Hey guys Anu here…..thnx for liking my fiction……nd plz read my another fiction love will surely find his destination……
http://www.tellyupdates.com/love-will-surely-find-destination-swaragini/
plz guys support me in this fiction also
Previous part links
http://www.tellyupdates.com/one-body-two-soul-swasan-swaragini-episode-9/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/one-body-two-soul-swasan-swaragini-episode-10/
tvisha:- thanks dear
ria:- thanks dear nd u will find out in this part
Ruhi:- thnk u ruhi for linking
anaya:- haha anaya intelligent ha I must say
dhara:- thanks dear let see in this part is babies nd swara is fine or not
jjjjjj:- thanku dear
shalmali kamble:- thanku dear for comment nd I not hurt yaar but dear lets see what will happen next ….even I m a die hard fan of swasan
Anu Ann:- thanks dear nd ya your guess is awesome in my other fiction haha btw how u guess that it will be swasan
Sethooty:- thanku dear lets see what will happen next
tweety:- thanku dear…..u have read this part for knowing swara is dead or not
Anusha:- thanku dear nd leap will come soon
navi:- haha yr thanku nd lets see but all r sad because …..because…..because…..
sry yr can’t reveal for that u have to read na but if your guess is wrong also na then also plz tell me….what were thinking I will also get to know about your idea….plz plz tell ne what’s in your mind
rosey:- thanks rosey
haha so I guess all r sad or u guess don’t want swara to be dead but let’s see what is in fate…..
Let’s start
all r very happy…gf has arrive nd all r hugging nd congregating each other but doctor has not come out till now icu
on the other side sanskar has done all preparation but somewhere in his heart he is feeling very restless but don’t know why…..suddenly he notice many missed call from sujata……now he is really tensed nd negative thoughts r coming in his mind……suddenly his phone ring nd shows sumi call…..
he picks it
sanskar(worried):-maaa maa is everything fine…woh mom has callen me many times but ….(intrupted with sumi voice)
sumi:- sanskar first calm down nd ya everything is fine infact there is a gud news
Sanskar(confused) :-gud news maa
sumi:- ya gud news is that we r in hospital nd shona has….(intruped by sanskar)
sanskar(worried):- what ma u r in hospital nd u r saying it’s a gud news…..plz ma tell me in which hospital r u……I m coming there right now
sumi:- ya sanskar come here right now but is it not a gud news that u have become father
sanskar:- what ma here I m getting tensed ….. swara is ok or not nd u r saying father….(realizes what sumi has say) (happily) maa is I really…….maa I have become father mommm yepiee I love u I m coming right now
sumi(happily):- ya sanskar u have become dad but have u done the preparation
(yes guys sumi knows everything about sanskar how much sanskar love swara nd he is really vert guilty for deed so she wants to unite swasan)
sanskar is very happy nd he is going to hospital……nd other side in hospital after ending the call sumi goes toward all family member…..when doctor arrive…..
all family member ask about swara nd baby
Suju:- doctor is swara nd baby r ok na can we meet her nd how is baby can we see the baby
Doctor is tensed nd say that swara has given birth to twins one boy nd one girl
all r very happy but suddenly there happiness faded….after listening to doctor……
doctor:- babies r fine they r with swara but we can’t able to save swara….she has very less time…..u can meet her actually because falling from stairs she has hit her baby bump nd she has said us save her babies otherwise she will kill herself that’s why…..I m soory….
all r in tears sujata sits on chair due to shock nd enter in swara ward
swara smiles seeing them nd show them her kids….
swara:- maa mom badi ma see na my babies…..I have become a mother mom finally
sujata:- swara y have u do this ….say while crying
swara:- maa who can I snatch my children’s life maa….even there life has not started yet nd for me I have no reason to live na……in every phase of my life I m betrayed by the one whom I love the most…..I don’t want this life maa…..but maa I want I promise from plz maa forgive sanskar nd maa I want my children’s to get her mother nd father both love nd maa…(muted)
Sujata:- swara now also u r thinking about sanskar…
Suddenly the baby boy starts crying…..all family go out leaving sumi there
swara feeds him milk nd sings a lori for him
(ta ri ra ri ta ri ra ram ta ri ra ram)-2
(Sun sun nanhe lori ki dhun ho ha meethe sapne me gum) 2
tu mera suraj hai tu mera chanda h tu meri aakhon ka tara h sun
hmmmm
sun sun nahe lori ki dhun ho ha meethe sapne me gum
mere ladle tujko aoodhau aachal
aa thapkiyo se sulau tujhe hmm hmmmm
mein taro ki nadiyon se neendiya bulao
annkheyo mein teri chupa use
neendiyan kya tere liye tare lau mein maa ka tu nanha dulara h sunnnn
sun sun nanhe lori Ki dhun ho l ja meethe sapne me gum
suno h hawao na tum shor karma
tuthe na nanhe Ki neendiyan kahi
hmm hmmmmm hmmm mmm
bade bhag se h mile aise raate
mein gati rahungu lori yuhi
sote hue neendiyan tujhko hasati h
aise hi meethe sapno ko chun
sun sun nanhe lori Ki dhun ho ja meethe sapno me gum
ta ri ra ram ta ri ra ram ta ri ra ram ra ram
hmm mm hmm hmmm mm mm mm
she is carressing his forehead nd kiss him nd make him sleep him.in cradle……all r memerized by the voice of swara……
sumi is recording everything……sanskar has arrived there with happy face nd take his baby girl in his hand nd plays with her…..he is in shock first how sujata give him his baby so easily nd at last he ask forgiveness from all of them
sanskar(teary eyes):- badi maa mom plz forgive me I know I have done mistake but maa now I have realize how much I love her maa I want to start a life again with my swara nd my babies plz maa forgive me
sujata(teary eyes) :- sanskar…u can’t start your life again with swara
sanskar:- maa plz maa forgive me say teary eyes
sujata:- stop sanskar how can u start your life again when she is going to leave all of us….sanskar swara doesn’t have mch time(tell what happen after he was gone)
sanskar is shattered…his every dream which he has seen has broke into millions of pieces….he is feeling like someone has taken the ground ……nd he will fall anytime……he goes in swara’s ward with his baby
swara smiles nd forward her hand for her baby…..sanskar gives baby to her…..she feeds her..
after some time baby starts crying…..she try to make her sleep but she is not sleeping…sanskar also tried nd swara sings a lori for her…..
mm hmm hmmm hmm hmm
(aaja neendiyan rani aaja
dur sitaro se)2
nanhe nanhe sapne le aa
dur nazaron se
aahoo bas ja meri gudiyan ki nanhi si aakhon me
aaja neendiyan rani aaja dur sitaro se
hmm hmm hmm hmm hmm
pariyon ki nagri se aane wali h woh sapne salone liye hmm hmm hmmmm hm
nanhi si palko me chup jayegi woh toh dehro khilone liye
ha tapki yaade woh gungun aayegi so ja so ja so ja
bas ja meri gudiyan ki nanhi ki aankhon me
aaja neendiyan rani aaja dur sitaro se
.in the meantime sanskar say with teary eyes
sanskar:- sw….aa.rra
swara looks towards him nd ask what
Sanskar: – swara plz don’t leave me swara I love u I have realize my mistake u know what I have even planned I surprise for u nd today I m going to propose u nd is going to ask for forgiveness I really love u swara I want to start afresh with u nd my children’s plz swara don’t leave me I can’t live without u I love u a lot plz don’t leave me…..plz I love u plz swara
Swara gets teary eyes……
swara:- go from here sanskar I don’t want to talk to u just go from here
Sanskar: -plz swara plz forgive me I really love u I know what I have done is unforgettable but plz swara give me one chance I will not do any mistakes
swara:- sanskar now its of no use we can’t be together now …..sanskar now my life is finsish but sanskar your life has start now u have move on in your life……
sanskar nodes no with teary eyes
swara gasped for air
Sanskar gets panic nd calls doctor
sanskar(hold swara hand):- swara don’t worry swara u will get alright don’t worry your sanskar is with u swara plz swara don’t lose hope…nothing will happen to u..suddenly swara’s hand slip from sanskar hand…..sanskar is shocked,all family members r shocked….doctor nodes in no
doctor: -sry she is not more we can’t save her
Screen freezes on shocked of sanskar……
precap:- naming ceremony nd sujata nd sumi sag sanskar to give his babies to swastika nd laksh nd say him to get married again
sry guys I know u don’t want swara to die but guys only her character is finish not her role……nd guys I have not kill swara yaar what is my mistake if doctor r not able to save her nd sry guys swara will always save sanskar nd take care of him whenever he needs her……
Credit to: Anu
17 Comments
Super nice
tou know what i was literally crying reading lori portion
dont wany to see sanskar wid anyone else and plz…… do something
Its awesome and emotional…
It’s not fair
Emotional part anu….. i thought swara wud b alive bt baby wil die due yo complications. Another idea though she is in critical condition, sum hw doctr wud save hr … bt no hope.. she is dead… im sad 🙁
Bt today epi ws heart touching nd nice
Too emotional part… Loved it I even loved it concept from title itself it justifies that she wud have died n her soul will always be wid him 2 protect him 2 luv him 2 support him 2 be his strength n 2 wai8 for him so they can be united in their next birth really beautiful concept
emotional part yaar but nice
It’s too emotional.
Its so emotional & heart toching episode Anu dii.. Especially lori parts.. I was crying while reading.. u r amazing! U just nailed it.. speechless!
its too emotional…
When will u upload dear plzz post asap
Sry footage for not uploading but not in a mood to write……what to do I m feeling bored with this ff
Hey….pls dont feel bored……we all luv ur ff……..i was till now a silent reader of ur ff……..pls…..pls…..pls…..unite swasan na……pls………????
Ok yaar will try to upload tomorrow dear swara is dead but don’t worry they will unite as one body two soul
Sry for not uploading not in a mood to right yr I dont no y but I m not getting motivated doono why sry guys but will try to upload if I feel like writing
Plzzz dear upload we are desperately waiting.. I just luv ur concept
Nice one . he wanted only d babies so he got DM but on d odr hand I can’t see him wid sm one else odr dn swara . so sorryyy anu I m not going to read dis further.