SURPRISE : one more part today…
Friends i m uploading one more part today…
i hv not read any comments in ch-12 yet but i will surely read them & give reply of both ch-12 & 13 in next part..
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ABOUT MYSELF :
friends i m not at all writer.. i am trying my best to write something good which make you all happy…
I am 19 year old girl…i m a CA Final student…hardly get time to do anything else then study…
i hv taken professional training in KATHK – classical dance…i can do some other style also…i am a crazy fan of dance & cricket…
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Friends the voting is still open…i will count your votes in both Ch -12 & Ch-13 comment box…
NOTE :
1) winner will be defiantly one of them only…
2) i m asking 2 names bz i wanna add one twist with respect to that..
3) i will select one out of the 2 names given by you all…
4) Ragini will become successful singer for sure..but i can’t add any singing competition here..
5) neither swara nor sanky will make eo jealous by flirting with other…the jealously will be something different…just wait & watch..
6) swasan confession will be in ch-15…
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Thank u so much everyone for loving this story..i m overwhelmed to receive Such response…keep reading and supporting..ur comments made my day…thank u silent readers also…
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Ch – 12 Link :
http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-ff-swasan-raglak-d3-dil-dosti-dance-ch-12/
Recap : Swasan raglak dance…swasanraglak mega audition performances…
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Ch- 13 :
Swasanraglak were waiting for their results…Swara & ragini’ s name announced…Sanlak wish them all the best & girls went on the stage…
( Jai bhanushali is an show host..)
jai : lets start with miss Ragini Mathur…
Geeta ma : You were mindblowing dear…last time you took my heart with your classical dance & this time you proved that you can do anything…you are fabulous dancer & we are happy to hv you in the show…you are selected dear…
Ragini was in happy tears..Shona start jumping…she hugged ragin…
Shona : (shouts) wowwww….Di you are selected congratulations dear…
Jai : congratulations ragini…it seems you both are very closed friends…Now its Shona’s turn..
Remo sir : You were not performing like a girl today..(take a pause making them nervous) you were performing like a robot…the way you catch every beats..woho..awesome yar…you are just incredible dear…how can we let you go..you are selected…
Shona starts jumping…she was having teary eyes…both Swaragini again hug eo…they other knelt down on stage & touch their heads..n ran near judges to take their next round certi…they happily come outside & meet sanlak…they all were very happy…
Soon sanky’s name announced with another boy…they went inside..
Jai : lets start with Mr. Danny…(other boy)
Geeta ma : You hv done good but there are many people far better than you…you need to do practice more n come next time…
that guy become sad & left the stage..now its sanky’s turn…
Marzi Sir : Mr. Sanskar..what to say man…you were just outstanding…the way u done the moon walk was fabulous…this performance is one of the best performances…it was treat to watch u dear…i can see u as winner of the show dude…you are definitely selected…
Sanky jumped & Shouts..he ran to judges & took his certi…he come out shouting…he was very very happy….
now its turn of our lucky boy…he went on stage…
Remo sir : (Shook his head) (very serious & angry tone) What was that ha…??? after watching your audition dance we can’t expect this from you…you proved us wrong man..
by now lucky on stage & Swaragsan on outside become hell nervous & shocked…but soon all judges start laughing…
Marzi sir : Remo u scared him yar…hey laksh..you proved us wrong as we were thinking that you can perform on rocking song only…but you killed it in contemporary also…we were having goose bombs watching your dance…u r selected…n sorry for scaring u…
He shouts & jumped with happiness…he was having wet eyes…bz he was actually nervous by judges behaviour…he took bison certi & coke out to swasanrag…
BG song :
” Aashaye khile dil ki..ummide hase dil ki…ab mishkil nahi kuch bhi nahi kuchi bhi………”
they all start jumping & Dancing…they were shouting & hugging each other…after all they all were selected…they were in TOP 12…they were extremely happy…..
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There were 6 girls & 6 boys selected…they were supposed to stay in ” Zara nach k dikha house “….there were 6 rooms & 3 rehearsal halls…so everyone were suppose to share rooms in pairs…whereas rehearsal hall were devided in 3 groups of 4 contestants…
Swaragini were in one room & sanlak were in one room…they were given a common rehearsal hall..( off curse its my story how can i separate them… 😉 ) their rooms were each side of their common rehearsal hall..
They all went to their respective room & arranged their stuff…their journey in the show has been started now…
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Next day in rehearsal hall…..
swasanraglak were doing their dance rehearsals…some choreographers were there to teach them…they were doing very good…
They took their breakfast..lunch…dinner along with other contestants…they become friendly with others also…
@ night after talking dinner…swasanraglak were talking in sanlak room…
Shona : (happily) wow…i m soooooooooo happy…we all are selected…we all together…
Ragini : ya…me too…i can’t believe our journey has been started from today…
Sanky : yup…this dance reality show is going to change our life…
lucky : true…now we will give our best…and the winner should be any one of us…
swasanrag : yes….we will do our best…
Shona : Di now we should go to our room…(hug lucky) good night lucky…(smile) good night sanky…
Ragini : ya sure..(hug sanky) good night sanky..good night lucky…
sanlak greet them & Swaragini left for their rooms…
Shona messaged sanky…
Shona : i think its right time for our next step for mission unit raglak…
Sanky : ya..i know..i will do it now only…hope our plan will work & raglak will be one in few days..
Shona : ya they will be…all the best for it..bye
sanky : thanks..bye..gn..
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Sanky & Lucky were sitting on their bed & talking rendom things…sanky was waiting for right chance to start his plan…
Sanky : (hesitantly) Lucky…as now we are buddies..tell me..is that any specific reason due to which you are not ready to believe in love ??
lucky : (become serious) its nothing like that dude..i am not against this love shove but it is just its not made for me..
sanky : (smiles & think about Shona) you know what lucky..love is the best feeling on the earth…when you love someone you can’t think to live a single sec without them…their happiness become your happiness…you like to spend more & more time with them…when they touch you, you feel different which u hv never felt b4 with anyone…you wanted to hold them forever…..you…(he look at lucky who was listening very carefully & was in deep thought)
when sanky was speaking lucky was thinking about his moments with ragini…how he was affected by her presence…how he share everything with her…how he felt different sensation each time with her closeness…
lucky : (monologue) Does this mean i m in love with Lado…(confuse) but how can that happened.. whatever it is..but something is different with respect to ragini…Ohh god i m dam confuse..plz help me..
Sanky watch confuse expression on his face & take his another step…
Sanky : hey dude…leave it…y m i telling all this to you…u don’t believe this..right..?
lucky : (confused) yyyaaa…rig..right..
sanky : hey…lets play rapid fire rounds…..one will ask question & other will answer in just one word which come in their mind at first..
lucky : (come out of his thoughts & excitedly) woho…ya sure lets play it…i love to play this game..
sanky : (happy) yup…lets start with you..i will ask Que & u will answer…ready ??
lucky : Okk…shoot your questions…
(rapid fire round start )
S : favorite color ?
L : Blue
S : favorite timepass ?
L : hangouts
S : favorite sports ?
L : Cricket 🙂
S : R u Morning man or Night owl ?
L : Night owl 😉
S : You can’t compromise with…?
L : My dance & cricket
S : without whom u can’t leave ?
L : Shona..my kiddo 😉
S : first crush of ur life ?
L : Dipika padukon
S : inspiration of your life ?
L : My dad & shekhar uncle
S : goal of your life ?
L : to become best dancer
S : best friend of your life ?
L : Shona…
S : LOVE OF YOUR LIFE
L : RAGINI….
(rapid fire end)
Sanky jump & shouts as his plan was sucessful…lucky accepted in his full senses…
Sanky : (happy) wow….you accepted…you love ragini….awesome…
lucky was still in shock..he start thinking about all their moments…and now he got all his answers…a small smile come on his face which slowly turning in to bright one…
Lucky : (excitedly) (finally confessed) I LOVE RAGINI….ya i do…i do love RAGINI…sanky sanky i m in love with ragini….woho….i laksh mehta in love with ragini….
Sanky : (hug him tight) ya lucky…thank god you finally accepted about your feelings…i m so happy for you…congratulations dude…
lucky : ya..thank u yar…its just bz of you…i got my all answers which were troubling me from last week…(suddenly realize something )
Hey one minute…how do you know that i love her ?
Sanky : (smile) wait i want to show u something….
he play the vedio in which lucky hv confessed his love for ragini in drunken state…lucky was surprised & shocked seeing that vedio…
lucky : y didn’t u show me earlier…i would hv realize at that time only ..
sanky : no you were so stubborn with respect to your thinking about love..so we wanted you to accept your love in your full senses & see you hv accepted…
Lucky : Ohh wow..dude thank u so much…(confused) hey wait…you said we…? who was with you in this plan…(realize) SHONA ???
Sanky : (smile) ya…it was my & Shona’s plan…
then he explain everything about their plan..how first they confirmed about his feeling making him drunk…then how they made both of them come close…their dance…n at last rapid fire round…
Lucky : (emotional ) not only my name is lucky but i m the luckiest person of the world..to hv a friend like Shona & you…thank u so much buddy…thanks a lot…
Sanky : (hug him) you are always welcome dear…i m so happy for you…
they heard knock on the door..sanky open it..ya its Shona…sanky hv informed her about plan success…she ran to lucky and hug him tight…
Shona : (happy) wow….lucky…i m sooooooooooooo happy for you…finally you accepted it…(emotional) i love ragini Di so much…you both will be happy together…
lucky : (emotional) yup…my kiddo…its bz of u n sanky…you were right you hv found a girl who hv taken my wicket by making her place in my heart…you were so right Shona…
Shona : (attitude) ya i know…i am always right…Shona can’t be wrong..never..
Sanlak laugh on her cute antics..swasanlak share hug…
Lucky : (confused & nervous) hey what about Lado…? will she accept me…?
Sanky : (smile) now my & Shona’s job has done ? its your time for taking action…
Shona : ya we are not going to help u with this…you need to deal with it by urself..n y r u nervous u hv proposed many girls..?
Lucky : (bit his nails) i can propose any girl..but ragini is not any girl…i m scared…what if she will reject me..?
Swasan : nothing will be like that…just propose her…
lucky : (determined) ya i will…i will propose her now only…
swasan : (shocked) what ..???? now…??
lucky : ya..i can’t wait much…i need to ask her right now…i m going…
Swasan : (smile broadly) ya ok…All the best ..
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Lucky hug both of them & went to Swaragini’s room…swasan also secretly went behind him & stood near window…lucky entered the room..he saw ragini sleeping…for few mins he was lost in his sleeping Angel…
Sanky : (whispered to Shona) such n idiot he is..!!!…is he going to start her whole night..??
Shona : (same tone) exactly yar..y he is not waking her up..? common lucky…hurry up…
swasan were becoming impatient while lucky who was staring Lado come back 2 his senses…
he went near her & sit besides her on bed…he hold her hand & gently squeezed it to wake her up…ragini open her eyes & shocked to see laksh there..she was about to shout…
Lucky : (put her hand on her mouth) shhhh..Lado don’t shout…you will wake up everyone…ragini nodes confusedly..
Ragini : (tensed) what happened lucky..? y r u here right now..? where is Shona.? is anything serious..?
Lucky : calm down ragini…don’t make me more nervous…(he gets up)
ragini : (confused & get up) nervous..? but y.?
what r u talking about..?
lucky : woh..actually…(he was feeling very nervous) i ….i …wanna say that…i…i mean…(he turned back)
Ragini was shocked to see his condition…she thought something is wrong with him…?..she stood in front of him & hold his hand…
Ragini : (assure him) lucky..tell me what’s bothering u…don’t be nervous..i m there with u…(smile)
lucky : (look into her eyes) (gain courage) (take a deep breath) Ragini…i don’t know how to say this to you…but when i saw u for the 1st time i flet some connection with you….each and every moment which i hv spent with you are very special for me..i wanna spend my whole life with you…i love your smile…your innocence…your dance..your singing…everything about you..i was idiot that i don’t realize this feeling before..you change my life..you change my thinking..i promises i will never flirt with any girl now on…(HE KNELT DOWN IN FRONT OF HER & HOLD HER HAND) I LOVE YOU ragini…will you spend your life with this idiot..?
Ragini was at cloud 9…she can not believe..the guy with whom she is in love is proposing her..tears of happiness were flowing from her eyes..she was not responding bz of sudden extrem happiness…she could not identify that where it is reality r dream…
Lucky : ragini…i will accept your every decision…feel free to accept or reject…if u want time then i can wait for you till my last breath…
Ragini : (put her hand on his mouth) (knelt down infornt of him) don’t talk rubbish lucky..you know what I LOVE YOU TOO lucky…from the very first meeting…(then she told him everything about her POV with respect to Shona..then his opinion in love..their closeness..)
Lucky become very happy…they both look at eo with teary eyes…then they hug eo tightly…both were crying…
Lucky : (crying) i LOVE YOU Lado..i m sorry for not realizing it earlier…
ragini : its ok lucky..i LOVE YOU so much…i could hv wait for you forever…
They break the hug & touch their foreheads…they were smiling & crying…they were very closed..
Lucky : (whispered) ragini…
ragini : (blush) hmm…
Lucky : (same tone) can i..i mean can we…
Ragini :(blushing hard) can we…?
lucky : can we..(make painful face) can we stand up plzzzzzz..my knees are paining very badly….
Ragini widen her eyes & felt embarrassed as she was thinking something else…
ragini : (shock) what…?? (covers) Ohh ya..ya..sure…
lucky : (make innocent face) hey..what did u hv thought ??
Ragini : (blush dark red) vo..vo nothing lucky..
Lucky : (smile seeing her blushing) Woho…ragini don’t blush like this…i will loose my control and we……..
ragini stop him from saying anything and hide her face in his chest…lucky took her in his tight hug…they both were just lost in their new world..
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swasan both were emotional & happy seeing them…In excitement they HUG eo tightly…they stay still in that position for 4-5 mins…non of them wanted to breack the hug but at last they compose themselves…
Swasan : (together) (nervously) wo sorry…in excitement (pause)
Swasan : (again together) its ok…(they smile)
Sanky : (happy) finally lucky proposed Lado…they are togather now…
Shona : (happy) ya true..Mission unit raglak successfully accomplished…good job partner..
Sanky : (smile) u too partner…(naughtily) btw the majority of work is done by me…so what will you give me for that…??? (raise his brow)
Shona : (agree) ya..you hv done very good job…i should give you something…but right now i can’t give…
Sanky : (tease her more) no way..u hv to give me something now only…..
Shona :(thinkingly) but what can i give u now..? (then she blush) (point in other direction) sanky look there…
Sanky turned to look…as soon as he turned Shona hurriedly KISSED him on his check and ran from there blushing & smiling to her room to congratulate raglak…
Sanky widen his eyes..he was surprised…shocked…happy…he touched his check dreamily.. he was in heaven… he smile.. widely smile still touching his check… it is the best feeling of his life..
he compose himself & went towards Swaragini’s room to meet & congratulate raglak…
precap : Sanky jealously…Swasan cute close moments.. raglak romance..
the end
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Soooooooo friends finally lucky confessed..raglak are official couple now…how was the epi…??? did you like it…??? how was swasan plan to make lucky realize his love…?
plz plz plz do comments friends…i m waiting for your response…
22 Comments
awesome.. thnks for posting
raglak confession was superb…..mainly swasan plan was superb for lucky to realise his love for ragini……
it was awesome dear i lov ur ff
superb dea n loved the way they confessed n swasan planning was too good …..:-)
Awesome.. best ff ever.
U gave importance to everyone.
I think sanky should win as swalak parents support thenm but sanky should prove his worth in dance to his parents
Wow no words dr then I thougt to ask u know dance or wat because u explain each step systematically ur too good it’s too like cricket but dance dear I know road dance means dull tapankuchi..but I love sports I. M d GP leader..then pls confess swasan love story in different way…then I want 4 to win..then all d best for ur future.actually CA is unique course actually in bangalore ca course college is rare..but it’s scope is more pls continue waiting for next update
Awesome loved it wow nice bonding dear n thank u for posting one more epi its pleasure to read ur ff uummmmh loved it
raglak rocks
my choice for. winners_ rag,laksh,sanskar
Raglak scenes and swasan plan was superb superb superb dear and plz update next part soon.
Omg finally he realized his love lol…swasan plan was superb and according to the winners I’ve already said that i want SWASAN so decision is still pending on the votes?… And I’m 16 so I’ll call u di from now on..from friends to sisters is that ok???
Superb plan by superb swasan
Awesome loved raglak scenes
Hey super episode namrata
awesome awesome…..no words yaar….very nice…..swasan plan f rapid fire was fantastic……nd lucky after realizing his love without wasting time he admitted to ragini….its superb….nd swaras gift was fabulous…..altogether very nice…..nd u told dat ragini will shine n singing so make swasan as winners nd lucky will shine n cricket so altogether everyone will succeed n one field…..its just my opinion….
Superb nd about choosing winner choose those really need to win for their family like ragsan
raglak swalak swasan part was cute dr
Swasan winner. .. n if wanna make thn make swara jealous plz
Sanju rapid fire question idea was super and Laksh confession Was awesome ??? loved it…
A DID fan huh?! me too actually i love Raghav Juyal,Shyam yadhav,SIR D,Shakti mohan,MUDASSOR KHAN,AND JAY.U r a gud writer. I really want san to win d show.coz he needs to prove infrnt of his dad.other 3 has support and other chances of becoming success.
Bravo!!!! Now what to say….every episode turns out to be mind blowing. …….This shows that u must be an outstanding dancer dear ……carry on n god bless u
Awesome dear loved it…. laksh and ragini’s confession was superbbb….. amazing !!!!
And that winner thing …. if only one had to win … than make sanskar win… to prove to his dad …. …. its just my suggestion … plz don’t mind dear