Hai friends…Thanks everyone for your supports.This is the first chapter of my ff.
It starts with a cute little boy proposing a girl.The girl insulted the boy by making fun of him infront of her friends.Its hurts him a lot.Thereafter he was not seen in the school.After 5 days,in the same school,a boy is sharing his chocolate to his best friend(a girl).He then said her a bad news that he and his family are going to shift from Delhi to Mumbai after 2 days.The boy and the girl are crying together.
After 7 years…
A college is shown and two girls are entering to the college together.They are swara and Ragini.
Ragini: I will go and meet principal.
Swara:Fine!I will go to our class.
Ragini leaves.
Precap: Some seniors are ragging Swara. A hot and handsome boy also will be there with those seniors.
Guys,how is the starting of chapter 1!l have decided the pairs but dont worry iam sure that you will find it different and interesting..
Sorry for grammatical mistakes.
24 Comments
Nice keep it up but pls make it swasan
nice
keep swasan yaar
nice bt make it large nd pairs shd be swasan nd raglak
pls make it swalak
Mmmm nice dea….i like it..pair???
nice. .
pls can u make it lengthy. .
pairs. .?
swasan pls
Nice … Make it lil more longer possible ….. pls make it swasan n raglakk
Nice but make it little long
Thanks jyoyi,sravya,pinky,pavani,kriya,karthi,akku and AD musica for your comments…And ofcourse i will make it lengthy.
Nice..Please make it large…and make it swasan and raglak…
Nice one…..
Nice make it long
Swasan
Swasan!! Only if swasan then I’ll read..
Amy,
I liked it, but make it a bit long babe.
The starting is good; hoping this story is gonna be different.
Keep it up, dear.
Love,
Vinnie AMR xoxo
Pls yar swalak
nice dear long updates plz swasan plz
nice yaar…
Thanks surbhi,priya,keerthi,devi,
meena,kritika,vinnieAMR,rithik,and maya for your comments.Dont worry about the pairs because there will be a lot of twists..
Thanks surbhi,priya,keerthi,devi,
meena,kritika,vinnieAMR,rithik,and maya for your comments.Dont worry about the pairs because there will be a lot of twists..
I will make next episode a long one..
swalak plzzzzz
Nice.. Elaborate more..
Thanks everyone for your comments.