hey guys!! kritika here!!
episode 8..
tq dhara, charming, kiara , jollybembi , angel, sarika, heena , shagun , malar n tooba..for ur comments and wishes.
kiara- all the best u too..n im not having board exams…im in 8th..
n jollybembi- dear im in 8th..n tq for ur wish..tq for ur wish.
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@anagha’s house….
They ring the bell…
Anagha opens the door..
Anagha- ee ladki! Tu phir aa gayi! Aur aaj tere saath tera majnu bhi aaya hai! Aaja andar aa…aaj to mai tanne sabak sikha ke hi chodungi..
Swara murmurs- hey what did she say? Muzna??? What!
Sanskar murmurs- its not muzna! Its majnu…its means lover..
Swara- kk…
They go inside..
Anagha- so u were only there na that day, theives, u stole some of the documents…(today she says in attitude unlike other days which is gone unnoticed by swara)
Swasan look at each other shockingly..
Anagha- yes I know everything! I saw u that day…but then I thought that u (pointing to swara) have the right to know about ur sister..
Swara smiles coz she thinks that anagha is hinting that yes, her sister , shravani is alive…
Anagha- anagha and shravani , both were suffering from different diseases…so I brought them home for better treatment from specialists.. one day, when we were going to hospital , for our first visit only, an accident took place…(she paused and saw swara’s expression and felt happy inside)
Swara was like, some of her heatbeats were skipping..\/ /\/\ \/\ ,(hehe her heartbeat design)she was like her heart is aching, she is just on the peak of her death…and sanskar he was unable to see swara in this condition…it was paining to see her like this..
Anagha- then…unfortunately , shravani died…
Swara was like, the earth had slipped from her legs…she stood emotionless, with wide eyes…but the wide eyes were soon filled with tears and were blinked…sanskar’s both hands were holding her arms, consoling her..they were talking thorugh invisible voice..he was saying nothing, but inside, he was trying his best to sooth her…he didn’t need his voice box to communicate with her..swara didn’t need her ears to hear sanskar’s inner voice…her heart was capable of that….and sanskar, unknowingly a tear fell from his eye..
There swasan were emotional, and here anagha was smirking..
Anagha(changing her smirk , to fake hurt voice and expressions)-but shravani donated her abdomen to ragini…and hence, ragini was not only saved form the accident, she was saved from the cancer also…
There was deep silence for 2 mins…
Then sanskar – thank you mam!(to swara)- lets go!
Swara nods a little and takes baby steps..
IN CAR
Swara starts to sob now..her sobs are becoming louder…
Sanskar – hey! Swara..see what happens, happens only for good! U are crying…will you get ur sister back by crying?no na!! then…then don’t cry my bravo!!! Hmm…
They hug and cry..sanskar caresses her hair..while she is completely dependent on him..her hands , resting on his back……while the song BOLNA from kapoor n sons plays in BG..
Chhuteya na chhute mose
Rang tera dholna
Ik tere baajo dooja
Mera koi mol na
Bolna mahi bolna
Bolna mahi bolna
Hmm… aa…
Tere liye aaya main toh
Tere sang jaana
Dholna ve tere naal
Jindri bitavaan
Kadi naiyo chhodna
Ishq di dor na
Saare chhad jaayen maahi
Tu na chhodna
Bolna mahi bolna
Bolna mahi bolna
Hmm…
Swara slowly lifts her face to see him…she gets shocked to see his face…for the first time, she saw a drop tear falling down from his eye…she thought that whatever happened , happened with her, gadodias, nothing happened with him, then why was he crying? This question arose in her mind…quickly she asked-
Swara- sanskar…whatever has happened, it happened with me na.. then y are you crying?hmm???
Sanskar- swara a man is like a cream biscuit..
Swara chuckles a little and gives him a confused look..
She forgets her crying..
Sanskar-it means we are hard from outside, but we are soft like cream from inside..and u…u are my best friend…ur happiness=my happiness…ur sadness=my sadness…ur pain=my pain(while saying this, his hands move towards the drawer in front of swara, while swara is still staring him)
Sanskar continues- in other words or in short jo tera hai wo mera hai, jo mera hai wo tera…
Swara smiles and chuckles while he feeds her a cream biscuit..she also does the same..
Sanskar- achha u eat this cream biscuits, may I give this file to her? Its police documents..
Swara nods..
He goes in as the door was open…
PRECAP- ~~~SURPRISE~~
im sorry guys!! in 1st episode only i mentioned that swaragini arent sisters n they dont know each other..but soon they will know each other..coz our swara will be sanskar’s wife na!
ahh! but some more time is for that…so there’s a surprise in next episode…will it be swasan confession?? will it be sanskar’s proposal for swara???many questions….only 1 ans,. PATIENCE,…wait till next episode…plzzzz comment….im working very hard for u guys..if u comment, i will feel good, actually very good!!! waiting for ur response,.
11 Comments
veryyyyyyyy goooooodddddd episodeee……….. please upload it soooooooon .
Waiting fr surprise ☺
Awesome
How was ur exams???
U r in 8th n such a good writer..
Waiting for next part..
Superb
awesome I liked it but it would be good if swaragini are sisters
Awesome can’t wait for ur surprise
Ultimately it’s too good dr.then dr do u finished ur exam..I hope it’s started pls study well all d best dudes..8th std sweety Pls upupdate next part soon
itz awsm dr lvd the exp of cream bisciut.plz update soon
nyc
Wow its awesome even I’m in 8 and your story is wonderful… Best of luck for the future