Hi guys,last episode was posted on the 4th,couldn’t reply to a few of you,will mention those names here,comment box is hidden,so can’t respond there,so,extremely sorry and thank you very much Musku,Vaishu,Imane,Nandini,Mickey,Joya,Shani,Bhagi,Harshi,Shraddha,Sneha Grewal,,,Divya,Shabrin,Meghs,Vinita,Mrs.Jayasree(Kakoli),who is Vinita’s aunt,special thanks to you M’am for taking trouble to read,a few of you including ‘army’ and Sneha Grewal had commented multiple times,here we go….
(Recap:Swara realising after hearing his voice through the Walkman and reading the diary,deciding to find out)
Scene 1:
Swara has come out from the washroom,she is totally wet after splashing water forcefully on herself,she grabs a towel quickly and wipes her face in a hurry and goes and stands in front of her Papa’s photo,she wipes her hands and stares at the photo and tells him, “Papa,I will make Sanskaar accept my love,how,when and all I don’t know,I just know that he loves me,I cant let him go away,but you know him na,equally good and stubborn,but the later side is only towards his love,I wont let him break my heart again,in the attempt to keep me away from tensions,that boy just killed me and got got broken himself,so I have a few questions in my mind,I need to find the answers before I confront him and make him admit that he loves me,for that,as I told I don’t know where to start,but till date,I was confused,if I was snatching somebody else’s love,but now I am just going to complete our love,for that if I need to hurt him a little,I may do that,but no,I don’t think I will be able to do that,mind is blank now,just know that Sanskaar wont tell me the truth if I ask him,may be he will make some other foolish decision to keep me away which may again hurt me and our loved ones,no,I cant let anybody hurt me again,it is not a sin to love and respect yourselves at times,noPapa?just be with me,guide me,show me the way,or if it easy to bring clarity to this blurred vision of mine,let it happen soon….
Scene 2:Same day,after an hour has passed…
Mukesh has come to Swara’s room,she was seated there in front of the mirror,her hair is wet after a bath,she is having the towel in a hand and gently moving it on her hair but her thoughts were elsewhere,she had not noticed Mukesh entering the room,she stares at herself in the mirror, she touches her forehead,she recalls that she had never filled her maang after their marriage,Seema had told her about that while they were at the cottage but Sanskaar gave a lame excuse that he doesn’t believe in all that and she is avoiding it for his happiness, “do you miss Sanskaar?”,Mukesh’s voice disturbed her thoughts,she quickly gets up and goes towards him,he looks at her and says, “it is ok to miss your husband but if you wont dry your hair properly you will fall sick,saying this he takes the towel from her hand and rubs her hair using it,Swara feels happy and recalls how she had behaved with him in the past and how far her relation with her dad has progressed,she smiles at him,he notices it and asks her, “that is like my girl,this smile is what I have missed ever since you came back,so beta,I am going abroad ,for how many days,cant tell now,need to set up a new business,will come back as soon as it is done,your mom wont allow,so had not told her,but now doctor has given permission,so I told Sumi now,need to leave tomorrow,so take care,I don’t have any problem if you stay here for any number of days but in whatever situation it occurred,doesn’t matter,but he is your husband,he is not at all a bad person at heart,I know that,so he is alone there at the cottage,he is not welcomed at his home also,I know my daughter knows what is right and wrong,when you feel it is time to go back,go back to your husband….ok”,Swara just nods and hugs Mukesh,Mukesh gently pats her hair and tells her to take care,he softly kisses her forehead,tells her that he has to go to office to entrust the necessary things and leaves….Swara is in thoughts….
Scene 3:Sanskaar’s office,same day evening..
Sanskaar is seated in his cubicle,his face clearly shows that he is tired,he slowly leans back and rubs his eyes,he grabs a bottle of water and is about to drink it,he gets a call,receptionist tells him that he has a visitor,he says ok and goes to meet the person,he reaches the reception and asks the receptionist where the visitor is,she says that the person just went out,Sanskaar goes out,he has a surprised look,he sees Swara standing there,the rays of the evening sun is falling on her,she is standing there,looking at the rose garden in the compound,Swara,the roses and the sky drenched in an orangish pink shade is not less than any beautiful painting,Sanskaar smiles seeing that sight,she has a smile on her face and is immersed in thoughts ,Sanskaar goes towards her direction and asks, “are you seeing roses and sun for the first time?”,she turns and looks at him,she feels something which she has never felt before,she feels that freedom which she hasn’t felt before ,she is staring at him recalling the words she read and heard,she is in thoughts and again smiles,Sanskaar looks at her and again calls, “Hello madam,may I know why you have come this side?”,Swara quickly changes her expression and pretends to be serious,she tells him , “why, permission to visit this campus and premises is banned for outsiders or what?she raises her eyebrows and looks at him questioningly,Sanskaar notices the change in her behaviour and tone,she finds that same Swara who was his ‘friend’ before ….
Sanskaar tells her, “No no,anybody can come here,anytime,enough?”Both of them looks at each other and smiles,then there is a moment of silence between them,both looks into each other’s eyes,many words which were to be spoken is being exchanged through that glance,Sanskaar softly tells her, “Swara,come ,we will go to the cafeteria”,he goes and Swara follows him,after some time,Swara is seated on the chair and staring at Sanskaar who was standing at the counter,he turns and finds her like that,gives a “what? “ expression and comes with a tray with Swara’s favourite cold coffee and masala chips…Swara looks at it and gives a ‘good’
expression…Sanskaar serves it and asks her, “So,madam,,now you tell me the reason for this visit”,saying this he takes a bite of the chips,Swara says, “Sanskaar,I have messaged Sanju”,Sanskaar coughs hearing this and Swara hides her smile and leans forward and pats his head…she then continues, “yea,you asked me to go home ,I went ,we haven’t applied for divorce though we planned,you told Sanju is a closed chapter,my family except my mom is happy with our marriage,I am sure,she also is not really angry with you,so I thought seriously,why cant we give this relation a second chance,of course ,we have known each other for years,we were friends,good friends,actually and I had loved you for years,then,you know all what happened after that,so I don’t think it is wrong to think about it,I know,you may need some time,cos you have “never loved me’,no?Sanskaar notices that she had stressed and delivered those three words,saying this she gently sips the coffee and gently raises her face and looks at Sanskaar who is restless and is pressing his hands against each other,Swara enjoys it and continues sipping and when Sanskaar looks at her,she signshim to drink his coffee,Sanskaar quickly nods and grabs it and sips as though in a hurry,Swara thinks in her mind, “Mr.Maheswari,let me see what you will do next”,Sanskaar quickly finishes the coffee and tells her,
“actually Swara,I have lots of work,so if you’re done shall we…?”,Swara gets up and says, “yea,ok,but I am not done,yet,it is not right for married girls to stay in their own house for long,I know it is just a few days but …..so, tomorrow evening I will come this side,together we will go to cottage,I had called Seema aunty,they both have left to their place,no?wont be back soon,no problem,you are there,no?so, see you tomorrow,she turns to go,she hides her smile and turns again,she finds him,staring at her,with a confused , “has this girl gone nuts,what is she up to?’ expression,seeing Swara looking at him he brings a forced smile and Swara says bye and leaves….Sanskaar stands there with a hand behind his neck and rubbing his cheeks with the other ,not able to understand what Swara is going to do,he then nods as though it is all ok and that he will see to it later…..
(On the spot and not proof read,sorry)
267 Comments
Plzz vini dii update daily.
Missing ur ff badly
Hello Sakshi,thank you for the comment,sorry for not being regular,hope I will post regularly from next monday ,pls keep reading.
nice….pls update next soon
Thank u Shan,next one,I will put a link under this comment column wen it gets uploaded,a lil busy now,sorry for not being regular, pls keep reading.
After a long time!!!! bt u write at least…. so happy 🙂 ………….. bt it’s too much short, isn’t it???????
plz try 2 write at least 1 at a weak…… plzzzzz …….plzzzzzzzzzz ………..plzzzzzzzzz
Thanks Shopnil for the comment,yea,posting one,after 16 days,I think,also,I have never been able to keep my word, but next,will be on Monday n will try my max to be regular after that,I will try to put the link wen it gets uploaded.Pls keep reading.
Hi Di!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I have not the read the epi till now but still I am commenting. I dont know why. I think I have gone mad after seeing your ff!!!! I am feeling so happy . Now I will read it..
Hello my dear,how r u?no exams now,no?oh,this much excitement, without reading you are commenting,no probs,I don’t think this update is good..so happy to see u here.
Di!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I typed a comment earlier but it is not showing up so I am writing it again. U are superb!!!!(Of course your ff is also superb) par jisne itna acha ff likha hai woh zyada superb hai!!!! so, VINI DIIIIII YOU ARE SUPERB!!!!!!! YOUR FF IS ADIPOLI,POLICHU MUTHAE see I have learnt so much of malayalam!!!!!! Vini di and sethu di opps!!! Chechi!!!! see your little sister is so multitalented(self proclaimed)!!!!!!!!!!
Di how are you????????????????????????????????
Ok dear,I read that above,may be it got uploaded late after moderation,hahaha,I am literally laughing reading this comment, oh,m superb ah,thank u thank u,how will I accept that dr,m not superb,m ordinary,ff also is ordinary?,actually those malayalam words ,wow,new gen malayalam words used to compliment,thank u thank u,and chechi,wow..yes I agree,multi talented would be archaeologist u r, ask ur bhabhi from Kerala to translate the following,” Vinita kutty,ninte comment ente mukhathu Oru chiri kondu vannu,season 1le ninte aadyathe comment orthu poyi,naadum dooravum onnum chila vyakthikale parijayapedaan Oru thadassamakillennu thirichariyunnu,public platform aanenkilum parayathe vayya,Bengal orkkumbol aadyam ormma varunnathu ninte peraanu,parijayapettathil othiri santhosham….”
Hume bhi samj aaya ha kuch kuch jaise season 1,public platform,comment,bengal……dekho kitne intelligent hai hum???
Baki ka sethooty bata degi……..
Haha Joya,clever girl,found out,u naughty…?now dont translate ,let her find out .and I didn’t notice I had used so many English words,haha,I was half asleep when I typed that..
“Vinitha kutty ninte comment ente mukhathu oru chiri kondu vannu”- Vinitha bachha thumaree comment mere cheharee par ek muskurahat laya hai…
” season 1 le ninte aadyathe comment orthu poyi” -season 1 ke thumare pehla comment yade ayi..
“Naadum dooravum onnum chila vyakthikale parijayapedaan oru thadassamakilennu thirichariyunnu”-
Desh ,doore kuch bhi logom se parijith hone ke liye hurdles nehi hai ab janne lagaa…
” public platform annenkilum parayathe vyya “- I know its a public platform still i want to say u
” Bengal orkumbol adyam ormma varunnathu ninte peraanu parijayapettathil othiri santhosham”
Bengal koo yaad karoongi thoo pehale thumare name aathi hae, bahuth khushi hai thumse parijith ( mulakath)hoonae mein.
Oops don’t know this is the exact translation..last parts are not exact..but I tried…chappal se math mar naa Vinitha… And vini
Vini u give her this task to translate..but I tried it to Hindi…haha…
Sethooty,wow,excellent, yes that is what I meant, but you helped her..
I AM SOOOOOOO MULTITALENTED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(i knw I have become mad!!! I am seeing Vini di’s ff after so many days. I hope you all can understand!!)
Hahaha,not over,ok ok,thank u for this comment as well,Vinita is multi talented….I agree but a lil crack now but after a bath when water falls on her head,everything will be back to normal(Oh I forgot,hope her allergy to water is alright now.)
Hi vini….
missed u nd ur fff…
hw ru???
Superb epi… so waiting for swara’s plan…
Hai dear,missed u all ,it was so randomly written,season 2 is on the spot,I don’t know ,so kind of u all,still encouraging me,Swara has no plan, (actually ,writer has no plan),but I hope it will come with the flow…,writing scenes is the task…the small thread if I write it down,will be a few sentences only…
Vini diiiii??????????? I missed u sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much …..I already told but again I am saying more than ur ff we need u di …..sirf ff post karne se kuch nahi hoga hamse bath Bhi karna padega aap ko pata hai aap mujse Baath kare bin kitne din hue hai ????? mujeh pata hai aap free nahi thi sorry but kya karu I missed u soo much no dats y I reacted like dis….nd how is ur health now??? It’s very bad aap ek doctor hoke kudh ki kayal nahi Rak payi…….juju aapke kayal nahi Kar rahe kya???? unse kahiye ki vo aapki acchi si dekhbal kare taaki aap jaldi se fit nd fine hojavogi ….nd coming to epi it’s superbbbb like always ,swara’s plan is nice …Swara teesing sans is soo good….I missed dis sanskaar also
Hai Vaishu baba,how r u?I couldn’t reply to u under previous,very sorry,I thought it will be injustice if I don’t reply in order,that got postponed and finally couldn’t reply,I missed you too dear,yea,but you know what,I like to read our army’s chats with each other, how you all tease n pull each other’s legs,then what,yea,m fine now dear,yea,you r right,I had food from outside n got food poisoning,haha,but jeeju took care,my parents were also there since I was at my home town that time,if I read this to him,I am sure he will laugh,just for the sake of posting I wrote this,m not at all satisfied.
Aur yeh hai army ki headlines ????hahaha 1.vinitha di bhi ek ff likh rahi hai jiska naam hai “the story of true love”. Filmy hai but acchi hai vinitha di ki type. 2.joya di bichari ri si komal si pyaari si vaishu ko pareshan Kar rahi hai????srry joya di. 3.seetu di Hindi mai bath Kar rahi hai(she knows but aaj tak kabhi Baath nahi ki na iss liye Bata rahi hu. 4.shraddha di gayabh hi hogayi hai kuch do se koi atta pata nahi hai. 5.shikha di is busy in studies 6.army is missing Niti dI nd kriya di a lot. 7.most importantly vini di ne aaj ff update ki he ….hahaha???(srry diiiii just for fun I wrote …..aakhir sabse choti hone ka hak toh jatana chahiye na???.)……..love u alll?????
OMG,can’t get a better update than this, truly u r the naughtiest ,I thought Mickey alone was,but this is contagious, u,Vinita all have become too naughty,but no problem,Vinita is writing ff ,wow,I will try to read it asap,but Vinita u didn’t tell me,I am angry with u??,now we have two ffs,hers and Sethooty’s,now I can stop my ff after completing the track in my mind(don’t worry,I also will know when that will happen only when I type and see,so leave that but for this army I extended this much,I personally like short and to the point types,like a max of less than 20 episodes),then Joya is irritating you,yea,yea,’I believe you’,especially after reading this comment?,oh Sethooty and rashtrabhasha,kya baat hei..,Shraddha,come back ,army n myself is waiting for you dear,Mickey baba,ok,study well,after all you have spread your naughtiness here,I can very well see that,after doing the damage, you are studying, hmm,m coming to Jorhat with a cane?,oh yes,Niti and Kriya, missing them,hope both are fine,miss you guys,Vaishu I think you forgot Needhi,hai to her,and yea,youngest of all,you have the right, go ahead,but army members,you guys kindly buy necessary protection equipments n be ready,oh to whom m I saying,an army of innocent kids na…won’t even understand what I meant?,so thankyou Vaishu,lots of love to you too for this superb update.Tc.
Vini di u also belive……….?????????????
Yr yeh to koi baat nahi huyi ha….hume aane me thodi der kya ho jati hai yaha humre against F.I.R ki jati hai………
Bdw aaj sab k saamne hum humri innocence prove karenge………..
Yr hum to itne masoom hai k hume MASTI,PARESHAN KARNA,SATANA in words ka matlb tak nahi maloom??????
Hum gandiji k tin ??? ko bachapan se follow kar rahe hai…..
Duniya to bereham thi yeh hum jante the par vaishu tum bhi……………. Dekha nahi jata hai ab…??????????………..
Dekho kitne tukde huye hai humre??????? uparse kil bhi chubhe hai dil me?
Chalo joya
Yeh duniya yeh mehfil tere kaam ki nahi tere kaam ki nahi??????????????
Haha,Joya,I will come back n read but I believe you was put in inverted coma no,read once again,I teased our cute devil Vaishu…I know na Joya is an innocent girl,how will I believe the allegations against you..haha,Joya was extra decent at the start(formal ),but ever since u entered the army,I have seen multiple shades…
Drama queen Joya,got it from Shraddha,I guess,yea,yea,poor thing,don’t know those words,right?what to do even I don’t know the real meaning,will check dictionary for correct meaning,Gandhiji’s good luck,such a disciplined disciple of his,I will sponsor a bucket to collect the broken pieces of your heart, oh,this won’t suit you,ok,ok,go back to your planet, right now…..don’t dare to…
Oh she misses her Sanskaar and is suffering from other problems, what to do,bhook hartal n no phone,has she survived the stress,so kind of you,passed letter thru dove,how sweet,Shraddha would be weeping seeing your love,but haha,yea ,yea ,Jiju would have gone mad? (out of happiness,) yea,yea.losing weight because of her,so now ,I would request all my army members to go on the same hartal for me,need to seriously lose some kgs,Sanskar is eating my brain asking for you Shraddha,come back soon,and what a letter Joya, couldn’t stop laughing those lines..esp “Aaja na daudke”,Shraddha would have started running,no flying….
Joya di yeh kya keh rahe hai aap…..F.I.R….mujeh toh pata Bhi nahi heh ki yeh kya hai.????……..aur mai ne kaha na vo headlines hai hamari army ki ,aakhir hamari army mai se kuch log matlab Shraddha di,Shikha di,vini di inn Sab ko Bhi toh pata Chalna chahiye na ki Yaha Ho kya raha hai issi liye Maine bataya…………aur kya keh rahi Ho mai besharam hu..???????? dekha phir se mujeh pareshan Kar rahi ho…………but aap kitne Bhi pareshan Kar lo hai toh meri pyaari si joya di hi ho….love u joya di??
Itne din ho gaye na shraddha sanskar se nahi mili to wo bahot sad ho gayi hai…bichme sunne ko bhi aaya tha wo bhook hartal pe hai………..uska phn bhi out of coverage hai so humne KABOOTAR k pairon me letter bandhakar uske paas bheja hai…..
Letter me likha hai,
Dear shraddha,
We all know that u love sanskar alot….dekho tumhari bhook hartal ki news tv pe breaking news ban gayi.yeh dekhakar vini di ka dil pighal gaya….shukr karo ki hum sab ne sambhal liya warna dil me rehne wale log beh jate to??…jijune to hum sab ki aisi class li hai ki puchho mat……
Dekho tumhari yaadon me sanskar bhi restless ho gaya hai….vini di mentioned that in epi……bas duniya samaj thi hai ki wajah swara hai lekin hum to sachchhai janate hai……bhook hartal tum kar rahi ho…..weight hum sab ka kam ho raha hai bcz we r crying?????????
Jaise hi letter mile aaja na ha daudke………..
Yours
Joya………..
Oh god!!!!!!!! What a letter!!!!!!!!! Shraddha di jaldi a jao!!!!!!!!! See a letter is waiting for you!!!!!!!!!!
Joya di start a blog. I know that hum sab ke dil mein aap ka blog hai par ek real blog bhi start kar dijiye
Hayyy Joyaaaaa????
Main kitni fortunate hu ki tujjaise dost mili mujhe?? mummy??
Yeh aasu rukh nahi rahe Joyaaaaa?
Pata hai dostoo Joya ki bachii? bohot smart hai??
Actually Hun dono he Sanskaar ko bohot miss kar rahe the…..
Toh joya meri pyari behen ne mujh jaise bhukkad bacchi se bhuk hadtaal
Karvayaaa??
Yeh kaha ka insaaf hai Judge Saab?
Miss kare dono lekin bhuki rahu sirf mai??
Yeh apne bade honeka najayas fayda uthana kehlata hai judge Saab?
Mai toh thehri bachii
Iss duniya ka koi knowledge nahi toh Mene rakhli Bhok hadtaal apne Sanky ke liye??
Aur apni joya ke kehne par??
Abb Hume kya pata ki yeh hume bhuka rahk ke ya enjoy karne ayegi?
Joyaaaaa tune aisa kyu kiyaaa??
Ik u miss me but u miss sanky more than me no? Tahts why u made me do this… . this is not done I’m ur pyari pyari bachiiii ? n u love him more than me?
Hahaha lol
I so missed being this
Ekra kapoir serial artist ????????
So much drama??
Hello everybody well I’m here itself
Bass yeh Vini di hai Jo yaha nahi hai?
Vaishuuu kaise gaye exams tumhare entrance tha na chennai me?
I normally read ur comments on Anjalis ff (probably if ur the same ?whuch I think u are)
So here’s another engg coming up guyss presenting ER Vaishuuu??
Rups toh dikhi he nahi aaj kal ?
Padh rahi ho Mickeyyy???
Padho ache se padho ?
Vinita toh filhal translation ke mare??aise hogayi hogi??
Haha kyu Vinita
N sethoothy wruuu
Because I loved him
I did bhok hadtaal toh kya hua agar Vini di ka sanky hai ya tumhara lekin sanky toh sanky haii
Plzz abb tum bhi strike matt rakhvana??
Mujhe khana chagiyeee????
Mummyyy mai aurr nahi rehsakti khane ke bina??????
N my dear Joyaaa??????kya letter hai baap re baap ek number ki shaitaan hai tu I mean tumhari bhasha me ek number ki innocent sweet nake ladki reeeeee???
Main toh hass hass ke pagal hogayi letter dekh ke
N BTW I saw ur letter later but abhi abhi Jo comment kiya neeche usme bhi I wrote I missed my sanky????
So ur letter justifying (faintly????)
Joya thumare letter pad ke thoo voo kaboothar ke oopar chadkar ayeegi..he he..
Hey guys
Good morningggggggggggggg………….
Ayyyyyyoooooo shraddha…..,………..see guys hum kabhi jhooth nahi bolate………sharddha bhook hartal pe thi…….itna weight loose kiya hai ki yeh KABOOTAR pe baith k aa gayi?
Hum bade hone ka fayda nahi uta rahe hai…..yeh aap sabko batana chahti hai ki iski age humse kam hai……Note dis point my lord?
Ise kehte hai chori to chori upar se sinajori……my lord plz check all comments which has posted by me…kya kisi me humne kaha hai ki MERA SANSKAR?????? ????
At least is site pe akele hum hi aise hai jo sanskarholic nahi hai????????
Faisla kare judge sahab……….ye garib,bichari joya apke samne nyay k liye bebas khadi hai?……
Sharddha utho shraddha…………tum khana khanese pehle behosh nahi ho sakti…………plz utho warna khane ka kya hoga?????yeh delicious dishes tumhare bina kaise jiyengi………..inki to duniya hi ujad gayi??????????????????????????????????????????
Dekho yeh sari dishes keh rahi hai chilla chilla kar,
Yeh nainsafi hum kateh hi bardasht nahi karengen…….ek bar hume apne muh se lagalo plzzzzzz????
Haha,I was replying from bottom to top,Shraddha this is the reply to your first comment here,then one more of urs is there below n Joya’s immediately below tgat to be read,i cant wait to read those two,I would have missed this fun,really Shraddha , extravagance of emotions in words,don’t know how that face will be,so u were on hunger strike,poor girl,now drink this lime juice baba,would be really tired ,no?as far as I know it will be very difficult for a guy to impress Joya,so I don’t think she will make you fast for Sanky,u girl,y r you lieing?Joya doesn’t know how to play pranks also,no,no,never say this about Joya .So many allegations about an innocent bachi like Joya…I think Joya will be thinking if I have gone nuts,usually I speak the least to her nowadays,but Joya baba,u r special,coming to u Shraddha,missed u dear,missed this drama also,I can’t imagine how u would be at home n college,should ask the ones around you…totally mad ,I guess..but continue…it is fun to read..
Now coming to sec comment,Shraddha,she will surely hire u,her drama will survive for any number of yours((if u emote like this). You can age on screen as well.So u r here,it is me who is not here, poor me,all blames on me,now,ha,what to do?good to c that u mentioned about everyone, yea,now go and dip your head in that biriyani pot,I have sent that to Hubli,then about Joya’s letter, even I was laughing,so innocent writing style but in real no.1 prankster. Actually competition between you all for the ‘GUP’,exciting prizes i have???..who is coming first,pls tell fast…
Good afternoon Joya darling,yea,we know, you don’t lie at all,Miss.Honest of the army,oh I told no she would have started flying,spot on,poor Dove’s body found near the lake an hour ago,PETA filed FIR,heard there will be an arrest for cruelty towards a bird,you are right Joya,when I read even I thought the same,she was trying to say that she is younger,hidden agenda that was,Joya,I agree,have never seen u mentioning that,u were unbiased towards all characters ,even m not a Sanskarholic,I like that onscreen pair swasan,though…yea,innocence is proven… j
Judge has produced the final verdict,simple and humble mediator ie me,has informed the media n public through this platform ,Shraddha,u should accept this,see,Joya has arranged a banquet for u,come fast n attack….Guys,after a long time,enjoying this fun with u all..more than commenting,I like to read you all chatting with each other..for that sole reason an ff which was supposed to have a max 25-30 epi is being dragged(those who don’t like that,beg your pardon),good day to u guys..stay blessed.
After that exciting prizes line, had given a few syringes,where did that go..?
Omg too funny.. Finally u back.. Really its Hilarious 🙂 I m really afraid for swara after knowing the truth how she treat mukesh..??
Hai dear,thank u for the comment,hope u liked it,actually I know just three scenes n nothing much in it,glad to c u here,I have to plan the scenes though I have the small thread in my mind.
Yr aaj is page k sath kuch to gadbad ho rahi hai……reply hi nahi kar pa rahe hai…….dis is 4th time i m trying to post my comment….
Thank you guys us letter ko like karne k liye?
Vaishu my dear i said bereham not besharam…………i think i m besharam…..hum apni chhoti vaishu ko pareshan kar rahe hai na……so socha thode sudhar jaye…..isiliye shraddha k naam letter chhoda hai……socha tumhe akele ko hi pareshan nahi karna chahiye….so ek se bhale do?
Vinita blog…….aiyyyyyooooooo……. I m lazy girl…..3 sal pehle apni frnd k liye story ko bhi aaj tak laptop ya phn k dairy me bhi nahi likhi bas usko dene se pehle pics nikale the wo bhi delete ho gaye???
Vini di i m going to my planet………… U said na?
Right now ye words padhe aur humre aankhon se aansu behne lage…..aage ka kuch dikhai tak nahi diya………itna dard……………….i can not Bear dis painnnnnnnn???????????
By guys…………i m going………….??????
Yesterday all faced this prob I think,letter was so sweet even though the writer is not??,simply told,Joya is such an innocent soul,intention we understood,you should start a blog asap,we r waiting,before crying go.and read that comment,what ya,will I tell u to goveven if I feel.like?,well,I will never tell anyone to go..those valuable tears should be collected,after all draught,but if used for drinking purposes,I think….?u also think abt it.
missed it badly… Bt nw want regular updates dear… Tis was as usual awsm
Hai Nandini,couldn’t respond under previous epi,sorry, thank u for the comment dr,I think I won’t be able to post next one this week,but Monday ,probably.After that will try max to write on alternate days at least .
Yaaaayyyyyyyy…??????? Diiiiiiiiiiiiii !!!! U uploaded it at last..di am ur silent reader..I read both season f ur ff..Di u know wat after seeing ur ff I WS dancing like mad..my mom asked me Wat hppnd?? I just told her Vini di posted..yiiiiiiippppeeeee..?????u r very sweet di.. I love u sooooooooo much..????????? I missed u like anything..???? Di plzzz post it regularly.. at least we all will talk to u through this..Plzzzzz di post it regularly..don’t take soo much time di..I WS thinking to do a missing diary that Our Vini di is missing..?? BT I know u r a Dr..u r very busy di..I know..BT kya karu?? I miss u like hell..and u know di Am going to be a Dr..though nly 2nd Yr..????
Hai Natasha,yea,your name is new here,thank u for the comment ,truly humbled and honoured after reading your comment,glad to know that u read the first season,also,glad to know that my ff made u happy,but your mom,she wouldn’t have understood,no?never make anybody read this,my ff is not worth their time,and,lots of love to u too dear,actually,I will be posting next one on coming Monday,sorry,a lil busy,and missing diary,haha,people won’t hit you for that, they will hit me,instead, many are there who dont like fan fictions and ff writers, oh,the best part of your comment,you are from the medical profession,wow,all the best dear,study well,I actually did my BDS ,planning to prepare for MDS entrance(but lazy …),so which college are you studying,where are u from?(reveal only if u r ok with it,I know that this is a public platform..)
Nooo di..np..am from Kolkata Di..and nw am studying In Kolkata Medical College (MBBS)..And I know u’ll do MDS very soon..cz My Vini di is best..?? and My mom knows u..I told her about u a lot..and c also reads ur ff..☺???? My mom-dad both are fan f urs ff..nd me!!! mad fan f u and urs ff..?? love u sooooooo much..u r the best..☺????? OK di..u upload it when u’ll GT tym..I knw hw much busy u are..same profession u knw di..???? hehehe..????am soo talkative na??..?? sorry di..??
Thank u dear,so it is a govt.college,great,even m a govt. College product,that is a great life,enjoy n study well,oh my God,ur mom n dad knows about this ff,they should be thinking y m writing a stupid story like this,and pls don’t say that u r a fan,I really m not worthy of that,I address every one as my reader friends,a few who are really close ,I call them ‘army’,your writing style reminds me of Shraddha,she should be busy,no problem with so many comments,enjoyed reading,yea,I will try to upload regularly from Monday.
Di I just commented that without reading completely.. I just CNT hld my excitement.. that’s y cmmntd..u this lil sissy has gone mad after seeing ur update..?? and today’s chap WS awesome..Love this sanky..and Swara teasing him..awww..?? Diiii plZz upload regularly..
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No probs dear, typing errors also fine,can understand, when I read my epi,I have also made many mistakes,like later for latter and all,m happy to read that u liked this,tc.
Even I am Kolkatar manushhh
Yeeeeeyyyyyyyyy!!! ????Peye gechi…kolkatar kothae thako tumi????? sorry..reveal nly if u want to..cz its a public platform..
Tumi Bangali!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Peyegechi!!!!!!! eto din er khoj er por bangali ke pelam!!!!!!!!!! Eto ami bhabtam ami ekjon eka je kokata theke. Ar keo Banglai neikintu aj khub bhalo lagche!!!!!!!!!!!!!Yippe!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yup Vinita..Ami Bangali…amar o darun bhalo lagche..tumi ki porcho ekhon?????? just curiosity.. arro koyekjon Bangali ache TU te..naam gulo thik mone nei..???
Ami history niye porchi!!!!!! Bhabchi archeology niye masters korbo. Tumi thik bolcho ekhane arro koyekjon ache. namm gulo thik mone porchena. Still amar khub bhalo lagche bangla te ekhane kotha bolte. Ekta aladai feeling asche!!!!!!!
Finally u back plz update regularly
Thank u for reading n commenting,next one will be on Monday ,most probably,will try to be regular from that episode.
NYC episode vini..I missed your ff very much.. pls,update daily
Thank u Vaishu,pls keep reading,will try my max to be regular from next Monday.
Nyc epi as always vini….we missed u and ur ff both ….happy to see u after a long time…I can understand that u can’t update daily…it’s ok vini…keep writing…when u get a free time…plz.. update next part..we r missing ur ff badly dr…keepp writing..god bless u…waiting for the next part…
I’m happy to see your name and read your comment,thank u for the good words,truly humbled,I will try to update regularly from next Monday,tc,God bless u too…
Hehee…just commenting here for excitement … Didn’t read yet…most awaited epi…
Haha,don’t know if it will disappoint you.
Hey!!How are you…plz daily update na…its really hard to wait for long
And episode was mind blowing…feeling really happy after seeing swara’s this side
Hi dr,m fine,hope u r also good,will try my max to be regular from the next episode which will probably be posted on coming Monday,it was an on the spot episode ,so even m surprised that Swara of this ff is back to normal and friendship of swasan has revived.
Omg..superb superb..what to know how she make him to admit his love…am eagerly waiting for their magic chemistry in b
/w them…
Sethooty,I haven’t planned anything,u know,no? M so bad at writing romance and chemistry between characters,I just wrote this randomly,but I hope the rest will come with the flow,let’s c…I didn’t think people will like this episode.
Finally di you’re back!!….. I missed your ff like hell..-xx. … It was nice, sanskaar reaction!! Haha….just waiting for our love birds to unite soon!! ? XOXOXO
Hello dr,m.glad to know that u liked,yes,everything will be fine soon,let’s c how the story and characters will get shaped up…tc..pls keep reading.
hai vini di
its the first tym iam commenting although iam a silent reader. I was waiting for you to upload . hatthe part. you are really amazing . thank you for your really wonderfull ff.please update once in a week( i know your busy) but ho sakthe tho pls update. was missing you and your ff
Thank u Jane, glad to know that you were reading this ff,thank u very much for the good words,truly humbled n honoured,I will try dear,had no plans to upload this ,but wen I came to know that m going to busy from this evening, I posted something in a hurry yesterday,I don’t know how good this is,but all your comments are so encouraging ,thank u.
Amazing fantastic and superb
Thank u Dhara for the good words,your name reminds me of Tejaswi’s character name in Sanskar Darohar apnon ki..used to watch it after her entry.
Even i watched Dharohar apno ki!!!!
M i dreaming?????
I loved dis dream so much………..
1st how r u vini di????
Coming to epi….
Very nice……swara-shekhar,swara-mukesh,swara-sanskar……so sweet………..
Jaise ghani barish k baad kale baadal chale jane k baad aasman saaf ho jata hai waise ki kai dino k baad swara ki jindgi me khushiya laut aayi hai……..
Very nice epi di……..
Hello dear,how r u?missed u guys,exams now?or holidays?oh,hope it was really a good dream,I don’t knw cos m not satisfied,m never satisfied with what I write,it was just three scenes in this,hope u liked it, yea,that is it ,whatbyou written,now it is clean n happiness has returned in her life,(m blank ,will try to post something on Monday,in laws and cousins coming this side,will be a busy weekend),and my reply to our army is always meant for everyone in our army ok..take care dear,stay happy.
Oh vini di finally u posted…Oops sorry for calling you di all of a sudden actually last epi only got to know that u are elder than me …hehe pagal hoon i know but u know di u r very bad how long longggg gaps u take di kitni baar bola plzz upload once in a week :-|itna intezar nahi hota ur ff is just superbbbb i just love u and ur ff . U are a doctor wow amazing profession ;being a doctor u should know di ur ff is like a booster for me ..hafte mein ek baar to jaruri hua na like glucose :-Oplzzz once in a week plzzzzz plzzzz :-);-(;-(:-)
No probs dear,u can address me di or by my name,no probs at all,except bad names everything will be alright ?,yes dear,it is not fair to take such long breaks,no?actually this was supposed to be a very short ff,I will try to upload regularly from Monday..thank u dear for the good, yes,boosters are required I agree.but I hope my ff is not a torture, yea,there is a Dr. in front of my name,dentistry is my stream,to be precise,take care dr.
Oh ho dentist wow great then so you should know one thing more when your ff get uploaded I unknowingly show my teeths wide therefore this ff is not at all a torture for me ?love you di and plzz upload next part for sure on Monday
Haha,your sec comment made me giggle as well,thank u dear for liking my ff,are u Niharika(Neha) who used to comment under season 1,then Sethooty had mentioned about ur ff,title I forgot,I am sorry for not reading it if u r the same writer, to be honest,problem is ,I wish to read from the start n m not getting time for that,sorry but m.happy to know that many good ffs n writers are here…lots of love to u too ,dear…tc
Wow after a really long time. It’s so nice. Ur season was first ever ff I have read and I have been reading it continuously and also season 2. It’s first time I am commenting on your ff, so my name will not be known to you.I was eagerly waiting for this one. So happy to read it. Update next asap.
And talking about this chapter
Adipoli!!! as usual.
Hai Mona(Ash),yea,name is new to me,but thank u for the comment,good to read that u have read the previous season also,m happy if u liked this episode,thank u for the good words,haha,adipoli,ah?u r from Kerala?
yes di, I am from kerala
Adipoli vayichappol thonni,Oru malayaliye koodi parijayapettathil santhosham,naattil evidanu?enthu cheyyunnu,parayaan kuzhapillenkil paranja mathiye. I won’t feel bad.
njan palakkattukariya , chechiyo ?
Enikkum chechiye parichayippettathinu santgosham thanne. Ivide more malayalikalokkeyundenkilum athikam pereyonnum parichayamilla.
Njanippo 9th grade kazhinju , Next year 10th.
Hi ,ok,thank u n good to hear from u,ente sthalam Ernakulam,oh,Appo serious studiesnte varsham thudangunnu,vacation class tudangarayi kaanumallo,all the best,study well,God bless.
Di!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please translate it!!!!!!!!!!!!! I cannot make out anything out of it………………..(I am not that multi talented!!!!!!!!!!) I only know njan means I , probably ninte means your, probably ente means nice and I guess kutty means child. Isse age aur kuch nehi pata!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Di, my ff is extremely childish and filmy. It is not good!!!!!!!! u all will laugh after reading thta. It makes no sense. Even I had to force my mashi to comment in my ff!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It is exremely baaaaaddddddddd!!!!!!!!!!!
Still I guess I have translated four or five words myself!!!!!!!! That means I am actually multi talented!!!!!! Even joya di has TRANSLATED so much!!!!!!!!!! Both of us are inteligent and multi talented!!!!!!!!! hai na joya tai ??????
Yea,multi talented, intelligent girl,haha Joya tai’s translation I scrolled up and read,fantastic,elastic,bomblastic…?,late to realise that my army is so so talented,my fault, all my fault…?,but a hug for your translation above ,just a small correction,ente means mine,your ff,I need some time,I want to read it at a stretch,but still angry for not telling,I opened a link ,Vidhisha ha?if I had seen that emblem,I would have caught you then n there,but so happy to read that you are writing ff,I know you will say like this but it will be excellent…keep going.
U know di My friend passed away recently..He met WD a fatal accdnt..We are very sad di..heartbroken..???we all are quite fine..BT one f my friends is in trauma till now..cz DT incident hppnd infront f her eyes..he saved her..BT CNT save himself..nd they were childhood bestie..??we are soo bad di..we all CNT save our friend..???In CLG we were five in one group..everybody CLS us ‘Five Star’..he was also one member f our group..BT nw he is no more..? till now We all CNT blv ds..??
Oh so sad to hear that dear,may his soul rest in peace,yes,I understand ur situation,big blow it will be for his loved ones,give support to the friend who survived,she should not feel guilty,after all it is not her fault,no one’s fault,certain things are beyond control and when it strikes do we realise how helpless we are ,it is tuf for the people around to overcome the loss,may God be with the bereaved family,yes,it is very sad,losing your dear friend,may God be with you all.
Awesome dear
Thanks dear,are u from Kerala?
A big big big thankuu vini..i am eagerly waiting for ur ff..
Sneha I will reply to both your comments here itself,thank u for liking this humble attempt of mine,I had noticed all your comments under previous,couldn’t respond there,sorry,I will try to post next one on Monday n probably will be posting regularly after that,busy with certain things,sorry.Pls keep reading..