a dance.Please Pratha.
Rishab looked at Pratha:Please Pratha…
Pratha nodded.Mahek and Rishab smiled.
Pratha and Rishab started dancing with each other.Pratha was looking at him emotionally.Mahek was observing Pratha.
Hai silsilon ne mere pass laaya
Hothon pe tere izhaar aaya hai
Hothon pe tere izhaar aaya hai
Behad aur beshumar aaya hai
She felt guilty and tried not to look at his face.But Rishab’s eyes were on Pratha.
Aaj phir tum pe pyar aaya hai
Aaj phir tum pe pyar aaya hai
Behad aur beshumaar aaya hai (x2)(Hate story2)
Pratha was not able to control her feelings and ran away.
Rishab:What happened to Pratha?
Mahek went near him.
Mahek:Still you did’nt understand it?Pratha loves you,but she is not able to face you because she thinks that she is sinning by loving her brother in law.
Rishab was stunned.
Rishab:What?Are you sure?
Mahek:I am her sister.I can understand her very well.Did’nt you feel anything from her side?
Rishab:During our dance when she looked at him,I could see love in her eyes for me.But I was confused as she did’nt express it in words.
Mahek:She will confess her love once she gets to know the truth.We will tell het truth.
Rishab:And I will tell her how much I love her.
They smiled.
Pratha was crying in her room.
Pratha:Why God?For the first time I fell in love.But he turned out to be my jiju.It’s difficult to consider the person I love as my brother in law.
Suddenly she heard a voice from behind.
“Then don’t consider me as your brother in law”.
She turned back and was shocked to see Rishab there.She found it difficult to face him as she realized that he had heard what she spoke about her feelings for him.
Rishab was very happy as Pratha also loves him like he loves her.
Rishab:I heard everything.Don’t consider me as your brother in law if you love me.
Pratha was stunned.
Pratha:What are you saying Rishab?
Rishab:I told you so because I am not your brother in law nor I am going to be your brother in law in future.Because your brother in law is Mahek’s life partner;inspector Vijay.
Mahek and Vijay came from behind surprising Pratha.
Pratha:Vijay!
Mahek:Yes.Vijay is back to me Pratha.You all thought that Vijay betrayed me.But I had full faith in my Vijay.My Vijay proved me right and he returned to me.
Pratha smiled with relief.
Pratha:But how did this happen?
Mahek:After getting engaged to Rishab,I told him everything about Vijay and how I was forced by dad to get engaged to him.
Rishab:We were on a mission.Inspector Vijay’s missing case.We were helping the police department secretly as he was kidnapped by terrorists.When Mahek told me about Vijay itself I realized that he was the same Vijay.But I did not tell anything to Mahek as I did not want to make her upset.But our army force successfully rescued Vijay and brought him to Mahek first.
Flash back….
Mahek and Vijay embraced each other crying.
Rishab:As I promised I found your Vijay.
Mahek:Thank you Rishab. But where were you Vijay?
Vijay:I was kidnapped by terrorists Mahek.
Mahek was shocked.
Vijay:I got scared whether I will never be able to see you again.But your love saved me.You love made Rishab save me.
Mahek became emotional.
Mahek:Vijay!
Shankar who came there was shocked to see Vijay.
Shankar:Vijay,you came back?
Mahek:Yes dad.I told you that Vijay can never betray me.
Vijay said emotionally:Mahek is my life.I can never think of leaving her.I would have been with Mahek if I was not kidnapped by terrorists.
Shankar was shocked:Terrorists?
Rishab:Yes uncle.Terrorists had kept him in captive.But luckily we could save him.
Shankar looked at Vijay and Mahek
Shankar:I was wrong in judging you.Sorry Vijay.You were right Mahek.Your love won.You both should unite.
Vijay and Mahek became very happy.
Mahek:Thank you dad.
Suddenly Shankar became dull.
Shankar:But Rishab…
Rishab:Don’t worry about me dad.I actually love Pratha.I agreed to marry Mahek because of some confusions.
Shankar was shocked.
Shankar:What?Does Pratha love you?
Rishab:I don’t know.Mahek and I have decided to continue our marriage drama to check whether Pratha has feelings for me or not.
Shankar was stunned.
Present…
Pratha was surprised.
Pratha:Dad also was a part of this drama.
Mahek:Yes.Now tell Rishab openly whether you love him or not.
Pratha became shy.
Mahek and Vijay left to give them privacy.
Rishab:Pratha…I don’t know whether I fell in love with you or not.But when I thought that you were the girl who was chosen by my mom I felt very happy and started considering you as my wife.
Pratha was surprised.
Pratha:What?You thought that I was the girl?
Rishab:Yes.Mom told me that the girl will be in a white top.So seeing you in the white top I mistook you for the girl and agreed to marry you.If I had known that Mahek was the girl,I would not have agreed to get married.
Pratha was very happy.
Rishab:Now I can tell openly that I love you Pratha.
Pratha became emotional.
Pratha:I did not know how I fell I love with you.When I saw you as Mahek didi’s guy,my heart broke.I did not know why.But later I realized that I had fallen in love with you.
Rishab smiled emotionally.
Rishab:I love you Pratha.
Pratha:I love you too Rishab.
They embraced each other emotionally.
Rishab Pratha and Vijay Mahek exchanged rings with each other at their engagement function.
Both the couples posed for photographs.
Rishab-Pratha and Vijay Mahek got married.
Rishab cupped her face emotionally and said:Our love story had a twist.But our married life will be simple and smooth.
Pratha:We will make our married life smooth by our love.
He nodded.
They shared an emotional eye lock.
Rishab and Pratha had a baby girl and they named her Prathana.They lived happily with their daughter Prarthana.
The end.
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5 Comments
Amazing story…. My favorite couple are mahek and vijay… U really like mahek’s trust on her love… And mahek’s loyalty towards rishabh…. And my always favorite pratha and rishabh…. Nice pics… Really like mahek and vijaay’s edits…
Thanks a lot.
AWeosme story!! I really liked the plot and the confession was just so good!!!! Mahek’s loyalty towards her love was so beautiful to read! SO happy to see that she got reunited with her lover and that Pratha and Rishab also came together!
Thanks a lot.please answer the questions also.
My favourite character was Rishab and favourite couple was Prarish and my fav scene was their confession!!!