Hiii friends,…I hope you all will like this update,…
As usual ignore my grammatical errors here and there in this update,…
Episode 21 of Manmarziyan-Missing pieces Part 1:
It’s said that You have to be Sure when you put your feet in the rightplace before stand firm,…Yes,..Today Radz understood the real meaning for those words,…After a week leave,..Today she is entering Birdsong with eyes full of dreams,…She felt it’s the place to live her life the fullest,..To the maximum,…and its the same place where all her dreams gonna come true,…She was bit emotional,…Her lost in thoughts were disturbed by Sam,…
Sam:Chasni,…Where are you yaar?,…I’m talking with you only,…
Radz:Sam,…I,…I was joining after a long leave na,..So,…
Sam:Long leave???,..Just a week yaar,…Ok,…Pagal,..Listen,..I’m going to Neil’s cabin to see the arrangements,..You just prepare yourself for few minutes and show our final presentation to Arjun once before you present,..cox I din mail him the alterations you made in our presentation yesterday night,…Ok,…And I think,..Maybeline guys were in,…All the best chasni,…
Radz hugged sam,…
Radz:Thank you sam,…
Sam:Hmmm,…and I think,they gonna faint seeing you,..Really,You are looking like a Baby doll yaar,…
Radz smiled at sam’s comment,…
Radz:Sam,…You na,…
Sam:Ok,..Ok,..Jokes apart,…Let’s go,…
Saying so,Sam went to Neil’s cabin and Radz too kept her bag on her table after taking her pendrive to show the PPT to Arjun,…First her eyes searched her friends presence, who were in conference room discussing something,…Then,It reached Arjun’s cabin,…She glared Arjun, who was busy in talking with some one in his mobile,…
Radz innervoice:Today,I will definitely ask Arjun sir about that mysterious call,…I never let any harm reach sam again cox of you sir,…If it was nothing,Then,Why you tried to conceal?,…Something is there,.You are trying to hide from us sir,…sure,I will find what it is,…Arjun Sir,…
Radz took a deep breathe and tried to go to Arjun’s cabin was stopped by Teji,Zubin and Krithika,…
Zubin:Wow,…Chasni,…You are so pretty yaar,..If a Beauty contest held today,…I bet,…You only be the winner yaar,…
Teji:Haan chasni,…You look so beautiful today yaar,..What’s special?,…
Radz:Thank you teji,zubin,…Nothing special teji,..Sam only asked me to wear this dress,…And I wanna show this presentation once to Arjun sir Teji,…So,…Please,…
Saying so,Radz tried to move was stopped by krithika,…
Krithika:Harre,…Chasni,…Leave it yaar,…Maybeline guys were already in,..And Piyali mam calling you,…
Radz:Before meeting mam,I will show this ppt once to Arjun sir na,…Please,…
Zubin grabbed the pendrive from Radz and began,
Zubin:Chasni,…Leave tension yaar,…We will show it to Arjun sir,..You meet Piyali mam first,…She wants to meet you,..Go yaar,…
Saying so,they dragged Radz to Piyali’s cabin,..Arjun,who accidently turned that side had a little glimpse of Radz back,…But,It was hided by teji,..So,He ends the call and came out of his cabin to have a full vision,…But,Radz went from there with her friends before he comes,…Then,Arjun checked Radz table there,…He found her bag alone,…He lost in some thoughts for a while standing there alone,…
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Meanwhile In Piyali cabin,…
Radz:Excuse me Mam,…
Piyali:Yes,..Radhika,..come inside,…
Radz:Thank you mam,…
Piyali: How are you?,…How’s your health now?,…
Radz:I’m fine mam,…
Piyali:good,..
Radz: Why you called me mam?,…
Piyali:I din call you Radhika,…Anyways,You are looking good today,…
Radz:Thank you mam,…
Piyali:Teji,What are you doing here?,…
Teji:Mam,..Woooh,…I came with chasni to,…
Right then,Neil entered the cabin and began,
Neil:Wow,..Chasni,…Looking so pretty yaar,…Today after conference,In lunch party,You should dance with me yaar,..No excuse,..Ok,…
Radz smiled at Neil’s comment and began,
Radz:Neil,..Party???,…
Piyali:No radhika,…Neil,..Party will be there, only if this conference become success,…So,you ppl should work for that,…Understand,.. Before working,success wont come easily,…
Neil:I knew,…It was already a grand success Mam,…And Success will come before working too,..What chasni?,..Am I right yaar?,..
Piyali:How???,…
Neil:Ya,..It will come in our Dictionary mam,…If you don’t have faith in my words check the Dictionary too,…
Piyali laughed at Neil’s comment and began,
Piyali:If I talked with you for another few minutes,…I’ll forgot all my tension and my works too,,…Ok,..I think,Now time to greet those Maybelline Ppl,…And Radhika,..All the best,..do well,…Neil,You made all arrangements in conference Room right,…
Neil:Yes,..It was perfectly ready mam,..just chasni’s presentation and all our presence there is pending,…
Piyali:Good,…I’ll meet you all there,…
Saying so piyali went out of the cabin,…
Teji:Neil,chasni,I’ll come after few minutes yaar,…
Both nodded yes to Teji,…After Teji left,Neil holded Radz shoulder and began,…
Neil:Chasni,…You are looking too good but still I miss something in your face today yaar,…
Radz:What Neil?,…
Neil:Your smile yaar,…
Radz smiled lightly,…Seeing this, Neil began,…
Neil:Chasni,…You know one thing yaar,..The prettiest smile has more power to hide the Deepest secret in this world too yaar,…So,Always keep smiling like this,…
Radz nodded yes and began,…
Radz:And Neil,Tell me one thing,…From Where Dishonesty and Betrayal starts in a relationship?,…Whether It’s from telling Big lies or Keeping small secrets Neil,…
Neil:I dunno What makes you to ask this or why you are asking this?,…But,According to me,It was cox of maintaining small secrets yaar,…
Radz:But,Telling Big lies is also wrong in a relationship na Neil,…
Neil:I agree yaar,…But to maintain that small secret only,you are telling big lies na,… And Keeping secrets with someone is no different than lying to them chasni,… So,Hidden secrets has powerful impact in maintaining a Relationship yaar,…Ok,Leave all these,…Let’s go now,…
Saying so Neil tried to move,..Radz again continued,…
Radz:Neil,..What do you think about Arjun sir?
Neil understood that something hitching Radz mind continuously cox of yesterday’s happenings,..He smiled hearing this and began,
Neil:Chasni,…My thinking about Arjun is not important now yaar,…Only Sam’s wish is important for me,…You don’t think about any now,..Just concentrate on the conference chasni,…Because,Today is an important day in your life chasni,…you climbed up in your career within few months and today’s conference will be another milestone for your career yaar,…So, Leave unwanted thoughts in your mind and focus on today’s presentation alone yaar,…Ok,…Let’s go,…,…
Radz:Hmmm,…
Saying so,Neil holds Radz friendly and both walked towards conference hall,…
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Meanwhile Zubin and krithika,who were busy in noticing Arjun out of his cabin started discussing something,…
Zubin:What yaar?,..Seriously Teji is correct,…I couldn’t find any krithika,..Please leave this game na,…If Arjun or Sam found this,..We will be in a big problem yaar,…
Krithika:No zubin,…See,…Have you noticed Radhika’s restlessness when we dragged her to piyali mam’s cabin,…And all of sudden,Why she came in a pretty dress yaar,..Usually,She will be in normal dress na,…
Zubin:Krithika,..Please stop yaar,..She said na,..she has to show PPt to Arjun sir,…And Dress was Sam’s wish,…
Krithika:Ya,…I know,…Ok,…I accept Radhika was innocent,…But,Why Arjun sir tried to see Radhika and He even came near her table to check yaar,..Then,What will you say about this now?,…
Right then,Teji,who was annoyed in playing this game joining with Zubin and krithika came there and began
Teji:zubin,..Krithika,…Please,Stop this game yaar,..See I’m sweating in AC cox of you guys,…I cant lie to chasni yaar,..When Piyali mam said she din call Radhika and asked me why I’m there,…I was froze yaar,..Really It’s a difficult task to lie,…Neil came there or else,..I might have caught,…If chasni found these things,She will also be hurt yaar,…Sorry guys,I wont continue this game further,..And I don’t need to prove any about chasni yaar,…
Saying so,Teji went away from there ignoring Krithika’s call,…
Krithika:Teji,…Listen,..Teji,..
Zubin also irritated on krithika and began,
Zubin:I think Teji was right Krithika,…I too din like playing this game,…Conference gonna start in few minutes,…Leave all these na,..What we will get in finding who loves who yaar?,…Waste of time Krithika,…I heard Samrat sir gonna give us party here in our office,..If this conference become success,…So,Let’s enjoy our day yaar,…Please leave all this na,…Please Krithika,…
Krithika nodded yes to zubin unwillingly,…
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In Arjun’s cabin,…
Arjun,who was thinking about something deeply came back to his present by sam’s call,…
Sam:Arjun,..Are you busy?,…
Arjun:No Sam,…All came,…Shall we start?,…
Sam:Ya,..And Arjun,..Chasni showed you the changes she made in the PPT na,…
Arjun:No sam,…No need for that,…And sam I want to talk with you,…
Sam smilingly began,…
Sam:What Arjun?,..Anything important?,…
Arjun wearing a facade began,…
Arjun:Yes Sam,..It’s very important,…I was longing for that moment since years,..
Sam:Then bolo,…
Arjun: Sam I,..I,…
Right Then, Teji entered the cabin and began,..
Teji:Arjun sir,…Sam,…Piyali mam calling,…
Sam:Ok Arjun,..Let’s talk later,…I think its time for presentation,…Let’s go,…
Arjun:Ya,..Sure,…
Saying so Arjun and Sam walked towards conference room with sam holding Arjun’s arms,..
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In conference room,…
All were waiting in conference room to see the presentation,…Sam was busy in talking with Zubin and Krithika,…Whereas Arjun was searching for someone there,..He finally asked piyali itself,..
Arjun:Piyali,..Shall we start?,..Where is Radhika?,..Today,She gonna present right,…
Piyali:Yes Arjun,..She will come with neil,…I think,…
Before piyali completing her phrase,..Neil and Radz entered the conference room,…
Piyali:Arjun,you asked and she came,…
Arjun was stunned seeing his Radhika in an elegant Pink Maxi,…Infact,Arjun forgot himself in her beauty,…He stared at her from her foot to her eyes,…Meanwhile Neil excused everyone there to insert Pendrive in the Projector,..But It doesn’t make any sense for Arjun,..Radz too felt odd while seeing Arjun back cox his intense stare tingles something in her too like him,…
Neil:So,Sorry for the delay,…Radhika did most of the work in this project,..So,If she presents,it will be nice,…
Maybeline lady:Great,..Radhika,..go ahead and present your idea,…
Hearing this,She turned her gaze towards the projector screen and took a deep breathe before starting the presentation,…But Arjun’s eyes were still glued on Radz,…
Radz:Our smile is the most beautiful thing in this world,…It’s the happiness which we find right under our Nose,…That precious smile was insured by our lips,…And Maybelline Newyork,with our hydrating formula,we are helping you to retain your happiness by our colourful Lipsticks which will enlighten your confidence level more in your precious smile,…Here in our factory,we sell those Lipsticks which are your real life confidence booster,…And In our Ad,we sell our hopes to you,…
All were stunned by Radz performance and applauded her,…Radz was happy seeing this and her smile vanished when her eyes met those intense pair of Arjun’s which were still busy in staring her,…
Right then,A Maybelline guy made an announcement,…
Maybelline Guy:wow,..We loved this presentation and we are ok with your pamphlets and designs,…And We also wanna declare another happy news for Birdsong,…I mean,..One of My friend was looking for a cooldrinks Ad within a week,…I recommended Birdsong and He saw your previous presentations,… He was satisfied in the performance of Birdsong especially this Girl Radhika’s,..Keep it up,…Now,He wanna give this contract to Birdsong,…I hope you people will accept this proposition,..
Piyali,sam,Neil,Teji,Zubin,Samrat and everyone there were happy hearing this from Maybelline ppl,…
Maybelline lady:But,There is one problem,…He will never recheck your presentation or Ads,..I mean he wants final Ad by next week with some adventurous concept,…
Samrat:Ok,..It’s not a tough task for us to do an Ad within a week,..But,Without knowing Brand name and location,..How can we proceed?,..
Another Maybelline Guy:Brand Name is Mountain Dew,…
All were stunned hearing this,…Cox it was really a big project for Birdsong,…
Piyali:Oh!,…We are so glad to hear this,…Ya,..We will do this definitely,…
Maybeline guy:I’ll make further arrangements with My friend regarding this,..He will come online tonight and will contact you,…You discuss with him about other things,…
Samrat:Thank you,..Thank you so much,…
After the Maybeline ppl left,…Samrat announced a Dancing party and a lunch at Birdsong as they don’t have enough time for a big party,…
Samrat:Today We have party here at Birdsong,…Enjoy your day,…And this one is especially for our Star Radhika Mishra,…Now celebration time,..Make way for the star and Enjoy,…
All were started shouting in joy and carried Radz in their Arms to celebrate this special occasion,…Arjun was bit silent,…Last time, he was angry in seeing this happiness when Birdsong got the Maybelline Newyork Ad but Now, he too felt happy seeing radz smile,…When Sam tries to engage Arjun in their celebration,..He excused himself stating that he has some important work ,…Then, Sam joined the gang happily with Neil,…Neil was happy seeing Sam enjoying the celebration,..Even sam called him for a dance and both started dancing on “Ishq wala love song”,…Radz,who was eating Ice cream with Teji also enjoyed a lot seeing their dance,…But her Enjoyment doesn’t last long,…Her mobile started ringing continuously,…
Teji:Chasni,…I think your mobile is ringing yaar,..
Radz:What Teji,..I couldn’t hear you cox of music,…
Teji shouted at her ears,…
Teji:Chasni,..Your mobile is ringing,…
Radz:HAan,.I can hear,..Dont shout yaar,…
Saying so,Radz checked her mobile and was shocked seeing 18 missed calls from her ma,…Teju noticed her tensed look began,
Teji:Hmmm,..Ok,…Finish eating yaar,..See Ice cream fell on your both hands,..
Radz:Teji,..18 missed calls from mom yaar,..I think something important Teji,..Or else mom wont call me,…
Teji:Ok,..Chasni,..Go slow yaar,…
Radz:Haan,..Ok,. Teji,..Listen,If Sam asks,Tell her I’ll come after few minutes,..
Saying so, Radz ran out from there,…Teji too engaged himself busy in eating other flavor Ice creams,…
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Near staircase,…
Radhika went out of the party place near steps alone to call her ma,…She dialled her ma tensedly but,Her ma din pick her call,…She was panic whether something bad happened to her dadaji or her ma ,…
Radz.holding her mobile began,…
Radz:Ma,..Pick the call na,…Please God,..Nothing should happen to my Dadaji and my ma,..Why I’m thinking like this?,…Ok,..It’s better I call Ankush bhaiya,…
Saying so, Radz turned and bumped into Arjun accidently,…Arjun holds her from falling,.. Radz too hold his chest for support,.while holding, she also colored Arjun’s white shirt with her chocolate icecream Hands,…In this she puts her mobile down,…Arjun lost himself completely seeing Radz this closer,…Both steadied themselves after an intense stare,..Radz took her hands away from his shirt and also felt awkward with Arjun’s intense stare,.. she din utter any,..But seeing chocolate stains on Arjun’s white shirt and feeling Arjun’s hold on her arms still,She began,..
Radz:Sorry sir,..I din see,…
Saying so,she averted her gaze down,…But,Arjun din release his hold on her arms,..So,Radhika faced him again sternly and noticed Arjun’s proximity,…She tensedly began
Radz:Sirrr,..
Arjun ignored her words and released his hold on her one hand,…Radhika tried to move but Arjun pulled her again towards him,…Radz was puzzled by this and began tensedly,
Radz:Sir,…What are you doing?
Arjun again ignored her words and he let his hand beneath her face,…Radz’s heart started beating faster,…She couldn’t stop the racing in her heart seeing Arjun’s hand coming near her neck,…She swallowed hard,…Arjun was totally lost seeing this,…and he couldn’t breathe hearing the racing of her heart,…His parted lips was longed for something,..His heart knew what it is,..So,He tried hard to control his heart’s desire,…Their lips were Barely few inches apart,..Both can hear other’s heart beat and the silence prevailing there increased their tenderness … Radz couldn’t tolerate this proximity,…She even had some unknown tears in her eyes,..She averted her gaze completely from Arjun and continuously chanted one word “sir” to get release from this unknown pain,…Radz closed her eyes tightly while chanting,…
Radz:Sir,…Sir,…
Meanwhile Arjun’s hand reached her neck,..But,He stopped Before touching her’s,..and hold her forefinger firmly,…Feeling Arjun’s hold on her finger,Radz slowly opened her eyes,.. Arjun glared her back with his parted lips,. Both stared even without blinking their eyes,…He cleaned the Icecream stain on her neck with her fore finger,…Radz felt the touch of her finger on her neck itself somewhat weird because of Arjun’s hold,…But,the racing of her heart became normal and this time she stares him back without any awkward sense,…After moping around her neck with her finger,Arjun released his hold on her finger and on her arm as well,…Then, he distanced himself from her and pretends to clean the stains on his shirt using his handkerchief,…Radz felt relaxed after arjun distanced himself from her,..Then,she remember her ma and so she searched her mobile,which she puts down accidently while arjun cleaning the stains on his shirt,…She took her mobile parts hurriedly and started mantling it hastely,…Arjun noticed the tension on her face and began,
Arjun:Cant you know how to walk properly?,…See, you again ruined my shirt Radhika,…
Hearing this,Radz began,
Radz:Oh,…Sorry sir,…
Saying so,Radz tried to move was stopped by Arjun’s hold on her hand,..
Arjun:What happened Radhika?,…Any problem?,…Dadaji and ma is fine right,…
Right then,Radz mobile started ringing,…Radz was shocked seeing the caller ID,…and began,
Radz:Sir,…Now I’m not in a position to talk with you,…Please,…You go from here,…
Arjun:First answer my question Radhika,…
Radz:Sir,I have to attend the call,…Please,leave my hand,…Sam is waiting for you in the party,..
Arjun:Is it from Your ma,Radhika?,…
Radz:Sir,…Why You are not trying to understand,what I’m saying?,…I dunno anything,…Please,leave my hand,…
Arjun left her hand seeing her welled up teary eyes,…Radz ran out from there without giving any heeds to Arjun,…
Precap:Piyali asking suggestion for some adventurous location spot for their New project,…Neil and sam suggesting Rishikesh let Arjun and Radhika into an intense Stare,…
19 Comments
Loved it yaar good keep writing it
It was amazing ….
Now they will go to rishikeish
Excited for the next part
Love u TC
Rishikesh ohhhh mar gaya radhika
Thank god renu !!!!! Your story update , iam dying fan of u r ff story ur good writer, today episode awesome rads pink dress , arjun mesmerized her beauty its so nice dear* pls update regularly icant wait , take care dear…….rrrr.
Beautiful episode…:*
Awesome story, can’t wait for the next update. 🙂
Awesome
nice one
hi renu i was a silent reader of ur explanation of every episodes of manmarziyan i saw accidentally ur ff and now only i compleated 21 episodes from yesterday i just want to say u r amazing dear realy u nicely carried it darling
keep going………..tc
update next part soon
Amazing dear. U r superb what can I say about ur writings dear. U keep writing these wonderful stories. Luv u….tc…
renu u r now planning to kill me girl. superb epi. loved it. Oh itna saara romance chal raha hain sab se chup ke. Why did the cbi team stop investigating??!! But i think kritika the leader will not back out so soon. Arjun staring at radz n radz getting uncomfortable. Always trying to eat her up with eyes n intense gaze. lol. Neil our cutiepie turned into superman now with all the philosophy talks. Oh god plzz don’t make him devdas. plzz.
Neil n radz scene superb. Sam n radz talking abt long leave n joking. superb. N ardhika scene ufffff so breath taking. Now chocolate color instead of red. Its gud atleast color is changed. Why do he always wear white shirt in these scenes. Hmmmm.
Rishikesh oh superb. yaa neil, sam n radz enjoyed full on in previous trip. But saral will be there. N with arjun i doubt the enjoyment. khadoos boss. He will kill people with his eyes. Then no adventure, no enjoyment. waiting for the next one sweety. U always make us longing for ur updates. update soon. loveeeee u. take care.
Renu, it was a romantic piece. Inikku 2 times kwaishon peliki song vandhrukkum 1st in conference hall(arjun stare at radhu) 2nd staircase scene.
I think Krithikas plan ws failed/spoiled cox of teji & zubin. Krithika oda moolai(brian) ya poittu pinch panittu varanam pola irundhadhu Edhukku ippidiyellam yosikra.
And, teji such a nice friend.
Innikku niraya orgl track niyabbagam vandhadhu Arjun radhu va paatth mesmerize aardhu (chummavey mesmerize aaiduvappla adhuvera vishayam), neil radhu convo, project presentation, project achive panradhu, party celebration, samiel dance & ardhika staircase scene.
And idhukku munbelam maybeline ad tv la paarkkum podhu mmzn niyabagam varum …innimerpattu mountain due ad paarkkum podhum mmzn(renu’s missing pieces) niyabagam varum ninaikkiren.
Totally todays missing piece was mindblowing & all the very best for ur future pieces renu. Thank u sooooo much renu.
Ok bye maa.
Nice chapter di!!
Such a wonderful episode…. Boosted the original mmz’s energy ….
superb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! cant comment a long 1.coz im busy.my practical board xam begins tmrw.sooo plzz pray…………
Super di!! Super!! Renu!! Enna ma neenga ippadi pandreengle ma…. Chaa….
Arjun is not able to control his feelings… Kritika and her game… She almost landed poor teji in trouble… It was a nice episode di…. Party scene super… Why was her mom calling her so much?! Uh oh..
Seekrama update pannu… Love you loads.. Tc… Keep smiling.. Bear hug ??
Awesome renu …
Hi renu nice episode….. I thoroughly loved it. It was a fantastic Saturday treat. I loved Zubin Krithika s and teji s involvement. I Guess Krithika gives up unwillingly. Well will she find d smelly fish??? Radhika and arjuns mutual attraction was thoroughly grt. I enjoyed it … Arjuns helpless attraction and radhika unable to give a name to d feeling..whn he comes near her. On whole it ws a gud one. I liked neils and radhikas interactions ..it’s true tat frm small lies d big one starts… And usually tats how relationships erodes. And y is radhika crying?? I can’t bear d suspense renu plz update soon dear. U r truly an awesome writer. Tc.
Omg renuuuuuuu dearyyyyyy it’s amazingly awesoooooome update. ..loved it very very muchhhhhh. …birdsong scene with crew n ppt was really awesome. ..rads convo with Neil n arjun’s restlessness was really very interesting. …the conference rm scene was mind blowing. ..arjun continuously staring rads in the pink maxi…palkein jhapkana bhi bhool gaya…awesoooooome scene…they got contract n even bonus deal with other project …wowwww lovely rads….samrat n piyali were very good. ..n the crew very happy. .just loved it …the intimate scene of ardhika was so hottttt n stunning. ..the proximity, the touch, the racing heart beat n eyelock…ufff undescribable….soooooooo lovelyyyyyy yaaaaaaaarrrr….what was the call from rads ma…very tense n also made arjun really worried. ..so connected to each other’s pain…wowwww awesome update n lovely dialogues. ..precap very exciting n interesting. ..in rishikesh again ….wowwww more ardhika missing parts…I’m just loving this ride too muchhhhhh. …amazingly awesoooooome narration. …renuuuuuuu my sweeeeeet friend you’re outstanding. ..incredible. ..keep it up. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads and very tight hug. . muaaaaahhhhhh happy belated Valentine’s Day. ..♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡