STORY:
(Continuation):
After sumtym all are sitting and laughing at sum random topic..just then manik’s phone started ringing wth song”Hasi ban gaye”..in nandu’s voice..he also gave her smile..nd answered the call.it is his mom nyonika
Manik:hey mom..was up?”he said happily..the happiness nd peace in his voice whch was missing frm 2 years…is back…nd it isn’t gone unnoticed by nyonika
Nyo:woho..my son…seems to b fyn or I can say..more than fine…”she said wth a big smile
Manik:s…mom..im absolutely fyn..”he said while lukng at nandu..who is smiling at him while talking to others…
Nyo:did something happen?did I miss something?”she said wtha smile…
Manik:umm..mom..i have a surprise fr u….”he said..while nandu came towards him as hhe is satnding in a corner and he put his hand on her shoulder..wrapping her close to him
Nyo:really?then I wanna see my surprise ryt now..come back nah..”
Manik:ha mom..v r cmng back soon..prmise..”he said while lukng into nandu’s eyes
Nyo:I will b waiting..take care son..i luv u”
Manik:luv u too maa….’nd he kissed nandu’s chhek..she just smiled nd he cut the call
Nandu aftr lockng her hands around his neck..while he locked his hands around her waist said”manik…lets go out..pls..”smilingly
Manik:”but nandini..”he said wth an unknown fear which she understood
Nandu:till the tym am wth u..am safe..manik pls..lets go..”she said wth a babysh face
Manik yanked more closer to her”anything fr my princess”he said brushing his nose tip on her’s
Nandu:u know wat manik…whenever u call me a princess na..i really feel lyk one..u know y?”he raised his eyebrow nd gestured y..she continued wth her smile nd said”coz U R MY PRINCE… MONSTER PRINCE..”she chuckled
Manik:fir toh..being ur prince..am always at ur service..princess nandini..’he touched her forehead wth his and continued”now u btr go nd get ready..b4 ur prince turns out to b UR OWN MONSTER MANIK MALHOTRA….nd u better know the CONSEQUENCES of being wth a monster..”he winked at her nd she playfully hit his shoulder nd she left wth a smile..while he just smiled widely pressing his lower lip with his teeth
Manik:I jus luv her..i really missed her..actually miss is a very small word..she is my soul..without her I’m nothing..nothing..’he said to himself wth a smile..
Manik then informed all..to get ready..as they all r going out..evry1 likes the idea but were tensed too..but this tym they’ll face evrythng..holding each othr’s hand..evryone r sitting in the car ,then manik realised he left his mobile..so got in to fetch it
INSIDE THE HOUSE:
Somebody is inside the house..nd found manik’s phone on the table in the living area..the person picked up the cell…nd there is a msg..the person checked it..it says…”MR.MALHOTRA ..GOING OUTSIDE WITH NANDINI..NOT FAIR..U SO EASILY FORGOT THAT MISHAP..NO WORRY..COME OUT OF UR SHELL…ND I’LL SNATCH UR NANDINI..BUT THIS TYM FOREVER..”the person read the whole msg nd deleted it…just then manik arrived nside..but found no one..he finds his mob on table..grabbed it nd left out
SHOPPING MALL:
As soon as FAB-5 entered the mall,they r surrounded by several ppl..after a lot of struggle nd wth the help of mall security..they went inside…cabir ran upot the stage as already sum act is going there…so he quickly grabbed the mike nd asked all the ppl in the mall to b patient nd they’ll meet ..but ryt now..need sum private tym..it’s their family tym so not to ruin it..his voice is too calm..so evry1 agreed nd gave them their space..after FAB-5 r also humans ryt?(winking smily)
Evry1 r busy in buying clothes,accessories..while manan r just roaming in shops holding eachother’s hands.just then nandu saw a beautiful wrist watch..for men..nd quickly dragged manik there
AUTHOR NOTE:
(AFTER READING THE SCENE IN *,THERE WILL BE A P.S ..READ IT..FOLLOW THE SCENE CAREFULLY)
*Nandu:mani…see..its so beautiful na..’she said luking at the watch while he was busy in admiring her smiling face
Manik:not more than u…”he smiled..while the salesman also smiled at both of them
Nandu showed him eyes nd said”manik..”
Manik:”wo..ho…I’m scared…”he raised both his hands nd made his eyes in round shape..she again glared at him”okay baba…yes this nah.
.ofcourse it’s beautiful..”then he looked at the watch carefully
Manik:don’t u think..nandini..its not girlish..i mean..this is lyk a men’s watch..”he said lukng at it while nandu chuckled and put her palm on one cheek of his and said”manik..this is men’s watch only…nd I choose it fr u…now…give me ur wallet..i have to pay..dedo na …”
Manik is astonished nd gave her wallet nd murmured under his breath”TYPICAL GIRLFRIEND”…nd then smiled at his own statement..
Nandini turned around to see him nd said”Did u say sumthing?”he nodded no..she held his hand nd said let’s go..
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P.S:
(THE ABOVE PARTICULAR SCENE IS REALLY CLOSE TO MY HEART ND NO COPYING PLS..ANY PPL IN ANY STORY…I ONLY HAVE ALL THE COPYRIGHTS REGARDING THIS PARTICULAR SCENE..REST ALL SCENES ..EVEN IF U USE ANYWHERE IN ANYOTHER WAY I DON’T FEEL MUCH..BUT DON’T USE OTHER SCENES ALSO..PLS..BYE..)
They both reached others and cabir told manik..how the owner of the mall had came nd requested them to perform as it is 25th anniversary of the mall…Firstly,manik denied..but on nandini’s insistence he agreed to it
They took places..nd all is set to put the stage on fire..crowsd is cheering for them..they r in the centre of the mall..nd mall is fully crowded..nandu,nav,abhi,ahu nd ashu r standing ryt in front of them as manik strictly orders nandu shud stand infront of his eyes only.Soon whole mall is echoing wth marvellous music nd voice
TERE SAANSON KI SAANS MEIN
JO HOON TOH MAIN HOOON
TERE KHWABON KI AANCH MEIN
JO HOON TOH MEIN HOON
(he continued singing that song while holding mike in 1 hand nd luking staraightly into nandu’s eyes..which r shining brightly..she is smiling to the fullest)
Tere hone se hi mera hona hai
Tujhko khona jaise khudko khona
Tu jo hai toh main hoon
Yun jo hai to main hoon
(nd the song went on..he sang the 1st 2 lines as he really meant it..staring at her..through out..even she is gazing at him with same ntensity in her eyes)
Going to the next stanza,he looked at her with painful eyes,nodded a no….meaning that he is nothing wthout her..she quickly gestured him to smile..nd he smiled..she gave him a flying kiss..which is caught by him(romantic…ryt?)nd taken ryt to heart…he closed his eyes nd remembered 2 dreadful years..howw he suffered wthout her..how she suffered…nd when he opened her eyes..wat he saw made him startled..he stopped singing iin between)
He saw nandini is not there iin front of him..he is baffled…terrified..he luked here nd there nd shouted at peak..”NANDINI…..”whole mall is echoing with his shout..evry1 else are also shocked..when they saw nandu missing…
OUTSIDE THE MALL:
Sum goons r taking nandu away..her face is covered with black cloth nd her hands are tied back wtha rope..they made her sit in the van..nd drove away
ISOLATED PLACE:
Goons brought her to the place…where raghav is already waiting ..they made her sit on a chair..tied both her hands again..but with chair ths tym..they are abt to remove the black cloth frm her face but raghav said no….nd he himself covered wth a black cloth nd asked the goons to move aside..he came towards nandu,bent down a little,lukd at her..she tilted her face to the left as she can feel …he is very close to her face…
Raghav:so miss..nandini murthy.welcome back to the hell.hahahhahaha”he laughed..that is a devilish laugh..nandini is scared..
Raghav:this tym….i wont leave u alive….i’ll make sure..u’ll die..right here…right here..right in front of me..”he again laughed..nd whole placed echoed wth his evil grin
So,another cliffhanger….I personally LOOOVVVVE CLIFFHANGERS…HAHA..So,y do u think raghav hates manik nd nandini this much?wat may b the reason for his hatred…Do comment nd voice ur opinions…ignore typos..criticsm,suggestions r welcum..bye
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Upload the next epi plz eagerly waiting for it
I have updated,telly updates didn’t post still
what the hell was that ……..??are u planning to give me a heart attack 4 real…….seriously…. but I no u must have planned something hilarious…. and I’m waiting 4 that…..an itna intezar kiya ha toh thora or hi sahi……..??
Thnk u for ur trust mishti baby…hope u ll feel really gud nd satisfied wth my next epi
Felt the same
Waiting for next part eagarly……
Plz update as soon as possible…….
Plz….
Please don’t separate manan i am not willing to see manan in pain plz kill that blady raghav i think he is angry with manik for separating him and cabir i don’t know clearly i just guess that’s it but plz don separate manan this time
Plz don’t separate manan this time i am not willing to se manik in the old condition kill that blady raghav
As I said I already updated
Waiting for the next episode……. Mind blowing…… Splendid
Ayyooo again seperation… Saddddd…. Hope evrythn turns out to b gud soooon.. I gues raghav is angry since cabir left him n he thinks its coz of maniks influence…just a wild guess.. He he
For waiting like 15 episode nandu was here for hardly 3 episode n u r separating them again 🙁 . Plz give manik some peace. I trust u meghna..:-) i m sure very soon u will
Hey Megh … U r awsum ,amazing…
Your story line is so diff (in a positive way).… From the start m reading ur ff… M loving it…
Nd the epi was superb…
ur epi’s are always full of suspense…
Ppl its disgusting yaar..this telly updates haven’t sent me either a failed submission,rejection msg or any sort but my next epi is not reviewed yet…..not fair
Another cliffhanger…. i will surely get a heart attack…. but nevertheless the update is awesome…. waiting 4 telly updates to update ua next update
Nd ppl according to my story cabir is not a gay nd he is in luv wth navya…oh I didn’t give a char intro ryt..so I r confused..but don’t get confused na..
yaa…sorryy i missed that… forgot cabir n navya r a couple…
Keepin on checking for ur updates….
Updated a biiiggg update ..do check…. again I wrote the entire strday’s update nd added even today’s update nd gave a biiggg update
Awesome episode, but plzzzz don’t separate manan again…they just met after long painful years but again this Raghav kidnapped her…poor manan…plz unite them soooooooon. …love you loads