hey guys this is riya the writer of PYAAR TUNE KYA KIYA (RAGLAK) and this is my new story .Here it’s promo hope u guys will like it-
screen shows a grand hall with a big stage where a large no. of people were present .They r shouting like mad ,a huge crowd was present there.All r shouting in unison-
LUCKY !!! LUCKY !!! LUCKY !!!
The crowd become more mad when a tall handsome young man with funky looks came at the stage with his guitar on his hand ,he start singing with closed eyes –
AASAN NAHI YAHAN AASHIQ HO JANA
PALKON PE KAANT KO SAJANA
(he was remembering a beautiful girl dancing on rain )
AASHIQ KO MILTI HAI GAM KI SAUGAATEIN
SABKO NA MILTA YEH KHAJANA
(the girl was touching beautiful flowers of a garden with her hands and was smelling them)
WO…….OOOO…….OOO
BAATON SE AAGE WADON SE AAGE
DEKHO ZARA TUM KHABHI HOO…..HOO…….
(he was sitting on his knees in front of that girl with rose in his hands while the girl pick the flower from his hand and throw it on the floor and ran away with tears in her eyes)
WOOOO……………..
JISMON KE PEECHE BHAAGE HO PHIRTE
UTRO KHABHI ROOH MEIN HO………..
(it was raining heavily he catches the girl wrist tightly and push her toward himself both were crying hard suddenly the girl shout- LEAVE ME !!!!!,GO AWAY !!!!,,JUST GO AWAY !!!!,I HATE U !!!!!!!!),
(with this she ran away from there leaving him lifeless ,he fell on his kness and cry hard )
HOTA KYA AASHIQ KYA AASHIQUE HAI
HOGI KHABAR TAB TUMHE HO…………
(then he open his eyes and stop singing ,his eyes were red and full of tears ,suddenly he start breaking his guitar with lots of noice ,the whole crowd become silent ,he fell on his knees and shout with all his strength- R A G I N I !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! )
screen shift towards a hospital where a girl was admitted in the ICU ,she was breathing heavily ,the doctors around her were tensed then suddenly the machine beep-peeeeeeeeee…….. and the girl under oxgen mask slowly said – LAKSH !!
(her hand loses her grip and she closed her eyes)
screen divide into two one with girl with closed eyes and other that guy sitting on his knees with teary eyes
PAGAL DIWANA KEHTI HAI USSE DUNIYA
MAGAR KHUD KO KEHTA HAI WO USSKA AASHIQ
YEH KAHANI HAI USSE AASHIQ KI JISSKE AASHIQUE NE USSE AASHIQ BANAYA
ISHQ MEIN MIIL KE BECCHARETE HAIN SABHI
MAGAR ISSE AASHIQUE MEIN BECCHAR KE MILGAYE WO DONO
YEH HAI USKI KAHANI
YEH HAI AASHIQUI
42 Comments
Superb
thanx rakhi
its awesome plz continue
thanx divi i will surely continue
Very nice
thanx noora
Awesome dear and thanks a lot for RAGLAK. Plz update next part soon
thanx dear i will soon update it
Nice dr
thanx ammy
It’s amazing ….plz continue??
thanx sakura yes i will
Awesome
thanx a lot sis
Ragini ill b alive na….its nice…cntnu…
thanx s priya u will get to know in the story itself
Awesome
thanx nikki
Awesome!!! I can’t wait literally my sister also said it is amazing??????? can’t wait…..
thanx halima
Superb…last part was awsm especially those lines…..
thanx kriya
Wow Riya!?Pyaar tune kya kiya is such a cute story of Lucky n Lado?N this seems to b an intense story?Waiting for the next part?
thanx ramya u r comment made my day
Interesting di . Plz continue.
thanx dear
superb… and u r the writer of SWARAGINI WHO WILL WIN LOVE OR REVENGE… plzz continue..
yah sure anaita i will continue
Awesome intro… Waiting for the 1st part..
thanx taiana it’s 1 episode is comming soon
I was intense dear cont
thanx priya
Amazing yr too intensified…
thanx a lot megha
It’s great dr plz continue… U r a very talented writer I always admire ur skills the way u write those mini poetry n all
thanx dear 4 such a gr8 comment
thanks for raglak ff’s
it’s my pleasure dear
Awesome riya i was waiting for this
thanx krystal
Awesome 🙂 you are an amazing writer
thanx a lot dear