Hello….my dear friends…Eva is back……i have started another fanfiction……Its name is I HATE U TOO………….
All the characters r same…but their situations r very different…………..
A girl is shown doing arti…she is wearing a baby pink sari, with golden border….she has covered her head with sari’s pallu…..she have worn a mangalsutra in her neck..no jewelry other than simple earings, a pair of bangles and payal……..and a simple waist chain…..
She does the arti and takes blessing from Ap Dp Sm(Sujata Maheshwari) and Rp…….
Ap:Swara beta……u have handled all the responsibilities of this house……so nicely……we r glad to get a DIL like u dear….
Swara smiles and goes to the kitchen…..she prepares the breakfast and serves it in the table…..Everyone r done with their breakfast except for Sanlak……
Swara goes to Sanky’s room……
Swara;Won’t u have your breakfast?
Sanky;No..mood nehi hai….
Swara:Fine….can u drop me to ma’s place?
Sanky;No na…i am busy……
Swara:Okay..i’m going….and u have your breakfast and ask your brother even to have the breakfast…both of u r so…..
She leaves………………
She goes to Gadodia house….
Swara;Ma!!!!!
Sumi:Shona..u here? What a pleasant surprise….
Sumi hugs Swara..
Shekhar comes from behind…
Swara;Baba….
She hugs him….
Shekhar;Beta…how r u?
Swara;I’m fine….
Swara goes to dada dadi’s room and takes their blessings……
Someone comes from behind and hugs her……its Niti…her cousin…who lives with the Gadodias since her childhood….
Swara:Niti…..
Niti:Di….how r u?
Swara;I’m fine…..and u?
Niti:Perfect….di…btw…i need to show u my new dresses…..
Swara:U go for shopping everyday…….and baba…i don’t have the patience them….
Niti:Come na……
They go to Niti’s room…..Niti blabbers about her dresses and everything….suddenly someone calls Swara…..
Swara:Hello…
Caller:Where rr u?
Swara:How does that matter to u?
Caller:Just shut up….
Swara:u shut up….
Caller:U have messed up my life and now u are enjoying at your place?….u always give me chances to hate u….I hate u…..
Swara:I hate u too………
Precap:Whats the reason behind this hatred in Swara’s voice?
18 Comments
seems to be interesting.. continue it dear…
is this a swalak and ragsan ff….please say yes
Super. Plz swasan.
..i think it’s laksh …..hmm…no…sanskar …or…..may be rags…… i don’t know any more names………
I cant believe u did swasan I was hoping u do ragsan
I still think its swalak….
Make it swasan and Raglak… I think it’s rag who was talking with Swara…
Nice starting Eva di…but I think its swalak….
Its awesome…..a hate story……….
Nice episode…waiting for the next part……but is swara sanskar’s wife?
Nice episode…but the pairs? Is it swasan or swalak.?
I think it is swalak……but I really liked your starting.
why am i guessing the caller to be laksh please make my guesses right eva i can’t bear more swasan ff’s now awesome start though
plz make it swasan and raglak story
Its interesting
Swalak please
Hey nithi character was awesome……I missed your previous ff alot and please this time make it swasan