Hey! guys i was a silent reader but now listening to all ur ffs ….
i hv too started writing……. i m not a good writer but yeah i can try satisfying u all……….
so letz get started…………………….
A girl is seen looking outside staring at the stars that changed her destiny…..She feels that a drop of tear has fallen from her eyes… and she wipes it she looks at the stars again.
She hears a voice
Another Girl- “mumma”
She turns and takes a deep breath. She is amazed to see her & gets happy………
The Girl- “hey! Riya I was missing u badly… Oh! My Jaan u returned”
Riya- “yeah! Shona I returned!!!!!!……. and happy to see u lyk this …. I was away only for 4 days & u were missing me so badly ha!!!????????????…….
Swara(Shona)- “ u gal u call ur mumma by her name!!”
Riya- Coz I know mumma how much u lyk this name….
Swara gets tears in her eyes. At that moment a man enter that room.
Man- So girls whats going on?? Any plan for today? And ask ur mum if she is happy??? After seeing u????… These 4 days she has tortured me badly…..
Riya- “yeah! Dad she seems lyk she is ok now…… & ya dad we don’t have any plans right now… do u have one??……”
Swara- “Stop annoying Rahul riya ! he must be tired…”
Rahul- “No not at all im not tired Swara!… Coz my princess is back”
Riya- “so dad lets go???… And ya mum u too get ready ok!”
Swara smiles.
Riya follows Rahul holding his hand. Swara whispers “DAD!! HUH?????”
At Night
Swara, Rahul & Riya reach a restaurant & order some stuff…
Swara is still in thoughts looking at Riya & Rahul….
Suddenly Riya ask them to get ready for a selfie !!! Both swara & rahul get ready.. but suddenly swara comes closer to rahul….. they get closer and have an eye lock ….. Swara feels uncomfortable but Rahul still holds her and Riya gets their snapshot…..
Riya- so finnaly I got ur click my mom & dads 1st pic ….
She gets excited….. saying that…
Swara feels embrassed & is almost in the verge of crying but runs away….
In Singhania Mansion-
Rahul- Swara r u alright????… don’t worry swara I will not tell anything o riya she is a small girl … she doesn’t understands…. She jst acts what she sees… & u now that right She has seen me wid her since her childhood so she has considered me as her father. Moreover I luv her too as my daughter…. Swara the pain u feel when she is away … I too feel the same… I know she is not my daughter but as I have given her my name……… I love her & I love u too…. But I don’t want to force u something dat u don’t want I ll nevr force u!!!!!!
And ya I dnt want her to knw that u aren’t my WIFE…..
I know its difficult for u but………………..
Saying that he left & she sat still there…. Thinking about riya & rahul and her friendship….
PRECAP- Gonna meet our Handsome charms…..(lucky & sanky)
10 Comments
Emotional start………
nice concept keep on going i love it
Wow started with a suspense ; nice
So riya is Swasan daughter ..
Thnk u guys for the lovly comments …..??
Bhuvi u’ll see that?
Interesting start
good ya
I just hate suspence.
Enjoy it …. Ur gonna????