Hello people….
Am here wid my 6th episode….
n plzzzz comment yaar.. Very less comments…
Plz feel free to comment either positive or negative.. Plz suggest me to make my ff more better..So heres episode 6
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Kunj listens to twinkle saying to leela on fon dat shell return once kunj bcums absolutely fine…
Kunj thinks- arre… Now toh am fine… Dat means.. Twinkle vil go away.. Ok if she wants to go den let her go noe… No no.. Twinki can’t go anywhere n ill not let her go anywhere… Plz god help me.. But how.. How shud I stop twinki frm gng….
Something strikes his mind n he keeps his one eyebrow up like in tei n smirks…
Immediately he rushed to take bath… Twinkle wonders dat how cum he woke up so early.. God knows..
She meanwhile was packing her bag for school n UV too woke up n suddenly a loud scream… Ahhhhh.. Mummy….mumm..yyy…..ahhhaahh..
Twiraj-shit… Aunty…..jaldi ayiye(come fast) aunty….
Usha manohar n bebe reach der…
B-kya Hua puttar.. Y wer u clsecraming.. Is everything alrite…
U- kya Hua… Sab thik hai na… Aur… Aur… Kunj kaha hai…(wt happened..is everything alrite.. N…n…wer I kunj)
Again dey here a scream…
K- mummy am here in washroom…. Ouchhhh… Ahhh… Mummy…
Manohat n uvrush inside n get kunj outside d washroom n made him lay onbed..
M-kyaahua beta.. Wt happened..
K- ouch.. Papa…its hurting…
T-arre yaar first say wt happened….
K- I slipped in washroom n its hurting a lot…
U-wer is it hurting beta…
Kunj stays numb n thinks wt to say…yes u got it rite.. It was all.kunjs plan…
B-manohar.. Go n call doctor…all try asking him.. But he just says ouchhh.. Ahhh… It’s hurting…
Meanwhile d doctors arrives… Dey tell him wt had happened…
Dr- kunj wer did u get hurt..
K- oh no… Wt shud i say…
Uv-bhai bol na.. Say wer u got hurt…
K- I can’t say in front of all… I’ll say nly to doctor..u all go out..
All resist bit kunj starts his melodrama n all had to go out… After sum tm… The r cums out n by dat tm all d family audience I.e all sarnas, anitha n leela wer present..
Bebe- Dr sahab ki Hoya mere kunj puttar nu?(Dr wat happened to my kunj)
Dr- hmm.. He fell down in washroom n his hand got more hurt n…
Usha-n wat Dr..
Dr-n kunjs says dat he is not taken proper care n no ones paying proper attention on him especially twinkle n UV,, he says that dey r just bzy in demselves…
Twinkle n uv wer at peak of anger dey rushed inside n started packing deir things.. All d family audience wer outside only talking wid the Dr..
Dr-I think twiraj should stay here for sum more tm cuz I’ve seen a lot of improvement in kunj…
U-ha ha leela, anitha, tum log twiraj ko aur kuch Dino tak rehne dijiye na.. Plz..(let twiraj stay here for sum more days na)
Anitha- arre,, so wen did v say no? Let them stay here till wen the kids want to.. What sya leela?
L-xactly.. I have no problem..
Dr-that’s superb..ill just cum.. He goes to kunj n whispers in his years-plan successful..
Kunj smirks n winks at Dr n tells him thank u..
FB SHOWS-
Dr examiing kunj n he is unable to tell what to tell.. Dr understands that he is acting n asks him what the matter is.. Kunj tells him everything n Dr giggles at his childishness n he decides to help kunj….
Fb ends….
Kunj rushes to twiraj n tries to stop them…
They don’t stop.. N kunj starts to cry vigorously… He says.. Yes I was right.. No one cares for me.. Everyone is so selfish.. No one loves me.. Am very unlucky.. I… I.. Don’t even know y I am alive.. I must have died dat day in the hospital itself…
Twinkle suddenly comes n hugs him… He was surprised… UV had a smile on his face n left from there… Twinkle still hugging kunj n with tears in eyes says-shhhh… Dare u say that again… Do u even realize what u r sayin.. Ha?
K-twi..
T- shut up.. Just shut up.. Know ill say u say no one cares bout u.. Can’t u c dat wen u get hurt o get pain.. Wen u get pain I get tears…wen u r happy I am on cloud nine… N.. N u speak about dying.. I myself will kill u if u speak about dying…u don’t knw kunj but wen u wer in d hospital on the bed unconscious… U wer d one who did not bother about me… Ha n u say dat I don’t care bout u… I…just….just cant even imagine my life without u n u say dat u wer dead.. Plz.. Promise me dat ull NVR leave me n go.. Plz… Cuz I cant live widout u… Cuz u r my every thing… Cuz… Cuz… I LOVE U IDIOT..i luv u kunj.. More than anything cuz u r my everything… Plz.. Kunj…
All this time twinkle was hugging kunj n sobbing cuz she was hurt by the words of kunj… Twinkle realizes what she said n she breaks d hug n says.. I.. I mean.. Ki… U r my best..fre.in..d.. Na.. To..
Kunj-I luv u too syappa quuen..
Twinkle was shocked cuz she didn’t expect this reply from kunj..
T-kya.. Wat..did..u.. Say…
K-I said ki I luv u too… N he hugged her.. Twinkle- is this a dream ??
Kunj came back a bit still holding her..went near her cheek .. Twinkle thought that he would give a peck but he instead slowly bit her cheek…
T-ouchhh… Y did u bite..
K- now realized.. It’s not a dream n I really really love u.. I luv u twinkle taneja…
Before twinkle could react he hugged her tight..
Twinkle was on cloud 9 no 10no 11.. Actually she was on the Highest ever cloud….
She hugged him back too.. N said I love u sadu sarna..I mean I love u the most kunj sarna..
They wer having a bone crushing hug when UV entered the room…
Uv-ahem..ahem.. How mean u both are.. I thought to unite u both but u both have captured my job.. Too bad… N he makes a puppy face…
Twinj look at each other n smile…
K-Vaise uv tujhe pata tha??
Uv- ha.. Sabse pehle twinki ne mujhe bataya tha..(twinki said me first that she loves u)
K-acha..to tune mujhe kyun nahi bataya?(really.. Den y didin u say me first)
T- kunj I thought ki I wud loose ur friendship if I try to get love..n dats y I didin say u…
K- hmm..anyways.. Forget all that..now toh am super hungry now lets go have breakfast.. Kunj gets up by using both his hands..
When yunj wer about to leave the room, twinkle stoped them..
T- Wait a sec.. Mr kunj sarna…
Yunj turns back.. Uv-kya Hua twinki.. Y did u stop us?
T – kunj can u give me.a hi-FI.. N she forwards both her hands in a position to give hi FI
Kunj without thinkin give a tight hifi to twinkle.. UV realizes wat happened n asks..
Uv-omg.. Kunj ur hand was hurt rite…
Kunj realizing wat he had done
T-xactly…
K-ouch.. It’s hurting.. Ouch.. N he pretends to b hurting….
Twiraj looks at him with doubty expression.. He says.. Ok I surrender n says everything that how he heard twinkles convo wid leela aunty on fone n how he did all this from.acting to fall in washroom n convincing doctor to help him n how he acted to cry..
T- omg kunj today am not gng to leave u.. N she runs behind kunj.. They run all over the room n UV keeps laughing..
N suddenly usha cums der… Before she cud enter the room n c kunj qidout bandage.. UV went out n managed her.. Twinj came out decently n kunj had put on the plaster….
They had their breakfast..
At night.. Yunj wer sleeping on bed n twinki on couch… She woke up silently n went to UV n woke him up too.. Both silently came down without waking up kunj.. They woke up other family members also By knocking at everyone’s door silently…
All of them gather in hall n discuss something…
The screen freezes on their exited faces n twinkles happy face…
Precap- SURPRISE…..
Guys I knw I’ve written something else in the promo but I’ve found this track to b better…so I posted this.. Sorry guys.. N ill post next episode by tomorrow or day after tomorrow… Sorry for late updates yaar.. Really sorry n plzzzzz comment.. The comments r falling down yaar.. Inform me.if u find the current track boring ill change or stop dis ff…plz.. Guys..
Luv u all loads n loads…
Take care..?
15 Comments
Amazing …
Lara tera ff hai kitna pyara♥♥♥♥
It’s ok Lara sometimes it just happened but it was great keep it up
Amazing yar
no lara ur ff is just amazing. u dont think
that anyone is not liking ur comment,
u just remember that u r a gr8 writer and
will always keep writing.
love u loadzzz and keep going on dear…….
i m sorry its not liking ur comment its liking ur ff
in my comment’s second line
awesome….
Tysm guysss…
nice one lara
U really write ggod lara..dont be upset about comments just keep writing dear!!!
its ossum lara …. loved it …..
amazing beautiful update
please continue fast
I think it’s going to b kunj ki b’day….. BTW awesome episode
Yeah rite yukku…
Amazing epi….