thanks guys .nd come back sowmiya. I am late I know , but for sure my place would be filled by sowmiya’s ff . good sowmiya I read ur ff ….
pragya asked aliya y she spoilled all the things … aliya says I am brave girl but I don’t want amit. I can handle my child… pragya says but… abhi comes there ,says i am proud of u aliya nd thanks u United us . aliya says it’s k nd leaves. abhi says i am sorry pragya. .. she asked for what? Abhi says ,I told I will not leave u in any condition… but now… pragya says it’s k . no problem… while they r speaking, purvi comes there nd ask them to come down as dadi calls them
all in the hall. …..
dadi says tmrw is Diwali…. nd I want all my family to be here tmrw….k Sarla ji… she nods… abhi says y they want to leave let them stay here. .. Sarla says no beta.. I want to prepare for Diwali na… abhi says k I will drop u…
they all gets in car nd leaves to pragya ‘s house… pragya gets down nd all others went into house. .. abhi asked her not to go… pragya says wats tis …. abhi says i want to be with u…. for all time… pragya smiles nd says it’s already late go … dadi will be waiting for u .. ..abhi says k captain nd leaves. …
next day ,in mm
pragya’s family arrives nd all greets dadi nd all. abhi comes to hug pragya with a force but she suddenly moves ,abhi lost control nd hugs Sarla maa.. he smiles saying happy Diwali maa …. pragya laughs… she asked abt aliya ,he says she is in her room . pragya says let’s leave her alone for sometime. buntu nd bubbly asked pragya shall we fire crackers… pragya sayss noo I won’t.. abhi asked y? pragya says it’s waste of money. .. bulbul says it’s not lyk tat jiju she is feared of crackers … abhi says oh tats the matter nd asked bunty nd bubly to come..
all goes out.. purab, bulbul, and all fired crackers … abhi asked pragya to come but she says noo. .. abhi drags her nd she fires a cracker with help of abhi.. all goes in but kids want to fire crackers so akash was with them… he gets the call nd leaves … amit comes there covered with shawl asked the kids y r they firing the crackers like this. .. nd gets a rocket aims at aliya’s room balcony nd fires it… already before coming to kids he spilled oil there nd it catçhes fire. .. amit says aliya…. u r dead. ..
all comes out nd purab calls the fire station… all the house catches fire dadi asked all hav came out…. pragya says aliya… all searches for her meanwhile pragya enters in …. abhi shouts PRAGYA……. but she didnt listen…
plse comment wat u think abt tis track I just had an idea tats it….
will pragya save aliya… or she will sacrifice herself for aliya. .. keep reading… more interesting tracks r waiting. ..
I further says abhigya will not seperate .as we r bored of their separation in series …. I don’t know wat to comment on the upgng track..
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Very nice nice twist pragya will surely save aaliya but aaliya will hv abortion. Amit will be sent to jail I think so.. But nice
It’s nice…..continue this track……
great 😉
super and awesome keep it up
Naveena! My ff can’t fill ur ff’s place 😀 and u r going. With amazing track so go on! I will be eagerly waiting for ur next update
Hey plz dont sepatate abhigya….. plzzz nd todays epi s sooooo nice i m waiting 4 ur nxt epiiiiiii plz unite abhigya nd also save aliya
It’s very nice
Nyc
Superb going naveena…
I think U will not separate ABHIGYA………… sooo Pragya will save Alia……I think so……..Anyway ,The episode is Superb…………. Eagerly waiting for your next episode…………
I think you should make pragya save aliyah but she be’s okay to and they both get saved and they be okay and they start to find who did that and how that happened and then everything bes okay
SUprbbb..eagerly waiting for nxt epi…
nice waiting for next
naveena !! in real kkb they didn’t mention bunty and bubbly but happy to see them in ur ff !!! and still i can’t understand in amit’s intro he was speaking about some revenge ??? wat revenge????? and u r so creative presence of mind u have
I think abhi didn’t marry ritika na so that is the revenge
naveena speech less awesome idea yr just continue and in my point of view pragya will definitely save aaliya but I think she will get some burns marks I think.so or it is quiet possible that both will come out safe … anyways yr it was just awesome.
awesome next epi… update soon