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Thank u so much everyone for loving this story..i m overwhelmed to receive Such response..i love u all so much..keep reading and supporting..ur comments made my day…thank u silent readers also…
Reply to comments : (Sorry if i hv skipped anyone)
HARSU,SARA & DAFSI : thank so much Dear…i hv read ur comments in ch-17…
SANSKRITI : upps i m sorry dear for typing mistake in ur name…thank u so much dear for liking this story this much… wow i got another lil sis…yeh.. ๐
SWATI, SINDHU, MISHU, TVISHA, AMMU : thank u so much dear for loving this part & giving your views ๐
POOJA, SARA, MEGHA,JYOTI : thank u so much my lil sisters… ๐ย i m glad u all like this part.. love u all..
HOPE : i m glad u r sharing your personal experiences everytime…don’t worry dear i like to read your bak bak…it seems you are also sharing same nature just like me.. ๐
LOVELY : thank u dear for liking raglak senses.. ๐
KRIYA, NAIMI, SOFIA, RUHANI, ANI : thank u so much dear for loving swasan & raglak romance & also their bonding… ๐
ANUSHA : thank u dear for loving Shona.. ๐ i think u will like this part also..
SHAN : thank i dear..that u loved it so much….& wait for this ff..ya Shona will surly unite Sanky with his dad in next epi… ๐
MITTI : yeh dear..i hv missed u in pre part comment box..ย ๐ย thank u so much for liking & commenting for both parts.. i m glad u can imagine swasan performance..
JWALA : thank u so much dear.. i m glad u that u started commenting back.. ๐ no dear i m not having if a/ c but i m thinking to create one after my exams…
LOL : thank u dear for breaking your silence & liking this ff… ๐
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Ch-18 link :
http://www.tellyupdates.com/swaragini-ff-swasan-raglak-d3-dil-dosti-dance-ch-18/
Recap : Swasan & raglak romance..some emotional moments & Sujata’s call
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CH-19 : (finger crossed for this ch)
Swasanraglak took permission for visiting Sanky’s home for 4 hours..they were suppose to go by 5:30 & come back by max 9:30…its 5 o’clock now & they all were in their casuals..but Shona was in kurti & jeans…
Ragini : (tease her) Ohh wow..Shona..so you r planning to impress your would be Sasu ma..!!
Lucky : (join Lado) Sanky has totally changed her..i hv never imaginged Shona in girlish clothes…(confused) but last time when we visited u were in your tee n cappry only…then y …
Ragini : (interrupt) bz at that time swasan were just friends..but today she is visiting as their would be DIL..
Raglak laugh & share hifi..
Sanky : (fake anger) hey stop it u both now..(smile) Shona you look beautiful & cute in every clothes..nd in this pink kurti u r looking awesome my princess… ๐
Shona : (blush) Thank u so much..(anger) nd u both need to know that i don’t required to impress my Sasu mom bz she already loves me so much…
Lucky : ok kiddo…then y r u wearing this & not your casuals…
Shona : (nervous) bz i m 1st time going to meet her(Sujata) husband today…
Sanlakrag : (wide eyes) Her Husband…
Sanky : (make puppy face ) yar he is my dad too…
Ragini : arre..Shona he is not only her hudband but also your would be father in low…my lil kiddo…
Shona : whatever it is..(scared) you guys now stop scaring me..(order) Di & lucky..you will not call me kiddo there..understood..?
Raglak : (pout) Ok ma’am..
Sanky : (smile) Shona clam down..he will like u just as mom do..(sad) moreover he will not even spend sometime with us..he will come & directly go to his room only..so don’t worry…(she nodes)
Shona : (monologue) how can i clam down Sanky…Ohh god plz help me what i m going to do there..hope everything will be fine ..
They all left from there..on the way there were so many people who now know them as dancers..they were feeling very happy..they reached at Sanky’s home…
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Sujata opened the door..as soon as she opened the door, Shona hugged her tight..Sujata also hug her back…after that all hug her one by one & took her blessings…
they all went in & sat on the sofa..
Sujata : i m so happy that u all come..u all r looking so good..nd u all are doing great in show…
All : thanks mom…
Sujata : (concerned) Shona beta..how is your leg now..? how will u prepare your solo act..?
Shona : Its perfectly alright now..don’t worry mom.. choreography had been set taking care of my leg only..
Sanky : (looking around) Mom..where is Hitler…?
Sujata : (smile) he is in study room besy in conference…it will continue for 1-2 hours appx..
Lucky : that’s grate..(start flirting) anyway mom..i must say you are looking so young…no one can say that you are mother of 22 yr old guy…infact i don’t feel to call you mom also…hey what about suju..??
Sujata : (smile) Ohh god..lucky you again started…
Sanky : (warned) lucky..if u wanna flirt with mom then do as much as u can till the time dad come out…or else…
Ragini : (scared him) or else he will break your bones for flirting with his wife…
Lucky : (afraid) Ohh noooooo…what are u speaking…flirting or me..that to with mom..no ways..i was just giving her complement nothing else..
he smile nervously..ragsan share hifi & laugh on lucky….
Sujata : hey stop it u two…don’t tease my lucky boy…only he is giving me complement…(make faces) now a days your dad hv not even looked at me properly…
Sanky : (side hug her) hey y u want complement from the Hitler when your son is here..btw mom you are looking so beautiful today.
(Sujata shyly smiles)
Shona : (anger & shouts) hey..u all stop it now…i will not leave anyone of you, if u will speak a word against my dad..nd u Sanky..if he is lil strick that doesn’t mean u will call him Hitler..so now on don’t you Dare to call him by that name..did u get that..??!
Sanlakrag & Sujata was hell shocked by her behaviour..they were not understanding anything..
Sujata : its ok beta…clam down..
Shona : no mom..how can u bear this kind of thing against dad..? n what if he is not praising you that doesn’t mean u will do his complaint to us…
Ragini : (shocked) Shona…??!!!
Lucky : (lil angry) Shona..how can u speck like this to mom…? say sorry to her right now…
Sujata : no no lucky beta its ok..i think she has not said anything wrong..(to Shona) i m sorry..i should hv not talked about your dad like that…
Sanky : (confused) but Shona y r u taking side of that Hitler..
Shona : (anger) Sanky…!!!
Sanky : (see her angey face) Ohh sorry sorry…i mean Dad…??
Shona : (smile) simple…as he is my Dad also…how can i allow anyone say anything about him..!!
Sujata : (put her hand on her head) aww…wow…Shona..i m very happy with your thinking…
Shona & Sujata were talking…sanlakrag were shocked..
Sanky : (whispered to raglak) don’t you think she is behaving weared..
Ragini : (same tone) ya bz b4 leaving she told that she is gonna meet mom’s husband…
Lucky : (same tone) then how come mom’s husband become her dad suddenly…??!!!
Sanky : ya correct its seems something is fishy…
Shona looked at particular direction from corner of her eyes..she checked that all is clear now…she take a sigh of relief…
Shona : (monologue) Ohh thank god…i saw dad standing near door of study room & listening our talks while lucky start flirting with mom…wow…Shona i think u hv impressed him by taking his side..hv u seen he just went back inside smilingly..not bad my Shona darling…
She stop her talking with herself with Sujata’s voice…
Sujata : aree Shona beta..where are you lost…? r u ok…??
Shona : Ohh ya sorry Mom..i m fine…just thinking about something…
Sujata : Its ok…wait i will come back soon after arranging dining table…
Sujata was about to go when Shona hold her hand & ask sorry for her behaviour…bz to impress dad she has talked rudely with her..
Shona : (hold her ears) mom..(knelt down infornt of her ) i m so sorry…for talking lil rudely with you b4 sometime…plz plz plz forgive your Shona…(almost teary eyes)
Sujata : (made her stand) arre…you don’t need to ask apology dear..you were right at your place..(emotional) i can never be angry on you Shona..(she crasses her check & went to dining area)
Sanky smile seeing his mom & Shona’s bonding…
Sanky : (whispered) now from her apology its clear that…
Lucky : (doubtful) there is some reason for her behaviour b4 sometime…Dal me ku6 kala hai..!!
Ragini : no no lucky puri dal hi Kali hai…
Shona turned towards them…she knew what they are thinking so to avoid their questioning look..
Shona : Di..lets go we will help mom to arrange everything…
Ragini : (agree) ya lets go…we will help her…
Swaragini went…Sanky looked at lucky who was seems in great shock…
Sanky : (shake him) lucky…what happened..?
lucky : (shocked) hv u heard what Shona said..? she will help mom that to in kitchen work…
Sanky : (confused) so what lucky..?
lucky : Arre..Shona even don’t like to serve herself unless & untill she can avoid…now she is speaking about help…that means…
Sanky : (scared) she is going to do something big…
Lucky : ya exactly…
Sanlak : (look at eo) lets see…
Sanlak went to the dining table…they shocked to see the site…Sujata & Ragini were arranging all the things while Shona was sitting on chair & eating Gulab Jamun…
Lucky : look..i told u na she can’t help unless nd untill its like that she has no option other then doing it…
Sanky : ya u were so right..lets go there . (taunt Shona) Lucky..i heard that someone was here to help mom…n not to eat
Shona make faces hearing his taunt and thought to give them lesson..she start doing fake coughing…Sanlak look at her confusing as they know she is acting…Sujata & Ragini come there at her rescue…
Ragini : (scold Sanlak) hey what r u both doing..see how badly she is coughing…(pat her back) Shona drink this water…
Sujata : (scold) khabardar…don’t tease her..if u will taunt her i m going to slap you hard..
Shona make puppy face & hug Ragini-Sujata…she smile naughtily at Sanlak…now boys understand why she did this…
Sanky : (whispered to lucky) She is dangerous man…we hv to be careful from her…
lucky : (same tone) such a drama queen she is…we will see here after going back…
Suddenly someone shouts from their back making both of them scared….ya its Rp…
Rp : (shouts) Sanskar…laksh….
Sujata, Ragini & Shona stand like good girls whereas Sanlak were very afraid with his shouting..
Rp : (angry) how dare you both speak about her like that…i will kicked u both out if u will speak a word against my daughter Shona…
Sanlakrag : (shocked) my daughter Shona…!!!!!!!???
Sujata : (shocked) what i hv heard is right…? my daughter Shona..??!!!
Sanlakrag & Sujata was in state of shocked…while Shona knew the reason…so she was smiling…in next second..sanlakrag & Sujata got the biggest shock of their life…their mouth & eyes were wide open…
Shona went near Rp…she take his blessings..he put his hand on her head…she make her cute puppy face & hug Rp…he also hugged her back…and smiles widely..
RP : (smiles) Shona beta..i want to talk with you something..will you come with me to study room…
Shona : (smile) Arre dad..u don’t need to ask anything..you just need to order…lets go…
Shona & RP went to the study room…
Sujata : plz somebody pinch me…m i dreaming…or its really has happened…??
Ragini : (shocked) Ohh god..dad can smile also..i hv not seen him smiling even once in this last 7-8 months…
Sujata : Lado…you are talking about months…i hv not seen him smiling like in last few years…
Lucky : (look at Sanky) Sanky…?? (no response) (loudly) Sanky…??? (still no response)
everyone was looking at him…he was not at all responding…Sujata shake him but he don’t say anything…lucky drag him and made him seat on chair but he don’t give any response…he was just staring from where Shona & RP went…at last Ragini sprinkl some water on his face…he come back to his senses.. he looked at all present there..
Sanky : (start crying) why..?..how..?..when…?..what..?
Lucky : (confused) hey bro…plz plz clam down…i know u r shocked…infact we all are shocked…
Sanky : (crying like kid) WHY that Hitler is so nice with Shona…? he blessed her..he hugged her ..moreover he smile widely…which i hv never seen from many years…
Sanky : (continue while crying ) HOW can he do this to me..? i love him so much..but he has never put his hand like this on me even for once also…
Sanky : WHEN he is meeting Shona for the first time…then also he is showing love for her but he is scolding me & not talking with me…(baby crying face)
Sanky : WHAT magic Shona has did on him ? what he want to talk with her…?
Sujata : (hug & console him) don’t worry beta….plz stop crying…infact don’t you think that we should be happy..bz now it seems that Shona will change him…
Ragini : (give him water) ya..u only think na Sanky when in first meeting with Shona we r seeing dad smiling after years……
lucky : then it can be possible that in Shona’s co he will become totally like my dad & Shekhar uncle…then u will get his love & support both…
Sanky : (smile) arre ha…it can be possible…that means i will get my dad’s love soon..(emotionally) my princess is very lucky for me…i love u so much…
All smile and sit there talking & waiting for Shona & RP to come…
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Meanwhile in the study room…Shona mentally prepared herself for final war..she knew that she has to face his anger in few seconds…she take a deep breath b4 starting…
Shona :ย Dad b4 you ask me anything can u answer my question…will u accept me for your son whole heartedly..?
RP : (Strict) honestly speaking i don’t like it when Sujata told me about you…bz u are also mad for dance just like sanskar..
Shona : (tensly) Dad…after seeing sanskar performing on tv..still you don’t think he can hv bright future in dance…?
RP : (turned other side on anger) i hv not seen his any performance..i can’t west my time in that…
Shona : (smile) No dad..you are lying…u hv seen his every performance…or else you hv told this thing looking at me and not turning other side…
RP : (angry) Shona stop this topic now..or else you will face my anger..u r like my daughter & i don’t want to hurt you…so leave about it…
Shona : (scared but continue) no dad..i think this is right time we hv to talk about this…plz tell me what’s your problem..? y r u not supporting Sanky..?
RP : (angry) (lil louder) u wanna listen na..then listen…i don’t like him doing dance..yes i hv seen his all performance..they were mindblowing but still i don’t support him..bz i don’t think he will hv any future with this dance.. i want to see him successful…moreover he has gone against me everytime…not only he you all are westing your time…
Shona : (take a deep breath) Dad i hv listened your pov..now will you plz give me chance to put my pov..
RP : (strictly) you can…
he was interrupt by vedios call on her lappy…it was from new dealer…it was urgent so he received it..
They both were talking about how they will hv to consult some adviser related to ROC work…
Shona heard them..as she is CS final student…she know everything about it…she polity interrupt in their talk & give them necessary suggestions with respect to ROC works…the dealer become happy as his half work has bcome easy with her advice…he praised her and disconnect the call…RP was looking at her with shocked expression…
RP : (shocked) Shona beta..u r mad behind dance just like sanskar & investing your whole time in dancing then how come you know all about this company matters…
Shona : (smile) that’s what i want to tell you dad…its not like that we are investing our most of time in dancing so we don’t hv knowledge of other things…
(she told her own story how she lives both her own & her fathers dream..how her parents & lucky’s dad supported her & lucky…how Ap anty supported Ragini…how they are having other talents apart from dance…)
now after hearing Shona..RP was realizing his mistake…he curse himself for not trusting his son even after knowing how excellent he is in both dance & study…
Shona : (teary eyes) You know dad…i hv seen Sanky crying many time remembering u….he will complete his MBA this year but still u didn’t support him..(almost crying) he is deing for your love & support dad…plz give him what he deserve…plz dad…
shona knelt down infornt of him folding her both hands together..she was crying…RP could not take it long & made her stand…
RP : (almost crying) Shona…today you hv made me realize my mistake…no no not mistake i hv committed crime by not trusting & sporting my son who loves me this much…(crying) i m a very bad dad Shona..i m not even eligible to call his dad…
Shona : (compose herself & made RP sit on chair) no no dad…u r not bad father at all…it just you hv not understand your child..now as u hv realize your mistake plz give your love & blessing to him for which he is carving from long back….
RP : (still upset) Shona do you think he will forgive me…? even i owe apology from Sujata also..
Shona : (smile) don’t worry dad they are not at all angry on you…now its time to show your cool dude side…
RP : (laugh) ya sure…(emotional) u r truly very nice girl dear…an awesome dancer…excellent student…perfect advisor…i m happy that u come in to my life & change my thinking..now we all will live very beautiful & lovely life…
Shona : ya dad..not only beautiful but we are going to hv rocking life..we both will team up to tease Sanky & mom..deal..??
RP : (laugh) deal…my dear…now i m going to hv so much fun in my life…no tension..no anger..no fighting…just enjoyment…& happiness..
Shona : ya..that’s like Shona’s dad…(share hifi)
RP : now lets go..(tease her) your prince must be worried now as her princess is with Hitler…
Shona : (blush) Ohh god dad..don’t tease me..we need to tease others..(serious) (make puppy face) dad i wanna confess one thing…
(then she told how she has seen him near door & do that whole drama to impress him)
RP : (fake anger) (lil loudly) Shona
Shona : (make sorry face & look down) sorry dad
RP : how can u hide that you are a drama queen…(he start laughing)
Shona : (shocked) Ohh god..dad u scared me..i m sure mom & Sanky will get heart attack seeing your this side…
RP : (laugh) ha ha ha…lets go now..
(Shona nodes)
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All were waiting for them at dining table…
Sanky : (tensed) Mom its been 35 mins they hv gone in study room..y its taking so long…what they are talking about…?
Sujata : (stand up) i think i should go and check them..we need to confirm Shona is ok na..
she was about to go when they saw Shona & RP coming down stairs…talking & Laughing…
Sujata stood still like statue…she has not seen RP laughing after her marriage even for single time..
Sanky : (wipe his eyes) m i dreaming…or dad is actually laughing..?
Ragini : (shocked) no Sanky dear your dad is actually laughing…
lucky : (smile) i think its a effect of Shona’s company…
RP & Shona take their seats…they saw all of them were shocked…Sujata was still standing like statue..
RP : (romanticly) Arre my suju darling what happened…? nd plz don’t star me like that…at least not infornt of kids…
Sanlakrag stand up on their chair..Sujata was about to fall but thank god Sanky hold her on time…
Sujata : (stammer) what u told..?? suju darling.?? Ohh god r u ok..i think i should call doctor…something has happened to him..
RP went near Sujata & hold her hands..he asked forgiveness for all his bad deeds with her..then he went infornt of Sanky…
RP : (cupped her face) my son..you are the bestest son of the world & i hv not trusted you..not give you love & support which you deserve…but now on your dance will not only your but also my dream…i will live that dream along with you…(hold his own ears)i m sorry sanskar..will u plz forgive your dad…(teary eyes)
Sanky : (cry) its ok dad…i love u so much dad..& thanks…thank u so much…i was waiting for this moment since long…
Rp : (emotional) I love u too beta..& i hv not told u till now but i m proud of you so much…i love ur dance also…(they smile)
He went to Ragini…
RP : (hold his ear) i m sorry Lado..you hv tried to talk with me many times but i hv behaved very badly with you…plz forgive your dad…
Ragini : (cry) its ok dad..(hug him)
For the 1st time Ragini feelย fatherly love ..she was very happy..Swasanlak were also happy for her…then RP went infornt of lucky..lucky got bit scared…
RP : (hug him)ย hey dude..no need to be afraid..(look at sujata) now we both will flirt with suju together…(lucky smile happily)
Sujata blush & ragsan smile shockingly…Shona was watching all of them emotionally with happy tears in her eyes..
Sanky : (hug Shona) I love so much princess..u give me the best gift of my life…
Shona : (smile) I love you too my prince..
Sujata : (happy but confused) i know Shona is the reason of your change but what she did..? how she made you understand…?
Shona : well…..
(she told everything starting from how she told about that rules to mom so she will invite them..then her drama seeing RP to impress him and at last what happened in study room)
RP : so all credit goes to my daughter Shona…Sanky i m proud of your choice..god bless u all
All looked at Shona with teary eyes…the way she has planned the whole thing alone & handle it was amazing…she has united father & son..she has changed a strict man into joyful man…after hugging & bit emotional drama all sat from dinner…
RP : Shona, Lado come her…you both will sit her…(pointing chairs near him)
They sat there…he take plate in his hand & start feeding both Swaragini with his hand…
Sujata : hey bhagvan…Sanky your dad is going to kill me by giving heart attacks…
Sanlak : (puppy face) plz dad u need to feed us also…
Ragini : no ways…dad you are in our party so you will not feed them…
RP : how can i say no to my daughters…so boys you need to ask your beautiful Mom…
Swaragini & RP laugh…Sanlak make angry face…
Sanky : Hey..u dad’s daughters…don’t forget that…
Lucky : (smirk) we hv the most beautiful mom who loves us so much…
Sanlak: (baby face) MOM….??!!!
Sujata smile & took plate & start feeding both of them. soon they complete dinner…
RP : Lado..dear i hv a surprise for you…(he gave her ice-cream )
Ragini : (jumped & hugged ram) thank u so much dad…i love it alot…& i love u…
Rp : i know it my lil daughter…& i also love u…god bless u dear..
Swasanlak smile looking her childishness when it comes to ice-cream…then they took blessings from Sujata & RP…and left for their nach house…all were extremely happy…specially our Sanky after all he was united with his father that to bz of his princess…
Precap : ragsan meet swalak patents..Ragini’s moments with dp & Shekhar…
The end..
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Friends in this part it was needed to change RP…also for RP & Shona’s bonding…In next part i will show Ragini’s bonding with Shekhar & DP…
Plz note that i hv given imp to all leads equally till now…nd will maintain it till end..so plz keep faith on me…
I m postponing D3 team entry…they will come in Ch-21…
Friends plz tell me how was the epi…? How was Shona’s plan ? did u like this part…plz share your views..i m waiting for your comments..plllllllzzzzzzzzzย do comments.. i request all of u comment…
23 Comments
It’s beautiful waiting for next update
Nice
It was just awesome, mind blowing, and I don’t know what to say. I couldn’t control my laugh, I was just laughing like something happened to me. You have superb writing skills dear and the way you have just described each and everything was superb
It was emotional funny lovable…. Can keep on saying like this… U have showed all th emotions in one episode… All together super episode ?? really loved their bonding… Till now u have given equal importance to both the pairs…
i loved it…..wow shona and rp bonding was nice…..half chap full of love half full of emotional…..very nice…..waiting to c ragsan bonding with swalak parents…..seriously how can u write like this????i m just jealous of u….ha ha ha just kidding dr….;-)
Hai…so finally d ice bw sanky n rp melted..all tnks to shona’s master plan..i didn’t expct dat to happen so soon..but it was gud..i really think dads bond wid daughters more dan dey do wid sons..
i m sry typing mstk half part full f joy….not love
shona plan was awesome……bonding of rp n shona is nice……emotional scene was awesome……
This was best episode so far.
I couldnt stop laughing while reading swara’s prank and plan. It was awesome…. Hahaaa
great epi.
Hey i wasn’t finished…do u know y i think lyk dat..coz in my house i get more pocket money dan my bigbro used to get when he was in college. I was expecting d3 team.now i have to w8 for ch 21.but i’ll w8..its worth it. Keep smiling.
Awesome yaar swara…super
Awesome episode dear and waiting for next part
Di it’s tooooooooooo good Shona and sanky’s dad bonding was awesome hat’s off to ur ff di ?
awesome dea i just loved it rp rocked n sujsanraglak expressions omg i was laughing like mad , i was imagining their faces omg thanks a lot for making me laugh a lot today omg rp n shona bonding is damn good n lucky flirting with suju n scared of rp n his reaction to lucky was damn cool n sanskar crying awwww……so cute n emotional n rags got her father love finally …..LOVE U DEA …:-)
Yrr u r an amazing writer d way u start ur chp. N write is amazing u expressed everythng about their emontiond love dance bonding everything thank u so much for that
N yss whn it come to today ep. It’s amazing ur finger corresed wrked ……..sryyy m itni bak bak ki pr m bhi ek silent reader hu pr tum mujh ajjj comment krne pe mazboor krdiya ….sersiouly u r an amazing writer ty for ur story to share it with us….โบim w8ing for d next part
Yrr u r an amazing writer d way u start ur chp. N write is amazing u expressed everythng about their emontiond love dance bonding everything thank u so much for that
N yss whn it come to today ep. It’s amazing ur finger corresed wrked ……..sryyy m itni bak bak ki pr m bhi ek silent reader hu pr tum mujh ajjj comment krne pe mazboor krdiya ….sersiouly u r an amazing writer ty for ur story to share it with us….im w8ing for d next part
Best ff ever….i feel sooo happy after reading ur every episode…..u nailed it like always….simply hatts of to u…..love uhh sooo much……keep writing….and be happy….
And the episode was damn emotional and funny due to everybody’s expression….and rp statement was soooo funny-” NOW WE BOTH WILL FLIRT WITH SUJU TOGETHER”….Hahahah….lol….
Ohh my my!!!!!….it was soooo goood dear….lovely funny emotional all d awesome adjectives which can describe it…..I m running out of words now so just writing
……nyc….very nyc……(very nyc) to d power of infinity ๐
drama queen shona ia just awsm……..
lol!!!!!!
awsm idea di……..
luv u..;)
Nice update,. Liked SanLak parts
Shona was amazing in this epi
Can’t wait 4 next epi upload it faster di.
Shona really rocked di…awesome
I was a silent reader but today i want to comment it is an epic part. From starting till end i m laughing madly. And today Rp , Shona and Suju rocks !!
i was a silent reader of ur D3.now i am going to break my silence.firstly ur elder to me so i will call u ‘di’.di ur a awsm writer.very diffrent story,funny,emotional…………………………….no words to describe ur writing skill.waiting for next epi.pls upload asap.
Awesome…. it almost made me cry… mind blowing…. loved it a lot di……
nice
Wow shona melted his anger she is soo sweet… Really very happy for sanky… It was too gud dr u rocked it u r an amazing writer