Twinkle is wearing a red lehnaga. With black eyeliner and red lipstick. She has done light makeup. She is looking over gorgeous. She comes to usha for taking the jewelry. Usha says twinkle u are my bahu I know but make one thing very clear I dont like you as manohar was suffering bcoz of u and ur mother is a murderer. Twinkle says no. Usha raises hand in order to stop and she goes. Twinkle wipes her tears. She comes to room . Kunj comes wearing a blue and cream coloured knee length kurta and blue patiala pant. He says twinkle u are crying. Ur eyeliner will get disturbed. Twinkle laughs. A girl comes wearing a pink suit she is maya. Kunj says maya. They hug. Maya says how rude kunj u didn’t called me in ur wedding. Usha called me. Kunj introduces maya with twinkle. They say hi . Maya says I missed u so much baby. Kunj says I missed u too. They go. Twinkle thinks how much she was getting close to kunj. I think she is second alisha. But this tym I wont let this happen.
Scene 2
Twinkle sits on a sofa and everyone starts the rituals. Kunj is drinking coffee with maya . They have one cup and two straws in it. They laugh and enjoy. Twinkle sees this and fumes. Yuvi notices this. He tells Shanaya abt it. She nods. Aakash takes Shanaya to a black room harshly. Uvi senses smthng bad and goes to the rescue. He sees shanaya laid down on a bush and her sleeves tore down. Her duppata thrown away. He throws her shirt to cover her but slips and falls on her. Kunj comes with maya and sees this. He slaps uvi. Uvi cries and goes.
Scene 3
Twinkle is unpacking the gifts. She says kunj didn’t came till now. He must bhi with maya. Kunj comes and twinkle says where were you. Kunj tells nowhere. I was here only. Twinkle asks u look tense kunj what happened. Kunj narrates her everything. Twinkle says so where is Shanaya now. He tell she has gone back to jammu to her hostel. Twinkle says ok now come and see the gifts. Kunj agrees. They open a gift in which baby products are ther. Twinkle shies. Kunj says wow twinkle u got another proposal for baby . Twinkle says shut up kunj. He says ok I am going to sleep gud ni8 . Twinkle says ok.
Precap- Bebe entry. Twinkle ka sapna
5 Comments
Good writing.. But try to complete the maya track soon.. Better make maya kunj ‘s sister….
i agree with u baby doll fed up with this maya even alisha anitha yvi are better than maya
Nice……Avantika keep the gr8 work up!
Loved it
plz keep up luv ur ff..enjoying..was a silent reader & waiting for the epilogue u promised in ur another ff.luv ur work.r u school or college student.very fine writing.