Hi guys,I know ,I am not at all punctual in posting updates,sorry,then,though I haven’t replied to the comments under the last two ff episodes,I truly value every comment and feed back and a big thank u to all silent readers who made me realise that so many are reading this ff,then,next sentence is not meant for my friends ,Mickey,Joya,Shraddha,Niti,Vinita,Sethooty,Appu and Leku.I told so because since we chat thru comments,they must be fed up of reading what I am gonna type,from this or next episode ,the so called stupid track,as I often say is gonna begin,and,from a realistic ff(as a few readers have told),this is gonna become a predictable,messed up fan fiction,my apologies in advance,not proof read,here we go,SWASAN Fan Fiction (Season 2) episode 30……..
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Scene 1:Previous day of Swara’s wedding,Sanskar’s house
Sanskar’s mother asks him if he is not going to Swara’s house,she reminds him that MUkesh had told them all to reach there in the morning itself,she also tells him that she called Ragini’s mom,and all elders have decided to reach by afternoon, “since everything was in a hurry,Sumi is tensed,she called and told that all of us have to participate in the sangeet”,Sanskar just listens to his mother’s words,he feels every word like a stone falling on his heart,he just goes near his mom and tells her, “Mamma,I am going to take bath,after that I will leave,Chetan had called and told us to reach now,actually Mukesh unce is also busy,so,my mumma ,give me some food,I will come now after taking bath,ok”,His mom turns and tells him , “ah,don’t forget,Swara had told that day itself that u have to wear the kurtha she gifted ,so wear that or take that along with you”He says, “ok,mamma”.He comes out after taking bath,he opens the cupboard and takes the gift which Swara gave him,he remembers how Swara had come home with it,he slowly opens it and moves his hand on it and says,
“Swara,your choice is so nice yaar,except your first love,you could have opted somebody else,if u had done that,your heart would not have been broken like this,I am very sorry,my love…saying this he turns and takes the chain that he had removed and kept on the bed,he wears it ,he looks at the locket,it is the same key chain which Swara had gifted on his birthday celebration held at Ragini’s home,he remembers how she told that she had kept it safely for two years after their 10th standard tour,she, showing their names(Swara and Sanskaar) on the grain and telling him that it will remind him about a friend who considers him as her best friend,how he had incorporated it into a locket later with his pocket money,he understands that his eyes are filled,he slowly lifts it and kisses the locket and says, “Sanskaar is Swara’s,but Swara cant be Sanskaar’s ,loss is Sanskaar’s and only Sanskaar’s,but u will always remain ,close to my heart,like this,always,every beat will be heard and felt by u first,I love u Swara”he quickly wears the kurta and goes in front of the mirror,he looks at himself ,smiles and tells to himself, “one more day,have to hide my heart from her,wish I could run away from here,be brave ,Sanskaar….for your Swara,he quickly corrects,himself,no,for Aksh…ay’s Swara……….
Scene 2:Swara’s house,afternoon
Sanskar has reached,Sanraglak are actively involved in the final round preparations,Sanskaar wants to see Swara,he sees her coming down,he goes near her,he tells her, “so,all set,bride?Swara just smiles and says “,kurta suits you,handsome…all set?yes,except, heart..”,Sanskaar feels like a sword piercing his soul,he quickly asks, “where is Mukesh uncle,not returned”?Swara says, “no,hasn’t reached,dad is tired ,actually,that is my only tension,everything in a hurry,he was busy managing everything,I think hasn’t even taken his tablets properly,ah,everything will be over by tomorrow,no?Sanskaar, should once in a while come this side and meet my family,ok,”Sanskaar says, “sure ,dear,don’t worry”,a relative and family arrives,Swara excuses herself and goes,Sanskaar looks at her leaving,just then he receives a call,he attends it and quickly goes from there.
Scene 3:Beach
Sanskaar arrives ,he looks around,he dials Mukesh’s number,he goes to the other side of the road,the sea is very violent,the roaring sound of the waves disturbs him,he looks the sea and quickly goes to the car parked there,Shambu,Swara’s driver,hints to Mukesh that Sanskaar has arrived,Mukesh quickly steps out,holds Sanskaar’s hands and takes him to a side,Sanskaar sees him sweating profusely,he feels worried and asks Mukesh if he is fine,Mukesh holds Sanskaars hands and says, “Sanskaar,I need your help,I don’t know who else to ask for a favour at this last minute,Sanskaar ,will you marry Swara?Sanskaar is shocked,he is standing there not able to believe what he just heard, he calls, “uncle”,Mukesh leans on to him and says,
“I want to tell you a few things,all knows a successful business man Mukesh,but no one,not even my Sumi knows a Mukesh,who was an utter failure,who was on the verge of suicide due to debt,that time,had to accept an offer which came from Akshay’s father,I became his partner,partner in all his illegal business,all means all,it was like a whirlpool,I was forced to,didn’t have any power to resist it,later became successful,money was the only gain,haven’t slept a day peacefully after that,but had to ,to keep my Sumi and kids happy,without letting them know anything,managed all these years,when Akshay’s proposal came,wanted to say a no,but his father told that he has no interest in business,I also thought my Swara will refuse,but no,I was thinking that you both were in love,would have happily given her hand in yours,but she agreed,that time also,had a hope that the guy is good,why to bother about his dad,today,I had gone to their guest house here,saying this Mukesh shows signs of palpitation,Sanskaar gets worried,he tries to hold him,
Mukesh continues, “today,today only I heard the father son conversation,God made me hear it,that Akshay,he is a womanizer,his dad was doing a gambling by asking for my daughter’s hand in marriage,to bring his son to the right path,more than that,I heard him saying how he rescued Akshay from going behind the bars for killing his partner with whom he was in living together relationship,I couldn’t believe my ears,I don’t know what to do,I don’t have the power to fight with him,if my Sumi comes to know about this,I will lose my family,I will lose everything,also Akshay’s dad,he will do anything for his son,Sanskaar ,I know I am being selfish,I am asking for your life,marry my daughter today,please,I beg you..take her away,may be ,others will think that you were an obsessive lover,yes,that is what I am asking from you,I know,I know that I am being selfish,but please,I will arrange everything,just bring her to the place that I say,pandit and all arrangemets I will do,I don’t have the power to fight with Akshay’s dad directly,but I will protect you both and your family,that I can do,have a small gang of loyal subordinates who will manage,I will make them,already talked to them,but..trust me,give me some time,I will set everything right,need some time to settle a few things ,but cant let this marriage happen tomorrow ,at any cost”
Sanskaar holds Mukesh’s hands and says, “uncle,I don’t understand anything,it is not a film,it is Swara’s life,how can I do this to her,she values her self respect a lot,I can’t do this to her,if you want ,I will take her safely somewhere,after telling the truth,but marrying her forcefully,I don’t find any logic, uncle,this is life,she will never forgive me,she will never forgive herself for letting you all down,also,how long can we hide truth? how long can you protect my family,uncle, all this doesn’t make any sense,please,I cant,we will find some way to stop the marriage,we have a few with us,there will be some way out”,Mukesh holds his chest and says, “Sanskaar ,I know what I am going to say is not at all right,but I have to,do you remember the promise you gave in the hospital,that even after years,you will be ready to do anything for me,today,I am asking you to fulfil it,marry my daughter,today evening,please”,
Sanskaar listens to him in shock,he stands there still, the sound of waves brings him back to his senses,he holds his head,he sees Mukesh holding his chest and taking deep breaths,he holds him,Mukesh goes on pleading ,“please,please,my son,marry her and rest I will manage…I know it is not easy,but at this last moment,don’t have any other way,I want my daughter to be in safe hands,being a selfish father,I am asking for your life,for my daughter,but ,I know she wont get any one better than you,her name wont be destroyed,I will arrange everything,please,go bring her to the place that I say”.Mukesh folds his hands and pleads,Sanskaar shakes his head in a no,Shambu watches all this…Sanskaar comes and asks Shambu to give the keys and go home…
Scene 4:Swara’s room
Sanskaar comes inside,Swara turns and sees him,she notices his tension,she asks him if everything is alright,he tells her, “Swara,do you trust me?”,Swara says, “yes ,Sanskaar,why are you asking this now?”,Sanskaar says, “you should come with me,now”,Swara says, “Sanskaar,I would have happily come along with you, but this,this is not the right time,sangeet function in a short while ,Mom is already worried ,she has been trying Papa’s number,Shambu uncle also hasn’t reached,don’t know where they are,it is not right to come with you now”,Sanskaar holds Swara’s hands and says, “if you have ever loved me,come…”,Swara resists,he tightens the grip and she unwillingly follows him,he takes her out through the back door,Laksh sees them and runs behind,but before he could reach them,he sees the car moving,he stands there thinking where they have left ,he decides to talk to Ragini…
Scene 5:A large ground with a small ,minimally decorated mandap
Sanskaar holds Swara’s hands and takes her to the mandap,Swara looks at him in shock,he sees four people wearing mask,he sees the pandit,a man is pointing gun at his head,Swara stands there not able to understand her eyes,Sanskaar comes near her and says, “Swara,I am going to marry you,now”,Swara looks at him in shock, “Sanskaar,what are you saying,and who are these people,mask and gun and all this,what is your connection with all this?are you sure about what you are saying?,I need to go now,I have promised my dad that I will never let him down,please,come back to your senses,I need to go,come with me”,she turns to go,Sanskaar angrily pulls her and says, “you wont leave now,you have seen only one side of Sanskaar,these are my men,no,I am one among them,had to be part of this,was dragged into this world,why should I tell you the details,right now,I am doing what I feel is right for me,I am going to marry you,and that is it,I don’t have to explain more,don’t try to resist,wont be good for you,we need your dad’s empire and you are the key to that”,Swara stands there not able to believe what he heard,she tells him, “Sanskaar,are you the one who I have loved for 12 years,are you the same Sanky who is my best friend?,please,don’t act,trying to give me a surprise,?then where is our Raglak?she looks around,
Sanskaar comes near her,holds her hand forcefully and orders the pandit to start the rituals,Swara tries to free herself,she is not able to believe what is happening ,she tells him, “Sanskaar,I love you,I would have happily agreed ,but now it is late,what you are doing is not right,for money,no,no,Sanskaar cant be like this,my family,they wont be able to face the society,please,leave me “suddenly she pushes him and says, “Sanskaar,Sanju ,what about her?Sanskaar,your girl,don’t this to her,think about her,please for her,leave me..”,Sanskaar forcefully holds her hand and completes the rituals,Swara pleads to the pandit to stop,she sees him helpless and cries,she pleads,Sanskar makes her sit,he makes her wear the mangalsutra and fills sindoor in her maang ,Swara stares at him in shock,she feels her vision is getting blurred,she is about to hold Sanskaar’s collar ,she slowly closes her eyes and falls to a side,Sanskaar shouts “Swara “ and holds her,he tries to wake her up ,she doesn’t open her eyes,he quickly lifts her in his arms…………..”
(Guys,very sorry for this,I didn’t like this and know that it is a predictable story ,sorry once again for the stupid twist,this is why I say I am not a ‘writer’,but I am proceeding with this…you have complete freedom to be silent …”
198 Comments
Awsome
U liked it?thanks yr,for the comment too.
Nice twist, continue
I never thot u all will like it,glad to readnur comment,thanks yr.
it’s awesome. u r not a writer u r a creator no one can predict wat wl hapn in ur ff just amazing….oops I’m a silent reader should hav told frst BT wat to do ur ff made me to wrt abt it frst rathr than introducing myself
M happy to know that u were reading,humbled n honoured bybyour good words, thank u very much for the comment,bt ,no yaar,I’m not a writer or creator,I think many would be guessing this track,but I value your comment yaar.Thank u.
this is awesome Dr..swasan r destined to be together..whatever gonna happen…swasan r married..I am damn happy
but it could be more amazing to see their romance which will not come now but somewhere in future..vini u r just awesome Dr …:-)
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Swasan got married,I think that is the only good thing in this episode today,glad to see your comment,thank u for your good words dear,even I don’t know what is gonna come,have to plan,let us see.
Wowwwwww… it’s happened finally… interesting about next..
Glad that u liked it,thank u for the comment dear,let’s c what will happen next..
Nice yar…. u r just awesome
Thank u dear,m glad that u liked it,hope u will keep reading.
Please update next part soon…its really awesome.
Thank u dear,nowadays u r here,thank u,next part ,haven’t typed,shall try to make it faster.
super dear I love It very much Yarr dear waiting fr nxtepi
Oh,thank u dear,if u liked it,then very happy,never thot u all will like it,next one,have to type it.
Waiting to see their romance
Ah,dat is a task,m very bad at writing that, let’s c what I will type. ☺
Haha..vini… .for today’s episode I have no tears…rocking twist..loved that gift swara sanskar name on grain..that she made on 10th class tour awesome…but that gun and men on mask …k u will reveal that on next episode only na..can’t wait for next episode yaar..am .so excited like am jumping on d floor ..sanskar married to swara and she fainted on his arm..wow athu polichutto…
This is d only way to left for swasan marriage bz our sanky mahan wouldn’t accept swara bz of his insecurity…
Thank u dear,last sentence is very true,but I’m responsible for making him so,haha,and u liked it ,fainting,oh,gun n men are clear dear.Mukesh’s people,Swara knows a few of them, to hide it,then gift,I had hinted it in the tour episode,no?so incorporated here.Thank u being there thru out these episodes of both ffs.
Superb twist
Thank u dear,if u happen to read this,if u don’t mind,pls mention where u r from n wat u r doing?u comment daily but I haven’t asked this.Reveal only if u r ok with it.
its amazing…like ur ff so much… fantastic job… u r a very good writer… love ur ff a lot… ???
Ur first comment,no? Thanks yaar,for the comment n for liking my ff,but,wen somebody mentions that m a writer, don’t know y I don’t consider me so..bt these ffs are just attempts to write something for all of u who read this.
yes… its my first comment. thank you vini for replying… i love ur ff surely will do the same… checking this page update for ur ff daily… eagerly waiting for ur next part… ya Happy republic day
Thank u dear,wish u the same,happy to know that u like this ff,next part,have to plan dear.
Nice twist n i think nw starting our swasan hate love story
Yea,_hate will be there ,in what quantity, even m not sure_,have to plan it,thanks dear for the comment.
Sankar become wrong in her eyes.. I hope she trust him and understand thst he is doing this for some reason.. dont create misunderstandings btwn swasan.. and I know you make a intersting story .upload soon
Well dear,some misunderstanding is required dear,and interesting story,don’t know dear,let me see ,ok,thank for the comment dear,m happy to see u here nowadays.
Dii loved it…sanky took all d blame on him…only to save swara…any way i m happy with marriage… Ragini had told sanky na only god can do any miracle… According to today’s episode god made mukesh hear those bastards( sry to use this word but I am helpless because they were going to use swara so they deserve this)…really god is there for the true lovers…nd sanky’s acting in front of swara is awesome… I hope the misunderstanding will be cleared soon….
Finger crossed…
Hope to see swasan without misunderstanding in next epi…
Try to update it asap….
Plz plz plz…
A request from ur little sis…
I have my exams on 27 still i am waiting for ur ff…from ds u can know how much I love it…i m refreshing this page again and again only for this…so plz give some time from ur busy schedule and update it tomorrow… Plz…
Sry i m blabbering too much…
Bye…
Thank u dear,m happy to read this, by the way,wat exam dear,if u don mind,pls do tell where u are from n which course u r studying,anyways,all the best for ur exams,and regarding ur analysis abt Ragsan conversation n Sanky’s acting,cool,next update,sorry,ok,give me some time to plan something dear,I mean the scenes, after posting next ,I shall surely put a comment here under your comment so that I won’t waste your time,tomorrow by evening, it should come,sorry dear,since scenes r not planned ,this trouble,take care,study well dear.
Dii i am studying in 12 th nd i m from Bhubaneswar odisha…and i have my practical exam tomorrow…
Ok dear,all the best,so happy to see people from various places connecting with each other thru tellyupdates site,all the best for your exam.
Hai ,have posted the next one,should be getting uploaded before night.
awsummm…..crry on
Thank u yr,first comment here,no?thanks yr,hope u will keep reading.
1st of all i m very happy bcz my guess was ri8 k mukesh us promise k badle me swara ko sanskar se shadi k liye kahega……..yehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh……..
so twist ha…..nice…..so many ques r dancing in my mind bcz of dis twist……waiting for next update…….
yeh episode……
jis tarah se apne sanskar k dard ko describe kiya hai….very nice……jaise ki he feels every word of his mom like a stone is falling on his heart,swara ur choice is nice,except ur 1st love,his correction Akshay’s swara wid pause….very nice…..wo gift and all…good…..
swara sanskar ki baate…..hmmmm….meri family se milne aana,mukesh ki fikr……
Beach pe………
aayla……
mukesh…
ek insaan halat k haton majboor,jo apni family ko khona nahi chahta,jise apni daughter ki safety, khushiyon ki chinta sata rahi hai,apni beti ki happiness k liye kuch bhi karne ko ya sehne ko ready hai aisa father,jise apne kiye ka guilt bhi hai……..
ek taraf sanskar
jo in sari situations se bahar nikalne ka rasta chahta hai bina kisi ko hurt kiye,jo swara k values uski soch ko usi k dad k samne rakh raha hai,par kismat ka mara ek father jise filal apni beti ki jindgi k alawa kuch aur najar na aana……..
jo twist aapne liya hai use puri tarah justify karne ki koshish kiya hai and that’s very very very good…………….. mukesh aur sanskar ki situation,point of view……achchhi tarik se portrait kiya hai……….
last scene
jise pyar kiya use keh na paya,par aaj usi k liye,uske dad k liye unki image ko bachane k liye uthaya gaya kadam…..jo swara sanskar ke rishte ki definition hi badal dega……..uljhano ki bhawar me fasa sanskar………very good…………..
yeh to pata hai yeh twist ek new beginning leke aaya hai aur sach samne aayega to badhne wala pyar,respect,narjoka jhukna,fakr se uthane tak ka safar enjoy karne k liye hum sab ready haihai….
I remember, that day couldn’t tell u bt u were the first one to mention it,that promise will be working in the opposite way,superb dear,then,I wana know those questions in ur mind,come on,shoot,rest of the lines in ur comment, perfect analysis my dear ,as always,?..every word makes me wonder if u have access inside my brain.
The below to Shraddha is also for u,Niti n our army.
sawal……….
actually yeh twist apke liye challenges lekar aaya hai…..i mean ab sab kuch badlega…….sab ka test hoga……swara ka pyar,bharosa,raglaksan ki friendship……..inki dosti ko aaj tak labjo ki jarurat nahi padhi sply ragsan ko………kya raginj samj payegi???? kuch din gujrenge jab sanskar ko swara apne halaton se struggle karta dekh swara sochne par majboor hogi ki shayad sanskar k is act pichhe wajah kuch aur hai…abhi wo yeh sab sochne ki halat me nahi hai……uske emotions, confusions,friendship, trust sab kuch daaw pe lagaya hai apke is twist ne jise aap kai baar filmy keh chuki hai………..sab ki najoron me sanskar ke liye hajaro sawal……..mukesh kaise face karega swasan ko iske aage…….
new beginning for us and new challenge for u……..next update ka intjar rahega……
Joya,my dear,u had said once that is our ff,yes it is ,not mine,ours n must say yours in all sense,cos,these questions many would be having but Swara’s situation that u pointed out,a big hug to u,for realising that area,rest of the points also,yes my dear,these r exactly the questions in my mind,actually wanted to write this episode after finding perfect answers to these questions but day b4 yesterday ,had told, I will post something yesterday, this I started at 8pm,simply wrote n completed by 9 pm,just for posting an episode,now,next one as soon as I get answers to these queries in my mind,not perfect but at least 25% convincing to me,I will post next one.
Superb di!!!! Did not expect this twist. Amazing!!!!!???
Exams over!!!!!!!!!!!
Meri pagli beheno kaha chali gayi?????
Missing u all?
Exam was there?last week u had one, no?hope it was easy,I’m not satisfied with this episode n twist but literally empty this brain is now, so thot to proceed with the one line planned n this was the track..
hmm..vini Di…this was the twist…actually..hmm…vo…umm..samaj nahi a raha what am i feeling right now…ya the story has changed from realistic to predictive..hmm what to comment now…lets start..
when i read first line..the day before swara’s wedding..meri to jaise sanse ruk gayi…kai app swara ki shadhi karane ka twist to nahi lane vale..asa soch k…uff..
uske bad the best part was sanky’s self talk about swara…ahh..when he said last day to hide ur feeling…jis tarah usne my love…meri swara..ye words use kiye…haye rabba kitna pyara laga…vo full scene awesome tha…swasan conversation was too cute…swara ka kehna all set except my heart..dil hai ki manta nahi…hmm too touchy..
at last makesh promises made swasan together…yup it would be lie if i would say i like the way mukesh make sanky ready for marriage…sanky was right he can make swara understand by telling her truth n protect her from marriage…it would hv been much more realistic…i don’t want to talk much about that scene..
Ohh god…sanky forcefully married to Shona…it hurts lil bit…but i am super duper happyyyyyyyyy that swasan got married….swara faint in sanky’s arm…while imagining that scene..i wish i could hv at place of swara..(only for fainting in his arm scene)..ha ha just kidding..
Di till now i like ur twist…but swara sanskar ko last 12 years se janti hai….uski best friend hai..moreover sabse imp usse pyar karti hai…ab agar vo sanky pe trust nahi karegi then it would not be portrayed good…she has to has trust her best friend n her love…that there must be some reason behind his act…other wise it will again create situation of killing trust of relation…even in predictive ff also trust should be there in relationship….i know app ne ye sab socha hi hoga…par fir bhi dil ne Jo socha vo likh diya…
Di..Kan pakad k sit up kar k..sorry bolti hu…i am soooooooooo sorry if i hurt u with my this comment…n no matter what kind of twist j insert in your story…for me you have already proved that..
you were awesome mindblowing superb amazing writer..you are…n you will be forever…
Oh thank u dear,even if my reply is short,don’t think m not understanding your comments,ok,if I had got Swara married then readers would have kicked me,actually my heart wanted to take it that way n prove that years won’t matter,then,I felt it wud be too much ,then ,yes, that wud have been realistic but trying to show how a father who is already living in stress including guilty conscience for his past n work wud think about his daughter’s life, just thot he wud rely on Sanky who he likes a lot ,who he wished if his daughter married to,who he loves as his own son, at the last minute,the only way he found right was this,it is not right,though,well,this is wat I tried yo show from Mukesh’s angle,u fainting in Sanskaar’s arms,dono how many readers will love u for that?,yea,dear,last two days,even I was thinking abt that, that trust ,how to pull that portion convincingly, still,not sure,may disappoint u totally but m going to proceed with the one line,scenes, hope something will come with the flow,no dear,I didn’t hurt me with the comment, it is the same thot many wud be feeling,so no probs,but wen u all say that m a writer,I feel ashamed ya,seriously…but whatever I have scribbled is just for u all…
thank u Di for understanding my pov…ya i know mukesh did all to save his daughter by merry her with worlds best person…n sanky has done forced marriages without considering his image on swara…the mahanness of our sweet hearted boy…
Di u might already know about my thoughts n my liking by reading my comments…till now I m loving your story very much…but just one fear about that trust issue…but no worry Di i will be there for you till last…bz my vini di is the best…
plzzzzzz plzzzzzz plzzzzzz plzzzzzz Di…. you have already proved that you are awesome writer…ab apke man ne na manne se ku6 fark nahi padta…to plz ab se app apna dialog bilkul repeat nahi karegi….u r just incredible…ajj bhi sanky ka jo starting ka scene tha itna beautifully written tha…just loved it..
Yes dear,trust is a big thing,it is tough to break that, but sometimes people will be forced to think with brain than heart,let’s c,how Swara will handle,of course ,I know u dear,I know u will be there,so no probs.Then last sentence,ok,??happy…
Hello my dear let me 1st start as a reader honestly speaking I knew they were going to unite n mukeshs promise had a key role in it but never expected smthing like this!!! This I really a twist n twist n turns are great to look forward to!!! I never imagined that he will be marrying swara like this???? kya masala add kiya yaar apne back with a spicy bang I must say!!? too much curiousity since I never expected it to happen this way as in sanky being portrayed was a shock for me really n see smthing new is always fascinating so I’m very curious to see how things turn up hence forth n what for are u apologising??? ssly ? few ppl no uff!!! Aadat nahi jati dekho unki???? kya didi aap bhi? OK so this was from readers POV now comes ur Dost cum sissy hahaha wait for it ha
So to begin with
Dostoooo arey dekho toh apne SwaSan ki shadi hogayi!!? kin halatoh me hui Jane dete hai lekin hogayii yesss They are meant to be together!!?
Episode starting Oh des two swara n sanskaar have taken pledge I guess like see I’m better actor than u ? so much they hide n baat toh aise karte hai like kuch hai he nahi….. But deep down in eyes they convey everything God such deep love?
U know true friendship for so many years is bound to turn into family !!! Sumi calling them early for preps shows their bonding☺ n sanskaar s dialogues? feels so bad so much pain every dialogue of his u have written so well didi mann gaye apko sach me? Swara gifting him…. He remembering her coming home with it …. Slowly removing gift n den his words?? didi all touched me alot…. His words were beautifully penned down ssly…. Swara ur choice is great but not ur first love? sanky dear I say that’s the best choice that she made!!!!!
Oh God he made a pendent out of that keychain oh sankyy? sanskaar is swaras but swara can’t be Sanskaar’s ? n dats his loss wat a dialogue these few lines of his I read again n again I liked it sooooo much n lastly the way wen he said
For your swara! Den correcting himself n dat gap btm akshay Wah?
Aksh….ay’s swara
Conveying emotions is smthing which do fantastically!!!
Both are in pain yet they try not to show it!!!!” So all set bride”….. All set? Yes except Heart! ?? kya dialogue hai ssly n sanky feeling like sword piercing him ?
D mukeshs call n Sanskaar seas raging waves draw his attention momentarily tough yet it has a significance !!!! Den mukeshs confession well his not exactly wrong also inhis state but definitely selfish yet poor fellow 1st of all I’ll n helpless father wants his child to be insafe hands ….
Den Sanky s reactions n him asking swara if she trusts him n asks her to come I liked her reply u know even tough he means the world to her yet she is mature n responsible enough n does not jsut blindly take decision in Love! The way she resisted his grip yet followed him ah no words to say! Didi I’m happy very much! Because there comes a new track !!!
But only thing that bothers me is this mukesh uncle? why can’t he explain swara wat he explianed Sanskaar !!! Why make him take the blame OK fine may be for the world but swara why swara? Why can’t he tell her? May be he’s scared to lose his daughter? But now poor sanky swara “uski hokar bhi na hosaki” thank God it’s a holiday tomo n I’m punctual this time??heheheh BTW Happy Republic Day friends!!
Shraddha dear,I wish to know,in wat way did u imagine they would get united,I wish to know what this story had hinted n that is y m asking this,haha,masala,most probably ,m going to get fried in that masala,cos in one line Sanky character change was planned,but wat all rubbish I will write, not sure,that is y I apologised, wasting ur valuable time,yea,yea,habits don’t change,haha,but dear seriously, if I was a reader ,Im not sure what I would have felt,then ,dost cum sis,let me read that too,let us celebrate,Swasan marriage,send a chocolate box to B’lore ,ok,yes,that is it,words are not always necessary, they can pretend but heart to heart connection,then analysis n portion u liked,perfect analysis,the portion u told u read again,let me read n see,sea has had relevance in this story so far,notices it today @lso,thank u,Mukesh has that inferiority complex too,that step father,losing Swara’s love which he got after years etc..brain stops working during the conflict of emotions.,dono know bt in this track yes, I tried to take it that way,rest of the lines,yes it is conveyed,happy,Mukesh is shocked, confused n immature to deal with it,in short ,that is what I concluded while typing today,his mistake is gonna affect Swasan,how,let us see…
hey guys,,,,,
humne na aap sab k liye kuch likha hai……
dnt hit me ha…….
swasan pe fan fiction vini di ne likha..
andaj-e-ishq naya hum sab ne sikha..
phool tarifon k vini di k liye khilne lage….
comment column me yaha naye rishte banane lage……
yaha thi shraddha,Singer aur guitarist…..
story thi jinki woh vini di violinist…………..
humri CA niti ka talent jab samne aaya,
kalakaron ka hai yeh mela.,yeh joya ko samaj aaya….
Rabindrasangit ki vinita nahi thi kisi se kam..
in sab k kala k yaha kadardan hai hum…..
rups ki cute-cute baton k san hai deewane….
sethooty ki language ko vini di k alawa koi aur na jane….
telly update and vini di ko shukriya hai hum kehte,
batao to sahi hum sab aur na jane kaha milte…….
likh du aasman par silsila mulakaton ka yeh saara….
janega fir jahan, anokha dostana yeh humara.. …………
dis is for all of u guys……..
Joyaaaaa????
Awesome!!!!! Sach me yaar dil chioliya tumne aaj!!!
Behaddd khoobsoorat likha hai!!! Wakai me bohot acha Matlab itna sweet cutely likha hai… Agar tum samne hoti na toh gale laga ke gaal kheech ke kehti Sheetal meri jaan ? kya kamal ka hunar hai tera!!! Itna ache se sabke bare me likha hai very glad about meeting u all guys !!!
Well done jo brilliant u are!
I donno if it will fit but I’m so touched with what u wrote this is for u
” Tumhare alfazone chu liya dil hamara..
Bina dekhe ek dusre ko kaisa yeh rishta hamara
Kehte hai sache rishton ko zaroorat nahi koi nishani ki
Tumse baat karne ke baad yeh baat hai
humne janii
Joya tumhara andaaz hai bada he pyaara
Tumhari alfazon ne chu kiya dil hamara”
Shraddha,forgive my ignorance, u wrote the following lines,then a big hug to u too..seriously,u guys arr ulti talented yaar…
Wow shradha ur lines r superb..
muuuuuuuhhhhhhaaaaaa….!!!! mindblowing…incredible dear…
wowwww..meri joya rani…tu likhati hai kavita badi suhani..dil ho jata hai pani pani…ban jati hu me tumhari kavita ki diwani..
Ohhye hello…galti se bhi ye mat sochna ki main tumhari itni tarif isss liye kar rahi hu kyuki tumne humare bare me likha hai…ye galtfamy bilkul hi mat palna…me tumhari tarif is liye kar rahi hu bzzz tum sach me iski hakdaar ho…kya mast likhati ho yar…tusi to cha gaye…dil chura gaye..loved it…
tu likhati hai bada pyara…..
tumhara har eke labs hota hai emotions se bhara….
kar jata hai humare man me dera..
bhale hi hum kitna bhi ban jaye modern modern…
but tera likhne ka andaz bana deta hai mere dil ko garden garden…
bas isse jyada likha nahi jayega….
tum logo ka dimag khaya nahi jayega…
and chappl-tamatar ka maar saha nahi jayega..
so abhi app se alvida lete hai…
kal ahi ake vapas milte hai..
bubye…gn..sd
Niti,u too,my goodness, wat competition yaar,one big bear hug to u ,then yes, me too not praising you all simply,u guys are amazing,can’t wait to read Mickey’s reaction to all this,I think I will have to save many screen shots now, had saved the recipe list given by Mickey n Vinita before though m yet to try it, (Mickey,Vinita ,I will,for sure).Niti, at the start seriously didn’t imagine that u r so naughty but I like it a lot…
Haha that’s too good niti ur lines..loved it…for this line no chappals and tomatoes.. Haha
Joya,my dear,u know what I did just now,I saved a screen shot of these lines of yours,it is truly gonna be one which I would read multiple lines,since this is too good,m not saying anything regarding what u wrote abt me but about our army,perfect,perfect, perfect,u made me laugh,u made me feel,one big hug to you,also,loads of love to u dear…u should write,m ur self proclamimed fan No.1…
wah wah…..shraddha and niti…….kya baat hai….!!!!!!
tum log bhi likhte ho……multi talented ha……….
wah wah……….
aur niti hum aisa bilkul bhi nahi sochte yr……humne jab bhi kuch likha hai tum sab ne hume saraha hai…….uske liye tum sab ka shukriya yarooo………
bdw guys happu republicrepublic day…….
shraddha………..yr itni tarif k liye shukriya………………. hum to khush hai ki aap sab ko pasand aaya…….itne pyar k liye sach me Dhanyawaad.(thank u)……….
niti,shraddha,vini di,rups……….
i have no word guys………….duniya ki har khush sab ko mile…..
niti and shraddha again chhupe rustam…….
Happy republic day dear Joya,in fact,wishes to all of u,I was watching the tableau section of the parade in TV,u guys came to mind ,people from various states ,met thru this site,may not even see each other,still,we know a lil at least about each other,thank u guys..may all of u all stay happy n blessed.
Joya u r awesome.. Well done Dr..loved ur poem ..I can’t stop laughing wen i read that lines about me..lol..lol..
If someone go through these lines..they will surely get an idea ,about u all guy’s ,how much talented they are…
Lots of love Dr…I am very lucky to meet u guy’s from different places.
As always just outstanding …..
Thanks dear,hope u will keep reading.
No matter what the best thing is swasan marriage and I am happy about that…really nice twist
Oh,glad that it made u happy, equally happy to see u here, daily,hope u will keep reading, thank u for the comment dear.
Di superv twist .to be honest i really like sanky in grey shaded character as in saba’s fiction but the way u potrayed sankys character is epic. I really have developed a soft corner for this character and the credit goes to u.u just nailed it down.i really love the way u carry every characters emotion without messing them up.for me ,this ff was not about the story rather it was about characters which u neatly sketched in my mind with your words ,so whatever twist u introduce ,it doesnot matter,i will always be there.it may happen due to boards i may not follow the ff regularly , but ya i will surely read each and every episode ,whenever i get time. .Physics ,chemistry and maths screw me up and gives me tons of pressure and stress but your ff really helps in releasing the tension , so big thank u from my side.keep rocking like this and ya dont say sorry because the twist is really unexpected and its awesome too.love u di.u r truly amazing.thank u for replying because no ff writer except u replies individually.
Thank u for the comment dear,it means a lot,also, happy to know that u could feel the emotions of all characters, was just a humble attempt,oh dear,thank u,honestly,m humbled n honoured,I think I have seen Kashis n Saba replying to individual comments,also a few other ffs,not sure cos m not getting time to read nowadays,then,all the best for your exams dear,yea.it is stressful,can understand, even if u don’t read ff in between also,no problem,these words ,that,u will,means a lot,m yet to read comments under previous two ff episodes, then thank u being there, and if my ff (won’t be a feel good one) increases ur stress, totally ignore this ok,u can read later…n if u don’t mind,u r from which place?
Di ,i am from Uttar Pradesh.i am living in Lucknow (Uttar Pradesh’s capital).i dont about kashish but ya i have commeted on sabas ff and she said a combined thank u to everyone.i can understand her as she is writing three stories simultaneously , so she is super busy and is not able to reply individually and above all she too has a life beyond these ffs.
Ok dear,so glad to know abt u,ok,I thot Saba was writing 2 ffs,she us writing 3,great,hats off to her,can’t manage one here,haha,writer she is,lots of respect.then study well dear,keep in touch wen u r free.
i never thought he would made the key chain into a locket… that’s great… don’t worry, dear…. it’s just awesome… as the people say, no one can predict what’s next in your ff… i thought mukesh will use that promise… but, it’s too fast yaar…
Thank u dear for being there,wen did u post ur ff last? I had checked in between,that key chain,simply included here,but I was thinking that it is predictable,yes dear,I know it is too early,but m too lazy to imagine something else…that is the reason dear…
Superb. I m very happy. I always check Google just for this ff. I just loved. Finally swasan married. Muah. No words for my happiness
Thank u for the comment yaar, glad that u liked it,truly humbled n honoured by your words,tc.
Awesome…. I am waiting 4r the nxt update
Thanks dear,haven’t typed the next one,shall do it asap.
OMG?joyaaaa diiiiii yaarrrrr kitne acche lkhte ho yaarrrrrr…wah uspe mera nm v thi??wahh….
Vinita tujhe nhi pta hum kaha chali gayi???chal bata deti hu?
Here we go 1,2,3…..
”Tere liye duniya chod d h,
Tujh pe he saans aake ruke
Hum tujhko kitna miss kartu hu
Yeh tu kbhi soch na sake”?????
you too…kya likha rups..wow..
btw jaise us din sab naughty bate kar ne par aa gaye the..vaise ajj sab poet n shayar ban rahe hai…whhh vahh..sab namoone eke jaise hai..
Oh u had written this for Vinita,are wah!!Mickey baba is multi talented…?
Vry nice di…..amazing??
Thank u my dear,got up early today??have a nice day.
Aweee….its awesome ….superbb twist …..seriously no one can expect dis …..u r not writter dear u r fabulous writter …..if u will write a book like dis na den it will bcom dat popular ki…. wat to say….excellent twist ….arey yaar thariff karne ke liye shabd hi nahi mil rahe he….par fir bhi samjoh ki mujhe toh bahut achi lagi….
Thank u for the comment dear,m happy to know that u liked it but m not a writer,this is just an attempt for u guys,I didn’t like the twist,though I wrote it.But I value your comment a lot,then,if u don’t mind,where are u from?n which course are u studying?