Continuation
Swara: u both fell in love, rite? (laksh was shocked by this question, he was desperately waiting for an answer, a negative answer)
Rag and rithik: no (laksh got relieved)
Swara:then
Rithik: I fell in love with shivanya
Swasan: whos that?
Ragini: my doctor!!!
Swasan: what? And started laughin
Ragini: he accompanied me evrytime I went to the hospital but only after 5 months I found that he didn’t come for me but to see his lady love
Rithik: of course I came to see her and by d way who will come for this nautanki
Laksh whispered I will but no one heard it except ragini…
Ragini: hm…..after a long while am eating good food
Rithik: thank god u agreed u don’t cook well and started laughing at her
Ragini made faces and told I was telling about ur food and started laughing too while rithik was staring her with fake anger ……..
Laksh couldn’t tolerate their closeness anymore and finally gained some courage and told ragini I want to talk to u
Ragini : sure laksh tell me
Laksh : alone
(ragini looked in his eyes and told )
Ragini: we don’t have anything to talk alone laksh whatever u hav to tell me tell it here
Laksh was shocked by her act and decided to confess his love for her infront of everyone
Laksh: I love u ragini (all were shocked )…………………plz comeback in my life, I know its not easy for u to accept me after what all I did to u but I hav realized my mistake and I love u a lot……………..plz ragini forgive me , I really want u in my life
(he was on his knees ,with tears in his eyes and he completely broke down in front of her)
Ragini lifted him, saw in his eyes and started telling,
Ragini: laksh, u know what after u left me I thought it was the end of the world, I was completely broken, my heart stopped beating but when I left to Mumbai …..i encountered a lot of women who were in worser conditions than I was, but still managed to smile ……….i asked them how could u do that…..and they simply replied life is a journey and not a destination and till the journey continues u hav to live a little for yourself , no matter how hard life hits u ,tell it, I am harder ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………….
and thanks to u it was bcoz of u, I realized who I am and what I ache for…….
Laksh: I am sry
Ragini: no , thank u and rithik I have some work so I will leave
Laksh: u didn’t anwer me ….did u forgive me? Will u accept me?
Ragini: i forgave u long back and coming to accept u …….i don’t want love anymore I only want some respect which I already have….
Laksh: but I want ur love
Ragini: u should gain love not beg…….and gaining my love is very hard
Laksh: r u challenging me?
Ragini: if u think so ,then yes
Laksh: challenge accepted
Ragini: all the best mr.laksh maheshwari
(and she turned to leave)
Laksh: thank u mrs.laksh maheshwari
(she heard it but she left without replying)
Rithik swara sanskar and kaira were happy for them and were waiting for laksh to succeed in his challenge………………
Did he succeed?
Hm…………………..u decide what u want guys …..is it fair for ragini? Does laksh deserve another chance?
The climax of this 2-parted os is urs whatever u want u add it and don’t forget life is a rollercoaster ride and it is ur decision to scream or enjoy the ride …
Hope u guys liked it……thank u.
18 Comments
Laksh doesn’t deserve Ragini anymore..
If u ask me I would never want dat bad laksh to get ragini… rest is ur wish n it was gud 🙂
Superb plzz raglak he should get 2nd chance
Yes, please make ragini accept laksh after little ignorance
No raglak.how can laksh love ragini?
She has done lots wid his family.and after laksh’s betray she has to move on wid another person.
Hey,u will write the ending na…?
No abhi I am not writing the ending…….bcoz each one’s view will be diiferent that’s why……
Hey y r u ending it pa pls continue
No make a new entry for her……
No, he don’t deserve…..
Wowww awesome dr
Plz unite Raglak
plz reunite raglak ..
but after a long time …
Lol! I loved ur ending? Climax for me would be yes! Mr.Laksh Maheshwari would definitely win his princess’s heart?
Atleast u understood that the climax is the readers choice nd they can end it however they want……? thank u
nice yaar…..
I want Lakshya to win
i hate lakh. he doen’t deserve ragini anymore