Everyone is shocked with the arrival of Durga. Trishna is shocked. ” It is the same story again! Gopi Modi is alive! This is all your plan Parvati!”
” My fault? What are you talking about? This is Durga Agarwal. Gopi Modi died 18 years ago.” Parvati replies.
” No! She is Gopi Modi!” Trishna screams.
” Trishna is right! This is Gopi Modi!” Pari agrees. Pari approaches Durga. ” You played a fake drama like always, pretending you are dead. You are going to rot in prison.” Pari tries to slap Durga, but Durga holds her hand and pushes her.
” How dare you touch me? You tried to harm Durga Agarwal? People are scared to look at me and look down when they walk past me. But you tried to raise your hand against me?” Durga shouts. Everyone gets shocked with this new behaviour. Durga walks on dramatically. Everyone is watching her; she is happy that she is back in her house but realises her enemies are also present here. Durga hugs Parvati. ” Look, Nani. Look how these disgusting people are addressing me as Gopi Modi?”
” You are Gopi!” Gaura joins in now. ” After killing Kokila, you return to harm us? Amba maa, you are a demon. You kill your own mother in law and then you come back. Look at your dress, so revealing. You filthy woman!”
” How dare you speak against my grandaughter like that Gaura?” Parvati shouts- Gaura gets scared. ” You say so much dirty stuff about my Durga. If you harm my Durga, I won’t spare you!”
” It is fine, Nani. Let me clarify this. I am Durga Agarwal. I am nobody’s daughter in law. I am nobody’s mother. I am nobody’s wife. I am Durga Agarwal. Who is this Gopi?” Durga shouts.
” Gopi is…?” Tripti tries to speak.
” Shut up!” Shouts Durga- pointing at Tripti. ” This is a party and you welcome me like this. You address me as a murderer. How dare you?” Durga yells.
” Durga calm down and enjoy the party. It was all a misunderstanding.” Parvati says. The party carries on and Rashi, Vidya and Meera are also shocked by the arrival of Durga.
” This woman claims she is Durga, but she looks like Gopi.” Rashi says.
” It is Gopi Modi and she is back to torture us.” Vidya said.
” Don’t you dare talk about my mother like that.” Meera shouts. Meera runs to Durga. Rashi shouts to stop her, but Meera does not listen. Meera runs, but slips. she shouts Maa. Durga gets alerted and sees Meera calling for her. ” Maa, you have come back.” Meera hugs Durga. Durga gets emotional seeing her daughter after 18 years. ” Maa,where did you go? Why did you leave me? I love you maa. I needed you and you were gone!” Meera cries a lot. She falls to the fall and hold’s Durga’s feet. Durga wanted to embrace her daughter but she couldn’t.
” What did I tell you? I am nobody’s mother. Mother? Me? I appear the same age as you!” Durga shouts, leaving Meera on her own crying. Rashi rushes to comfort Meera.
” She may not be your daughter but don’t you feel sorry for her?” Rashi asks Durga.
” Why? I have no relation to her. She is a stranger.” Durga replies.
” You selfish woman. You may look like Gopi, but you are nothing like her. You evil woman.” Rashi says.
” You can hate me. You can love me. But you can’t ignore me. I am just the best.” Durga smirks. ” Look at you. You know, I have been aborad most of my life and I have heard about Indian women here. You Indian women here are emotional. I have no time for emotional dramas. Pathetic woman.” Durga says.
” Mind your language!” Rashi shouts.
” I can say what I want. Your family owns 5 hotels. My family owns 20 hotels. Who is better now?” Durga laughs. Rashi shuts up in shame. Durga walks off and the party proceeds again. The vamps get together.
” Do you think she is Gopi, Trishna?” Pari asks Trishna.
” Yes darling. Parvati did the same 36 years ago and she claims to be Durga’s grandaughter. She trained Durga to do all of this.” Trishna replies.
” But how do we prove she is Gopi?” Gaura asks.
” I don’t know. It is more likely that Gopi has removed all marks of her previous identity when Parvati did the same. We need a plan that will target Parvati. She is our main target. ” Trishna replies once more.
” Amba maa, she will reveal the truth of Naiya. We need to stop Gopi.” Gaura gets worried.
” Don’t worry. Gopi loves her family. We need a plan to reveal her identity and I know what to do. Pari, where is Hetal?” Trishna asks.
” In her room.” Pari replies.
” Good. Let’s go.”
The vamps enter Hetal’s room. With Kokila, her husband and Gopi’s deaths, Hetal became paralysed and cannot speak or move. ” Ex mother in law, your Gopi bahu is back but she is not ready to accept she is Gopi Modi.” The vamps take Hetal to the stairs and throw her down the stairs. Hetal comes down and everyone gets shocked.
” Maa!” Rashi shouts. Rashi runs to save her. Durga tries to save her, but Parvati stops her. ” How did this happen Maa? Where is everyone? Why was not anyone watching her? I wish Gopi was here.” Rashi cries. Rashi really regrets her actions. If she never betrayed Gopi then Gopi would be alive and Hetal would be fine. Durga gets teary seeing Rashi and Hetal. She wanted to hug Hetal and help her get better but she couldn’t.
” This is a madhouse! This mad old woman!” Durga shouts.
” How dare you insult my grandmother, Gopi Modi!” Vidya yells. She confronts Durga. ” You almost killed Meera when she was a child. You kept me away from my family when I was a child. You killed Radha. You killed Kokila and now who do you want to kill? Dadi? Me? Papa? Answer me?”
” You hate your mother that much. Your sister loves her late mother but you hate her. Very sad, very sad. Gopi must have been bad lucked that she got a daughter like you. What kind of daughter are you? The woman who brought you into this world and you insult her? Look, I don’t know the story of Gopi Modi so please don’t disturb me.” Durga says.
” Gopi Modi. You are not my mother anymore. Mansi Modi is my new mother.” Vidya says. Durga gets shocked, but hides her expression.
” Does this face look like it is bothered. Who the hell is Mansi now?” Durga shouts.
” Mansi married Pappa 18 years ago and they had a son called Aadesh, my half brother.” Vidya says.
” Like I said, I don’t care. Daughters like you should suffer.” Durga replies, walking off. The vamps gather again and Vidya takes Hetal back up.
” Our plan failed. Rashi came in between.” Gaura gets angry.
” We need Rashi on our side. We need to turn her against Gopi. She is her sister. We will use Rashi against Gopi.” Trishna suggests.
” Yes.” The vamps agree. Durga is with her family and enjoying the party. Parvati sees a laser pointing at Durga’s neck and sees a veiled lady pointing a gun at Durga. Parvati pushes Durga, and a gun shot is heard. Everyone starts screaming.
” Grab that woman.” Parvati shouts, the guards grab the lady and reveal her face. She appeared to be a poor lady. ” Guards this woman tried to kill my grandaughter.”
” Who are you and why were you trying to kill her?” The guards shout.
” Forgive me. I was ordered by three women to kill her.” The poor lady replies.
” Who?” Durga asks.
” Paridhi Malik, Trishna Agarwal and Gaura Suvanyashi.” The vamps get shocked.
Precap- Durga hands over money to the poor lady and thanks her for getting the task done. Durga tells Parvati happily that she has trapped her enemies. Her battle has begun.
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yesterday i was waiting 4 the update.when gopi arrived trishna was sure that its gopi,not durga n its planned by parvati who did the same thing years back.I loved when she was sure that like parvati even gopi must have removed all her marks.loved durga pushing paridhi n shouting at vidya.Meera coming n hugging gopi n gopi not able 2 react.what a beautiful emotional scene was that.How can the vamps be so cruel to push Hetal down 2 expose gopi?Rashi saved hetal.Gopi’s helplessness was so painful.loved rashi saying tht only look wise she is gopi,she is not nice like her.glad that it shows that rashi realized gopi’s value.she also regrets not supporting gopi when she was accused of kokila’s murder.one veiled lady tried 2 attack gopi n revealed that she is sent by pari,trishna n gaura.Wonder y tripti isnt involved with them.but from d precap its proved that its Durga’s plan 2 trap the vamps.wow!what a plan n loved durga parvati bonding.like Aruna Irani supported Janki Devi Parvati is supporting Durga
Tripti is not really a vamp anymore. She’s a married rich woman now. She has no problems with the Modis anymore.
In my opinion the Gopi and Meera relationship of mother and daughter is stronger than Gopi and Vidya.
Gopi and Meera have been separated a lot of times but they still care for each other.
There’s still Naiya Ahem and Mansi entry left!
And the next generation as well except for Krishna Modi.
Love it your writing is awesome can’t wait for next update
have u written any other ff b4?
Have u seen kyunki saas?it had an abrupt ending.the show was stopped b4 the story ended.if u can plz write a season2 of kyunki.bcz i loved this sns ff with kggk characters
Forgive me but I have less knowledge of kyunki saas because I watched kggk more so I don’t know who the characters are in kyunki saas
However parvati was in the end episode of kyunki saas
I write stories but this is my first fan fiction I want to publish a novel so that’s why I am so good at writing.
If you want kyunki saas characters I might bring tulsi in the next track that will be exciting!
How about ansh is alive? Tulsi son comes to life and is now in sns in the next track.
And mandira as well she needs a closure the story of tulsi will be finished in this next track.
The current track of Durga is going to be long so you’d expect tulsi track next month
How about komilika??? She is my favourite vamp of all time. Would you like her in sns in the next track
So guys, currently the track of my fanfiction is Gopi’s return as Durga- getting revenge on her family and her enemies. There will be a lot of storylines in this track such- Durga vs Ahem, Durga vs her grandchildren, Durga vs Niddhi, Durga vs Aadesh and Mansi, Durga vs Rashi, Durga vs Gaura, Durga vs Pari, Durga vs Trishna, Durga vs Vidya and Durga vs Naiya. All these storylines will be really long and I expect to write all these for over a month or 2 months.
Durga vs Ahem- Durga will be the business rival of Ahem Modi and will aim to destroy his company.
Durga vs her grandchildren- Her grandchildren are drug dealers, gangsters and are really bad. They will fight a mahabbarat against Durga.
Durga vs Niddhi- Trishna will use Niddhi to destroy Durga.
Durga vs Aadesh and Mansi- Ahem will get close to Durga because she reminds him of Gopi and Mansi gets jealous. The mother and son try to get rid of Durga.
Durga vs Rashi- The vamps provoke Rashi against Durga. Rashi wants to destroy Durga as she sees Durga as a evil woman harming her family.
Durga vs Gaura- Durga will start getting her revenge on Gaura and finally destroy her.
Durga vs Pari- Getting revenge on Pari.
Durga vs Trishna- Trishna puts Parvati in coma. Durga wants revenge for this.
Durga vs Vidya- Vidya wants to defeat Durga for killing her grandma Kokila.
Durga vs Naiya- Durga attempts to reveal the truth of Naiya.
Well these are all the storylines for the current track. I have a few ideas and I want everyone to choose which one they would like. A lot of people have requested for me to put other show characters in my fanfiction. These are 2 ideas for after the Durga track-
Krishna’s Prem Kahani- Krishna falls in love with a girl, but Rashi disapproves of the girl because she is middle class. Krishna is forced to marry a rich girl. The rich girl is Komilikas daughter from Kasauti Zindagi Ki. Komilika never died and the Modis do not know about her past. However, Komilikas daughter will be as evil as her mother and Krishna will divorce her. Komilikas daughter will try to separate Krishna and his lover.
Return of Radha- Radha never died- she faked her death. Vidya’s daughter was kidnapped by Naiya, but Naiya lost Vidya’s daughter 18 years ago. Radha came in possession of Vidya’s daughter and has been raising her for 18 years as the Modis biggest enemy. Radha is also married to Ansh, the son of Tulsi.
wow…really exciting tracks.but sad that we have to wait till 29th 4 more updates.plz do give update daily
yh I know its sad.
I will do updates daily- this Durga track will be really long- it will be Durga vs Ahem soon. Will Durga punish her husband for leaving her? Gopi who once saw Ahem as her lord, now Durga will aim to destroy Ahem and his arrogance.
Later her grandchildren will make their entry in the fan fiction and will aim to destroy Durga. Will Durga succeed in defeating the new generation? Her grandchildren will be really evil- Meera’s two sons are heads of a fearful gang.. Meera’s other son is a lawyer who is ruthless. Meera’s daughter is a vulgar girl who traps men for money. Vidya’s son is a big thief.
Tolu’s son Krishna is the only good one and when he finds out that Durga is Gopi, he will help her. Gopi and Krishna will develop a strong grandmother grandson relationship- he will be her favourite. Krishna Modi is currently my favourite in this fanfiction. Tolu has another son who is a drug dealer. Molu’s son is also a drug dealer. Although Molu’s daughter is abused by her mother as she is just like Gopi.
The daughter of Naiya looks like Gopi!
Rashi Junior eloped with her lover 9 years after Gopi’s apparent death. Rashi junior will soon return and will also support Durga.
Durga’s supporters will be Naiya’s daughter ‘Kajol’, Krishna and Rashi Junior in this track.
It will be a Mahabbarat- The good grandchildren vs the evil grandchildren
Just like the Mahabbarat- it will be cousins vs cousins.
Without Kokila, the Modi family has fallen apart and now everyone is against each other.
Nayya’s daughter looks like Gopi?Who is her husband?
Molu
Can someone pls give me link for part 1,2,3???
I am not able to understand what is this?? It is same serial or what???
Pls help me to understand.
It is SNS FF with some of KGGK characters