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Swara opened her eyes in the morning when cool breeze touched her face. She saw sanskar getting ready in formals.
Swara: sanskar!
Sanskar: please leave me alone swara. I don’t want to talk to you now!
She jerked listening his words but his heart was broken much more by her two faces..no two identities.
He turned to her and gave a Bluetooth.
Sanskar: I think you don’t have any use of this now..you can talk to me freely..
His taunt stabbed her heart and she remembered how she use to manage talking to varun before sanskar using it.
He left the room while swara went to washroom after taking clothes from wardrobe. She came out and was surprised to see a red crape saree with silver border.
Swara: who has changed my clothes…she heard ragini’s voice downstairs..may be she did.
Swara got ready by wearing the saree, bangles and ear rings. She applied kajal and then filled her hairline with sindoor. Her face became red while filling her maang thinking about sanskar.
She then came down and saw sanskar and ragini discussing something and laughing aloud..for a moment, she felt jealous to see ragini laughing with him where she has to be in her place.
Sanskar didn’t even care to look at her.
Sanskar: ma! Swara and I are going out today. We will come come for lunch.
A smile came on her face. They both started walking towards the entrance but was interrupted by ragini.
Ragini: I think you forgot something!!
Swara: what!
She looked at herself and again ragini.
Ragini tool a bowl from the table and make swara to eat the kheeer.
Swara: kheer..for what?
Ragini: nothing special. I just made it with my own hands
She then fed it to sanskar. Both of them left the hall and ragini smiled happily seeing them together.
At entrance, swara encountered post man.
Postman: who is swara MAHESWARI?
Swara: me..
Postman: here is your parcel.
Swara understood that they were the papers which she asked someone to arrange.she signed the papers and went to the car where sanskar was already waiting for her.
She simply kept staring out of the window and the early morning breeze removed all her tensions as it flew through her. Sanskar stopped infront of a temple and went inside the temple while swara followed him. They made circumambulations and stood infront of the idol of Rama and sita.
Swara: I am sorry sanskar. I really didn’t trap you. Please understand me.
He turned to her and she was surprised to see him smiling at her.
Tears rolled down her cheeks.
Swara: sanskar!
Sanskar: stop crying swara. You don’t look good while crying.
Swara: it means you forgave me.
Her voice was filled with surprise and joy.
Sanskar: I think I ….forgave you.
Swara: sanskar!!
To her surprise, he hugged her.
Sanskar: I was angry with you but not now swara.
Swara broke the hug and looked him with confusion.
Swara: but this quickly? What is the reason behind this.
Sanskar:( smiled) marriage.
He then took her puzzled face in his hands.
Sanskar: yes swara..marriage is reason for my this. Do you why in our tradition, a girl gets married to a guy elder to her.
Swara nodded in no but was eagerly waiting to listen the answer from him.
Sanskar: because the man will treat his wife as a child because of her age and will eventually guide her and forgive..
Swara: I think you did graduation in matter of love and marriage
Sanskar: nothing as such swara. Till yesterday, my hate was dominating all others emotions and today my love is…
Swara smiled at him cause she too experienced.
Swara: yes sanskar! Till date, our hate has dominated other emotions and so we never tried to understand each other but..
Sanskar: if we have balance and control on all emotions equally then we would be in place of those idols.
Swara: you were true sanskar. We will never hate a person but their behaviour.
He smiled nodding yes.
Sanskar: I really don’t want to miss you swara. If I had known that staying together for four months will bring such a change then I would have married you in my tenth class itself…
Swara: and I would have come today to jail for your release….child marriages are crime..aren’t they?
They both smiled.
Swara: a small gift to you from my side
She gave him the papers and his face showed happiness, excitement and surprise after reading it.
Sanskar: are you serious?
Swara: yes sanskar…you can now fulfill your dream of becoming a lecturer.
Sanskar became teary eyed.
Sanskar: but how did you get to know?
Swara: you..sorry varun had once said this to vaishali. I remember you saying that you love staying in village by teaching those students but I was unable to fullfill your wish completely as our family is not so strong to stay away from us .
Sanskar: laksh always used to tease me listening my dream.
Swara: but swara won’t.
He smiled and wiped his tears
Sanskar: I don’t want to make marriage a joke by marrying you again but as a husband…I have this right ( didn’t mean to offend anyone)
He took a pinch of sindoor from the feet of goddesses seetha and filled her maang with it.
Sanskar: the right of filling your hairline and show how important you are to me.
Swara rubbed her eyes when sindoor went into her eyes. She felt bad seeing sanskar smiling at her..
Swara: how mean sanskar..you didn’t even try to help me.
Sanskar: you were looking cute with tears in your eyes.
Swara:Still you love me seeing in tears!!.
She hugged him.
Swara: I hate you sanskar!
He hugged her back.
Sanskar: I hate you too swara!
He then lifted her in his arms and as it was early hours, the temple was almost deserted.
Swara snaked her hands around his neck and stared at his eyes. he too did the same and descended the steps.
Swara: are you going to carry me like this till the car.
Sanskar: actually no..because my hands are aching
He then made her stand while swara placed her hands in his.
Swara: I wish laksh would have been alive. He would surely felt happy seeing us ..
Sanskar: who said that laksh is dead. see …he pointed the sky…he is seeing from there and is blessing us even.
Suddenly, a gentle wind blew and the flowers of the tree under which they were standing has fallen on them.
Swara: you are right!
They both sat in the car and drove off
From there the pilgrimage of love of this hate couple has started.
*****
From there the pilgrimage of their love has started- sanskar maheswari.
He stretched his hands by dropping the pen on the table after writing the last line of his novel.
He turned back listening some familiar voice saying ” finished writing? “. He saw a old women in saree which was draped in traditional style and was holding a cup in her hands.
Sanskar: swara…my granny.
Swara: granny!! You are saying as if you are a young man.
Sanskar got up from his place and walked to the mirror.he then looked at himself. The skin of his body had wrinkles and the hairs on his head were grey evidencing his experiences in life
Sanskar: you are right Mrs. Maheswari but I am still young..I can jog …he moved few steps…can you do this?
Swara: enough of your drama. You know very well that I cannot walk properly even because of my…
Sanskar: arthritis…
He sighed while swara pouted.
Sanskar: but there are many women who…
She interrupted him.
Swara: I think your passion and profession of teaching has not left you even after three years of you leaving it.
Sanskar smiled and looked at his retirement photo which was hung on wall. He was sitting in middle and all his staff members were standing surrounding him.
Sanskar: passion cannot leave us while profession can. Will you proof read my novel?
Swara: I would have surely read if it was written by you but unfortunately Mr. Varun has written it and I know very well about his writing skills.
Sanskar smirked.
Sanskar: but I want vaishali to read it before it gets published.
Swara: enough of flirting now.. I came here to inform you about ragini’s arrival..
Sanskar: what! Ragini is coming. We must do many preparations.
They both turned their heads to entrance hearing a person’s voice.
SWASAN: Ayu!!
Ayu: what!! ragini maasi is coming. Why didn’t you inform it ma?
Swara: I am sorry beta.
A girl of six years came running to sanskar.
Girl: grand pa…
He lifted her in his arms.
Sanskar: meena!
Meena: ragini dadi is coming?
Swara: yes..
Meena: then ansh bhayya will also come. Leave me dada. I should inform it to mom.
Sanskar: I will leave you meena but see my cheeks are crying…you need to do something.
She immediately kissed his cheeks.
Meena: see now they stopped crying.
Ayu and meena left the room and they heard meena calling her mother.
Swara: Ayu will always become a child listening ragini’s name.
She turned to sanskar and saw him pouting
Swara: what happened??
Sanskar: my cheeks are still crying!!
Swara: oh! Let me help..
She leaned towards his cheek and pinched it hard.
Sanskar: swara!!
Swara: I am not as sweet as meena. You know very well that I hate you.
Sanskar: I hate you too.
They heard Ayu greeting and shouting” ragini maasi”
Swara: come fast sanskar..we need to go..
Sanskar: yes swara otherwise this Lucky’s girl…he stuck his tongue out seeing swara’s angry face….sorry krish’s girl will see our death.
She smiled while sanskar forward his hand. Swara took support of him and both of them started walking.
The pages of the novel were still flying by the wind that blew from the adjacent window indicating that the whole book is not enough to write the love story of the hate couple.
THE END
NOTE: Being last episode , I know that many will comment ‘miss you’ and I won’t reject as I will also equally miss you but its a humble request from my side to give your opinion on this update too. I want to read genuine feedback of this episode. Sorry of I hurt anyone.
156 Comments
awesome.
Thank-you Jo.
Omg…again a drastic change…but really so nice….njoyed it
Yeah bit I wanted to show importance of relations dear.
your simply superb yaar n pls write another ff for raglak , this is my humble request
Thank-you snehahari for commenting from day one. To start another fiction, I need to think some beautiful story line and I guess it takes long time. But I will write for sure.
so soon this episode got completed. 🙁
Hmm..thanks dhara for being a active reader and commenter of this fiction. You have made a spl place in my heart dear.
U said u will write 20 episodes!!!!
These are only 18..
Sree harani I wont tell u miss u coz u n this ff will alwayz be in my heart.
Well, I want u to write 1 more ff on swasan..
If possible!!
I said that I will complete with in 20episodes. I must think for another plor dear. Even you will be in my heart forever.
Truly Beautiful. Heart touching.
Thank-you Sasha.
its awesome but write another one soon………….
Thank-you newbie and I will really consider your request. Gonna miss you.
Your last twist was mind blowing, all set…..but we will miss you
Thanks arti and I will miss you too.
you are ending it…… so soon!
no…… i loved reading this ff…..
gonna miss you a lot seriously…. thanks sree for it.
hope to read another one from you soon.
I cannot drag it anymore dear because the story looses its charm.and plaese don’t say thanks and being a sanskar fan you should never say thanks to a friend.
Sree harini just wanted to ask..when swara asked her pa that did she had any attitude in her..?at that time pa replied no in a shivering way..why?
She was shivering seeing swara’s anger.
nice ending………….beautiful episode…….
all d best ………….
Thank-you joya..I was literally waiting for your comment and it really means a lot to me. I am really sorry of I hurt you but trust me that wasn’t intentionally. Love you dear.
hey why r u saying sorry??????
that was my opinion dear………
bade bade desho me chhoti chhoti bate hoti rehti hai senorita…… (aisi chhoti baton ko dil pe lagaye itne chhote nahi hai hum…..hahahahaah……)
stone hearted girl i m…….it’s not easy to hurt me….hehehehe just kidding dear…….
but ur writing skill is superb………..
Relieved…you really don’t know how I am feeling now. I regularly read your conversation in vini di’s fiction and seriously I keep checking hr update regularly just not to miss anyone of you but seriously I hardly don’t find any time on comment on it. You are really akind hearted one. Love you loads
Myself silent reader of your ff but so lazy to type comments but has last episode i have to appreciate you….really its worth for searching you’re ff and reading…all the best for what ever in future you’re upto…
Thanks harsja for breaking your silence and letting me know that you were a silent reader. Really felt happy and overwhelmed reading your comment.
Nice .. yaar I’m ur regular reader .. Ur awesome dear…its perfect … it doesn’t feel us dat ur draging it or moving fastly… it’s really good.. u hav good writing skill yaar . Don’t stop writing… re enjoys us by writing another ff..
And u very well know how to attract d readers by ur wonderful writing skill…
Seriously…but I think many writers here are more blessed in writing. Anyways thanks for your lovely comment and I have seen your comments regularly.
it was awesome dear…as i had told uhh..all words are less for uhh..SUPERB ending…sanky with wrinkles….haha…it was so funny to imagine him like that..lol…n the I HATE YOU…i loved it….it was beautiful…loved it dear
n m bit confuse about line lucky girl and krish girl part….but i enjoyed reading this..hope u will start your next ff soon
BESt of luck for n gonna miss uhh dear
LOVE U LOADSSS……….
Lucky’s girl is because ragini was his lover but later she got married to krish and so she is krish’s girl. I hope you got your answer and I am really gonna miss you aashi.ha-ha sanskar with wrinkles…I haven’t imagined him while writing but I am ROFL after reading your comment.. Love you dear.
i read all ur episodes.. this story is fabulous..
Thank-you darsh.I know this word is less to express my feelings bit seriously right now I am unable to think of anything.
Hi!!!! Harini
Actually I am a silent reader of your fictions yaar but today I can’t be silent anymore…….just loved your fictions yaar…..even your previous fiction Limitless Love was awesome… Sorry !!! At that time I didn’t commented but today I was not at all able to stop my self from commenting….. U just rocked!! Loved ur fiction….
Specially the end was awesome…..
One more thing…..every time ur title will be justifying ur story……..just loved it…
Overwhelmed with your words dear and I am glad to know that you were silent reader of my previous fiction.please don’t say sorry dear.regarding ending, I have planned it before writing the first episode itself.
Woww a very very nce ending we will really miss u…..u write very nicely I just love ur writing skills plzz come back soon with a new ff ???????
Khan..what to say about you…a true encourager . thanks for regularly commenting and being a part of this fiction.I will consider your request dear.
Thnx Sree I will eagerly wait for ur next ff
Another wonderful end with a great n awsum lesson that people are not bad but there behavior are good or bad which decided the personality u r just a fabulous writer dear whole ff describes ur brilliant writing skills keep writing but as u said we all miss u plz dear come soon wid another wonderful story I am waiting as u r d one writer who don’t Want us to wait for her ff … 🙂 live long life n plz come soon dear with lots of love n wishes … hadi <3
Hadi…finally your name. Seriously I am jumping like a small kid now.and yes that was the message I tried to convey. I am not getting words to say thank-you bit God seriously dear I am honored. Love you loads.
your ff is so beautiful. i just loved it
Thank-you so much shyna.
iam really very happy.bt i didnt thought it will over so soon.i enjoyed alot
Thank-you sana. I have planned this as a short story only dear.
Fabulous Sree!!! Gr8 ending… You are a fantastic writer, these are words from my heart…. Hope to see another ff of yours very soon… Till then will miss ur writings…tc dear
Thank-you ashrita for your beautiful words. Miss you too dear.
It was a shock reading this epi to get to know that this is the last epi ……i really luv ur ff . uf way of writing can easily reach everyone’s heart …i wish to read another story written by u……and .i really don’t have any words to express my views …and thanks a lot for writing such a wonderful cute hate story………….
With lots of luv
JWALA ……..
And. I am gonna miss this story….?
I am angry with you now…why did you mention your name?? Uhh? I don’t need any explanation for that now because you are in my heart and I can easily recognized your comment. Well coming to your comment, I am overwhelmed seeing that my writings reach your heart which I thought I was poor at. And …what!! Thanks. I am again angry now.
I was thinking to make a movie with this..!! Will you object..?? Hehee… just kidding… it’s a filmy ending but I loved it yaar..!!
Seriously.. Then I don’t object but will suggest you to look at other fictions as they are really better than mine. Vini di’s is perfect example for that. Anyway it shows your love dear.regarding ending, I tried to make it natural but it turned out filmy.
wow it’s simply superb
i really miss this ff
thank u sree harini for giving a wonderful ff
the title exactly implies the story other than swaragini serial
i also want to read one more ff on swasan
all the best…
Thanks roja. I think this is your first cment on fiction. I am glad that you loved my fiction and I have justified my title.
Nyc ending lyk ur ff
Thanks Anny.
Pls…pls….pls write another story its my request and ya pls write it on raglak
Ayyo…I will dear but need some time to think about the plot and also this is end of academics . I need to concentrate on my studies even. Thanks dear.
Jus super…..ur ff was too diff i only cn say that i lyk ur ff vry vry much..
Kittuu.. I have got to know that you are a swalak fan by reading your comment on one of the fictions of this page. Inspire of being a swalak fan, you have read and regularly commented on this and this itself is a honour to me. Gonna miss you.
Fantastic,awesome,fab,ending i will miss u a lot this ff was mine 1 of favourate ff but im confused abuot lucky’s girl & krish girl but all ur 18episode were heart touching &&& plz write another ff plz love it miss it everthing
Thanks tanu. Lucky’s girl because ragini was laksh’s lover. Krish’s girl because she is married to krish. I hope your confusion got cleared.thank-you so much for loving my fiction and commenting regularly. Miss you.
Ur ending was a bit filmy, but I love filmy things. It was a very nice story. Surely we will miss u. Hope to see u with another one.
I tried to make it real but it ended in filmy way. Thanks Tania for being a regular reader of my previous fiction too. Love you so much dear and gonna miss you equally.
I’ll be missing this fiction…….it was just fabulous
Thanks sweety.another silent reader. Am at cloud nine.