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Recap : swara with goons
Scene1
They leave and swara starts to walk
SWARAA
A voice comes frm behind
she turns back and saw maheswary
Swara:aunty any problem
AP:so u remember us
SwRa:how can I forget u all..especially that high class
Sujatha:beti..what are u doing here..this time
Swara:actually aunty..my scoty is punjured. ..so I decided to walk..
Dp:bt u r along here. ..this time very bad…any thing can happen
Swara:no uncle…I knw that..and thnq for caring…
Ap:where is ur house beta
Swara:its some what near
Sujatha:whats ur maa..baba..
Swara has tears in eyes
Ap:beta…what happn…
Swara:aunty…I lost my maa 2 years back
Rp:we are sorry beta…
Swara:its okay uncle..nw I dont have any problems. ..I moved on
Dp:and ur papa
Swara:he is doing business
They were wLking..and they reached a colony
Maheswary were surprised to see many people gatherd
A elderly man:meri pothi..why are u late…see the time
Swara:dada..no problm…on the way I’ve met arjun bhai so I talked…by the way this is maheswary family
Swara:aunty..uncle. .they are my relatives
All have tears in eyes
Swara:again started..I ve already said naa..u all are my family…
They all starts to talk…ap was stairing at swara…
Swara:what happnd aunty..
Ap:nothing betAa
Dp:its late..we shall leave now
Swara:uncle ur car is ready
Rp:bt it was punjured. .
Swara:now its okay…and one more thing..its not good to go outside at night..u can easily get cold..
All smile at her concern
They leave
In car
Dp:she said that she have only baba..then those relatives
Rp:bhai saa…she was talking na..we interpreted so that she was not able to complete. .
Sujatha : bt she is reLly good..I wish she could be our DIL
They reach maheswary
Scene2
In mrng
Sanskar is seen jogging..he sees swara
sanskar:to himself
This low class..jogging. .very funny
Swara heard this..hey mr high class. .jogging is not only meant for u…bt for all
Saying she leaves
Sanskar:how can she knw wot I speak. ..I just thought only…
Just then he heard western music. ..he goes there…
A girl is seen playing guitar…and many children are jumping and playing
He cant see her face…her back is towards his frnt..
He was memerised by her music….
He moves frm there…at that time the girl turns….
Children:shona diiii…..awsome….
Swara : thanks my dear…
And keeps that a side and continues jogging. ..and later she left…..
Gadodia mansion
Shekhar was already awaken. ..
Shekhr:shonaaa…
Swara:aftr a lot…mr gadodia talking with me…wow. .(she claps)
Shekar:I need to talk to u
Swara:ur time is over….why I needed u the most..u were not there…and only because of u…I lost her….
She storms to her room
Swaras room…
There is no light…swara touches a switch. ..as soon as…she heard a talk
She sits there like a obidient dog…and starts to listen
Sound:my dear shonaaa….dont be upset my dear….life is best when we have comolication…they only we can enjoy our life…listen betaa.When ever u r in pain…just think of our happiset moments…life is about forgiving not hurting. ..we must forgive everyone…even if they hurt us mentally…keep smiling my child…always smile
Swara gets up frm there
She touches a photo. ..(as its dark…we cant see anything)
Swara:maaa…..u know how much I missed u these years. ..I dont no maa…and I feel ur presence when ever I see aunties (ap &sujatha)…why u left me maaa…only ur words are there with me…ill live according to that..I’ll forgive all….bt for that I need some time. ..missing u maaa….
She goes out….and leaves for some work…
.
Noon time
Swara is cleaning the floor…at that time maheswary family arrives….
They were shocked to see swara there. …
Dp:dr swara….
Swara:haaa uncle…how are u…
Ap:beta…tum yahaaa…
Swara:im….
Before that shekar came….
Sujatha:swara beta…what happend. ..
Swara:im not working in hospital maaa…I got fired
She looks at sanskar who is standing at the door
Ap:what
Swara:its okay maa…it happend like this…
Fb
Swara in shekar cabin
Shekar:swara…y are u behaving like this..
Swara:what I’ve done
Shekar:Ive heard..u talking with sanskar…we have a deal with them…at least think about that
Swara:ohh…still now…deal…look mr gadodia SWARA WONT CHANGE FOR ANYONE. ..IF U WANT U CAN CHANGE URSELF…
Fb ends
Ap:what are u doing here
SERVANT..a voice comes frm behind
Swara looks at that side
A girl with modern outfit comes there…
Girl:hii guyss…Im shivanya…u can call me shiva. ..by the way…look at her dress…im damn sure she us servant….
She started to insult swara. .
Sanskar was really feeling something. ..bt he dont no the reason
Swara:have u completed…
Shiva looks at her
Swara:ms shivanya rathord..mind ur own business…I may be servant..bt I dont have any problem in it..after all we akk are the servants of God. ..so behave…
Swara tooks the equipments and goes to the kitchen….
Maheswary were taking about the deal…shiva roams around the mansion….
She sees a beautiful electric guita…
Shiva:uncle…whose guitar is this
Shekr:its swaras
Shiva:ms servant’s. ..wow…uncle may I take this…I can pay for this. ..I need this uncle
Shekar:no beta…u cant pay…if it was mine..I may give..bt is not mine. ..so plz…
Shiva was going to touch that…
Swara:badmaashh…(she screams)
She was fuming in anger
Hiw dare u to touch my guitar….just mice away
Shiva:no never…what if I take this…
Swara:dont test my patience. …
Shiva:u r just a servant. ..how can u get a costly guitar…I guess u have steal something….
Swara was folding her fist. .and the glass the glass breaks…
All were standing….they couldn’t control any one…
Shekhr:sanskar…plz take shivanya…or else…she was…
Shiva:uncle…dont worry…im black belt…
Shekar:shiva plz…
Swara stands there..
Swara:if u have that much courage touch it…
Shiva touch it….
Shiva:maaaaaaa (sge screams)
She falls down on mud.
Swara:u may be black belt…if u ever try to touch it again..the current just pasaed in ur hand…bt next time..all body…mind it…
Swara goes frm there….
Dp : wots this shekar. ..hiw can shiva ge shock
Shekar: only swara can touch that…even if I tried to touch..same happens with me. ..
Shiva:uncle…y r u tolerating her….dp uncle…I need guitar
Dp:shekar. ..frm were u bought it…
Shekar:its not bought…its made by….her
All were surprised
Precap:swara sings in a party…sanskar notes swara celebrating her bday with street people….
Have u enjoyed…..im realy sorry…I’ll be little busy frm now…I dont no whether I can post or not….
9 Comments
It is just awesome
I like what you’ve written…But I’m just teeny bit confused
Where is Swara cleaning the floor
who is shivanya? plz upload asap….plzzzzzzzzz.
nice
Lovely excellent dear great job…
no salluz.. u cannt do this to us.. plz post daily.. chhotu saa bhi chalega but u hav to post.. u knw I am leaving ff in tellyupdates.. but due to sm swasan ff I couldnt. and that one is urs too
nice super Dr I loved very much…..
superrr…
Nice