Mujhse Dosti Karoge! (Will you be my friend!) Part 2
Ibadat and Mannat went to meet Subhan.
Subhan:Mannat,what’s the important matter that you want to tell me?
Mannat:Subhan,I hid a very important matter from you.I have not chatted with you Subhan.It was Ibadat who chatted with you.You love me because of the chat.Right?
Subhan was shocked.
Her eyes were full of tears.
Mannat:This guilt is killing me.
I did’nt want to fool you purposefully.I was lazy to type after I was down with illness.But trust me.My love for you never changed.But if you loved me because of the chat,you loved the wrong person.The person you loved is Ibadat.
Ibadat became emotional.
Subhan got fed up and raised his voice holding her hand tight:Stop it.
Mannat held his hand crying:Subhan!
He cupped her face in his palm and said emotionally:
I did’nt love Ibadat at all.I loved only you.Did you understand?
Mannat-Subhan shared an emotional eye lock.
They embraced each other tearfully.
Ibadat smiled emotionally.
They broke the embrace.
Subhan:Mannat…I did not love you because of the chat.Because I was not the one who chatted with Ibadat.Though Dua aunty suggested the idea of chatting,I was so busy with my studies that I could not chat with you.
Ibadat and Mannat were shocked.
Ibadat:What nonsense are you saying Subhan?Then who chatted with me?
Subhan:You remember my my best friend Anubhav?He used to play with you in childhood.
Ibadat:Of course yes.How can I forget Anubhav?He was my dearest friend.I was sad when he left for America.
Subhan:It was Anubhav who chatted with you.He was my neighbour in America.
Ibadat was shocked.
Ibadat:Anubhav was the one who chatted with me?
Subhan:Yes.You both used to talk about music.Right?Do you think I am someone who writes songs?I can sing,but I can never compose songs.
Ibadat remembered Anubhav composing songs in childhood
and she enjoying listening to his songs.
Ibadat:But why did he use your name?
Subhan:Because of complex.He felt that because of his geek look you won’t like him.
Ibadat was shocked.
She thought:Now I understand why Subhan is addressing Mannat as Mannat itself instead of Gungun.Because Gungun was the name which Anubhav gave me.
Subhan:Please don’t hate Anubhav for it.
Ibadat:No.Never!I loved the one who chatted with me and it is Anubhav.I love Anubhav.I don’t care about his looks.
Subhan smiled.
Mannat was shocked.
Mannat:Ibadat,you loved Subhan mistaking him for your chat friend?Why did you hide it from me?
Ibadat and Subhan felt awkward.
Ibadat:Because you also love Subhan.But now it does not matter as it became clear that I love Anubhav,not Subhan.
Subhan:Exactly.Anubhav also loves Ibadat.
Mannat and Ibadat smiled.
Subhan:Anubhav is going to come here to meet you Ibadat.To reveal you the truth that he was your chat friend.Finally he decided to end his false life of lies.
Ibadat smiled.
Subhan-Mannat were in the dining room.
Subhan:Mannat,I prepared lunch for you.You taste and see how it is.
Mannat:Without tasting it itself I know that it’s delicious as it is filled with your love.
They shared a romantic eye lock.
Mannat:You feed me Subhan.
Subhan:You are childish.
Mannat:Yes,I am.But now I want to be fed by you to immerse in romance.
He smiled.
Subhan:I will feed you.But you have to feed me also.
Mannat smiled:Naughty boy!Sure.
He smiled and started feeding her with his hand.
She also fed him back.
Subhan-Mannat’s engagement ceremony….
Anubhav reached there.Subhan became very happy and hugged him.
Subhan brought him to Ibadat.
Subhan:This is your Gungun.And Ibadat..this is your Anubhav.
Anubhav and Ibadat looked at each other emotionally.
Subhan left from there giving them privacy.
Mannat told Subhan:I hope everything ends well for Anubhav and Ibadat.
Subhan:Yes Mannat.
Ibadat:Anubhav…Subhan had told me that you were my chat friend.
Anubhav:Yes.Subhan told me that circumstance made him say the truth to you and Mannat.Gungun..I want to tell you everything.Subhan was so busy that he was not mailing Mannat.So on his behalf I sent a mail to Mannat.But after that I realised that it was not Mannat,but you who was chatting.So I continued chatting with you as since childhood days I have a soft corner for you.
Ibadat:How did you recognize me?
Anubhav:Because of the way you spoke in words.You were poetic since childhood and I knew your likes.
Ibadat:But I failed to recognize you.I am sorry.
Anubhav:It’s okay Gungun.
Ibadat:Why do you call me ‘Gungun’?
Anubhav:Because since childhood you are calm,warm and musical.It’s music which made us good friends.Right?You did not like me calling you ‘Gungun’?
Ibadat smiled.
Ibadat:No,I love this name which you gave me.
He smiled.
Anubhav:Gungun,I know that though I am from America,I look like a typical traditional Indian.I may not suit a beautiful stylish woman like you.So I am willing to leave.
Ibadat became emotional and called him:Anubhav!
She went closer to him and held his hand.
Ibadat:Don’t say like that Anubhav.If you did’nt have this inferiority complex,you would not have hidden your identity from me.I like you as you are.You are very handsome.Music is your beauty.And I love you.
Anubhav looked at her emotionally:What?
Ibadat:Yes Anubhav.I really love you.
Anubhav:I love you too Gungun.
They shared an intense eye lock.
Subhan-Mannat exchanged rings at the engagement ceremony.
Anubhav and Ibadat went to a restaurant for dinner.
Anubhav:This is our first dinner date.
Ibadat:Yes.The atmosphere is romantic too.
Anubhav:The first date has to be very romantic.Right?
She blushed.
Anubhav and Ibadat were spending time at the balcony.
Ibadat:Anubhav,we became close because of music.Why don’t we cherish music?
Anubhav smiled:Yes Gungun.Music fills our life with romance.
She smiled.
Anubhav started singing looking at her.
Jaane Dil Mein Kab Se Hai Tu
Jab Se Main Hoon Tab Se Hai Tu
Mujhko Mere Rab Ki Kasam
Yaara Rab Se Pehle Hai Tu
Yaara Rab Se Pehle Hai Tu
Jaane Dil Mein Kab Se Hai Tu
Jab Se Main Hoon Tab Se Hai Tu
Mujhko Mere Rab Ki Kasam
Yaara Rab Se Pehle Hai Tu
Ibadat also started singing.
Jaane Dil Mein Kab Se Hai Tu
Jab Se Main Hoon Tab Se Hai Tu
Mujhko Mere Rab Ki Kasam
Yaara Rab Se Pehle Hai Tu
Haan Yaara Rab Se Pehle Hai Tu
They started romancing while singing.
Raahein Chale Na Chale Chalte Hai Yeh Raaste
Aao Chalo Ruk Gayee Raaste Mein Kis Waaste
Mein To Khadi Hoon Yahin Yaar Mila Jab Se Hai Tu
Jaane Dil Mein Kab Se Hai Tu
Jab Se Main Hoon Tab Se Hai Tu
Mujhko Mere Rab Ki Kasam
Yaara Rab Se Pehle Hai Tu
Haan Yaara Rab Se Pehle Hai Tu
Naadaan Ho Jaate Hai Anjaan Ho Jaate Hain
Ek Dusre Pe Chalo Qurbaan Ho Jaate Hai
Tu Hai Jahan Main Hoon Wahan Mujhko Pyaara Sab Se Hai Tu
Jaane Dil Mein Kab Se Hai Tu
Jab Se Main Hoon Tab Se Hai Tu
Mujhko Mere Rab Ki Kasam
Yaara Rab Se Pehle Hai Tu
Jaane Dil Mein Kab Se Hai Tu
Jab Se Main Hoon Tab Se Hai Tu
Mujhko Mere Rab Ki Kasam
Yaara Rab Se Pehle Hai Tu
Haan Yaara Rab Se Pehle Hai Tu(MDK).
Subhan-Mannat and Anubhav-Ibadat got married.
Anubhav-Ibadat romanced passionately.
Subhan-Mannat romanced and slept in each other’s arms.
The End.
Thank you very much for supporting this SS.Please give a detailed comment on this part.Please write your favourite scenes,favourite jodi,favourite character and why you liked that character the most.
There are many FFs on the movie Mujhse dosti Karoge.But in all the FFs the end game is just like the movie.I had not thought in a different way about the end game.But my friend Kavitha said that if she writes on MDK she will unite Hrithik-Kareena.But she could not write her version till now and I could not guess how she will unite Hrithik Kareena in her version.Suddenly I got an idea to unite Hrithik Kareena and penned down my version on Subhan Mannat Ibadat Anubhav.
4 Comments
Lovely story. I loved everything here. Thank you for bringing AnuGun here which was unexpected and I am happy with that. Long back I wrote a story for them and this one suddenly reminded me that. Yesha is a wonderful actress but I always admired her as Muskaan. But liked her as Gungun too and she was good as Devi in Jeet Gayi toh Piya More also. My favourite character in this story actually I liked both Mannat and Ibaadat. Because both are very true and they both decided not to hide the truth of chats from Subhaan. Favourite scene is Mannat telling truth to Subhaan and telling he loved her because of chats and Ibaadat is his love and Subhaan denying it. He confessing his feelings that he loved Mannat not Ibaadat and he loves her truely not because of any chats. That scene was the best scene of this whole story. Ibaadat realizing Anubhav was the one who chatted with her and he hide his identity because of the inferiority complex was heart touching. Ibaadat also telling she loves Anubhav and Anubhav’s arrival was so wonderful. Anubhav recognized her earlier itself because of her poetic way of wordings was lovely. Their conversation was so beautiful. Favourite jodi – both Subhaan and Mannat and AnuGn are so much lovely here. So I liked both of them equally here. I haven’t watched the movie fully but I totally loved this version of story which you wrote. Hope one day your friend also be able to write her version.
Thank u so much.Even I am waiting for my friend’s version.
I found this here.
https://www.tellyupdates.com/path-crossers-anugun-two-shots-shot-two-love-season-third-story/
U did not write on these pairs though u said u will.
I know I told about so many pairs which had less ffs or stories. Please do wait for them. I will try to update all stories one by one. Glad you got AnuGun from my story.
Have you watched Naatho Unna Prema telugu movie of Jagapathi babu, Laya and Gajala? If possible please write story based on that movie also. There is no need of hurry. You can take your own time and you can select any pairs whom you like.