Guys this is a short story…….. If u guys like it i will come up with more this is just a break from my ff Ishq vishq and all that…….. So hope u all like it.
[Guys in this story only dhaani,viplav and a doctor name him kunal……..Ya but dhaani has no family she is orphan not widow]
Dhaani’s POV
I could see myself all alone once again it was like a routine in my life, Pain was a must and tears were a gift from all these problems……. My eyes were with tears all red and swollen I was dumped again not that it did not hurt but this time it hurt a little more cuz it was Viplav the one I would wrap my arms around and feel all secured and happy. The one who accepted me the way i was and who i was. I thought love as a game as i was with him I changed but my change was not accepted by nature I was fighting wih cancer I knew it but he did not so he went all furious he got a clue by my odd behavior and now i was left over there with only a day to die….. To rest in the arms of who i came from……….
Viplav’s POV
She thinks i dumped her because i just walked away but i know that i am going to save her, I ran back and lifted her in my arms and she did not complain I went to one of the best doctors but they just did not do anything……….. I was stubborn as she had to live because i would die if she was
not there our lives were entwined by a delicate thread called love if it would snap i would also not live long….. So i knew she had to live at least for me………………………………..
All our past good memories were flashing like a film it just would not give me peace as i cried my heart out………
Past memories……………
Dhaani is talking with viplav she is resting her head on his shoulder and she asks him, Will u die for me….. He told yesss, I surely willl
Dh: will u steal me from the clutches of death if u have to……
Vip: Of course do u have a doubt…..
Dh: Will u be able to live without me?????
vip (A bit concerned) : Is anything wrong dhaani(as he says this he cups her face with his hands) I can do anything for you!!!!!!! Just ask for it…….
Dhaani just smiles but her heart cries it weeps bitterly in the sorrow corners of bitter and sad thoughts………
Later viplav and dhaani will go and have ice cream…..
Dhaani has some ice cream on her noes and viplav wipes it of, She then makes a mustache and pouts…..He smiles and clicks her pic………..
PRESENT
Viplav goes to dhaani and holds her hand and asks her to understand that she cant leave him as he is half soul and dhaani is the other half that completes him…….He cries and tells her dreams his passion their love is all at stake and remember u promised to teach me spanish and cooking and all that we planned and Our children’s name how can u forget that vidha if it is a girl and Vidhaan if it is a boy and our dream house….. Saying so he breaks into teas there is a gentle tap on his shoulder and it is Dr. Kunal he asks viplav to control and also quotes that dhaani is not alive….. she is no more…….. This angers viplav and he holds kunal’s collar and says My dhaani will not die she is just pranking with me she is a big prankster and saying soo he breaks down………And then he goes away he comes back after an hour and keeps a letter next to the table and shoots himself and he dies on spot…………………………
There is a lot of chaos the police come and they investigate the matter they find a letter which also has a box with it……
The letter reads…
Dear World
As you know dhaani is no more and I also am no more by now. I just have one last with my body must always be with dhaani and our body must be burned together and the ashes must be always preserved in my room…. Please fulfill this wish. Now i will tell u why i did this actually i promised my dhaani that i will be with her everywhere so I am going off to my dhaani…………..
My last regards,
Viplav Tripathi
IN the box there are a few roses and wrappers and some papers….A note is written… Those flowers are the ones dhaani gave me and those are the chocolates we shared and those papers have dhaani’s thoughts for me…. I left my treasure and went away keep it safe always………..
Epi ends……………..
Love is not just a feeling it is a gift love is not blind is it is true love…… Love finds its way through hearts, love is eternal and the universal truth that it is supreme…… Spread love and not hate……
Lots of love Ahana
And guys thank you for liking my analysis……………
12 Comments
Ahana loved it… you are very talented.. I just loved it. And try to come with more such stories..
thank u …… I always felt u are also very very talented…….
Thanks ahana and i feel u are also talented
Ahana last part was very emotional. Superb episode
Fantastic ahna
Oh! Emotional and touching.
Superb Ahana.
Simply beautiful !Simply touching. Loved it,
Oh… I have not any wird to say…. Only crying…
Oh… I have not any word to say…. Only crying…
Really amazing… I like it….really u hv a pure
Soul… U have deep feeling love and incarnation…. Really wonderful… Great… I like it.
Oh god Ahana!!!! U almost took my life also with this extremely pathetic end of my pyara vidha..?…Totally emotional..
ahana you are absolutely right
i was crying while reading it . Chal wahan jaate hain song suits this story very much dear.