Guys I don’t have words to express my feelings …. Keep commenting like this only…. Thanks
The episode starts……
Usha and manohar coming to tanejas house
L: Namaste! Pls come in
M: thank you Mrs taneja
The trio sit down on the sofa
U: leela ji I hv heard that you have a daughter we have also heard that she is very pretty where is she call her na I want to see her
L: thank you usha ji, she is,upstairs in her room she is changing must be comimg in a minute
Just then kunj enters
L: this is kunj right?
M: ya our son
K: namaste aunty
L: nameste beta!
Just then twinkle comes she is climbing down stairs she is wearing a chocolate brown short skirt a pin t- shirt and her hairs are flying due to air
U: she is so cute ….right kunj
Kunj is busy staring at her but then he come to senses and remembers all the fight ( car accident, watermelon and tomato fight and the shop fight), twinkle comes downstairs and is equally shocked to know that kumj is the new neighbour…
Both: tum ….tum yaha?? Tum ho hamare naye padosi!!
L: do u both know each other?
T: maa its a long story I will tell u later
Leela calls servant and asks him to bring the food
M: arre leela ji no need for food
L: no you will have to eat something
The servant brings typical Punjabi nashta which is full of oil
T: pls lejiye!
U: ya beta we are taking you also take na
Leela interferes
L: no no usha ji she never eats this oily food she is very conscious about her weight so she only eats fruits and mostly “watermelon” kunj and twinkle look at each other and smile in their heart.
M: twinkle beta we have heard that you are a good singer
T: no no uncle I don’t sing that well its just my hobby
L: actually she is a good singer but will never show that
M: can u pls sing one song pls beta pls
T: ohh….OK uncle
Twinkle tells a servant to bring her guitar…servant brings it and twinkle sings
T: kisi ko sapna lagen tu kisi ko behti hawa kisi ko bas yaadon Karen pal me yahan vahan kiske sau juth sun le kisi ka sach bhi gunah kiski bas baaton mei kare hulchal saara jahan….. Te amo me ti amo tu chahon he tu dhoop hai te amo mi ti amo tere hazaro roop hai
Koi samajha nahi Jo bhi hai bas tu hai
Falling so crazy in love
Everyone is mesmerized to hear her voice but after she stops to sing everyone come into senses except kunj who is busy staring at her
Usha pats on his legs and kunj comes into senses
M: twinkle beta what kind of boy do u want to marry
T: uncle I don’t know I don’t have made a list about the qualities
U: but still every girl has a desire u also must have come on tell me don’t be shy
T: well my desire is too simple I want a boy who understands me and my feelings, who appreciates me to continue my dream even after marriage I want a person who doesnt love me because of my beauty or my qualities but the person who loves me only because of my nature I doesn’t matter if he is rich or handsome he should be only good at heart who Respect’s girls..umm..that’s it
M: wah beta wah I haven’t met a girl like you right usha
Usha nodes and says yes but kunj is again lost ….he is impressed by her just then servant serves him tea but as kunj is busy watching twinkle so tea falls on his shirt
K: ooh god ( his self talk) whenever I meet this girl my cloths get spoiled!
Precap leela says twinkle to take kunj to her room and help him to clean up in her washroom….kunj and twinkle’s water fight
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Amazing yr…
I hope u guys liked it actually I was not in mood today as my parents have made me join a new tuition class whose timings are from 7: 30-8:30 so I will not be able to watch tei at night
So bad ritzi …dat new tution & all bt u shld b happy dat ur marks will increse due 2 more studies…….any way i luv ur writtings thiz epi was also fab like ur other episodes
Nice one keep it up
Aaye ritzi… Dil khush kardiya tumne…..it was awesome loved it….
Thanks ruchi,rupam And dheemahee
Thanks rashi verma I m so glad ki tumhara dil khush hua lol
oh poor u…bt studies are imp…anyways coming to ur ff..it is too good..i mean can’t believe its ur first ff nd that too 3rd epi….u r superb..nd m relly sorry for commenting all those thing in ur last epi…btw in which class are u??
Awesome Ritzi love your FF
ritzi too nice epi yaar
Thanks Tara and harshi I’m in 10th
u r promoted to 10th that means?
Thanks a lot dear sudha
Awesome.. Eagerly waiting for twinj’s water fight
Thanks aarti,,….but guys you no what I got a news that rajjo will now start liking kunj because of his simplicity so she befools twinkle so she could really marry kunj!!!!!! This is exhausting !!!!
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oh cm on alia
r u that jobless that u keep commenting Sm bullshit all the time ???
U have no rights to criticise anyone in anyway
I hope u get it
if u don’t I can’t help as I am not jobless to speak to poor minded ppl
and plz mind ur language! !! u r proving urself so ill mannered by these comments of urs
and if u think writing an ff is such an easy task then y don’t u give an try for it
let me see how good r u at that
if not never speak ill of sm1s ff
Sanam u shouldn’t have commented dear….after all the issue she created yesterday if she is commented today again… Hasn’t that proved me right
dear snam dont waste ur time in such things coz u knw A DOG WILL ALWAYS BARK!!
Come on sanam stopping replying her she don’t deserve any reply
Ya it’s just an waste of time
these wd never change
sry guys
Seriously have u lost it alia wherever and whenever u want ur just creating up a mess. Y dont u just shut ur mouth u know at first wat r u talking before telling aboit any1 just look on urself how r u? K then u talk akansha di is not poor minded, u r that do u just get it or not…
And if u dont lyk our twinjs ff den dont comment and read anything. Ur saying as if u write so well. Here r many Twinj fans as well as twiraj okay. Did we anytime say anything about twiraj. No na then y r u talking such rubbish. I did not say even that day anything bcoz i thought just ur my elder and i cant talk anything like that with u but today ur just crossing ur limits. So please better be on ur limits and talk such rubbish.
And dont talk such rubbish
Woooow Ritz you are really an amazing writer so keep it up and don’t feel bad about missing the show study comes first okay
Wow wat a wonderful episode!
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Alia… are you always this much irritating or are making a special effort nowadays?
i don’t write this to hurt u but to make you understand……if you what to say something then tell it without hurting anyone…….and it is better to shut ur mouth than to shut other people’s mouth…and i know t u can’t shut ur mouth that is why u r still commenting….don’t make people hate u more alia…..
Y u hurt ever1 yaar dont u sense that u shouldnt talk in such way that hurts. Oh how can i forget that u everytime do this. Please i request u just stop ur nonsense and this all stupid comments. Please yaar.
ritzi ur ff is just so fab!!
Hey alia pls stop making shitty comments in my ff its high time now if I don’t speak anything that doesn’t mean that I m not hurt. Can’t you see everyone is ignoring u!
If this stuff doesnt gets over then I think i should stop this ff only
No no ritzi plzzzz don’t stop ur ff…v luv it…and why the hell will u stop it coz of such stupid jobless ppl
NO RITZI PLZZ DONT DO IT..WE ALL LOVE U ND UR FF..
U dont dare stop this ritzi di. Y should u sacrifice ur happiness for some1 who doesn’t care about any1. So please dont be like me stupid first itoo thought to end up my gossips but den my all lovely di’s made me understand that i should not. So u too dont plz plz plz we all love ur ffs plz.
ritzi plzzzzz don’t stop ur ff
these ppl r neva gonna change
nyc epi dear…
thanks salma, sanam and muskan
guyz…plz plzz just ignore useless stupid comments…….it will not encourage the writers…..so here plzz comment related to ritzis ff….dont comment useless comnts…..n i agree wid sanam that they are proving themselves ill mannered n jobless
Btw ritiz your ff is awesome so keep writing darling……lots of love darling……love you……muaxxxxxxx
awesome ….. plz dont stop ur ff fr someones cmmnt. we all lve ur ff and will like it to the end….
Sorry di if i have spoiled ur episode i m really sorry. If i have then i m really sorry hope u understand me and dont end ur ff. Please think that small sis is sking for big sis not to end this ff please.please please please please please please please
no ritzi…u can’t & don’t stop it cz it’s amazing, beautiful & fab…idk why such ppl exist on earth who can’t do anything but cursing & badmouthing others…. I guess they r just jealous.. realllly jealous…
Ritzi ur epi’s Awesome!!!!! Keep going btt pllzzz dnt stop writing ur ff bcoz of haterss!! Plzz yrr
Superb Ritzi! and pls pls don’t mind them and don’t stop ur ff we really love it coz its incredible.
okay guys finally her comments got deleted..if she comments again plzz ignore…