Hi frnssss changes in story as i am nt getting gud response…
Epi starts…
Abhigya missed d bus…at much difficulty theu reached d holy place…n thn abhi called home frm tgr they got a car n returned back..
Few days passed abhigya relationship was good….abhi was trying well fr his auditions pragya supported him well….
Pragya got a job in abroad n she left wn abhi insisted her…2 years they had no contact…pragya loved him vry much n missed him vry badly…bt had regular updates of abhi as a rockstar…in news n all she was very happy shhe tried calling him bt he didnt replied she thought he might be busy…
And one dat ay came wn pragya came back frm abroad….
She was eagerly waiting as abhi will cone to receive her she came out of d airport eagerly bt culdnt see abhi rabul were thr…
They trio hugged..
P:aftr longtime wrs abhi…
B:leave it n come na..
Pr:tell..
Pu:pragya we r here na..come..
Pragya thinks abt abhi thm she tried asking abt abhi to rabul bt each tome they avoided dat topic….
Pragya came home she was happy bt was thinking abt abhi…is he alright y he didnt came to meet me…is he busy ya he may be..k.i wil meet him at home…
She gets ready n goes to abhi s house…dadi was nt thr…bt tanu was thr…she was happy to see tanu bt wondered wt ahe was doing in abhi s house…she asked abt abhi..tanu told dat he went fr concert.n will be back tonight…both d friends settled down n talked bt finally tanu gave a wedding card of her n abhi to pragya she was hell shocked….
Pragya asked abt nikhil to tanu…
Tanu told dat nikhil left her as her parents didnt agree later abhi bcane frnd…thn our relationship developed n nw we r near to marriage…
Pragya s eyes were full.of tears as she heard it…she asked whether abhi agreed..
Tanu said dese days abhi has changwd a lott…he nly proposed me…i too agreed…
Pragya s heart broke listening to dis…tanu s phone rang she left..dis was vhance fr pragya she wept…till her heart came out…
She was exhausted n decided to leave…as she was going she saw abhi.
Abhi was also shocked to see her…pragya wn did u cane pragya didnt replied she just smiled…n said keep my frnd happy..n all d best rockstar….
She slowly went abhi though felt bad fr her didnt stopped her nor reacted..he simply went into house…
Pragya s heart broke many many questions in her mind she wanted to hold abhi n ask y he did it…bt she was concerned abt her frnd tanu…she wept fr many days n finally came out of dat trauma n started living norml life as she went back to abroad…
Abhi bcamr successfull rockstar..he married tanu n was happy…bt thr pragya wept each n evry second of hrr life in abhi s memory….
MY FF ENDS……
CONCLUSION:dnt get attracted to teenage loves…all love stories wnt succeed n all boys r nt bad n all girls are nt bad..thr r sme ppl who play wot feelings of ppl plz dnt do that…once u love dare to get it…again make sure its love nt attraction..bt dnt play wot feelings of others…d person u cheat wnt forget u nt coz u cheated thm coz u betrayed thm…love is precious plz dnt make it blind n trash….
thnks all who supported n loves it…n love u all loads…miss u bt i wil cone back soon i thnk each n every1 who read my ff n silent readers n all commenters…thnkq veey veey much…
Bye urs …
Roshini..
22 Comments
Omg what a twist. I didn’t expect this. But sad for this ending. Ur conclusion is absolutely right yaar. So many ppl r not understanding their feelings in teenage. Some r true some r not. Write some other ff na. Ur msg ‘ll b passed on to teenagers.
But some teenage love is true. I know many ppl who loved during college and now lead a happy life. Most the people on my family loved during their teenage years and there are happy.
A good story
With a bad endind
I agree with u. It is a good story but for this to be the ending it is not good. Abhi should have tried to explain himself or pragya should have tried to suicide but she is saved and Abhi should have confessed his love for her.
awesome roshni first i was shocked to know abhi tnu marrying but u gave a nice message we should not love in teenage because it is just a fatal attraction it was really really helpful thank u fr giving such a nice msg and thanks fr giving this ff roshni all the best fr ur victory in ur life
Bad
Stupid story line… Do u think of us as fool? Till last episode it was nice,if u want to to end u can end it in something else… Sorry to say this,its really crap…
I totally agree. I am very disappointed
its too bad…y u change ur ff this much bad.u know roshni every day i am eagerly waiting 4 ur ff.i though ur ff is such a sweet and loveable story.bt i am very disappointed about ur last episode.u make true love is not their…its realy hurts my feelings very much….
hey its not fair..last epi u wrote they were in love.but u will ended in the negative twist..many silnt here..dont u thought u may got not supporters..any way its good…
Gud msg dear
No happy ending….
I didnt like ur climax i think it should hav been abhigya
Really I didn’t like it…what is this….if u want to convey this msg u can show some other way…but this is not the way…we really involved in ur ff…but u r playing with our emotions…not gd yaar …I don’t like it…
I am sorry to b day that u hurted the people’s hearts who for involved in this ff.. even i very much hurt… sorry u have disappointed all… Very stupid ending… anyways but the message was true and good…
Hey what this yaar ???Frankly saying, I don’t like it……. The msg u given is correct………….But u can show it through other ways na………Such a bad Ending….I don’t except this from u………From 1st Episode, I am continuously reading it………& Patiently waited for Ur updates, in Ur busy times also……..I am Sorry…Its my opinion …..That’s it………
awesome
am feeling badddd….
yaar u turned a blossoming lve into graveyard its not gud dizzzzzz shuld not b the ending eagerly waited fr ur every update though I am silent reader but urs dizzz decision is not acceptable
Can u please rewrite there last episode where abigya get united…. plsss….. Really feeling very bad and hurt…. plsss
U disappointed all of us…. really… I can’t say nothing more than this….
It’s really bad yaar sry to say I just won’t miss a single episode in Ur ff bt really u end it lk tz thn tanu how can u do lk tz k I agree with u tat abhigya’s love s not real coz u want to gv sum msg bt how can a frd betray her own frd I mean tanu n pragya frdship u just spoled it also really totally crap sry to say tz thn if u want to convey msg lk tz thn u shd nt write by using abhigya thr r many ff just as a story not including any serial u would hv did lk tat bt really I thk it’s all waste…
But the message you have was nice