A night in the winter , 4 friends make a plan to party in their guest house .
Saran, Sammy, Rony and Aashish
Aashish sit on the driving seat . and the others Saran sammy rony aashish are sit on the back seat.
Aashish: Today , Party is in my house , I am taking you all to my guest house
Saran: yaar , But tomorrow, I have some important work , I need to go , we should take party but some other time.
sammy: Why are you saying this. This is the day. When He is giving us party, The boring person ever , Mr Aashish no party person and you want to miss this chance
Rony: Hey aashish yaar waha I need food lots of non-veg kabab Yaar by touching his shouder , If this can be arranged by you then take me in.
Saran: Bhukhar , Tu hamesha khaane ke baare me hi sochta rahiyo.
And they all are talking with each other , Aashish is driving in the jungle area in the night.
He stop the car immediately .
Aashish: crrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr.
Stop the car immediately.
Oh shit man.
he beat his stearing wheel and grinned his teeth and said Damn. Today this is going to happen.
Saran: what happened dude. Why you stop the car.
Aashish : Just see this .
Others: What What What ???All are asking one by one.
Aashish: Its a tea point came in between 2 ways are going to the farm house.
One is left , One is right .
It is possible to go to the farm house by going both of the ways.
On the right side a Board is watched by them written this way is closed under construction work is going on there.
Beware , A danger sign board they all seen.
Sammy: Shit man, these bloddy persons , today they want to do all the work.
Saran: Its ok Aashish we came some other time ,I think we need to go now I have to complete my important work.
Rony: Just shut the crap. You and your important work.
Take the left side. We can reach to your farm house from left side too. Aashish just take a left.
Aashish: Well I can take it , we never tried to go to left side since we start visit to farm house for the last 25 years nobody take a left side don’t know why.
Sammy: Why Is this place haunted. Ha aaa haa aaa haa ahaaaa haaaa. and he smiled like a ghost acted like.
Aashish: shut up you idiot. I think may be the roads are old and some other reason . Just leave it let’s go to the left.
And this is his big mistake that he start going left at the night
What’s is going to happened with them they don’t have any single idea about it .
What will be going with them.
This night is not the night they are not going to forget this night ever in their nightmares even.
Heeee hee ehee hee and
that’s it for today.
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Hey dearieeeeeeeeeeeeeees Iwrite in hush hush , coz Never think twice.
I really don’t know what I write.
Coz the reason to write is just make my manha roma, laxmi harisha tasnim, hayathi, harani, and the other readers to write write your name in the list and start writing a horror flick . I am saying to my dearieeeeeeeeeeeeees my lovieeeeeeeeeeees plzzzzzzzz . I start this one .
You all said naa You can write 2 to 3 episodes but not the whole story ok then It will be a short story but you will enjoy it. Love u all.
giving you song but later dearieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees now I am not going to listen I want you all to write.
I am so sorry if you not like this story but please don’t start cursing me I just write this one to say something to my friends coz I want them to write. I know I am worst writer but please comment anything but please don’t curse me please.
Credit to: Nisha
195 Comments
omg nisha……..i truly love it……it’s awesome fabulous……thank u nisha for writing this story…………..
Google+ idea is good but i have no gmail account. And it needs contact no also.
But i have an other of chatting without moderation. Desi tv fan page. Theres no moderation.
Nisha how r u?
Tasnim tumi kothay? Onek din dhore tomer sathe thik moto kotha hoy na. Tumi kon grade e poro? Tumi to bangladeshi tai na? Tumi ki jano bangladeshi ra onek hridoyban hoy. Thik tomar moto. Amar sathe jokhon khushi kotha bolo. Tumi toh amar onek bhalo bandhubi tai na?
@NATASHA– YE V KOI pucne ne ka bat Nisöndehe ami tmr 1ek 1ek valo bandobi infact am glad n lucky 2 made frndship with u guys,,
Yes sweeto am BANGLADESHI ,n am in 11 grade n i rmmbr u r in 12 grade api…..thik e 1ek din theke valo vabe kotha hoy na missed u too much n sb smy ami tomar sathe kotha ble 1ek kusi hoi
hmm My country.s people r vry much hospitable n friendly simple ei to….tmr kotha r ki blbo ur blessed api n alwas be happy like dis luv u dry sooooooo… Much….tmi kemn aco..?
@Tasnim me too lucky to get u as my friend.
Ami bhalo acchei. Tomake kai bollo ami 12th grade e? Ami 12th grade er chaye choto grade e pori.
Tomar district e sheet kamon? Ami to kulfi hoye jacchi.
*@NATASHA-1EK age tmi e blecile dym er page a thakakalin smy hyto vul hote pare…
amr distrct a sheet mtamti khub akta besi na abr km o na ur cntry north a to vry serious sitution by d way 4rm wich pradesh u n ur real grade ki?
Cool Nisha… Loved it.. You are seriously awesome…
brity kaha ho tum yaar. sach me miss kar rahi hu tumhe. are u interested in joining group of manmarziyaan.
Fabulous Nishu!
So this is like haunting series nishu dr… yeah i like it…. how r u nishu…. loveeeeee u my dr musical buddy
wow awsome..like horror movie starting… u know wt i love horror stories
hello dearieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees. Its me again. .
Yes , songs are missing in this update . Well its a short story .
Actually even I don’t think about one like it or not you know when It comes to writing I am like a child in front of you all.
But what makes me start writing this one is you all. coz I try I try so much that you say yes to writing. but you all are not saying it so this is my way to heard a yes from you all.
Come on now. Say it naa.
See this story has so many mistakes but still I have tried something out of my box coz I want you all to have a place a place when I wish to meet you or want to say something so I wrote a message of you with such a releif that you are or you were or you will read it definitely.
this is what I want.
Who care about how when what is the story . I mean. YOu all are fab I read all your comments regularly we all are beginners in this line we all are not perfect. See me I am the worst amongst all. See the above writing even I think a kg person write better than what I write . Whatever. Even I write in few minutes this one while chatting with you yesterday . I didn’t even think but just do it that’s is the reason I write a dangeroous step.
Coz I even don’t think it at all. jUst drrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr like this .
Whatever it is I just want by this Practical example of mine to make you all say yes to writing. We all are friends make your place here so that we can reach to you whenever whereever we all love each other but still we are like banjaras here and there doesn’t collect in one place yaar .
So please someone plz start writing. Horror is just an example and it is enough to write 2 to 3 episodes in this jonour.
thank u nisha meri jaan, a lot ,
Miss u a lot dear.
naty I am fine dear, Me too facing the same problem doesn’t have any gmail id.
Thanks brity tanya dear love u both by heart dearieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees.
Hey hayathi dear love u loads dear, this just happens and this one is small too. love u dear and miss u a lot.
Oh my nisha is giving a haunting story???????
Nisha I reading it for u bcoz I HV never tried my hand on horror jonour.
nisha ab horror se daraane ka iraada hi. kyun bachon ki jaan le rahi ho.
plz hamari kahani update karo na jaldi se. plz.
nats, desitvbox pe mmz page hi nahi hain.
even if u don’t give contact number u can make gmail account. plz see n make one for ur buddies. plz. u don’t need number yaar or the existing email id too. just make one gmail id.
Manha exactly I was thinking this….they never asked about contact number….I have no idea….plzz try nishu and natsy to make 1 gmail id….love uuuu….???
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Nishuuuuu….a horror story….noo no doesn’t suit on you….but u can still continue with it if there is aradhika and nesam…..but I’m very very scared from these types of stories….I turn off the tv when something like this come….plzz don’t make it soo scary….I have to sleep early and peacefully at night to start my another day….love u and update my story fast….???
One lovee?
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Hi nisha .Nice yaar, horror stories .wow I like horror stories very much and continue our ardhika story also.
Nisshhaaa !! Horror flick !! Good start dear ….
Left turn !! It’s wrong thing done ?!
Baby I like your musical romance more than the horror … This is also nice … Try adding some here too and it’ll be just WOW!! Gumnaaam hai …. Lolz what am I doing ?!
Anyways dear I loved it !! Continue plz … Update soon .. And the other one too
Love you loads .. Tc .. Keep smiling… Bear hug
@nisha.. Oh my lovly i post a vry big cmnt 4 u dn.t knw tu whr it is tely udates plz update it
Tht was an awesome surprise …… Thank u actually I was searching for power couple videos and u got it for me ….. Thank u love u the most
Nishu NVR EVR tell tat u r te west writter……ur story is jst fabulous yar… . …u scared me 2 te core.. ……nw I wonder he I shall go 2 sleep ………….I ve a doubt:am I ur frnd?????I mean do u want me as a frnd….i want u all….i jst askd whether it s reversible or NT………
@NISHA., U DN.T KNW Wat u r dryyyy luv u too much dr…..
oh dry am waiting eargly 4 d day when u cm in BANGLADESH SWEETO I MUST WANNA HAVE A DINar with u dry…by d way when i wil visit india hw cn i meet with u abhi tak to tmne apne pata hai bataya nahi to keise dhondogi bt mein dilse tume dhondogi my lovly sweeto,.,.
$ry mein shairy nahi karsakti… Aur gor se sunia ap jo v likhengi wo humare dil pe ayegi ap dil me jo hein hum sab k samjmein aya
@mansi…ati hu to kavi kavi tmloko lia dil k sakun ko lia ha ha ha,…tm v to bht kam milte ho bat d nahi hote.,boht mis karte hu nenu nachevu a lot
@manha…hai dry hw r u? I cn.t join ur ida dr….luv u dry or ek bat u dn.t knw bengali its n.t a matter hum language se bat nahi karte yr dilse bat kartehain n nenu nachevu nuvu lot lot lot…
@astha…year of course we r frnd dry…i dn.t knw malayalam do u teach me it dry i want to learn lovly…
@ameena… Hw r u cn u plz tel me hw u add such kind of sign ?
@hayathi…@brithy,,.@hareem…@richa…@ritu…hw r u allbudies?
Tanks…….did u mean u wanna learn Malayalam?????????
hyyy dr wer add emojiss dr nd m rokinggg wbu????
Heyyyyyyy Nisha…my sweeeeeeeetu..
thankuuuuuuuuuuu dear…for a horror one…
Its awesooooooooooooooome fantabulous..mindblowing..
I love reading haunted books n watching horror movies n shows..but missing our musical romantic epi of Aradhika…
Continue dear..BUT
Update sOOn dear..aradhika part..
Waiting eagerly..
Love u loads
@manha saw ur comment at last epi of this ff.. Well my examzzz were good by grace of Almighty n ur good wishes my sweeeeeeet friend…
Love u loooadz
Hey dearieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees don’t worry its not like seriously a scary one .
What happened ??Today horror stories are more like laughing on the horror content and less like a real horror I really miss the horror content of before times , The old horror.
Loved it to the core. But nevertheless.
Its a short so take a chill wala pill and don’t worry as i said its a short one and I don’t forget about rads story but time is heavy on me dearieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees me too love aradhika and all of you. that’s why take time to came here anyhow.
Hey ritu don’t worry meri jaan I know it is ok ok but just a short one at least we can talk iin the comment section .
but seriously miss u meri jaan.
Keep smiling my dear lots of hugs for my musical ritu. love u a lot.
hey manha dear no no bacho ko darake nahi marna par haan tumhe ye kehna tha that please make a permanent place of your existence so that whenever or whereever I at least reach to you meri jaan. Please write anything you want anything but please start writing we can talk there we can chat there and we can reach to each other luv u a lot.
and yes I will try to make gmail accoount well I try it earlier but it needed a contact no. I try it again surely meri jaan if I could make it then for sure coming to g+ account. I am also love to be there.
Hey ammu meri jaan why are you scared don’t be meri jaan. Scary stories are making these days to make people laugh ,Even I scared before so many years when I see a horror flick old horror story. But these days horror is not horror. for sure.
But if then also you will get scaredthen I am there for you meri jaan. always love u ammu. and yes 18 hearts wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow . ”
Well I love u dear sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo mch .
Meri jaan take care of yourself and yaaa do you even read the examiner waala line what I had left last on my page for you, I wrote something dear. tell me if you read . I love u so much .
keep smiling Once a friend always a friend.
hey laxmi yes dear I like ka toh pata nahi but yes few horror stories i like but thoda thoda kunjam kunjam. Love u laxmi dear always by heart. Keep smiling meri jaan. tight hugs for you . love u .
You are right shree it is a wrong turn but what to do my lovieeeeeeeeeeeeeees doesn’t say yes to writing they said what we write and we just can write 2to 3 epi but nt more than that so I start wriing this one . just to make then see then how bad I am then also I start this doesn’t care about anything so at least I have a place where all can reach and for sure I read and reply . so they also have a place of their own where we can reach and meet them . That’s all dear.
and more than that read the comments of readers they all are so good why we forget we all are readers here actually . We even are silent readers at least they speak before than us. and they can write so good. I don’t know about g+ idea is successful or not we all are trying to reach and make it successful but make an another option as tu naa at least we all friends can be gather to each others house tell me how can you find a reader friend anywhere it is difficult coz of the moderation time taken by tu. But anyways I write what my heart says dera. Sorry to make you bore But felt light to talking to you meri jaan. Love u a lot .always Once a friend always a friend keep smiling always.
Thanks devga you like it dear. love u so much. and miss u a lot. how r u dera. and yes sanjeeda yesterday epi was awesome check it today its actually awesome to watch her as power couple.
Love u devga where is pathanga doesn’t seen her anywhere , Love to her also. She is also fab.
Love u both keep smiling Once a frioend always a friend.
hey aastha I can make you my friend on the very same day when I read your comment first time. I always write what my heart says here. and make you all each and everyone my friend.
YOu are close to my heart dear. and doesn’t you read on the last page the 2 comments for you meri jaan. my father is also the same. and yes I want you as my friend by heart .
That’s it itni si aastha hai hope you complete it. dear. My sweetheart. Thanks for liking it dear. Its a short story I also just write it while talking with you all. Love u by heart always aastha never think that you are not a friend you are even a special friend. I always expecting to meet you even. I am vbery happy even you start writing . hey is it yours who am I , doesn’t know actually but love u by heart keep smiling always meri jaan . Tight hugs for you . Love u always.
oNce a friend always a friend.
hey dear I also want to visit some day and don’t think I forget you you are my dil ka tukda each and every name are like my heart dear. I never forget anyone here. and you are toh my bangladeshi mishti You and me to wait for coming to bangladesh but don’t worry I have something to do to heal all the feelings a surprise not a big one please don’t expect much a little wala some chota sa nanha sa munna sa surprise dear for you too. Right thing on right time meri jaan. love u always.
Meri jaan love u by heart keep smiling always .
Once a friend always a friend.
hey hareem meri jaan how r u my soul
I really misssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss you by heart loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee u sooooooooooooooooooo much. meri jaan.
hey hareem don’t forget about aradhika but just time is heavy on me for sure get the update dear. and love u allways by heart thanks for motivating for this horror flick well don’t think much this is just a short one.
love u always by heart dear. How r u . Lvoe u always.
Hey hareem tell me something about the culture of your state don’t tell me which state but at least you can share something for sure
keep smiling always once a friend always a friend.
same
Laxmi I want to know more yaar I am very much excited dear. to get to know about moer wooooooooooooooooooow you tell that in your side every girl home name nick name is laxmi like goddess laxmi wooooooooooooooooooow your family love u so much dear. they respect the girl child a lot . Today its a big need for that . I want to know more . hope I get some little heart of yours to know
Love u always dear. Keep smiling my laxmi harisha Oncea friend always a friend.
Nisha as u said don’t tell name of the state..but u will come to know about it..indirectly
The culture of my state is an indian culture..has its roots in the Hindi and Urdu literature , music , fine arts and cinema..
The capital of my state has several beautiful historical monuments bara imambara chota imambara ,etc
The city in which I live gives access to 3 World Heritage sites – Agra fort Fatehpur Sikri nd Taj Mahal..my state include holy cities on the banks of sacred rivers Ganges n yamuna..
It is one of the top tourists destination in india ..
The state is home to very old tradition in dance n music..
U asked something to share but it is tooo many things…
If u like to share culture of ur state then plzz do tell I’m very excited to know..
Love u looadzz
Hi nisha.Yes my family loves me soooo much.Mein mere family me sabse choti bacchi hoon aur mere papa ki favourate hoon mein .What do you want to know about me, ask me I will give all answers.OK..till then.. take care ..bye nisha.
Tanku nishu n sry if I hurt ur feelings….
hey hareem happy dear your exams are going good dear love u loads dear all the best for the next dear.
Nisha thank uuuuu dear well my exams r over yesterday nd now I’m free..
But ur wish will help me ..when I will see my report..
Love u loads dear nd I’m really happy u asked about my state..
HELP! HELP! HELP! HELP! HELP!
Guys pls help me. But before that pls question urself if u really consider me as ur friend or not. If u really consider me as ur friend then pls help me out.
Actually in my college a compition is going to start and its compulsary to perticipate. What one has to do is decided by chit system. And do u know what came in my chit? Singing.
After hearing this i was totally shocked. Without saying anyword i ran from that selection place in fear. What shall i do? I think its not good to skip it as exam marking will also depend on it. But i also cant sing. My voice of singing isnot good. I fear if i will sing on the stage then audiences and the judges will throw their sandals towards me. I even fear of high stages.
Now what shall i do? Pls nisha, tasnim, manha, nisha2, ameena, roma, hareeem,aastha, devga, hari, shree, tanya, kirti, hayathi, brity, richa, and my friends pls help me. At least give me some suggestion.
Hey Natasha don’t worry be cool and u r worried about ur voice right, I think ur voice also so sweet as ur heart dear.First select one song which suites ur voice n easily u and everyone can connect. So don’t be panick .Enjoy ur singing and compitation.
Achooo … This happens when you get tensed .. You have stage fear? If yes, plz try to get rid of it ASAP… Don’t worry dear, you’ll do well… Just get yourself relaxed and go give a banging performance… A performance that would make ppl go WOW and come back with that smile on your face which would make you feel so satisfied and proud of yourself….
All the best dear … When is it ?!
Love you loads .. Tc.. Keep smiling .. Bear hug (this would actually help a lot )
Manha, theres already a fan page of mmz in desitvbox.
http://www.desitvbox.me/manmarziyan-fan-page-1/
Theres no moderation problem.
Let me tell u i have no email. Even through which email id im writing in this page doesnt exist. Im helpless of writing here a valid email. Because in my phone email system doesnt work. So i cant make gmail id. But u can think about desitvbox idea.
@Tasnim tai? Ami eta bolechilam? Mone hoy typing error hoyechilo. Sorry.
Ami tomar kachei thaki.
@Nisha i will really meet u when i come to ur area. U too come in my country. I will make u eat doibora. U will like it.
*@NATASHA o m g Allah amr mne hocce tmi BANGLADESHI dis isn.t fair ami khub rag kreci tmi taratri blo realy tmi kothay thako kn district doibora to amdr deshe famoush joldi blona natasa tmr district n clg er nam r jano amr o no email i use a fake 1 ha ha ha joldi blo….
Hmmmmm…..so my natsy in big problem…..my sis in problem and I don’t help her…impossible….
But dear….first tell me that r u allowed to sing any song?….I mean hindi english…any song….
Don’t focus a lot on ur voice……in singing ur heart should be pure….so no matter what song it is…..u won’t even realize that how lyrics will come out ur mouth once u learn it….what is favorite song??….if it is easy for you then choose that 1….believe in ur inner self and I’m sure u can sing any song in the world…..if I can do anything then let me know my dear…..
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Nats oh why r u so worried. Are yaar girls ki voice sweet hi hoti hain bas ham log khud ko underestimate karte rehte hain. Ameena theek keh rahi hi. Pehle ek acha song select karo. Like ur fav, u hav listened it so many times so that u don’t hav to again learn the lyrics. And when u sing with heart then everything will be great. We can do anything. So don’t worry u gonna rock my girl.
Natasha just close ur fear factors and think abt happy moments in ur mind while u r in stage …. Think abt all ur besties and moments with thm …. also select a song wich is comfortable and easyily likable by all …..
I knw u can perform in the best way ….
Soon waiting for ur wining news ….
Hey natty ,dnt wry…….dnt tink -vely ……u cn sing…….any1 cn sing………bt if u still feel tat ur voice iis nt good n weak,try out sme low pitch or medium sngs……..cn u sing any Lang???????eng??????if so I’ll suggest sme: 1000 yrs(breakng dawn),back 2 December (Taylor swift),beautiful soul (Jessie McCarthy),who says(Selena Gomez),bad day……….im nt tat fami wth eng sngs