Hey guys do you remember me, I am Maria who wrote the ff Hate me/ Love me.Yes I am back with a new ff. Hope you like it.
Here is the intro of all the characters:
Viplav: A young big businessman, arrogant,rude, but loving and caring from heart, loves his family very much.
Dhaani: Daughter of another famous businessman, caring, attitude problem, playful nature, childish with her sister
All the family members are the same. Dhaani’s fathers name is Mohan and she has an elder sister named Piya.
The episode starts,
One big mansion is shown and Dhaani is shown running behind Piya. Dhaani says please stop it di. Give me my phone back. Piya says not so easily let me check who is your boyfriend, who always chats with you and keeps you busy. Such that you don’t even have time to talk to your sister. Dhaani says no one I was just chatting with Rajlakshmi( Dhaani’s best friend) Piya says so why are you scared lemme check. Dulaari comes and says again you both have started. Dhaani says mom di is not giving me my phone. Dulaari asks her to stop behaving like a child. And asks Piya to give her phone back. Piya says ok and she gives it back. Dhaani thinks thank god mom came otherwise di would have seen it. Dulaari says now Piya you are going to get married within two days and then you will go, she has tears in her eyes. Dhaani and Piya come and hug her and says don’t cry mom.
In the office Viplav is shown shouting his employee. He says cant you understand your responsibilities. You are fired, you have lost one important file of mine now just go away from here. Shalu works in the same office with him and says bhaiya why do you get so angry with people. Viplav says pls go shalu I don’t want to talk to anyone. Shalu says no one can understand you better than me and I know how to cool you down. She offers him a chocolate. He smiles and eats it. He says I love you and hugs her. And stys you are right only you can understand your bhaiya in this world. In Tripathi mansion, Kanak comes and says I am really worried for Viplav when will he agree for marriage. Its time for him to marry. Shamboo comes and says don’t worry we will find the best girl for her but when he agrees. Kanak says this is only the problem when will he agree?!
Mohan comes and says Dhaani be ready tomorrow I am going to take you in a meeting. Dhaani says I don’t want to come with you. I want to become an artist dad pls. Mohan says I know beta but I am taking you so that you can meet with all the businessmen and see how they work. It will give you confidence to talk in front of everyone. Now don’t crib. Pls you are my darling na. Dhaani says you always convince me and hugs him.
Precap: Dhaani goes to the meeting.
Hi everyone, I could not stop myself from writing, I missed you all very much so I came back. Pls drop your comments guys!! Love you all…
29 Comments
Maria i am very happy to see u back
The title sounds interesting and so was the first episode.. Good start..keep going.. All the best
Thanks Arshdeep keep reading. I also like the title its something different na
awesome start yarr…. waiting for next part and keep rocking 🙂
Thanks Sujie, keep reading i will the next one ASAP
Thanks to coming back with wonderful story love u lots
Welcome dear and thanks for appreciating me. Keep reading. Luv you tooo
hey maria how can we forget u ha n thanx for come back with a fantastic ff i just luved u r ff
n keep going
Hi vaishnavi. I know you all will not forget me lol. And thanks keep reading!!
Maria its really nice….
Tell me something about you also….
Hi laxmi, Itsyour name right?
i live in India Mumbai and i have just given my 10th board exams recently. Tell me about you also. And if you want to ask something you can dear. And thanks for the compliment!!
Dear maria i’m from kerala and i have just given my 11th board exams…
Hey Maria,thank u so much for coming back.we all were missing u and this time also u came with a different story and gave a suspense at beginning itself.now who is that fellow whom dhani is chatting with.anyways i am ready for ur surprizes.thanks for this very different arrogant choclate viplav.lol.and pls update next part soon.
Welcome my dear Saranya… and i am happy that you missed me. Thanks dear and i will post the next one soon. And the suspense will open up in the next episode itself. So keep reading love you!!
Welcome back Maria. Good start. How can we forget u .. so don’t ask that question.
How is ur mom?
Hi porkodi, i know you cant forget me lol just joking. Thanks dear. Yaa my mom is okay now actually she is suffering from a disease so it will take time to be cured. But still i was missing you all so came back. And i am happy that you remember my mom..
Maria it’s not good. It’s super good. Plz update the next part soon
Oh thanks Louella princess. I will post the next one soon. Keep reading love u
Thank you for coming back! Story is good. Keep updating.
Welcome dear. And thanks also. Keep reading
Nice…. soooooooooooo happy that u r back……………
Welcome back…………………
Lot of hugs from,
Ahana
Thanks ahana dear, lots of hugs from me also to you. Luv you loads!!
Loved it . Good Beginning.
Thanks laxmi keep reading
Hi maria we have excellent writers on our platform weather it is SUJIE, JOYEE, PHILLO, LAXMI , NARENDRA N, N OFCORSE MY DEAREST KAVYA N U . ALL R SO GOOD N TALENTED AT SUCH A YOUNG AGE. EVEN I AM INSPIRED BY U GUYS BUT I THINK BEING OLDER I MIGHT NOT HAVE ENERGETIC VIEWS LIKE U. GOD BLESS U ALL. KEEP WRITING N SHINE LIKE A STAR.
Thanks renu for the compliment but I am not an excellent writer. The excellent writer is none other than kavya. I just love her writing and her too…
Maria, good start with different story…keep continue..
Thanks Nima keep reading
Welcome back dear Maria. It seems u r back with a bang. It will b interesting to c the arrogant Viplav falling for lovely Dhani. Really a good one.
Thanks a lot Rajee keep reading 🙂