Hello….I’m back….i wanted to finish this ff today itself…
The episode starts with a leap of 9 month……
Swara is in labour pain…and is taken to the hospital..everyone is waiting outside the OT…..
Sanskar is very nervous..
Suju:Beta,,,,,y u so nervous? This is the third time na….
Sanskar:So what mom? I’m scared…if anything happens…to Swara,….then I won’t be able to live…
Just then the doctor comes with a child…
Dr:Beti huyi hai…..
Everyone is happy….
Sanskar:Swara is okay na?
Dr:Yes..she is perfectly….fine…
Ragini is about to take the kid when Ap say:Ragini beta…i know they decided to give u this child….but let Sanskar take his daughter in his hand first……
Ragini smiles…..Sanskar looks at Ragini….
Ragini goes near Sanskar…
Ragini:Sanskar…Swara is my sister..she did this being a sister…but whatever u did was as a friend…..u deserve to take the child in your hands first……
Sanskar smiels and takes the child in his hand….
After a week….its the baby’s naming ceremony…everyone sits..
Ragini sit with th kid….along with Laksh for the puja…..then the pandit asks them to say the name they have decided…
Rags:I want Swra to name our child…
Swara:Okay…i name her Lavanya…….
Raglak get teary eyed…
Sanskar:Lavanya Laksh Maheshwari….
Just then the Gadodias enter…Sumi comes with dida….separately…
They meet everyone…Swaragini take them to a room…
Swara:Dadi..i know..u r very angry with me and Sanskar..but lz don’t punish ma baba for this…
Rags:Dadi…it was not Swara’s mistake….
After lots of convo….even dadi doesn’t agree..
Rags:Dadi..the Swara u r blaming kept my child 9 months in her womb……
Dadi:Matlab?
Rags tell her everything….
Shekhar:See ma..the girl whom u blamed for our Ragini’s sadness…gave her th biggest happiness…
Dadi looks at Swara…
Dadi;Swara…abb…
Swara hugs dadi….
Swara:Its oky dadi..no worries…everything is fine now….
The story takes a leap of 5 years……a girl is shown coming home…..shouting..
Girl:Ma papa…mom dad…see I won a prize in poem recitation…
Swasan and Raglak come….
Rags:I knew it…my Lavanya will win….
Lavanya;Mom…..all thanks to Sanskruti di…she made me memorize this poem so well….
Laksh:I know…my princesses r the best…
Sanskruti from behind;Right chote papa….
Rags:And u Sanskruti?
Sanskruti:Woh choti ma….
Lavanya:Mom…di did not take part in this…cause she didn’t want to compete with me….
Swara and Ragini looks at each other….
Swara:Our daughters r like us na?
Lavanya:Yes ma……
People…i hope u liked my story……i tried y best not to be unfair with Swara or Ragini….some of u may think that Swara gave birth to that child so….its unfair to call her chachi..even I thought the same……Lavanya calls Swara ma….Sanskar papa,Laksh dad and Ragini mom…..similarly Sanskruti calls Ragini choti ma..and Laksh chote papa….Anaya and Sanskrit r same..chahu and chachi……
5 Comments
Amazing work dear!! hope u will come with new story..
Nice ending..full happy happy..
Hope u will come back with a new ff
Awesome
Why did u end it ??
No words to describe it
Awsome yr its nice nd different ff
Wait… Was swara surrogate or real mom?