Hey guys..SURPRISE …I know that i told i ll not be writing now..bt i also told that if i get time then i ll surely do. And frankly speaking i got few ideas so thought of writing them asap…so here u go nd don’t forget to share ur views..love u all
A few glances are shown….
K: trust me twinkle i didn’t know all this will happen….i mean i don’t know….
T: (teary eyes) stop it kunj …i thought u r a sensible guy bt i was wrong…i hate u kunj..!!
K: twinkle………………….
Kunj gets up. Thankfully it was just a nightmare bt what if its turns to be true??? Kunj was sweating badly..he drinks water. He looks at twinkle.. a guilt within him is killing him every moment..but what would he do..its too late now.
Next morning:
Twinkle gets up. He finds kunj sleeping. Strange…kunj never sleep till so late. She goes near kunj.
T: i know kunj there is something which is troubling u..and u wont tell me..bt ill find it out.
She goes away.
At breakfast table:
Every one is sitting and having their breakfast..
Anita asks kunj: kunj have u forgotten ur college?? U hardly go there..god what a wastage of money..
Kunj keeps quiet.
T: anita aunty how many times do i have to remind u that kunj is doing MBA from his savings..y do u interfere everytime..??
Bebe: twinkle is right..anita u mind ur own business..
A: kamal hai..bhalai ka to zamana hi nehi raha..( i see no one respect the good deeds nowadays)
Kunj looks at twinkle and thinks..” i behaved so badly with her yet she takes my side..supports me every time..and i ?? how can i ??????”
Kunj leaves.
T: KUNJ…..
Kunj comes to his room. He sits on the bed. He is much tensed. He thinks about the nightmare. Twinkle comes there.
T: kunj…
Kunj looks at her.
T: kunj don’t think about anita auntie’s words..she is like that only..( twinkle goes on speaking..her voice is muted) teri nazron mein hain tere sapne i.e., tum saath ho’s antara plays( from tamasha)
Kunj looks on. Twinkle stops suddenly.
T: sorry..i speak too much bt kunj don’t worry.. i m there for u..!
K: twinkle…do u trust me??
T: what kind of question is this…..of course i do..
K: pakka??
T: (making a childish face) yeah..
Kunj in his mind “ i hope twinkle u ll trust me..else or relation is going to be shattered”
A msg tone beeps. Kunj sees it. He leaves instantly.
An empty place is shown. Kunj is waiting there. Someone comes there.
K: where were u?? And what took u so long??
A voice is heard.. “ m sorry kunj”
Her face is shown. Its maya.
K: y did u call me??
M: i need to tell u something which i have decided..
K: what??
M: kunj m coming from hospital and…
K: and??
SCREEN FREEZES
PRECAP : the top secret will be revealed …
Guys i know it was not a long one ..bt don’t worry i will post few more epis today itself or tomorrow..i mean by the end of this weekend u ll get to read few more of my ff..so plzz keep reading them m sure u ll like it..and all those of u waiting for twinj moments..ur wish will be fulfilled on valentine’s day. So stay tuned.
27 Comments
Tara it ff is just amazing.. it always makes me think what wud happen nxt..u knw xactly wer to stop d episode..bt plz put a loooooooooooooooooooooooonger episode and plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cntnue writing n don’t stop it yaar plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz LUV U TARA
Nice epi… Love it.
thnks lara…yeah i try to stop my ff on a intrstng point…i wnt stop the ff bt there ll be gap btwn epis..due to my xams
Itsss fabb thank u tara for posting epi today thankss a lot
Tara wow……such brilliant twists……when are u writing the next part……I’m really excited…..
thanks guys..i ll try to post today..if nt then tmrw i ll post 2 epis..
Tara extremely nice
Love it
Keep it up
Lots of love
U always have some or d other suspense in d end . n this ff was short n sweet one . I don’t mind if u write a short episode also . I jus want something to come from tara tats it . pls write ur episodic analysis also whenever u get tym. I love those too much .☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺
thnks esha..nd simi…
simi i dnt mnd writing the episodic analysis provided i get a good topic..u guys can suggest smthng..nxways thnks again
Hmmmm.tara m waiting for top secret
I saw tomorrow’s trailer guys . Anita n yuvraj r together. N twinj will be dancing together .
ohhhh tara ur ff is just amazing I don’t hav words to describe it. luv u and ur epi
Tara ur a bunch of shit
Total shit
Who d hell r u to say dis ha . if u don’t like don at least insult d person like this . who ever u r ur a *** how dare u comment such a thing on mah friend?????????
thanks dear for taking my stand…
listen if u don’t like this better don’t read it//and i don’t give a damn whether u or ppl like u like it or not..u like the char of uvi is a tatal SHIT..better don’t mess wid me…
I don’t understand our comments take soo long to get posted because they get reviewd so the how can they allow such comments to get posted
exactly..i also dont understand what moderation it goes through…
if u dont like it better stop reading but dont blame any one i cnt understand what u people get by posting such comments
Nyc epi Tara… 😉 🙂
This was interesting enough for me as you said you will try and post as much as possible and so try plz and yeah more longer the rest shuld be and more romantic and intense scenes as they r amazing.
really gud
thanks guys..
Tara roccckkssss….. i realy like de last 18/19 lines…..actualy i like all the epi
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KiU tara…..??????
M waiting 4 d top scret☺☺☺☺☺hi
thank u.. 🙂
nice one tara waiting for the twist
sudha di, (m calling u di coz u r qte elder to me..all these days i hv been calling u by ur name so sry 4 tht..) the next epi is posted.