HI EVERYONE..thanks for the warm appreciation.. u all are so sweet..m so glad that u ll are liking my ff. Thanks to those who are recently reading my ffs and of course special thanks to silent readers. I have one request to all those who read my ff..plzzz guys when i end my ff i want all of u to comment even the silent readers..plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz its an earnest request. Okay moving to todays epi….
Twinkle stops there. She turns towards kunj.
T: i also what kunj??
K: u also don’t want this marriage……
T: no.. its nothing like that…we don’t have a relation as such..(before she could finish)
K:o really twinkle??
T: kunj we had never shared a husband wife relation then y are u asking such things??
K: oh …so that means u ll be able to see me someone else..good very good…
(Then he softly says to himself) “matlab sirf mein akela hu jo tumhare liye mare jaraha hu”
Twinkle couldn’t hear this..
T: what did u say??
K: nothing..tu nehi samjhegi..
Kunj leaves angrily.
That night twinkle couldn’t sleep thinking about kunj’s words.. “ tu nehi samjhegi” echoed in her ears.
Next morning twinkle decides to visit the gurudwara as she always does when she is upset. She informs bebe and leaves. Twinkle is shown praying in the gurudwara. She comes out and finds something very shocking.
Kunj gets up. He doesn’t find twinkle there. He gets tensed thinking what if twinkle had left him and the house. He calls her bt she doesn’t picks up the phone. Kunj gets more tensed.
Twinkle is shown following someone. She has suspicion in her eyes.
Bebe comes to kunj. She finds him tensed.
B: what happened puttar??
K: bebe twinkle is not in the house..she is not taking my call..
B: oho.. i forgot to tell u..she went to the gurudwara, and she had informed me that.
T: thank god…..i was so worried..!!
B: oye..when u are in love wid someone ..it happens..But don’t miss her so much… (She laughs and leaves)
K: love?? I wish bebe she could understand what i feel for her!!
Kunj was leaving from there when he heard….
“ kunj..bebe..maa…where are u??”
Kunj turns back. Its twinkle. Every body comes there running.
B: what happened twinkle??
T: batati hu bebe..sab bata ti hu…bt where is anita aunty??
K: twinkle what is the matter??
Anita comes there listening to the noise.
A: omg!! Is this a fish market??
T: anita aunty..where were u??
A: in my room..
T: oh.. i thought i saw u somewhere..with someone..
A: what??…i..never went out today..
T: then what is this??
Twinkle show a pic in her phone where anita has covered her head wid a dupatta and she is offering a packet to a person in black burkha!)
Everyone sees it.
B: arey..its anita..
Usha: yeah bt what is all this..twinkle?
T: bebe maa, i saw anita aunty and clicked the photo in my phone..
Anita gets nervous.
B: anita y did u lie then??
A: bebe actually..
T: arey bebe what will she say.. m telling u..
Twinkle calls someone….”plzz come in”
A person with black burkha comes in…
T: bebe now u can hear from her..
Twinkle uncovers the face. Its maya.
Everyone says in unison… “ MAYA??”
T: YEAH..MAYA..AND THIS PACKET CONTAINS TWO LACS IN CASH..
Every one gets shocked..
T: now will u tell everyone or shall i call the police?????
Maya cries.
M: m sorry everyone….sorry kunj..i have done a great mistake..plzz forgive me..
K: now what have u done??
M: i…i am.. i am not pregnant !!
K: WHAT??
M: yes..anita aunty gave me money to do this drama so that u and twinkle gets separated …(she narrates the whole incident)
Everyone gets shocked..they all looked at anita.
Bebe goes near anita..she slaps he right away…
B: chi anita chhiii…. i never thought u l go so down and maya u… u claim ur self to be kunj’s friend and u did this wid him!!
M: m really sorry be…….
K: shut up..just shut up..if u utter a single word..then i will forget that u r a girl..just leave from here..leave..
M: ku…
K: (shouts) i said get lost…out..!!
Maya leaves.
B: he wahe guru..tera lakh lakh sukr hai k sab thik ho gaya..
Bebe and usha leaves. Anita also leaves.
Twinkle looks at kunj. Kunj seems to be angry..twinkle is about to say something but kunj leaves.
SCREEN FREEZES
PRECAP: twinkle asks kunj what he was telling her last night?? Kunj smirks.
Ok guys.. i hope u all are happy now..all those of u who were thinking it to be kumkum bhagya track..i hope u all are satisfied wid this twist..and twinj romance will be there from next epi onwards…and it will be posted on coming Friday… plzz do share ur views…via comments..
THANK U.
48 Comments
hey tara,,I never commented..but ur ff is really nice, don’t know how can u describe sooo… well
thanks prapti…and m very happy that u cmnted..
Nice. But which day episode is this?
sanjana this is a fan fiction and not the real episode of tei..
Heyy Tara itss amzingg finally misunderstanding between is over now! Eagerly waiting for ur nxt epi nd thankss for such a wonderful epii!
thank u sunaina..
I don’t have words to describe our writing skills ……u r such a lovely person…muaaahhh???????
awww thats so sweet of u rashi…love u ..
i never wrote comment but you are the best this is better than the real episodes
hey farhia..thanks a lot for commenting…and that was a great compliment i think..so yaa thanks a lot..
I love did episode Tara dear. Its d best twist u used in the story. I loved it . thank you for giving such a NYC episode. Thank you so much???????????????????in love wid ur story track ……………….????????????
thanks simi..u a really so sweet..i just wait for ur comments..u nd rakshita are the best commentrs…love u..muahhhhh… 🙂
That was good and i am glad that the track of pregnancy ended and i hope there will be romantic and intense scenes and that they will confess their love to each other in the next episode and consummate their marriage and have scenes like that and plz update regularly or as soon as pos thanks
THANKS..kna786,,for reading my ff everyday and for commenting as well..
Superb writer you are.loved it.
thanks a lot sasmerra
Tara…day by day I m bcmng ur fan……u r the best writer I know…(along with smc and Aakanksha)
thanks rakshita…as i said above u r a superb commentor..and i really love to reads ur comments..
Bht bht achi epi..plzzz post the next part
thanks mahira..bt next epi will be posted in the week end..
Awsum epi Tara… ?☺
thanks ruchi..
wlcm Tara dear. I just luv ur ff & d way u write is awesome… ur episodic analysis was too good. BTW r u Bengali??
thnk u again..nd yes m bengalee..
nd u?
ya..I’m a Bengali too…egiye jao dr
oooo i see … getting so many bengalis over here… m really glad,,,,btw whats ur age??
Love it eagerly waiting for next episode
thanks sabanana
U r brillint tara…its OXXM 2 day????????????????????????
Looov u n ur ff….??????????????❤❤??
its OXXM 2 day????????????????????????
Looov u n ur ff….??????????????❤❤??
thanks preety…love u too…
very nice of u tara i didnt mean that i thought to say that it was a misunderstanding and maya too misunderstood (she doesnt know that she is not at all pregnant ,reports changed ) but very nice episode and next one will be awesome
oh that means u thought maya also didnt know…okay..
anyways thank u di..u r really i nice person i i value ur suggestions and comments..thanks alot.
u r welcome i really feel u as my choti behan when u call me di thank u prepare wel for board exams as u can write ff later on
yeah di..m doing that..and i will continue my ff after exams..bt after writing few more epis..by this week end…btw i don’t have any elder sis..all my cousin’s are brothers..so i also feel like u r my badi behen..hehe
sorry di..it me tara..
yeah di..i m preparing..and btw i don’t have any elder sis..all are brothers..so yes somewhere i also feel like u r my badi behen..hehe
Dear tara u are a brilliant talented writer… Am accept that u r real writer of the world….. Your fanfaction story is day by day increasing happinies in my face…… Am daily reading your ff but not comment to this story…… So daily am reading your ff nd as well as comments to u thank u so much……
thnks aarush..m happy tht u liked it..nd once again thnks 4 reading this nd 4 cmntng.
Tara just loved it???????
thnks anushka.
Plzzz post d nxt part tdy coz cnnt wait tilll friday
sry cutie pie can’t do it tdy..bt i will try asap.
Tara u r ff is really good nd i can’t wait till fri upload it fast
i ll try bt can’t promise..
i ll try ..bt can’t promise..
well I’m 18 & I guess u r about 16 or so..
yeah ur right..m 16…