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Samjhota..Swaragini ka…Ek Naya Adhaye (Intezaar) Episode 10

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Hello people….so..this is gonna be the last epi….so lets start….
The episodes starts with Laksh holds Swara..
Swara:Laksh…..Ragini ko…
Laksh:Shut up….first we need to go to the hospital…
Saying this he picked her and went to the hospital…..
She was in the OT…..Laksh went near the Krishna idol..
Laksh:Why is this happening god? Why? Plz save Swara …..i can’t leave without her…..i could never say this to her…….i love her a lot…..i will die of something happens to her…
Just then the doctor calls him…
Dr:There r many complications…..we can save the mother or the children….
Laksh:Save Swara doctor….she is my life…….nothing should happen to her….
After an hour……….. the doctor comes…
Dr:Doh betiya huyi hai….

Laksh is extremely happy…
Laksh:Meri betiyan………but doctor…Swara…
Dr:She forced us to save the children and not her….now she doesn’t have much time….
Laksh collapses on the floor….
Laksh:No….Swara….
He enters the OT…and holds Swara’s hand…
Swara is smiling….
Laksh:Swara…..
Laksh goes out to Sanskar’s doctor…..he is shocked to see that Sanskar is fine…..
Dr:Mr Maheshwari..we were about to tell u that your brother…
Laksh:Doctor..can I take him somewhere?
Dr:No…his condition is still critical..
Laksh:Doctor..agar wohh waha nehi pauncha….toh…yeh zinda nehi reh payega….plz try to understand…
Sanskar;Plz…Do…ctor…..
Laksh takes Sanskar to Swara’s OT….
Sanskar:Lady hitler…
Swara;Sanskar………..ab jakar mera intezar khatam huya…..
Sanskar:Nothing will happen to u….

Swara:Y r u lying?I know..that I’m going to die…….but why did u take this step…suicide?
Sanskar:Sorry Swara…..now u get fine…then u can scold me as much as u can…..
Swara;I won’t be alive to do that..
Sanskar;If ur not alive then I won’t be alive as well….
Swara smiles….
Laksh:Swara……plz..stay strong..u need to be fine for your daughters…..
Swara;U r there na…to take care of your daughters…..and plz take care of my Ragini…
Sanskar looks at Laksh…..
Swara:He did everything cause he thought that u love Ragini…and I came in between u both……he loves u very much Sanskar….u r very lucky to get Laksh as your brother….
Sanskar:Swara..pl…

He sees Swara isn’t blinking…..Doctor closes her eyes…with her hands…saying that she is no more….Sanskar smiles looking at Swara…and closes his eyes…..and his head falls oh Swara’s hand…..doctor declares that he is also dead….
Laksh collapse down………………………………………………he is not saying anything…he is not blinking even..he is in deep shock…Gadodias reach the hospital…..they see Swara,Laksh and Sanskar……the doctor tells everything to them…Sumi looks at Laksh…and the places her hand on his head…
Sumi:Beta…..Laksh….say something……see your daughters…..
Now people…u must be thinking that its Raglak…………….
Just then two ward boys come with a stretcher..witha dead body…..because of the wind the white clothe gets removed,…..its revealed to be Ragini….
Sumi shouts:Ragini………………..

Laksh looks at Ragini….
The ward boy says:Mam….u know her?
Sumi:Yess…she is my daughter……
WB:Mam..she met with an accident..a truck hit her…she was spot dead………..
Sumi collapse on the floor:I lost my both daughters in a day…………….my swaragini r no more…..
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21 years later….a girl is sitting with some children…
Girl:Evry love story doesn’t get a happy ending….some stories.r incomplete…..some true love stories…
Another girl comes from behind:Ragini..tu phir she shuru hogayi..true love and all…
Ragini:Swara…whatever I said is true na….
Note people…there name is only Swara and Ragini…their faces r not like them…
SWARA:Soumya Seth…
Ragini:Tanya Sharma

Rags:Happy birthday sis…
Swara:Same to u…..but we need to go to the temple…for mom,bade papa and masi’s shradh….haina?
Rags:Ha…..
people..thank u so much for your support and love…..u guys gave me a different space in your heart…u all read my ff for the story and not couples….that means a lot…love u all..and about my pairs…every story doesn’t have a happy ending…many of u said it swasan and raglak…..but i hope u liked the ending….
thanks riya malik,anjali,bisha,abdul hafiz(uma),falguni,shivanya,xxx,abhi,halima,ireena,shloka,lila,kriya.jyotii,rey,akira,sinzo,ritu,naimi,ammy……….so sorry if i missed anyone…….
shloka……………congrates…u r the first person who made me a fool….
people…jus wanted u all to answer 1 question….

why did i name this intezar?
can anyone guess it?

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65 Comments

  2. naimi on

    wow…..awesome ending it was unexpected n intezaar becoz swaraglak were waiting for sanskar all while ……i think soo n i will be waiting for your next ff ..INTEZAAR karungi main..;-)

  4. Riya on

    Kiddo I’ll miss u so much .. Come soon with a new ff.. I will wait for u .. Don’t u dare forget me … Intezaar!!!.. According to me u named it as intezaar because each character portrayed on this ff is waiting for someone or I may say waiting for eventual having a good life with their loved ones.. I know I am not able to express my views properly in fact I have become so emotional reading the last part .. It was completely unexpected and I know what I am called ‘SENSITIVE QUEEN’ so so so I can’t tell anything more.. Sorry.. I just wanna say kiddo I’ll miss u so much .. And I am sure u will come with a ping back and make many more impressed by ur writing .. Ur imagination capacity is really nice.. The way u think the way u put that in form.. The way u answer others and what not iS a great skill bestowed by God to u .. I’ll miss u so much I’ll miss u so so so much .. Da I am crazily crazy for ur ff kiddo
    #RIYA MALIK

    • Eva on

      I will miss u too Riya..and will never forget u..and even u plz don’t forget me….u appreciated my writing from the beginning…a big thanks for that Riya….love u..i understood your views…u expressed them perfectly…see u at my next ff page….❤? love u and will.miss u…plz don’t forget me…

  7. sinzo on

    Really awesome……yaar…..nice ending…..m gonna miss you and your ff?

    because i think ders gonna be next part……which will start with new life and new characters Swaragini (Soumiya and Tanya)…..its juz a guess…..i am sorry if m wrong…….

    but your ff is awesome,…….??????

    • Eva on

      Maybe theres gonna be a next part…but I’m not sure about it sinzo…an thank u… 🙂

  8. Abdul hafiz on

    Superb Di . You nailed it as always.I will miss you, plz come back soon.Swara and ragini ko sanskar ka intezar tha that’s why you named it’Intezar’.Love you my dear di . Take care.

  9. Anu on

    U know eva its the first time I m reading ff which is not of swasan nd I m eagerly waiting for your ff love u eva nd plzzzzz its a request try to come with new swasan ff plzzzz plzz

    • Eva on

      Thank u so much Anu..that u read my ff keeping your love for swasan aside….and love u too Anu….

  10. xxx on

    Eva di … with ur first ff samjhota swara even died whilst giving birth… and this is repeating…
    I hope u understand… if u have time can u upload my ff from wattpad to here… thank u!

    • Eva on

      i understood your point…but from the beginning…i showed that Swara is having complications….and at last she had a premature delivery….so she died..and this is diff from the previous one has Swara died soon after giving birth to her child….and here…..she was alive for some moments…..

  11. Ritu on

    unexpected ending. sub kar rahe the INTEZAAR sanskar ka .Waiting for the next ff . Please come back soon with another ff.Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

  14. tanu on

    maar dala aapne such a awesome story …kal take me protest kr rhi thi ki swasan nahi or ek din me apne swasan swalak dono baba diye

  16. shloka on

    U nailed it eva……
    Intezaar …this was ur ff… from beginning to end…..every one was waiting……sabko intezaar tha pehle sanskar ka…….apne pyaar ka……happy ending ka…..swaragini ke vaapis milne ka…..har pal ka jisme khushi thi…..so what can be better than name intezaar….and even we waited for ur ff…aur hum intezar karenge next ff ka….i think. I made it long…waiting for ur next ff

    • Eva on

      Thank u Shloka…and i will write my next ff soon…btw accha april fool banaya tumne mujhe.. 😛

  17. Anjali on

    Loved it eva…… I was actually wondering if after you made the pairs be it swalak or swasan, if there was going to be some hurtful comments again…. but u used ur presence of mind and your EVAness and proved once again y i love ur writing so much….

    Will miss you dear…but pls don’t go our of touch completely… do continue to chat with me on my ff page or whatever….. ur like my little sis…. i Have only bros so it’s so nicee to talk to you all….

    • Eva on

      Anjali…thank u for appreciating my EVAness…..and i will chat with u on your ff page….btw i will son start a new ff….. 🙂

  19. IREENA on

    OMG its finish i will seriously miss ur ff after coming from college i used to read ur ff first but now plz come with another of

  20. Halima on

    Another Awesome update Eva, I’m going to miss this, it was emotional and I hope you come back with another awesome story??????

  22. Bisha on

    Sis, Thank you very much for such an ending. Though tragic I loved the way you poured out the emotions and created the tragic vibe. I seriously loved your both stories. Your imagination power is admirable. Seriously. And I think the tag INTEZAR is because each character is waiting for the other one to come up and finally lead to their good lofe. All were expecting a better life and waited to complete their phase of sorrows. Well I think you will again come up with another beautiful story, till then let me also INTEZAR 🙂 🙂 🙂 Stay Well Good Bye Miss Your awesome stories for the time being!

    • Eva on

      Awww…Bisha…thank u so much for such a sweet comment….i will write another ff soon….so that your intezar is less.. 🙂 🙂

  24. Rey on

    its nt fair eva u always made me 2 cry …. previous ff also laksh statement made me cry nd nw this one … btw u jst nailed it dear its was awesum nd i’m gonna miss u dear plzz cum back soon with another one…

    • Eva on

      Awww…my bad..that i made u cry…thanks dr….for so much appreciation….and I’ll come back soon.. 🙂 🙂

  25. xxx on

    mujhe toh abhi bhi yakeen nahi hua… that Pratyusha Banerjee has comitted suicide… she acted very well as mohini in Sasural simar ka

    May she RIP

    • Eva on

      Mene kuch der pehlehi yeh suna..that Pratyusha Bannerjee has committed suicide….even i couldn’t believe it…..may she RIP…..btw do u know the reason?

    • xxx on

      Apparently her and her boyfriend Rahul raj singhs relationship failed and she was not happy with the relation…
      Ajaz khan was saying that this can be a planned murder… aur her boyfriend had abused her

    • xxx on

      •Swara …. my love
      •Hemish(u r my life)
      •Swalak(hatred to love)
      and i have an os…
      • Swalak Valentine (one shot)

      Please tell me if u are a swalak or swasan fan.. i am die hard of swalak

  29. Jyotii on

    In the entire story everyone was waiting for some one! This is the theme of story! And this ending is superb Tough uh r my junior but seriously girl I think I should learn something from you. Then entire story was mindblowing. I just love its theme. This samjhota series is one of my fav ff. Eva you are the one who taught me to not care about the pair,just to read a story! Just love uh n uhr story! 🙂

    • Eva on

      Thank u ? Jyotii di…as u said that I r senior so calling u di..thank u for appreciating my ff…